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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1: Jul 21st 2022 at 2:46:58 PM

The flag here for TheEarthAdventuresOfMonStar was sent with the rationale

As discussed in the P5 thread, the work features graphic sex between characters who are canonically 14, which makes up at least half of the fanfic. They're not aged up either, as far as I can tell.

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#2: Jul 21st 2022 at 4:38:39 PM

My opinion from the thread is unchanged. The characters are implied to be the same age as in canon (fourteen years old) and there's a lot of gratuitous sexual content. It's slightly more plot-focused but the characters' age drags it down for me.

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#3: Jul 21st 2022 at 6:06:32 PM

I remember voting to cut this one. I still stand by that.

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#4: Jul 21st 2022 at 6:26:00 PM

I just skimmed through the first couple of chapters and if the characters are that young in canon, then this one should be cut.

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#5: Aug 28th 2022 at 2:27:39 AM

Bumping to get it out of the closed threads stack.

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#6: Aug 28th 2022 at 3:30:13 AM
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#7: Aug 28th 2022 at 6:20:19 AM

I skimmed the first few paragraphs when this came up on the old P5 thread. The dialogue seems to be intentionally aging the characters down, and was already going very skeevy places. Cut.

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#8: Aug 28th 2022 at 4:12:44 PM

Between Friends also focused on the sex lives of Star and Marco, and was cut. It looks like they're the same age here, so cut this too.

Edited by rjd1922 on Aug 28th 2022 at 6:13:13 AM

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#9: Aug 28th 2022 at 5:02:51 PM

Cut for reasons given above as well as the precedent established [up] here

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#12: Sep 5th 2022 at 4:12:03 PM

Adding a cut in.

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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#14: Sep 5th 2022 at 10:56:50 PM

Calling this for cutting; locking and I love "The Earth Adventures Of Mon Star was already locked for everybody. We glared at it to make sure it stays that way. It knows we're watching, now. No way it is going to get uppity.", cutlisting and cutting, updating, closing thread.

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