My opinion from the thread is unchanged. The characters are implied to be the same age as in canon (fourteen years old) and there's a lot of gratuitous sexual content. It's slightly more plot-focused but the characters' age drags it down for me.
I do some cleanup and then I enjoy shows you probably think are cringe.I remember voting to cut this one. I still stand by that.
Working on: Author Appeal | Sandbox | Troper WallBetween Friends also focused on the sex lives of Star and Marco, and was cut. It looks like they're the same age here, so cut this too.
Edited by rjd1922 on Aug 28th 2022 at 6:13:13 AM
Keet cleanupCalling this for cutting; locking and I love "The Earth Adventures Of Mon Star was already locked for everybody. We glared at it to make sure it stays that way. It knows we're watching, now. No way it is going to get uppity.", cutlisting and cutting, updating, closing thread.
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The flag here for TheEarthAdventuresOfMonStar was sent with the rationale