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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#18951: Nov 5th 2011 at 5:04:59 PM

[up] Yu(u)na, you do realize that Screw Yourself is technically masturbation and not incest, right? [lol] Also, if you can't love yourself, then who can?

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar
#18952: Nov 5th 2011 at 5:55:35 PM

Hey guys, I'm working on the next scene, where Negi finally gets introduced to his class, and who are some of the students who will have strong reaction to him? I think Evangeline will, for a moment mistaking him as Nagi, and some of the girls might go "Hot damn!"

Continuously reading, studying, and (hopefully) growing.
NightmareSyndrom Not so Ironic after all from Your darkest dreams Since: May, 2011
Not so Ironic after all
#18953: Nov 5th 2011 at 6:13:05 PM

Sorry I haven't been on. My anti-virus stopped work so my laptop has the flew. I'm using my Wii right now. If all goes I should be able to use my laptop again tomorrow.

[up] x infinity. Thank you! I had completely forgotten about the attempted Pactio.

Will write for Tropes!
JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#18954: Nov 5th 2011 at 6:14:27 PM

[up][up]Eva is a given; Misa is probably up there as well. Ako might also have that kind of reaction, although I don't think she'd vocalize it quite as much. Weirdly enough, I imagine Makie as reacting less for some reason. Probably because her original reaction was more Cuteness Proximity than "wow he's hot!"

edited 5th Nov '11 6:15:21 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#18955: Nov 5th 2011 at 6:22:41 PM

Misa is probably up there as well
"Probably"?! <snort> Judging by chapter 339, she's 100% guaranteed to be as crazy about him like Ayaka is about kid!Negi, if not even more due to both his age and (from what I know of her) her being apparently less inhibited overall than Ayaka! (and being certainly much less oblivious about the more... socially sensitive parts of romance and sexual activity/relationships.)

edited 5th Nov '11 6:25:00 PM by MarqFJA

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18956: Nov 5th 2011 at 6:44:47 PM

And now we can move on to the next girl.

Ah! You remembered...!

NightmareSyndrom Not so Ironic after all from Your darkest dreams Since: May, 2011
Not so Ironic after all
#18957: Nov 5th 2011 at 6:53:12 PM

[up][up] Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't Misa say kid Negi's main appeal was that she could mold him into the perfect future boyfriend.

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NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18958: Nov 5th 2011 at 6:55:20 PM

[up] Yeah, but Older Negi already is that perfect boyfriend.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#18959: Nov 5th 2011 at 7:09:10 PM

*weeps*

Why do people keep forgetting about me? Iniq, how could you…

@Darkenning: YES! YOU SAVED THEM! YOU WROTE, YOU POSTED, IT'S GOING TO BE ON FFNET, THAT MAKES IT CANON, BABY!

Okay, time for the Sayo/non-3-A and others. Repeats of pairings can just go in the next girls chapter.

edited 5th Nov '11 7:11:57 PM by SCMof2814

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18960: Nov 5th 2011 at 7:20:43 PM

[up] Alternate canon, at least. For all we know, it may be canon for the future of the URAE-verse, but not for the Decadent-verse.

Unequally, Continuation.

"Well," Chisame breathed out, "I guess, since we're apparently playing superhero now, at least we got the most important part of superheroism right."

"What?" Deathnote asked. "The satisfaction of a well done job? The joy of saving innocent lives? The near sexual thrill of knowing you look darn good in your spiffy clothes while kicking bad guy butt?"

Chisame pointed around them, at all the wreckage of the station, riddled with bullets and full of scorched spots and broken furniture. "The massive damage to public property!" she barked.

"Eh, heh heh heh..." Deathnote laughed weakly. "Yeah, well, it can't be helped at times..."

"And who are you anyway?" Chisame now pointed at Akira. "I mean, yeah, I know you introduced yourself as 'Sailor Mercury', but what's your real name? I swear you look familiar, but..."

"Ah, eh, well, I—" the Sailor Senshi stuttered, "I'm, I'm only an average student who, um, tries to do well. My name isn't really important."

Chisame blinked. "Socially awkward, awful with excuses, tall, big breasted and tongue tied before a straight question? Asahina-sempai, is that you?"

Akira facefaulted.

Maga Alba, meanwhile, was waking up in her Setsuna's arms. "Ojou-sama! Thank goodness you're all right..."

Konoe smiled slowly. "Setchan, always here for me... Thank you..." She giggled, seeing her cute blush. "You know, this happens every time I visit home. But I don't mind as long as I get thi—"

Sakurazaki seemed to choke on her own saliva.

"Setchan?" Maga Alba asked.

"N-Nothing! I just swallowed too much smoke generated by Homura!"

Konoe blinked. "Homura-han was here...?"

"Yeah. Luckily, Laughing Boy himself wasn't with her," Haruna said, while drawing a set of clothes for her. "Here, Konoka-chan! These should suffice while Negi-kun brings your card!"

"Who's this 'Laughing Boy'?" Matoi asked them, fully ignoring, just like everyone else, the panting and exhausted Chamo dragging himself to the site.

"Oh, you'll meet him soon enough," Haruna said. "I warn you, it won't be a pleasant experience, but—"

"I think a full preview isn't really necessary, Deathnote," Valkyrie Black opined.

"Hey, what if he's brought the rest of his girls as well? You know how Shirabe almost killed us!"

"Almost what?-!" Chisame said.

"Deathnote, don't scare them!" Psycho Purple said before moving closer to where Batman was questioning the White Rabbit, open book in hand.

"Too late, I'm already freaking scared!" Chisame said. "No one said we'd be facing a bunch of crazed murderers here!"

"Tch, most of them won't turn out so bad," Haruna waved a hand. "Although Tsukuyomi's a lost cause, but that's obvious enough on first sight..."

"Deathnote, enough!" Yue said. "You may be giving them a fully wrong idea! We don't know how different things may play here!"

Meanwhile, the local Setsuna eyed the Konoka in her arms with concern. "S-She isn't waking up yet..."

"Give her time," Kuro said. "She's still far weaker than Maga Alba-chan. Her vital signs are okay, so you don't have to worry at all."

Haruna chuckled. "Maybe she only needs a kiss of True Love to wake up...!" she teased playfully.

Setsuna, both of them, shot her a hostile glare.

Negi blinked. "Like a fairy tale? But that'd require a prince's kiss, wouldn't it? Where could we find a prince here?"

The assembled Ala Alba members and Kuro looked at his innocent, stunned face for a moment, then looked at each other, and then shared a chuckle.

"What's so funny?" Chisame groaned, only wanting to go home already.

"Nothing," Yue shook her head faintly amused. "It's only a private joke of sorts..."

edited 5th Nov '11 7:25:25 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#18961: Nov 5th 2011 at 7:26:36 PM

Funny! Maybe people keep trying to guess who Akira is from now and and get it humoursly wrong?

Send me the recent snippets, please?

edited 5th Nov '11 7:27:35 PM by SCMof2814

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#18962: Nov 5th 2011 at 7:27:57 PM

Okay, revised version of that Caelum Contortum think I posted before, plus some of the continuation.

Asuna stared out the window, focusing all of her willpower into a vain attempt to make the distant figures move. Eventually she would have to turn around, but at the moment, every fiber of her being revolted against the idea. She could make excuses for why the tiny people scattered across the campus weren't moving. Maybe they were just standing still for some reason. It could happen.

`But the scene behind her was inexplicable; the ponies' manes failing to flow like they should, the still flame above the stove, the potatoes hanging in the air above the pan as it had been flipped...there were no explanations. As long as she didn't look over it, she could just barely believe that it wasn't real; that one of her dreams had stuck in her brain as she woke up, and if she just gave her mind a few minutes to clear itself out-

“Whoa, Asuna! How'd you get over there?”

“Huh?” Asuna spun around to see her roommate and the two ponies staring at her. “What the-?”

“I could have sworn you were in bed...” Konoka said, completely obvious to the fact that she had been frozen a moment before.

“You didn't teach her how to teleport, did you, Twilight?” Rainbow Dash asked.

“Nope.” The unicorn shrugged, “She must have learned it on her own.”

“I didn't teleport!” Asuna said, trying to keep her voice steady. “I got out of bed, and all of you guys were-” She paused, realizing that there was no way they were actually going to believe what she had planned to say. Everything was so normal now (aside from the ponies, at least), that even she had a tough time believing what had just happened. Maybe it was all in her head. “You know what? Yeah. I'm a ninja. I've been taking lessons from Kaede about ninja things.”

“What's a ninja?” Rainbow Dash asked.

“Ask Haruna about it. I'm sure she has plenty of movies on the subject.” Asuna started to rub her eyes, which had obviously just been playing tricks on her. “Konoka, can you throw some bacon on there for me? Konoka?”

A twinge ran down Asuna's spine as she realized that it wasn't just Konoka that failed to respond. Her eyes snapped open. The twinge turned into a shudder and cold sweat.

“Hello? Rainbow?” She stepped forward and waved a shaky hand in front of the pegasus' face. Rainbow Dash's eyes were fixed open, but she obviously wasn't seeing anything. “What the hell is going- EAH!”

“WAA-!!!”

Asuna jumped back as Rainbow Dash suddenly sprang to life. The pony threw herself backward with a look halfway between terror and surprise plastered on her face. She had only recoiled a few inches before freezing again. Asuna pressed a hand to her chest. Her heart had gone straight past regular beating and was pounding so hard that she felt like she would have bruises on the inside of her ribcage, if such a thing were even possible.

Whatever was causing this whole mess had to be just messing with her. Why else would Rainbow Dash only snap out of it when Asuna was practically touching her? Asuna paused. She held her hand up again, this time in front of her own face. Had she unwittingly brushed against the pony's mane? Come to think of it, there was some sort of a sensation on the edge of her palm... She took a deep breath and grabbed hold of Rainbow Dash's mane.

“-AAA!!!” The pony immediately began trying to wriggle out of Asuna's grasp. “What the hay are you doing?”

“Hold still!” Asuna clamped her other hand on Rainbow Dash's head.

“Are you sure you can't teleport, because you were over by the window, and then you were suddenly like right in my face, and then you kinda spazzed for a sec- Wait, what's going on?” She twisted her head far enough to see Konoka standing unnaturally still.

“I'm not sure...can you just hold still for a second? I just want to try something.”

“Okaaay...” Rainbow Dash said, narrowing her eyes.

“Just sit tight, okay?”

Asuna released the pony's head, and held up her hands. The pegasus was still as a statue.

“Hello?” She waved a hand in front of the pony's face. “Anybody home?” No response. “Thought so.” Asuna once again took hold of the pony's mane.

“Ow! What are you doing? I thought you were going to do something!”

“I did! You just didn't know it because you were frozen.”

“I was what?”

“Look!” Asuna grabbed the pony's head and turned it to look at Konoka. “See? She's not moving. Twilight isn't moving. Nothing is moving except for us! I got out of bed and all of you were all frozen. I went over to the window to look out and you started moving again. Then you all froze again. You started moving again when I touched you.”

“Wait, you mean that I was like that?” She waved a hoof at Twilight, who had a fairly ridiculous-looking been-frozen-in-the-middle-of-saying-something look on her face.

“Yeah, then I touched you and started moving again. Then I stopped touching you and you stopped moving.”

“But I was moving just fine! I wasn't frozen or anything! You were just sort of appearing and disappearing.”

“You mean you don't remember being frozen? Weird...”

“So what are we supposed to do about it?

“I don't know, maybe we should-”

“Asuna, what the heck are you doing?”

Both the girl and the pony looked up to see Konoka staring at them.

“I- uh... Listen, what I'm about to say is probably going to sound ridiculous, but just hear me out, okay? Something really weird is going on here..."

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NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18963: Nov 5th 2011 at 7:31:46 PM

[up][up] Okay, I'll gather them up now. Although there haven't been that many since last time.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#18964: Nov 5th 2011 at 7:41:36 PM

Yeah, but formatting on an iPod is a little hard. Thanks!

Got it! Thanks!

edited 5th Nov '11 7:45:34 PM by SCMof2814

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18965: Nov 5th 2011 at 7:45:11 PM

[up] I see. Well, it's been sent to your mail. Thank you!

Darkenning She's Back Since: Apr, 2011
She's Back
#18966: Nov 5th 2011 at 8:01:05 PM

@Napoleon: Course I did. I remember everything.

@SCM: What he said.

If you won't I'll slit your throat/Won't you please be nice?
SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#18967: Nov 5th 2011 at 8:11:00 PM

Well, here's to hoping the Decadent-verse runs on Hypertime instead of Linear Time.

Extras for the Sayo chap!

Sayo/Paio Zi

Sayo blinked down at the horny little loli groping her breasts. "You can… touch me?" she said, more amazed then upset.

The bounty hunter grinned up at her. "Of course! The power of boobs can accomplish miracles!"


Sayo/Mei

Mei stared up at the ceiling as a naked, sated Sayo curled up next to her. "Wow… I thought these things only happened when I visited oneechan and her husband…"

edited 5th Nov '11 8:19:24 PM by SCMof2814

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18968: Nov 5th 2011 at 8:13:54 PM

[up] That reminds me, we're still doing the Crisis at some point, aren't we?

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#18969: Nov 5th 2011 at 8:20:28 PM

Yeah, but way, WAY later. Let's put a lot of writing in front of our fics first.

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18970: Nov 5th 2011 at 8:23:41 PM

I just might end Unequally up tying it to the Crisis, so yeah, I'm okay with it happening way down the line.

Jigaboo pink from atop a hill Since: Jun, 2011
pink
#18971: Nov 5th 2011 at 8:43:24 PM

@Japanese Teeth

"Completely obvious" Should be oblivious. And some of the parenthesis parts should be replaced with em dashes instead. It'll make the sentences flow better, kinda.

and all of you were all frozen.
That's a bit redundant. Removing the second "all" would solve the problem.

edited 5th Nov '11 8:47:45 PM by Jigaboo

I did naht.
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#18972: Nov 5th 2011 at 9:01:03 PM

Watching Carnival Phantasm kinda gave me an idea to make URAE Saber, whenever out of battle, sort of a (still serious acting, but obvious) Cloud Cuckoolander who has continued flashbacks of her King Arthur life... which are basically her acting scenes of Monty Python And The Holy Grail. She switches back to full Badass mode when fighting, true, but still...

I mean, since Shield kinda takes Saber's role as the no-nonsense blond Servant with a sword...

Still, it's only an idea at this point.

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#18973: Nov 5th 2011 at 9:03:29 PM

Go for it. I've been making a sorts of Holy Grail jokes regarding her, anyway. [lol]

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#18974: Nov 5th 2011 at 9:04:23 PM

[up][up][up]Noted and fixed.

Arg, I have so much crap to do tomorrow. Gotta work on Caelum Contortum, gotta do my review of the latest MLP episode, have a paper to write...

edited 5th Nov '11 9:05:46 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#18975: Nov 5th 2011 at 9:08:12 PM

Yeah, 2814!Saber has the Monty Python version of her history too. NI! NI!


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