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Yo Shadow C. Mage, if you don't mind me asking, how's progress on writting the Negimax Nanoha fan fiction? Considering that you are trying to make it as less cracky as possible, it must be hard.
edited 23rd Jan '11 8:46:41 PM by mega-dark
Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2I also have always wanted to write one. Especially after reading "The Guest" over on ff.net. The fact that the Author and the OC have the same name doesn't help. The story is basically about him having sex with every girl in 3-A. He got Tatsumiya Mana by the third chapter! They just started going at it!
If anyone wants to read it here is a link. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6253919/1/The_Guest
Worst part is now he's got his eyes on...
O_O
I swapped the Batman story arc with Third's Asuna X Emily fic. Now everyone thinks he gets horny to Batman beating people up
WOW, am I the only one disturbed by this?
You know you want to add love@mega-dark: Extremely. I've had to go with meme jokes and misunderstandings. I'm using the Nanoha characterization from my 2814 fics: a bit clueless and naive about boys and girls.
Here's a snippet.
She was, however, highly careless.
As she did that morning’s can-juggling exercise, she heard a noise behind her, and turned in surprise. She found herself face to face with her newest teacher, who was wearing exercise clothes and inexplicably carrying a big stick wrapped in bandages on his back. Quite unfortunately, she was still guiding her little ball of pink light, and with her concentration and targets changed, it followed suit.
Negi barely had time to react as a bright pink ball of magic slammed him square between the eyes.
“Ah! Negi-sensei! I’m so sorry!” Nanoha waffled, her natural compassion and concern overcoming her fear of having been discovered. She quickly dismissed the Divine Shooter that had been buzzing back and forth slamming repeatedly into Negi’s forehead as she knelt down next to him, wishing she knew healing magic like Yuuno did.
Negi blinked at her woozily. “Chisame-san? Did you see who’s been shooting their BB gun in school?”
“Eh?” Nanoha said, confused. “Negi-sensei? Who’s Chisame?” Negi was shaking his head to clear it. “Eh, sorry Takamachi-san. I confused you with an old student of mine. It’s the hair, you see.” He finally focused on her. “Takamachi-san… what you were doing… are you a–?”
Panic finally hit Nanoha. She subconsciously went through her options. Attack was out of the question. That left…
RETREAT AND FIND SOMEONE ELSE TO HELP HER SOLVE THIS!
“Flash Move,” Raging Heart said.
Negi blinked as he found himself alone, vaguely making out Nanoha’s retreating back.
As you can all see, Befriending has happened. Negi is now a viable romantic candidate.
Still, I'm struggling to move this forward...
edited 23rd Jan '11 9:09:58 PM by SCMof2814
Let me work on it a little more. Worse comes to worse, I'll have them be randomly attacked and they bond over blowing people up.
@ Overmaster: You going to use the fact Chiri actually has curly hair in your fic? I can actually see Yue undermining her confidence by giving her a Hannibal Lecture about the philosophical implications of a supposedly organized and anal person having hair— that is, her body- not want to be straight and even. Chiri breaks down because Yue proves she's a Lawful Neutral trapped in a Chaotic Neutral body.
edited 23rd Jan '11 9:15:22 PM by SCMof2814
Well, here's an idea
You have Negi chase after Nanoha, them bond a little, and Negi has a breakdown for A. Having revealed his magic YET AGAIN and B. Having to teach yet ANOTHER magic-infested class
Night all
You know you want to add love@Anemoi: I did have a few notes at the end, plus a little bonus section of aftermath. I'm too shot to write anything right now. I just got done with like 24 solid hours of travel.
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Is that for a TOS/A's Nanoha or Striker S Nanoha?
Hey guys, I just thunked a thought.
We might have started an "Overly used crossover plot"
The "Negi leaves 3-A and teaches at Uminari"
I mean, I'm gonna be doing one, Mage is doing one, and there's at LEAST one other out there
I hope this isn't going the way of the Negima / Harry Potter fic
You know you want to add loveThat's why I'm writing my HP fic the way I am
And its not overdone if three people do it, right?
You know you want to add loveEvangeline's panties, I hope not. The reason this MIGHT work better than Negima/Harry Potter is because there's no culture vacuum. Harry Potter and Negima both have established magical cultures whose backstories are a bit hard— for me, anyway— to logically intermesh. Plus putting Harry and Negi next to each other shows how they can't both be leads. Negi tends to surpass Harry on most stats,even character development.
In Nanoha/Negima however, the TSAB is a relatively recent interloper, and TSAB magic is rare enough to be overlooked, so there's not much clash. That's my belief, anyway.
I also had this INSANE idea for a sort-of self-insert. Negi is hunted by a group who want to do experiments on him to find out the secret of his appeal to girls so they can take it for themselves. Fighting, large-hamming, and ass-kicking follows. The twist is the group is full of (fictionalized) people from this Forum.
edited 24th Jan '11 6:20:27 AM by SCMof2814
I was actually thinking something similar myself. I thought that it could start off with Nekane being kidnapped and Nagi's Kyoto house being raided all as part of an effort to find the secret to the Springfield family's...popularity.
Also, I was thinking that an appropriate name for Fate's daughter from your "Descendants of Negi" fic could be "Hope".
I myself thought of the name "Will", because I think Heroic Willpower is the opposite of bowing down to fate.
By Fate, I hope you mean Testarossa. There are VERY few things I won't do in a fic, but Mpreg happens to be near the top of the list.
Both are pretty good neames, though it might be hard to find people to put them on. Maybe Stargirl and Ravager's daughters? But before that, I REALLY want to give one of the kids the name Amalthea...
MAGE, you're a genius
That shalt be our next Round Robin: An insane self-insert massive multiplayer crossover in which we shall obliterate the fourth wall, conduct bizarre experiments, and make large Ham and Cheese sandwiches
You know you want to add loveNot for now (I already prepared another way of getting Chiri out of the game) but I could use your idea for another point in the story.
Unequally, Chapter 20, Continuation.
Nekomi Tech had much smaller grounds, comparatively. Not that Nekomi was actually little at all, but Mahora was a true giant, and despite Negi-sensei giving her instructions on how to reach their dorm over the phone, and the fact she had been there last year, she still was lost as hell, wandering around the campus and growing terribly frustrated.
At one point, she had stopped to ask a still young man in a yellow shirt and black pants, with a bandana around his hair and carrying a large backpack with an umbrella tied to it, for directions, but the man hadn't even noticed he actually was at Mahora until she told him so. Then he had brightened up, said something about visiting 'a niece', thanked her and left, heading straight towards the woods.
Sora was not a woman who used to get angry at all, but that situation really was starting to test her patience.
Most of the students seemed to have left classes, but they weren't at their usual outdoor and club activities. She reasoned it was due to the incoming tests, but even so, she was annoyed at having no one around to ask, until she almost stumbled into two little nearly identical pink haired girls who seemed to be slacking around. They seemed vaguely familiar.
"Hey! Hey, you!" she called out. "Sorry to disturb you, but you do study with Hasegawa Chisame, don't you? Aren't you the Fuyutsuki twins?"
The twins paused in their games to look at her. For a few moments they only gave her a weird stare, until the one with pigtails said, "Ahhh! You're Chisame-chan's sister, aren'tcha? Yeah, we're the Narutaki sisters! Remember us? I'm Fuuka, and this is Fumika!"
"Hello," the other sister bowed very politely, and Sora bowed in turn. "Um, has something happened to Chisame-chan? It's odd for her to be visited..."
"Oh, no, it's nothing serious..." the young woman replied. "Actually, I, um, only came to bring her something for her birthday..."
Fuuka nearly jumped up in place. "Her birthday! Today? Waiiii, she's so bad! Why didn't she tell any of us?"
"Well, you know how she is, Onee-chan," Fumika piped in. "She isn't too close to anyone..."
Fuuka fumed and crossed her arms. "Unforgivable!" Then she looked back at Sora. "But it isn't your fault, of course. You want to get to her dorm, don't you?"
"Yes, I'm afraid I kind of got lost..." the young adult admitted.
"You got the right women, then!" Fuuka grinned, poking at her own chest with a thumb. "We're members of the Mahora Grounds Exploration Club, also doubling as the Walking Club, and we're familiar with each inch of this campus! We can get you there in a blink!"
"Would you do that for me? Thank you very much!" Sora said.
"Yeah, but not yet. At this hour, Negi-sensei still must be teaching the Baka Rangers their reinforce classes, and Chisame-chan usually hangs around playing with her laptop until he's done. In the meanwhile, why don't we give you a free tour of Mahora? That way, you won't get lost ever again!" the more adventurous girl offered.
"Won't it take long?" the Hasegawa firstborn doubted.
"Not at all!" Fumika grabbed her by a hand. "Come with us! You'll have a lot of fun! What's the worst thing that could happen?"
"Okay, okay, you win..." she relented, going after them at a much more sedate pace. "Lead the way, please..."
Idly, she wondered if Chisame truly had to go through that every day.
edited 24th Jan '11 10:30:35 AM by NapoleonDeCheese

Maybe you should post Lotus' snippets first, get the story back on the archive's first page?