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Some of the entries for Endless Space under \\\"Captain Ersatz\\\" bug me. There\\\'s something wrong, but I\\\'m not quite sure how to fix them. (So, rather than try to fix them myself and possibly make the situation first, I\\\'m putting it in the discussion page.)

The first one that\\\'s wrong is:

\\\"The Sophons and Pilgrims resemble versions of the Advent from Sins of a Solar Empire. Exiled as Cyborgs for the Pilgrims and has that Everything Is An Ipod In The Future likeness for the Sophons, while both struggle for their unity as two races.\\\"

I\\\'m not sure exactly what the OP means by \\\"Exiled as Cyborgs\\\", because the Pilgrims AREN\\\'T cyborgs. They just have a thing for facial tattoos. And \\\"... struggle for their unity as two races\\\" feels wrong in the sense that it makes it sound like they\\\'re trying to unite the two races.

The second one is:

\\\"What Could Possibly Go Wrong? if you have a race called Endless to so happened to spread their ancient technology, more so inspiring others, across the universe via Dark Ancient Cities and Wormholes, and still look like humanoids for so many years.\\\"

Um... what? That is wrong on so many levels, I don\\\'t even know how to fix it. If someone has an insight into what the OP actually *meant* to say, let me know.
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Some of the entries for Endless Space under \
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Some of the entries for Endless Space under \\\"Captain Ersatz\\\" bug me. There\\\'s something wrong, but I\\\'m not quite sure how to fix them. (So, rather than try to fix them myself and possibly make the situation first, I\\\'m putting it in the discussion page.)

The first one that\\\'s wrong is:
\\\"The Sophons and Pilgrims resemble versions of the Advent from Sins of a Solar Empire. Exiled as Cyborgs for the Pilgrims and has that Everything Is An Ipod In The Future likeness for the Sophons, while both struggle for their unity as two races.\\\"

I\\\'m not sure exactly what the OP means by \\\"Exiled as Cyborgs\\\", because the Pilgrims AREN\\\'T cyborgs. They just have a thing for facial tattoos. And \\\"... struggle for their unity as two races\\\" feels wrong in the sense that it makes it sound like they\\\'re trying to unite the two races.

The second one is:

\\\"What Could Possibly Go Wrong? if you have a race called Endless to so happened to spread their ancient technology, more so inspiring others, across the universe via Dark Ancient Cities and Wormholes, and still look like humanoids for so many years.\\\"

Um... what? That is wrong on so many levels, I don\\\'t even know how to fix it. If someone has an insight into what the OP actually *meant* to say, let me know.
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