I'll admit that, while I'm up to date on Nanoha of 2814 and even read the Gatekeepers and CCS side stories (when is the later reviving?), I only read the first two chapters of Fate 2814 and kinda have it on 'I'll do it when I have more time...' mode, so I didn't know it had been done before.
Still probably will go with it anyway. And mixing JLU Mordred in, since it makes more sense the younger Arturia would have a son younger than Canon Mordred.
All right, let me finish this off. Took me a while to get started as I was unsure how to set the scene and had to rush it this morning, but hopefully it didn't end up too bad:
Sayo floated out of the classroom with her shoulders slumped and her head hanging forward. She was right behind the sports girls. “Any plans for this afternoon?" asked Makie.
“I have to head to the nurse’s office.” replied Ako. “I have responsibilities. I’ll see you again later.”
“Oh, right.” said Makie. “See you then. Bye.”
Of course! thought Sayo. Ako-chan is the class nurse! She floated after Ako and waited for her shift to end.
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Ako left the nurse’s office to find Sayo floating in front of her. “Oh, hello Sayo-chan.” she greeted the ghost.
“Hello, Ako-chan.” replied Sayo. “May I speak to you?”
“Of course!” replied Ako. They ducked into an abandoned classroom for some privacy. “What s it?”
“Well...I know that you’re the nurse, so you see sick and injured people all the time, right?” asked Sayo.
“That’s right.” Ako replied with a nod.
“Have-have you ever had one of your patients die?”
“No! Thank goodness, no!”
“I see...” sighed Sayo. “I expected as much. But being dead...is...I guess it’s a lot like being sick, right? But-but it can’t be cured...at least...I heard stories about people being brought back to life, but those were short periods of time...not...years...right?”
“That’s right.” sighed Ako. “I’m sorry that I can’t help you.”
“It’s just that....” Sayo began, “I enjoyed being part of the group in the magical world, but now that we’re back, it’s like I’ve been put on the sidelines again! I’m a ghost, so spending time with me is something that only the girls from the class can do and they’re all busy getting back to their old lives that don’t involve me! It...makes being dead a lot harder.”
“I see.” said Ako with a gentle smile. “OI may still be alive, but I know exactly what t feels like to seem like a side character. An observer. One who watches as others do the amazing things. But someone that I admire told me that we are all the main characters of our own story and I’ve learned to live like that.”
“Could-could you teach me?” asked Sayo.
“Of course!” replied Ako with a smile. “I won’t leave you on the sidelines. I’ll be with you the whole time!”
Still surprised at the lack of rection to recent events of MSA. Oh well.
I usually don't follow it until you send me the full chapter. It's easier to give feedback on stuff when it's all there. Although, I really should start trying to keep up better...
Pheh, those are shallow imitators.
I got my 12th review for Mahou Seishun Negima (apparently all of the reviewers must be good at Japanese because so far none of that ever questioned what "Seishun" meant). Man, either I'm really good (which I doubt), or 15!Negi is a very attention grabbing idea.
Random Rambling: Kaede looked smoking hot in that Chinese dress during Kyoto arc. Shame she doesn't wear that anymore.
Continuously reading, studying, and (hopefully) growing.Okay. I copied everything from "round robin chapter one compilation" over to "3-A shipping" and put it in class registry order with the additional characters at the end. I think I've got everything. If anyone wants to take another gander at it, go right ahead.
Me, I'm going to bed.
If you won't I'll slit your throat/Won't you please be nice?Unequally, Continuation.
Familiar with the patterns of the Wonderland gang, the caped figure started, "The time has come to talk of many things..."
"Of shoes! And ships! And sealing wax!" the woman continued, almost eagerly.
"Of cabbages and kings..." he went on.
"And why the sea is boiling hot..." she hissed.
"And whether pigs have wings," Batman finished, before grabbing her collar and growling on her face. "Where's Hatter?-!"
"I'm late, I'm late, I'm late..." she repeated again, eyes growing very wide. "Off with my head, off with my head, off with my head..."
Nodoka sighed and asked, "What's your name?"
"Eh...?" the henchwoman babbled, just as the words appeared on the Diarium Ejus.
Lorina Dodson.
The White Rabbit.
"Okay, Lorina," Nodoka exhaled calmly, deciding to drop the honorifics. Most foreigners didn't particularly care for the, and frankly, she wasn't in the mood. "Where are you hiding?"
I'm late, I'm late, I'm late, I'm late! was all that appeared on the pages, next to schizophrenic looking doodles of the henchwoman herself with her head on a chopping block, and Chigusa and a short man with a very tall top hat holding axes near her.
Batman tightened his grip on the collar. "She asked you a question."
"Eeep!" White Rabbit whimpered, and blurted out, "Old storage house of the Fujino Corporation, right out the city! But we were going to leave tonight anyway, after grabbing the girl! I don't know where we would go after that, honest! Please don't kill me..."
The whole text was in English, but Nodoka was very good with that language, particularly after studying under Negi. "She's saying the truth."
Batman grunted, releasing the collar and pinning a tiny note with a Bat emblem on it to the Rabbit's chest, who paled even more visibly under her white makeup. "I'm going to need an exact address."
Nodoka tried to decipher the confusing text on the pages now. "It's going to be difficult. Not only she doesn't know any of the reference points, nor the streets' names, but she's also so scared she's having problems thinking straight. All she can think of is not wanting to die..."
A pause. "But it seems the place is located at the East side of the outskirts. Just do a search through the Fujino Corp warehouses of that area, and you might find some clues left behind."
"Hnh," Batman looked down at the book. "An interesting object."
"Th-Thanks," Miyazaki nodded stiffly.
"Fujino?" Chisame asked. "Like in Fujino Shizuru, the School Council President? Her family's rich, and she comes from Kyoto. Do you think they own that place?"
"It looks that way, ne?" Chao asked back. "But I'm sure Shizuru-sempai herself is innocent. I know her well..."
"That's reassuring," Chisame snarked, but any further words on the subject were interrupted when the local Konoka began stirring and opening her eyes in Setsuna's arms.
edited 6th Nov '11 7:01:55 PM by NapoleonDeCheese
@Sayo/Ako: Typo alert!
"Pining" and "pinning" are worlds apart in meaning.
Unequally. More of the Kissing Game.
"Paper copies don't eat," Chamo said.
"I only ask you to stay here until I come back!" Negi added. "Please don't ever step out of this room, okay?"
The copy nodded wordlessly.
Negi waved it goodbye while sneaking out. "Ah, we don't have spells like this in the West! I wonder why, if they're so useful..."
"Japan has many useful things to teach you," Chamo nodded sagely from his shoulder. "Like Paizuri, Bukkake and Netorare."
"What are all those things?" Negi asked.
"I'll tell you in a few years, Bro."
Two minutes after they were gone, however, the paper basket glowed with an eerie, supernatural golden light. And three disheveled and glassy eyed Negis crawled out of it.
"Hello, I'm Negi Springfield," the copy left behind told them.
"I'm Migi Springfield. Gotta go on patrol," one of the three said.
"I'm Nugi Springfield. Gotta go on patrol," another one said.
"I'm Hogi Springfield. Gotta go on patrol," the third one spoke.
"I can't leave this room," Copy Negi answered.
"Gotta go on patrol, gotta go on patrol, gotta go on patrol," the other three shuffled for the door like zombies, taking different directions down the inn's halls. Copy Negi waved them goodbye stupidly before closing the door and sitting before the turned off TV, his eyes fixed on the blank screen.
@Marq: Oops. Sorry about that.
@Napoleon: Nice, but what triggered that order? In canonit was witnessing Nodoka's attenpted kiss.
This is requiring a lot of research and effort:
“Chao-san said that her technology could do it.” chirped Makie. “I don’t know how it works. By the way, after the festival, I won’t need to practice as often because I’ll have finished my big performance. So I can take you up on that offer to teach me a bit of magic.” Anya raised her eyebrows.
“Well, if you’re still interested…” she began.
“Oh, it’s starting!” Makie squealed. “Don’t worry! I’m here for you!” The room darkened before suddenly lighting up in blue. A large shadow with claws covered one of the walls.
“Gyaaaah!” cried Anya as she grabbed Makie. A panel slid open and a small robot tanuki crawled out. The panel immediately slid closed again.
“Isn’t he cute!” squealed Makie. “Hakase made him. He’s going to guide us down the passage.
“It’s a passage.” said Anya. “Why would we need guiding?”
“It’s about setting the mood.” giggled Makie. They followed the robot as the room darkened and the blue light changed to strobe lights that danced along the walls. “We’re passing through the spirits’ territory.” Makie whispered.

It'd be hilarious if she also remembers being arrested in the end.