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NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#976: Dec 27th 2010 at 12:29:11 AM

Hi. New to the forums, Negima is my favorite manga, and I write fanfiction. Seems like a good place to start. grin

I have some possible OC trait ideas if you don't mind me joining in.

25) A "Stop Having Fun" Guys type of Gamer Girl that sometimes confuses reality with video games? Hell, there's plenty of video game RPG references in Negima as it is. XD

26) A Friend to All Living Things girl who, ironically, hates animals?

RedSavant Since: Jan, 2001
#977: Dec 27th 2010 at 12:39:17 AM

^The type who attracts animals subconsciously? That'd be entertaining.

It's been fun.
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#978: Dec 27th 2010 at 4:02:07 AM

27) A girl who (think she) is a reincarnation of a famous person. Who the person is changes on an hourly basis.

28) A Twilight Furry fan.

edited 27th Dec '10 4:03:18 AM by SCMof2814

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#979: Dec 27th 2010 at 5:57:12 AM

Is it too much to suggest that the class have a fanfiction writer who writes REALLY weird crack?
Hey! No self-inserts!

@ Watchtower: I'm glad so see someone else had a reaction to that idea besides running away screamingliked it. I mean, the fanart would be hilarious. Go on, pick one! You've got 2/3 odds! (Hmm. Maybe they should be in the gambling/card playing club.)

29. A Dojikko. Remember to cover the standard bases, people.

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#980: Dec 27th 2010 at 6:02:36 AM

^^^^Welcome. Check the first page for links to our somewhat dormant fanfic game and our troper's fic. Crackfic is not the rule here,no matter what NDC and SCM say,so feel free to be serious.tongue

edited 27th Dec '10 6:03:33 AM by AckSed

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#981: Dec 27th 2010 at 6:05:21 AM

[up]Coming from the author of Haruna's Most Ero-Ero Adventure your disclaimer amuses me. Though that's not very cracky.

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Watchtower Since: Jul, 2010
#982: Dec 27th 2010 at 7:06:38 AM

@No Limit: First, welcome on board. Nice to see ya here. Second, #25 had me laughing, if only because I picture a situation similar to Kyo from Fruits Basket. "Get away from me, you stupid cats!"

@RT: Hey, I've been a troper long enough to appreciate good crack when I see it, and the triplet/trap combo has the potential to be really good crack. If we do have a gambler in the group, I can totally see her selling it off.

"It's time for the new game of the week: Neo-Pactio! Here we have three gorgeous triplets, but here's the twist: one of them's really a guy! Can you tell who it is? You get as long as you want to decide, but remember: you must kiss the girl on the lips to make your choice! Results will be revealed at the end of the week! C'mon, gents! Don't be shy! Don't be afraid! Step right up, place your bets, and test your luck!"

Of course, it only works if they're Type 4 of Big Breasts Big Deal. Yes even the trap.

edited 27th Dec '10 7:10:53 AM by Watchtower

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#983: Dec 27th 2010 at 8:03:28 AM

@ WT: that strains believability; keep in mind that there are inevitably going to be public bath interactions, and while a stuffed bra will work in clothes the girls won't be able to hide an "identical sister" whose cup size drops precipitously when you take "her" clothes off. No, the body type has to be Hideyoshi for all three, or to make all three chubby enough to justify boobs on the guy (shut up, Tatsuki makes it cute).

Although if they all go for the flat body type, Petite Pride could work (even for the guy), so you could keep the personality you describe.

edited 27th Dec '10 8:03:55 AM by RadicalTaoist

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#984: Dec 27th 2010 at 9:19:25 AM

@No Limit: Welcome. Always good to have new guys around. I look forward to seeing what your writing is like.

Maybe the triplets could all have different takes on the boob situation. Like one of them (maybe the trap) goes the Petite Pride route, while the other ones have different reactions.

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Watchtower Since: Jul, 2010
#985: Dec 27th 2010 at 10:36:35 AM

[up][up]Wait, we have that trope? Wow, you really do learn something new from this site every day. Alright, that idea works.

[up]It depends whether or not this is taken to Mind Screw territory. If not, then this suggestion is fine. However, if it is, then this suggestion makes the trap too easy to find.tongue

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#986: Dec 27th 2010 at 11:36:17 AM

[up]It depends whether we're trying to confuse the audience or just trap's classmates. If we want to keep the audience guessing, then the trap should have A-Cup Angst.

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#987: Dec 27th 2010 at 11:47:13 AM

They could always deliberately mix it up to confuse people. The twins in Ouran High School Host Club played "guess which one is which?", why not these?

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Watchtower Since: Jul, 2010
#988: Dec 27th 2010 at 12:30:45 PM

[up]That's pretty much what I'm trying to go for. Actually, Haruhi from that show is how I'm picturing this.

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#989: Dec 27th 2010 at 12:54:39 PM

Hi everyone. While I haven’t posted here yet, I have been lurking and I decided to help by giving some of the ideas I thought of for the OC ideas. Here they are:

30. An adrenaline junky. Possibly a member of the library exploration club, but for the gear rather than the books.

31. A girl who’s always heading to a different part of campus to get her older brother out of trouble. She may view her experiences with Negi in a similar fashion.

32. A girl who is Wrong Genre Savvy. At first she thinks that she’s the heroine (she isn’t) in a more traditional romantic story, not realising that this is a harem comedy and later continually changes her mind about which genre and trpes apply to her life. Naturally, the Genre Shift only confuses her more.

33. A girl whose family has ties with (or are) yakuza.

34. A conspiracy theorist. She notices some of the odd things about Negi, but until she’s bought into the loop, keeps changing her mind about what he is and none of her guesses are a magic user.

35. A girl who tries to use her knowledge of fantasy to understand magic and complains that it works differently to how it’s portrayed in other works.

36. A bit of a Cloud Cuckoo Lander whom is fascinated by completely mundane things. She spends a lot of her free time outside staring at thing like falling leaves and ants. She writes poetry which is well written, but has unusual premises. She may like reading other peoples poetry as well.

37. A Large Ham who likes to use What Do You Mean, It's Not Awesome?. When she’s brought into the loop, she calms down a bit as she’s unsure how to react to this strange world, but reverts to her hamminess as she becomes more used to certain situations.

38. A girl who enjoys organising student protests. While she has several causes, her favourite is trying to make the classes co-ed.

39. A girl who is far poorer than her classmates and is at the school on scholarship.

40. And this one was sort of suggested before, so I’ll just expand it: A Pollyanna, Genki Girl, Attention Whore with Cloud Cuckoo Lander tendencies that has Attention Deficit... Ooh, Shiny! and enjoys randomly bursting into song.

edited 28th Dec '10 1:31:34 PM by Sereg

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#990: Dec 27th 2010 at 1:04:09 PM

[up] As a seasoned veteran here, I totally welcome you. tongue

I'm just spitballing ideas here, but how about differing the triplets a bit more? Even Fuka and Fumika had some subtle differences. Here's some possible ideas:

One's a complete an utter neat freak to the point of being a germophobe, another is a typical shonen protagonist (you all came up with the good ideas!), and the trap is...gay. Not sure if that'll run into Unfortunate Implications though. ^^;

We could even overlap the previous traits with them.

edited 27th Dec '10 1:14:13 PM by NoLimit

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#991: Dec 27th 2010 at 1:41:42 PM

A female ventriloquist. Heck, make her an amalgam of all the Batman characters that Alan Grant created.

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#992: Dec 27th 2010 at 2:44:58 PM

Welcome to the insanity, Sereg.tongue

[up][up]I was going to suggest differentiating the triplets more myself, although that makes the whole "one of them is trap" idea harder to pull off.

It would be nice to see a set of twins/triplets that can actually function as standalone characters; there are two many sibling pairs out there where their primary character trait is "twins".

One of the girls should be a stereotypical Idiot Hero, only this time around Reality Ensues and her strategy never pans out well.

When I actually have time to get back on writing my Chisame shipping stories, one of the Fumika stories is planned to be centered around Fumika's attempts to differentiate herself from her sister.

edited 27th Dec '10 2:46:11 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#993: Dec 27th 2010 at 3:05:18 PM

The Bleach crossover chapter of Unequally is here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6228161/20/Unequally_Rational_and_Emotional

[up][up] The female ventriloquist is an idea I'll be using in another fanfic, the 'Batman villains reimagined as Magical Girls' one I've mentioned in the 'Deconstructing Magical Girls' thread.

I have fleshed a few of the character ideas today, although nothing is set in stone yet:

Cheryl Dixon: American exchange student. Otaku, speaks choppy Japanese, but naturally aces Negi's English class. Curly short black hair, glasses, overall similar to a pudgier, shorter Haruna. Can't draw, but tries... and tries... and tries... Bubbly and perky.

Nakahara Minami: Iincho's assistant and henchwoman right hand woman. Sayo's roommate. Really not a bad person at all, but she's Iincho's doormat and will do anything she says. Short messy black hair, nervous and submissive. A real ball of neuroses. Bites her fingernails when under pressure or stress. A student with good grades.

Barahime Mimi: Boxer, vey tomboyish and crass. Makes Asuna look refinated and elegant by comparison. Grew up without a mother. Hates her cutesy name. Actually gets good grades, makes no big deal of it either way. Short reddish hair.

Hanagata Miyuki: Hockey player. Mimi's best friend. Black hair down to her shoulders, glasses, freckles, rather big bust. Normal behavior.

Sanzenin Madoka: I wanted to have someone who happens to have the same first name as one of the ghosts, because between 61 girls, at least one first name has to repeat itself. Everyone just calls her 'Sanzenin' anyway because no one wants to be her friend. (Partially to mock her superiority complex since 'Sanzenin' can mean 'Emperor'). The Jerkass. Loudmouth, never shuts up, arrogant and loud. No special talents, yet believes herself superior to everyone else. Actually, she comse from a formerly rich family that fell into poverty when her father died (Konoemon is just paying her studies out of pity for her and his friendship to her father). Bad at studies (Neo-Baka Ranger?). Really a Jerkass Woobie.

Tatsumiya Midori: Mana's grand niece and current Tatsumiya shrine maiden. Unlike Mana, she's generous and charitative. However, she's also the Cute Mute, and not in the Zazie way. She just can't talk at all, and has to speak through sign language. She can feel the spirits, but she's unable to see them. Her blood has less of a demon part in it than Mana's, so she's considerably weaker than she was.

Kuroneko Azusa: The anti-Sakurako. A girl plagued with extreme bad luck. All bad things happen to her. Played for Laughs until her Day in the Limelight chapter shows Negi and Sayo eaxctly how much she suffers because of her misfortune. Played for sympathy from then on.

Juliet D'Aguillon: Haitian voodoo witch wannabe. She suspects Sayo's link to the spirit world and shadows her trying to learn her secrets. The second largest bust in the class.

Kobayashi Aoi: Friend to All Living Things. Claims being able to talk to animals, and they do seem to obey her. In perfect communion with Nature, prefers walking around wearing as little clothing as possible. Refuses to cut her hair down. Does Not Like Shoes.

Shirogami Hitomi: Expert fencer. Unlike Setsuna, uses a Western style, and she's also skilled with scrima sticks. Likes to taunt and mock her adversaries during and after battle, but she isn't a vicious person like Tsukuyomi. Looks like she has just stepped out of Revolutionary Girl Utena. Constantly watches her weight to nearly obsessive levels.

Ishii Hazuki: The tallest and bustiest student. Amateur wrestler. Healthy, exhuberant, very strong and full of life. Long red hair, slightly tanned skin, well muscled. Hot Amazon.

edited 27th Dec '10 3:08:32 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

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#994: Dec 27th 2010 at 3:24:40 PM

Sounds interesting. I look forward to seeing how it turns out.

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#995: Dec 27th 2010 at 3:39:22 PM

[up] I might even re-use the new cast for this other Alternate Universe tale:

•79. A brief snippet of another Harem 'What If'. Negi's in his late 20s to early 30s now, but he still has the charm. And considering he's still teaching at an all girls school, his old students... sort of have to keep an eye on the teens. So they take jobs teaching at Mahora as well. From Asuna teaching P.E. to Chisame teaching Computing, from Yue's Literature classes to Ku Fei handling the Martial Arts Club, can poor Negi find a moment of peace to teach without being bothered by his students *or* his colleagues?

Since, you know, thinking of ANOTHER whole class roster after this... just too much for my poor underdeveloped brain...

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#996: Dec 27th 2010 at 3:48:49 PM

11 out of 30, keep it going! (14 out of 30 if you've already decided to put in the traplets)

How many martial artists/potential combatants will you need?

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NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#997: Dec 27th 2010 at 3:51:23 PM

Nice chapter, Over Master! While I currently despise Bleach with a passion due to last 2+ years of manga chapters, I thought you got the beginning done really well! Especially switching Rukia and Ichigo's roles.

And the kindred spirits moment with Chisame and Kyon cracked me up.

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#998: Dec 27th 2010 at 3:53:47 PM

[up][up] Gee, I dunno. I don't want to make this a long long ongoing saga like Unequally. Maybe around 26 chapters, a whole 'season' covering the ghosts' quest to get back to life, until they either succeed or get send to a higher plane of existence. So I won't be needing that many strong fighters. Not like I'm getting them to Mundus Magicus or anything.

[up] Thanks. We probably won't see Aizen or anything like that, however. The focus will always be on Negima, so if the Soul Society saga ever comes to happen in this universe, I had thought of having it off-panel, maybe told in a separate sidestory when I get the time for it, while the Unequally part of it follows Sayo (instead of Kon) taking over Rukia's human body and using it to interact with others instead of the voodoo doll.

EDIT: I could find enough inspiration to write this today, after all. The continuation of the Unequally Christmas Special.

The five girls remained silent for a few moments, sitting together watching at the horizon. After the uncomfortable topic of Negi as a possible future pairing had been brought up, pretty much everyone but Misa had seemed to hit a sudden communication block, and Misa herself just seemed to be waiting for someone to break the silence, for once. Until she apparently got sick of it and simply asked,

"So, in this time of hopes for the future and stuff... Mind if I ask you what do you wanna do in your futures?"

Hakase perked up, her glasses glinting. "Naturally, I aim to occupy a spot on the eternal halls of scientific glory," she exposed. "Ah, for the golden day my accomplishments are put next to those of Bolivar Trask! Gerhard Von Faust! Earl Lloyd Asplund! Serizawa Daisuke!"

"Victor Von Frankenstein!" Chisame intervened.

Her roommate gave her an annoyed glare. "I'm being serious, Chisame."

The other girl shrugged. "So am I."

Misa laughed. "Oh, I never thought I'd say this, but you two are a riot! How about you, Misora?"

"Me?" the young sister blinked. "Ahhh, I dunno. I haven't stopped to plan it all through yet. Why to hurry? Still, for now, I'd like nothing better than getting a lot of recognition at the Order. To be respected, you know? So Sister Shakti and Sister Sanada and even Father Garterbelt have to clap their hands at me when I graduate, AND LIKE IT! Now that'll shut my folks up! Honestly, the way they keep telling me I'd better not disappoint them after all the time and effort they have invested on me EACH FREAKING TIME they call—!"

"... Father Garterbelt?" Misa and Chisame said at the same time.

"He's huge, scary and loud, so we tend to avoid making public comments on his name," Kasuga offered.

Cocone nodded stoically.

"And if you ever meet him, never ask him about his hair," Misora warned.

"God, no," Cocone whispered.

"Anyway, after that's done..." Misora carelessly crossed her legs, "I want to retire with a name made for myself, hang the habit, marry and have kids."

Chisame huffed. "Should've known you wouldn't have the devotion needed for the nun job."

"Give me a break!" Misora protested. "It's a very hard life! I was allured by fake promises! I thought it'd be easier than a normal magical academy! But they lied! Not only do they make me to study magic, but to take normal classes, too, and clean the church to boot! Aaarrghhh, when I find the pig who always stucks obscene messages for me with gum behind the head of St. Paul, I'll send him straight to the Sixth Circle of Hell!"

"Misora is popular with our congregation's youngest members," Cocone calmly explained. "Sometimes, they even follow her to the track to watch her in those short shorts, sweating and—"

Chisame stopped her, gently placing a finger on her mouth. "Please. In a day like this, I'd like to keep some last vestiges of faith on the innocence of childhood."

"And you, Coco-chan?" Misa put a hand on her right shoulder. "What are your dreams for the future?"

"I want..." the child breathed reverently, lifting her even, quiet gaze up to the sky, slowly, "I want to be a Magistra to make my family proud."

"That sounds very commendable," Misa admitted.

"Thank you," the little girl nodded a bit.

"And you, Chisame-chan?" the cheerleader grinned perversely.

"That's no matter of yours!" the hacker snapped.

"Ooo, touchy! I'd bet it's a very big, very scandalous dream, then!" Misa teased.

"It's nothing of the sorts!" Hasegawa defended herself.

"Hey, Prof, what is it?" Misa asked Satomi. "You must know, right?"

"Don't tell her anything!" Chisame all but screamed.

Hakase blinked. "Tell her about what? You've never told me about your dreams, either..."

"For real?" Misa turned disapproving eyes to Chisame. "What a bad roommate you are, Chisame-chan... You shouldn't have secrets with those you share a room with..."

"That's my problem," Hasegawa looked aside.

Kakizaki smiled again. "You haven't decided on anything yet, have you?"

"Wh-What if I haven't?" Chisame sputtered.

Misa reached over and pushed a stray lock of brown hair off her face. "A girl as pretty as you could have any future she strived for..." she whispered. "You only need to trust yourself more..."

Chisame backed away in alarm. "D-Don't joke with me like that!!"

Misa poked the tip of her tongue out. "Ohh, partypooper! But really, I'm not joking! Just do something about those zits and that horrible wardrobe of yours, and you'll be able to knock anyone's socks off!"

Hakase nodded. "As a matter of fact, when she—"

The murderous glare Chisame shot her immediately reminded her Misa wasn't on the secret of Chiu yet.

The cheerleader paused for a moment waiting for Hakase to finish the sentence. When it didn't happen, she briefly gave Chisame a questioning glare, but it only was met with another pretension of ignorance. Misa sighed and realized she wouldn't get anything that way.

Kakizaki, instead, stetched her arms up. "As for me, I wish to become a superstar. Singer, actress, model, the whole package."

"It doesn't come as a surprise," Chisame recovered part of her usual snarkiness.

Misa's smile widened. "But above it all, as of now, I wish for Negi-kun."

"Again with that," Chisame muttered.

Misa opened her arms, willing to rise the stakes now. Loudly, she announced, "That's why tonight, at Konoka's party, I'm going to take him under the mistletoe and kiss him before everyone! That way, I'm going to make clear I have absolute dibs on him!"

Misora, Chisame and Hakase all looked at her with complete utter terror. Even Cocone's expression had, finally, changed, to one of slight curiosity.

Kakizaki smirked and blinked an eye at them. "Unless, of course, anyone wants to get there first..."

edited 27th Dec '10 7:10:53 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#999: Dec 27th 2010 at 10:55:45 PM

Hmm, unless they've been claimed already and the page hasn't be updated yet, I'd like to try my hand at these two ideas:

# 35. A strange man who looks suspiciously like Liam Neeson approaches Chisame and tells her that "the force is strong with her." Despite her misgivings, Yue and Nodoka use their artifacts to confirm that the man is indeed a Jedi Knight, who seeks to bring peace to the galaxy. At Ala Alba's urging, Chisame reluctantly begins Jedi training.

  1. 97. While testing one of Hakase's inventions, Negi and the class are frozen over, only to be revived in the Year 3000.
Welcome to the World... of Tomorrow!

If you couldn't tell, I'm a huge sci-fi geek. grin Question though: Do I have to follow the plot of the Prequels for the Star Wars one? Or can I just do whatever I want?

And can I follow the same timeline of the Futurama one? Like, have the class react to the various going ons in the various episodes?

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#1000: Dec 27th 2010 at 11:09:27 PM

Go for it. You're free to do pretty much whatever you want with it, so how closely you want to stick to the original is completely up to you.

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