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SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#11326: Jul 23rd 2011 at 4:36:12 AM

My contribution to the second bath scene:

Her best friend smiled at her. "Yes. Don't worry, Yue-Yue. I've been there, after all. I'm sure I can be of some help..."

Nodoka went off to go after Ai.

Misa blinked. ”Wait… ‘she’s been there'? Does that mean what I think it means?-!-?-!-?”

Yue panicked, not knowing that to say.

Surprisingly, it was Kuro who came to her rescue… sort of.

“Meh, I wouldn’t bother thinking about it,” Kuro said, undoing the bun on her hair and wincing as her fingers caught on tangles. “The relationships in Ala Alba are so tangled up I’d need some kind of TvTropes relationship chart to get it straight, and then barely. And that’s just the ones I’ve seen first-hand. Between Asuna’s underlying sexual tension for Ayaka–”

“HEY! THAT’S SLANDER!” both Asunas chorused.

“– the freaky question of Chachamaru’s parentage and ancestry and the possibility she might be royalty–”

Misora blinked. “Chachamaru’s what?”

“– Yue’s harem in Ariadne–”

FOR THE LAST, TIME, I DO NOT HAVE A HAREM! Emily, Collette, Beatrix and I are j-just friends, darn it! There was nothing going on there are all! REALLY!-!-!-!-!”

Haruna looked sideways at her. “All the pictures I’ve seen of your room there show only one bed, and you have Collette as your roommate. And you and Emily kinda acted like Asuna and Ayaka do…”

“S-so?” Yue sputtered. “The class rep and I just didn’t get along that well! And Nodoka and I share the bed sometimes when it’s cold. It doesn’t mean anything!

Ala Alba and Kuro gave her a flat look. Haruna smirked. “Yeah, about that…”

“IT DOESN’T!”

“Hmm…” Kuro said noncommittally. “Let’s not even get started on the issue between Negi and Rei over who’s… you-know-what of you-know-where.”

“Actually, I think they’ve settled on ‘we don’t really care’ on that,” Calculator said.

“And of course,” Kuro finished. “There’s that thing where Negi ‘allegedly’ makes every girl he meets hot for him. Allegedly.

“It’s true!” Haruna protested.

“I don’t think he’s hot,” Kuro pointed out.

“You have bad taste and decadent habits!” Haruna shot back.

“Tomoyo-san doesn’t think he’s hot,” Kuro countered.

“Tomoyo-san is, by her own admission, too insanely in love with Sakura-san to notice if the world ended in a zombie apocalypse unless it somehow inconvenienced Sakura-san!”

“Sakura-san doesn’t like him that way,” Kuro responded.

“Sakura-san is so oblivious to love it literally has to be pointed out to her!”

“Nanoha-chan then!”

“The girl is inhuman! Seriously, Chachamaru has more human emotion and femininity than the Green Devil! The girl is practically Robocop! Or Heero Yuy!”

As the bickering continued on, Yue found herself breathing a small sigh of relief at the diversion from Nodoka’s having ‘been there’…

edited 23rd Jul '11 4:36:37 AM by SCMof2814

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#11327: Jul 23rd 2011 at 7:12:00 AM

@SCM: “Negi and Rei over who’s… you-know-what of you-know-where.” Have I forgotten something? What’s that about?

Thanks to JT, the improved version of chapter 16 is up!

Kaede touched her sash and the youkai were mowed down like grass through a lawnmower. Mana got down on one knee and started shooting those that hadn’t gone down yet.

“Wow!” gasped Ku Fei, “That thing real-aru!?”

“It’s just an air gun.” Mana replied. Out of the sky, four uzoku dropped and surrounded them.

“Don’t get cocky, you weaklings!” the one growled.

“You won’t be able to use that gun at close range!” added another. Mana smirked and kicked open her guitar case. Two hand guns jumped out and she grabbed them.

“Huh!” said an uzoku, before Mana starting swing her arms in every direction before firing. Each shot hitting it’s mark, irrelevant of distance.

“Woah!” said an uzoku as he clutched his forehead where a bullet had hit him and swung his sword with his other hand. “Damn bitch!” Kaede blocked it with her shuriken, before touching her sash with her left hand to continue the assault. He didn’t last much longer after that and Mana twisted round to continue firing on the other side as she twisted her body and advanced into the fray.

“S-strong…” gasped an uzoku as he disintegrated.

“Wh-wh-wh-wha…” Asuna gulped as she looked over at the new arrivals from where she had just gotten up. “Why is Tatsumiya-san…Was she that strong before!?”

“I used to exterminate monsters with her occasionally.” explained Setsuna.

“Ai ya! That Mana for you-aru!” Ku Fei smiled as she scouted out the available enemies by holding a hand above her eyes. “But this first time I seen real monsters before-aru! Well, maybe in Library Island, but no where else!”

“You can go fight the weak ones, Ku.” suggested Mana as she nonchalantly glanced over her shoulder.

“Ah! You making fun of me-aru!” Ku Fei complained with raised fists before lifting a finger. “Don’t underestimate the power of four thousand years of Chinese martial arts!” A group of four youkai ran up behind her.

I think we can take this little one on! thought one as he swung his club back. Ku Fei turned around and blocked it with her wrist.

“Yo! Ha!” she said as she stepped forward and punched him. “Mati Bung Chuen!”

“Whappft!” cried the youkai as he flew backwards and smashed into his three comrades.

“E-even Ku Fei is here! And she looks pretty strong too!” Asuna smiled. “I-I don’t know what’s going on…but it looks like we’re saved!”

“Wah!” blushed Tsukuyomi with a large smile as she closed her eyes and held her sword against her chin.

“Come on!” Ku Fei grinned as she assumed her stance. “There not anyone stronger-aru?”

“Don’t get cocky.” advised Mana. “You’ll hurt yourself.” Kaede split herselfinto sixteen and began slicing through the youkai as she rained death upon others, but then, she disappeared with a glow.

“Anya-sensei must have summoned her.” Mana explained.

“We take care of these guys while she gone-aru!” Ku Fei smiled as she pulled out her weapons. The light in the distance brightened and a massive, four-armed figure emerged.

“Didn’t Anya make it in time !?” Asuna asked as she punched another oni in the face.

“I don’t know,” replied Setsuna as she slashed another’s hand off, “I just hope that she has enough help!”

“Senpai!” asked Tsukuyomi as she charged forward. “Are you running away? Aya!” She flung her swords forward and deflected two bullets that were coming for her. Ku Fei began slicing through oni as she worked her way forwards and Mana fired another pair of bullets at Tsukuyomi. After deflecting those as well, Tukuyomi said, “Aan, more interferences. Again. Projectiles won’t work against us shinmeiryuu, you know.”

“I know.” replied Mana. “I just needed to stop your advance for a while. Look behind you.” Tsukuyomi turned to see Ku Fei standing right next to her and quickly lifted her sword to block the punch that she lauched upon seeing her eyes. With that Setsuna launched forward and slammed her own swod down, forcing Tsukuyomi to block with her other sword. Mana dropped the magazines in her hand guns and to magic circles appeared next to her, each holding a full magazine. She quickly reloaded and got back into youkai extermination.

Back to Let's Read GHQ:

I like the way that Konoka is running Gehenna. Ah, so Konoka’s a bit afraid. And Lunzard doesn’t want her regaining her momory which he thinks she will if sh goes down to the lower library. Naturally, she is heading down there.And now she has a cat But Ansie isn’t always a cat. A vary matter-of-fact way of describing having an animal try ad eat you. Giggle. “That darn cat”. I liked both versions of the movie. And Konoka is fighting! And rescues Ansie. Nice! What!? Is this Setsuna!? "Why did I... kill Secchan?" Wow! Just…wow. I can see why you said what you did last time, but sometimes you have to be controvertial. God work.

In other news, I've made another three pactio cards. I have so many that I need to do!

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#11328: Jul 23rd 2011 at 7:49:46 AM

Negi Springfield and Hino Rei are both Martian Royalty. The 'argument' is over who really rules Mars.

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#11329: Jul 23rd 2011 at 8:03:11 AM

[up]Ah! That makes sense.

I've actually been thinking that there's some amusing irony when comparing my current arc to the canon equivalent even though I din't do it that way for the irony. Things like: Negi quadrupelled his number of pactios, Anya didn't get any new ones. Asuna and Setsuna were the only non-petrified girl's who had pactios with Negi, so they stayed to fight the youkai, Asuna and Setsuna were two of the few to not have pactios with Anya so they stayed to fight the youkai etc.

edited 23rd Jul '11 8:03:23 AM by Sereg

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#11330: Jul 23rd 2011 at 8:11:24 AM

“The girl is inhuman! Seriously, Chachamaru has more human emotion and femininity than the Green Devil! The girl is practically Robocop! Or Heero Yuy!”
.... Wait a minute. Nanoha? As in, "White Devil" Nanoha? How the hell can Chachamaru have more emotion than Nanoha?!

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
Cygnus Fist of the thunder god from Mahora Evil Academy Since: Jan, 2001
Fist of the thunder god
#11331: Jul 23rd 2011 at 8:14:39 AM

[up][up]I'm actually under some nasty stress this week, so seeing you reach the end of chapter 5 makes my day.

In other news, I'm torn between accuracy to the manga or more lulz for vampire Konoka. Plus Setsuna can't drop into Konoka's dreams in any way I know of without Negi's help, so...

edited 23rd Jul '11 8:15:12 AM by Cygnus

You know you want to add more tropes to THIS.
SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#11332: Jul 23rd 2011 at 8:23:32 AM

@Marq: It's context sensitive. In this case, it means 2814!Nanoha wouldn't know someone wanted to jump her bones if they dropped on her like a meteor, and has no concept of romantic love, and Chachamaru... does. My Nanoha's a paper-work-happy workaholic. Chachamaru has hobbies. Well, she takes care of stray cats in her free time, anyway.

[up]Dude, you're crossed over with a Nippon Ichi game. You don't need to justify it! Just make it happen and if Konoka asks, say this is the obligatory dream segment (in which case she tries to derail it into an erotic dream), Asagi did it, or it's the Power of Love followed by immediate Lampshade Hanging.

edited 23rd Jul '11 8:29:37 AM by SCMof2814

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#11333: Jul 23rd 2011 at 8:25:29 AM

[up][up]Glad that I was able to make you feel better. Vampire!Konoka is already so different from her canon self that you can get away with a lot of changes. As I've said before, do it the way that you'll enjoy more. As for Setsuna, she can use some Eastern magic. She might know or be able to buy a charm that could do it.

[up]It might be funny to have a scene where someone tried to explain this to Nanoha.

EDIT: By the way, SCM, check out my title.

edited 23rd Jul '11 8:42:01 AM by Sereg

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#11335: Jul 23rd 2011 at 9:03:31 AM

[up]Well, I was given a cool title, so I thought that I may as well use it. I think that the only other title that anyone has ever given me is "Mongrelboy" which may be more of a nickname and wasn't exactly designed as a compliment. Not that I minded much. There was a lot of lighthearted teasing in High School and I teased him as well.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#11336: Jul 23rd 2011 at 9:10:04 AM

@SCM: That's less "no emotion" and more "no sexual desire/drive". And what about the whole "befriending Anti Villains through superior firepower" and "befriending the crap out of Vivio to get rid of the nasty McGuffin that's hijacked the little girl's body, after a heartfelt and very tearful speech about how precious said little girl is to her" thing? And the Say My Name thing with Fate at the end of the original series?


On another note.... I'd like some actual critique of my last piece on the previous page, please. Praise is all well and good, but if I don't get my mistakes and weaknesses pointed out to me, I would stand little chance of improving as a writer. sad

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#11337: Jul 23rd 2011 at 9:29:42 AM

[up]I...don't actually know Lobo, so i can't tell if you're getting him right, but I looked over it again anyway. This is what I noticed:

“after checking her up” switch to “giving her a check up”. It becomes more subtle, but that’s not necessarily bad, plus it’s more grammatically correct.

“just what was that scent” switch to “just what that scent was” again, more grammatically correct.

Otherwise, I can't really think of any complaints from my side. I mean, it might be nice to see what happens next (or even beforehand), but it was a good place to break off. Something that might be nice is to explain why Chizuru is the only other person there. Also, if it's been so long (and she treats Kotaro and Negi that way) it's surprising that she doesn't have pactio powers. Or maybe she does! Her power is to pull leeks from nowhere!

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#11338: Jul 23rd 2011 at 9:35:00 AM

Like I said, cracky rip-off. Everything is secondary to the hilarity factor.

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#11339: Jul 23rd 2011 at 10:15:46 AM

[up]Oh, no doubt! But, you said that you wanted some criticism that wasn't merely praise and that's what I was able to come up with.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#11340: Jul 23rd 2011 at 10:32:46 AM

Oops. I was replying to your post's last paragraph; the rest of the critique was actually very helpful.

edited 23rd Jul '11 10:35:51 AM by MarqFJA

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Darkenning She's Back Since: Apr, 2011
She's Back
#11341: Jul 23rd 2011 at 10:32:52 AM

More Decadent 31

Alladia stared down at the javelin sticking out of him, and opened his mouth. "Again?!" he gargled, just as a fountain of blood spewed forth from his mouth, and then slumped forward in death.

"Well, that was disturbingly easy," Evangeline mused, watching the homonculous quickly decay for a moment, before she turned her attention to the binders holding Chizuru against the wall.

"There are more of him," Arika snapped reflexively before she glared down at Evangeline. "The curse on you is broken. How did that happen?"

Evangeline neither responded to the query nor met Arika's gaze, as she freed Chizuru's feet first. It was relatively easy to do, once she figured out how the locking mechanism worked. "Okay, when I let your hands go, you're going to drop a foot or so, so be ready for that," she said to the taller girl before flying up to take care of those locks.

"Answer my question," Arika demanded.

"Would you like to stay hung up like that for the rest of time?" Evangeline replied, still not looking at her as she got the lock on Chizuru's broken hand off first, allowing her to bring it back down against her stomach. "Ready?" she asked the girl.

"Ready," Chizuru answered.

"I would not like to remain here," answered Arika. "Now answer my question."

As she released the lock, and Chizuru landed on the ground fairly gracefully, Evangeline finally whirled to glare at Arika. "Use your bloody eyes," she hissed. "There, on the monitor, you can see the boya. You can see Chisame-chan and the damn iinchou. Who can't you see?"

Realization settled on Arika's face like frost on a window pane. "You bitch," she said softly.

"Damn straight," Evangeline replied, and proceeded to release Arika from her bonds too, with much less in the way of warning.

It didn't matter; Arika dropped to the floor with even more ease than Chizuru had shown, before whirling to glare up at Evangeline. "This will not go unanswered," she promised furiously.

"I look forward to your attempts to answer it," Evangeline replied, bitterness dripping from her words. "It is such a relief not to be dealing with people who insist on thinking I'm a good person underneath it all!"

"Are the two of you just about done posturing?" Chizuru asked, raising her voice for the first time. "Because we might want to try getting out of here before —"

The elevator doors flung open, and another iteration of Alladia, this one stripped to the waist with slime on his face bounded out of it, green eldritch light glowing in his hands. "You dare to reject my offering?" the mad king howled. "You dare reject my love!"

"Oh, please," Evangeline sighed, and prepared herself for battle.

Next: Back to Makie.

edited 23rd Jul '11 10:40:30 AM by Darkenning

If you won't I'll slit your throat/Won't you please be nice?
mega-dark Moe Game Console from Planeptune Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Moe Game Console
#11342: Jul 23rd 2011 at 3:58:51 PM

An interesting one-shot Chess.

Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#11343: Jul 23rd 2011 at 4:00:55 PM

Thirty One Clown Princesses in Amber

Stockholm Syndrome

The Joker crossed his arms. "No!"

"Why not?-!" Misora protested.

"Because we're going to give her back!" her 'Dad' argued. "The ransom was already paid!"

"Since when do you worry about fulfilling your word?" Misora argued, hugging the dark skinned child close to her.

"Listen, I'm all for breaking promises, but we already backed away on the last two kidnappings!" he exposed. "If we keep doing this, people just won't start paying when we kidnap their loved ones!"

Misora pouted, not letting the kid go. The kid hugged her back. "That's your fault! We told you not to kill those two hostages! Now why must I be the one to pay for that?"

"Because I'm the leader of the gang, that's why! Give me at least two good reasons why we should keep that girl!"

Misora and Cocone immediately aimed guns at his head.

Joker didn't even flinch. "... You'll have to try something better."

"Ahem," Evangeline coughed from where she sat indolently in a corner. "I think I could have a solution. We just need to replace this useless girl with one similar enough for her parents to fail at noticing the switch."

The Clown Prince groaned. "Surely those foreign fat cats couldn't be THAT stupid..."

One day later, Mr. and Mrs. Rosa stared down at the dark skinned girl sitting before them.

"Darling, I don't quite believe this is our Cocone..."

"Love, thet clearly have cut her hair short, and as for her altered behavior, well... four months living with those fiends would do that to anyone."

"That, and you aren't paying any more money, are you?"

"That's why I married you, my Dear. You're always so perceptive..."

The girl smiled at them. "I'm Cocone Maria Fatima Taro Rosa Seikutsu! Pleased to meet you, Mister Papa, Mistress Mama!"

Back at the funhouse, Misora cooed loudly, rocking Cocone back and forth in her embrace. "Ooooohhh, true love conquers all again...!"

Cocone didn't smile, but kept on hugging her all the same.

Chizuru was practically beaming. "Ara ara, I never had seen Misora-chan so happy before!"

Joker grumbled, looking through the newspaper. "Yay, joy is us. Hey, this looks good! Princess Theodora from Wherever is coming this weekend to Gotham! Looks like an easy job for giggles! This huge bodyguard she has behind her shouldn't be too much of a problem..."

gwonbush Lurking Puma Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Lurking Puma
#11344: Jul 23rd 2011 at 4:03:25 PM

[up]Oh, poor misguided Joker. The next kidnapping will not end well for the Jokerettes.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#11345: Jul 23rd 2011 at 4:26:49 PM

Joker is in for a big surprise, that's for sure.

@Mega-dark: ... Ouch. That's one way to play It Got Worse horribly straight.

edited 23rd Jul '11 4:45:39 PM by MarqFJA

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Cygnus Fist of the thunder god from Mahora Evil Academy Since: Jan, 2001
Fist of the thunder god
#11346: Jul 23rd 2011 at 5:19:25 PM

Hey look, I have a vampire!Konoka snippet!

I keep thinking about doing shorter, more comedic ones, buuuuuttt...

"Hey Negi! Wake up!" Asuna yelled, all while desperately combing her hair. But with no answer, she decided she had to investigate. That heavy thinker's mode with him lately was really messing with him, so much that she had been worried that when Negi flew out one day, she wound up going hunting for him (Konoka said that nothing out that way was a danger to him, and she should relax and let him come back tomorrow). "We're gonna be late! Geez, I didn't get any sleep last night and it's all your fault..." But lo and behold, he... wasn't there. "Aggh! He's not here!" All she saw was Chamo messing with her bras again.

"Ah! If you're looking for big bro, he's left for school already, while you were at work!" Chamo explained happily.

"N-no way!" Asuna complained while trying to take her bra back from the perverted fiend.

"T-too noisy..." Came a voice from below.

Asuna stopped. That was a bad sign... normally, the owner of that voice should have been gone, too. She looked down to see Konoka, laying down in her bed with a wet cloth on her head. "Aiyah..." Konoka lamented.

"Konoka? You have a fever?" Asuna asked, lifting a hand to feel her forehead. It was hot to the touch. "Geez!" She pulled back as if she had touched a stove instead. "I keep wondering how a vampire gets a cold, but you stun me."

"I guess I spent the last few days chasing after Secchan, while the curse was still active..." Konoka sighed. "Negi-kun's looking better, at least. He even tried to challenge me!" The vampire giggled. Konoka had somehow been oblivious to the fact that she had been the reason why Negi was worrying so much. How did this vampire get so carefree? She wasn't like this when they had met ten years ago...

But enough about that, she was going to be late! "Negi will be back soon, okay? So stay put!"

"Fine... let me just cook myself some soup..." And Konoka tried to get up to do just that.

"No! You have to rest!" Asuna forced her back down.

"Well, maybe I can get some water..."

"Stay put!" Asuna demanded.

Later, Asuna cursed the fact that Konoka now made her a whooping twenty minutes late. She was surprised Negi was so understanding when she showed up later.


"Konoka-san?" Negi ventured when he came back home. "W-wah! You have a fever?!"

"She's been like that since this morning, big bro," Chamo popped up. "Though she tried to get up and do stuff several times. Asuna actually threatened to tie her down before she left. To which Konoka was like 'when did you get so kinky, Asuna?'"

"What does that mean?"

Chamo blanched. "Ahhh, you'll learn later."

And suddenly the door bust open. Setsuna, face as serious as ever, sword drawn. "Prepare for your end, dreaded vampire!"

Negi immediately panicked and latched onto Setsuna. "No! Students aren't supposed to fight each other!"

"But she's dangerous! She was planning to drain your blood, sensei! If not defeated, she could at least have her powers sealed...!"

"Look closely, Sakurazaki-san! She's in no condition to be dangerous." Negi declared, finally managing to calm Setsuna down somewhat. "I'm not very good at caretaking, so I need your help in watching over her for a little bit! I've been thinking about this as much as you have, and—"

"Ah... thirsty..." Konoka muttered.

"Wah!" Negi scrambled to make some water. "Okay, try this!" However, she would not drink.

"Oh no..."

"S-s-stand back, sensei, and let me handle this," Setsuna said, marching forward. With little choice and a face growing insanely red, Setsuna stuck her finger in Konoka's mouth. "Only a little bit...!" Konoka hummed while sucking on her finger. "Sensei!"

"Sakurazaki-san?!" Negi answered, a bit alarmed by the tone of her voice.

"Please help! She's bewitching me!"

"How?"

She was blushing hard. "She's making this feel too good!"

"Ummm," Negi began, becoming confused. "I'm not sure how that's problem..."

Surprisingly, she didn't take much after that, ending with a satisfied hum.

"Too hot..." She complained five seconds later.

"Oh no!" Negi rushed to close the blinds.

"Too cold..." She moaned, now shivering thanks to the sweat on her body.

"She's sweating madly, and the sheets need to be changed!" Negi said scrambling for the sheets. However, the logic of having to change Konoka seemed incredibly dangerous right then. He was an English gentleman, he wasn't allowed to do all that!

"Negi-sensei, I'll change her clothes." Setsuna volunteer. "Please don't get too close, she'll bewitch you!"

"Umm, Sakurazaki-san..." Negi was suddenly not very sure if Setsuna helping him was the best idea.

Setsuna, however, set about changing Konoka's clothes, while Negi looked away to preserve her modesty. "Sensei!"

"Sakurazaki-san?!"

"She's bewitching me again!"

"How is that?"

"Her body is too attractive!" Setsuna declared in horror. "She's making my nose bleed!"

Negi crashed into the ground.

"I got bad news for you, lady..." Chamo muttered, peeping out of the drawer.

In the end, Negi had to change Konoka's clothes by wearing a blindfold and using magic to align things properly.

Setsuna hung her head in shame. "I'm sorry, sensei. I'm a trainee of the Shinmeiryuu, and also a hunter of supernatural creatures, and yet instead of helping and protecting you against one, I'm playing nurse—and not even being good at that."

"It's okay, Sakurazaki-san!" Negi smiled, trying to cheer her up. "I don't quite know what to do about this either!" He walked over to the slumbering, delirious Konoka. "Huh... a true eastern vampire..."

"She must be a shinso," Setsuna concluded. "A highest form of vampire. Legends say they were once humans who learned a secret art to transform themselves. Perhaps something to do with demon contract, too."

"From what I've seen of Konoka, I don't know why she'd turn herself into a vampire." Negi said. "She also said she knew my father..."

"Your father, sensei?"

"Yeah, my father was a really famous mage!" Negi's face was alight with amazement. "I was hoping to follow in his footsteps and learn more about him!"

"I see," Setsuna rubbed her chin. "That's an admirable goal, sensei."

Negi nodded, and turned back to Konoka, only to see her face suddenly but slightly turn to discomfort. "N-no...! Thousand Master... Not... going back..."

Negi paused. Was she having a dream about the Thousand Master? He had to know more! He quietly whipped out his staff, murmuring "Ras Tel Ma Scir Magister..."

"Sensei?" Setsuna asked. "Please don't use your magic recklessly. What are you doing?"

"I... want to see what she's dreaming about," Negi murmured. "I think it involves my father."

"Really?"

"If you want to see, touch my head."

"Fine..." And she did, as Negi finished his incantation.

You know you want to add more tropes to THIS.
SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#11347: Jul 23rd 2011 at 5:31:42 PM

OM, sent you a docX. Did you get it?

mega-dark Moe Game Console from Planeptune Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Moe Game Console
#11348: Jul 23rd 2011 at 6:30:01 PM

@Marq I hope someone can expand on that fic, not just showing what happens in the future but what are the thoughts of Negi's girls about the whole issue.

Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#11349: Jul 23rd 2011 at 6:53:31 PM

[up][up] Yep, I got it. Reading through it right now, thanks.

Edit: You missed the Joker profile at the end, but everything else's there! Nice job!

edited 23rd Jul '11 7:19:46 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#11350: Jul 23rd 2011 at 7:26:31 PM

I just got this incredible idea for a Negima-Naruto oneshot that is both WAFFy and Cracky! Excuse me while I starting writing it down... grincool

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