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dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
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#23351: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:02:41 PM

Good morning, everyone!

@mega - Ooh, I like that idea.

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Darkenning She's Back Since: Apr, 2011
She's Back
#23352: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:07:02 PM

@Creative: Well, she'd be safer than otherwise.

But it will work out, in the long run. The rejuvenation treatment that Chao's going to get Sakurako in 2094 will also repair the damage to her brain and restore her abilities, so that crazy Aunt Sakurako can visit with her grand-nephews and -neices.

So think about it. She's going to survive more than ninety years without these powers. So maybe it's not just probability manipulation ...

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:10:12 PM by Darkenning

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gwonbush Lurking Puma Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Lurking Puma
#23353: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:08:25 PM

Is Sakurako's family related to Teela Brown?

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:20:36 PM by gwonbush

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#23354: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:09:54 PM

By the way, come to think about it, wasn't Ayaka's mother deadly ill as mentioned in chapter 7 of DH, to the point Ayaka wasn't sure when she'd croak? And yet now Chizuru doesn't mention any of that, and even tells Negi she could meet him in a few months.

Did her health improve behind the scenes?

Darkenning She's Back Since: Apr, 2011
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#23355: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:11:30 PM

[up][up] Probably.

[up] Yes, I mentioned it in the epilogue. She wasn't ill, she was being subtly poisoned by Alladia. She got better.

Don't worry, there's a lot of stuff in there.

If you won't I'll slit your throat/Won't you please be nice?
mega-dark Moe Game Console from Planeptune Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Moe Game Console
#23356: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:31:08 PM

@d Roy Shoot me a PM or post the snipet here when you type that scene up. I want to see how you write that out, if you don't mind.

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dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar
#23357: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:32:41 PM

@mega - What, now? Oh no, I've just finished covering the first chapter. DX

EDIT: Oh wait, ah. Hmm...I might try. Gotta reread some chapters in that case, then.

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:33:58 PM by dRoy

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IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#23358: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:43:54 PM

@Dark

Well, they do say that what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. And If Sakurako's unlucky arround her family, then she'd be hellishly stronger!

Wait, logic doesn't work that way...

Also, I just lost a duel against myself while playing YGO WC 2010. How is dueling myself even possible!? and yes, I am controlling both sides, somehow. Action Replay Codes are scary.

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:44:54 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#23359: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:10:06 PM

Anyone up for developing Evil Counterpart Foils of 3-A?

First up: The Anti-Ayaka. Most obviously, she'll be a genuine Alpha Bitch, Rich Bitch, and truly-vile pedophile who cares not for the immorality of forcing oneself upon a child. Oh, and she's also a Class Representative who rules her "subjects" through means both fair and foul - with a strong preference for foul ones whenever she can get away with it. She also a consummate Bitch in Sheep's Clothing, to the point where though Dean Konoemon might suspect her hidden vileness, he unfortunately has no hard evidence to use upon her.

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
rikalous World's Cutest Direwolf from Upscale Mordor (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
World's Cutest Direwolf
#23360: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:15:09 PM

[up][up]Congratulations on your win!

@Darkenning: Weird religion, eh? Madoka-mom using her daughter's room instead of her own? That's a dick move.

@Nightmare Syndrome: Muah-ha-ha. It's all coming together now.

edited 22nd Dec '11 4:15:21 PM by rikalous

NightmareSyndrom Not so Ironic after all from Your darkest dreams Since: May, 2011
Not so Ironic after all
#23361: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:16:34 PM

Persona 4 has an NPC I've been calling Anti-Ako. To wit, She straight up asks you if you think she would look good if she had a scar and has an obsession with making weapons to the point of trying to use the chem lab's burners as a forge on at least one occasion. Would that qualify?

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Darkenning She's Back Since: Apr, 2011
She's Back
#23362: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:18:19 PM

[up][up] Actually, not Foreshadowing. Misa's worship of the god Orum (created by Phil Foglio for XXXenophile) has been mentioned before.

And yeah. It's a dick move.

edited 22nd Dec '11 4:19:36 PM by Darkenning

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rikalous World's Cutest Direwolf from Upscale Mordor (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
World's Cutest Direwolf
#23363: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:25:34 PM

[up]Ah, whoops.

[up][up][up]I'm easily entertained by things like this. Think I'll go in seat order so it's easier to remember who needs doing.

The anti-Sayo would be the inverse of her in the chapter where the class finds out about her. Anti-Sayo would appear as a Cute Ghost Girl at first, and then come the possessions, and the poltergeisting, and the flavin....

Say, are these guys really that different from the Jokerettes?

Darkenning She's Back Since: Apr, 2011
She's Back
#23364: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:34:36 PM

[up] No, the Jokerettes are girls we like despite ourselves. These are girls we should dislike and do.

Anti-Evangeline is not a vampire, not an ancient sorceress, not a powerful martial artist. She is a girl who aspires to be Bella Swann. And underneath her sweet if slightly dull exterior is a complete sociopath who doesn't care who she hurts or what she does as long as she never gets old ...

If you won't I'll slit your throat/Won't you please be nice?
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#23365: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:36:06 PM

But she'd get old fast...

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
mega-dark Moe Game Console from Planeptune Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Moe Game Console
#23366: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:48:54 PM

@d Roy:Whoa, sorry. I thought you already had the scene in mind already. Sorry to make you do extra work.

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#23367: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:01:15 PM

[up][up][up] Or she is a vampire, but who has Age Without Youth (i.e. her true form is basically a shambling living-corpse, sort of like the stereotypical Nosferatu), and maintains her youth through less than savory means, many of which even Evangeline would balk at. Oh, and she's not a super-powerful Shinso... though maybe she has a secret pact with an Eldritch Abomination that allows her to rival one in many respects.

[up][up][up][up] Why does Anti-Sayo has to be a ghost too? Why not a living girl who is a dangerously obsessive ghost-hunter and wannabe necromancer/voodooist, who cares not for the consequences of pursuing her obsession upon other people?

edited 22nd Dec '11 5:05:56 PM by MarqFJA

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dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
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#23368: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:06:39 PM

Just wondering, how likely is it for 15!Negi to know Instant Movement and the Axe of Lightning before coming to Mahora?

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IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#23369: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:09:30 PM

Not very. The only offensive spell he was taught at Meridiana was Sagitta Magica, and Dios Tukos is an ancient spell...

Shundou is an advanced technique made explicitly for combat. Not what you'd teach to your average mage kiddies.

edited 22nd Dec '11 5:09:59 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#23370: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:09:46 PM

If he witnessed Nagi fighting sufficiently powerful foes such that he felt it was justified to take out his cheatsheet and cast Axe of Lightning, then Negi would probably at least know of the spell, and is seeking to learn it too.

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IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#23371: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:10:47 PM

Oh, yeah, totally forgot that. It is possible he'd have the gist of it. But once again, they're spells that aren't taught at the academy.

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#23372: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:15:57 PM

I doubt he'd know how to cast it this early on, but he could easily be aware of it.

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dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
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#23373: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:18:03 PM

@Everyone - Point. Man, Meridiana sucks.

I'm having 15!Negi have been attempting to learn basically anything that he saw Nagi was using. This leads to him become sort-of-disciple of Kaede when she shows she can use clones.

It is highly unlikely that Nagi gave him a copy of his cheatsheet, isn't it?

Another question: in terms of raw power in the closer range, AOL is more powerful than that Thunderstorm spell, right?

edited 22nd Dec '11 5:19:17 PM by dRoy

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NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#23374: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:21:03 PM

Darkenning- (Checks the DH Epilogue again). Huh, it's true. Sorry, I forgot that bit.

Re: Anti-Ayaka... I actually designed the Class 1-A Iincho to be just like that, although not 100% vile. She hates children, but pretends liking Negi so she can manipulate him. She sees her classmates as nothing but tools in her power plays, but actually would have a slight window to become a better person in the future.

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#23375: Dec 22nd 2011 at 5:30:45 PM

[up][up]No, Nagi gave it too him, but Nagi's handwriting is so terrible that it's basically useless.

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