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“Out of Character: Nearly everyone. Ironically, averted with McGonagall, who appears once to yell at Ebony and Draco for having sex.” The part about McGonagall is inaccurate. She shows up many chapters later to help Snape tie up Ebony, Draco, and Vampire so he can kill/torture/“rap” them or whatever.
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“Out of Character: Nearly everyone. Ironically, averted with [=McGonagall=], who appears once to yell at Ebony and Draco for having sex.” The part about [=McGonagall=] is inaccurate. She shows up many chapters later to help Snape tie up Ebony, Draco, and Vampire so he can kill/torture/“rap” them or whatever.
