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SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#8026: May 14th 2011 at 6:14:06 AM

Here's a short add-on to the last scene. Hope you like it Marq.

“Heh he heh…” Albert laughed, wiping his eyes. “Nice legs, aniki!”

“Very sexy, Bro!” Chamo laughed , clutching his teeny little gut.

“Hey, Kuro-neechan, you think he’s hot yet?” Albert asked.

Kuro raised an eyebrow, but tilted her head, staring at Negi critically. Erebus suddenly felt he was under a microscope (metaphorically, of course: that shrinking incident with Sakura and The Little Card hadn’t made them that small) as Kuro began to circle him, eyes sweeping up and down. He could feel her stare on his legs, very conscious of the fact they were bare and sticking out from under a skirt. She flicked his hair back, peered intently at his face, and he let out a shriek as she suddenly flipped up his skirt.

“Wow,” Chisame said. “He actually sounds girlier than we do.” Then she swatted aside Misa’s hand as it crept forward to do the same.

“Hmm…” Kuro said as she stopped in front of Erebus. She shrugged. “Meh. Still don’t see what the fuss is about. Though it’s not a total loss. Now, I just have to find an excuse to get Miyu and my sister into boxers…”

Karakuri reached into her pocket and offered a handkerchief to Kuro, who wiped the drool and nasal blood from her face.

Everyone stared at Kuro. “Is she for real?” Misa said.

“Such resistance…!” Itoshiki said.

Mei and Takane looked at each other. “What are they babbling about?” Takane asked.

Calculator and Chisame exchanged glances. “Trust me, if you’re going to be teaching him–” Chisame began.

“– you’d better start getting used to this,” Calculator finished.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#8027: May 14th 2011 at 6:17:19 AM

[up][up][up] Oh believe me, his Chick Magnetism and Pornomancerism - whether they become an NP or not - are going to be far from being his most important/dangerous trait. And you've just made the lucky guess as to the nature of one of his Noble Phantasms. winkcool

[up] surprised Oh wow. Someone besides the Joker who is immune to Negi's Chick Magnet charm? And in spite of the added Gender Flip factor, no less? Kuro-sama, I applaud your willpower.

Wait, why would Illya in boxers be super-hot? Fetish Fuel is understandable, but she's not that androgynous-looking, unlike Negi (see Kitsunegi for reference).

edited 14th May '11 6:23:38 AM by MarqFJA

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SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#8028: May 14th 2011 at 6:34:08 AM

It's a combination of Fetish fuel and Narcissism. She and Kuro ARE identical, after all...

And now, a Yue's Harem ficlet:

The Long And The Short of It

"Nodoka-chan?"

"Yes, Yue-chan?"

"I love you."

Blush

edited 14th May '11 7:03:02 AM by SCMof2814

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#8029: May 14th 2011 at 7:34:54 AM

And for the record, just because I said that you did make a lucky guess as to the nature one Noble Phantasm doesn't mean you've guessed everything about its nature, let alone the rest of its aspects. You'll just have to wait until Fate/Negima gets eventually up and running.

[up] waiiwaiiwaiiwaiiwaiiwaiiwaii Brief, concise, and comprehensive. cool

edited 14th May '11 7:37:09 AM by MarqFJA

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#8030: May 14th 2011 at 9:40:34 AM

@SCM: Remember your advice regarding adapting Negima memes for Noble Phantasms? Well, I just discovered something terrible: WE DON'T HAVE A DEDICATED PAGE FOR NEGIMA MEMES! For all of Negima's 300+ chapters of Trope Overdosedness and Troperifficness, there are only six memes total. sad

Hey, do TV Tropes-born memes count as Memetic Mutation?

edited 14th May '11 9:41:33 AM by MarqFJA

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#8031: May 14th 2011 at 9:42:02 AM

[up]Depends on how far they spread.

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#8033: May 14th 2011 at 10:13:54 AM

Thanks again for the condolences. I'm posting from my aunt and uncle's place. I'll try and quickl pop in every now and then. The funeral is on Monday, so I'll only be back on Tuesday. I've written a bit, but you'll have to ait to see it.

@Napoleon: Nice start.

SCM: Good as always. So Ala Alba thinks that disguising Negi as a girl will reduce the number of people after him. Yeah, that'll work. Negi is just going to have more problems with his own gender.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#8034: May 14th 2011 at 10:35:27 AM

Wait until Kotaro sees him. [lol]

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#8035: May 14th 2011 at 10:43:05 AM

[up][up][up]That's more of a thread injoke than anything.

Also, I just had an idea of how I should have done the latest Nerima chapter, but it's too late to bother with at this point because I don't feel like completely rewriting it. Oh well.

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#8036: May 14th 2011 at 11:45:05 AM

[up] Whenever that happens, I sometimes like to write it out anyway and just make it a non-canon alternate telling of it. tongue

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#8037: May 14th 2011 at 11:55:31 AM

[up]I might do that as one of those bonus chapters. Kinda like how I stuck that Alex-centric chapter in there. One of the things that I had wanted to do with this story was differentiate the twins more. So what I should have done was have one of the twins give Nelly part of the tour, and then have them switch halfway through. It would have made the characterization easier, and I wouldn't have had to deal with writing two similar characters at once. Oh well.

Anyway, here's the next section of the chapter. It's pretty close to what's in the manga, but it felt too important to skip over, so I just stuck in some foreshadowing.

“Ok, so what is this thing that you wanted to show me so badly?” Nelly was almost dizzy with all the twists and turns that the path had taken as the twins hauled her along. The maze of buildings had given way to a maze of trees, but other than that she had no idea where she had been taken.

“We're just about there.” Fujio turned off of the path. “Trust me, you're going to like it.”

“Why are we going off of the path?”

“It's a bit of a secret.” Fujiko winked. “Not too many people know about it. If they did it would always be totally packed.” He pushed aside a nearby bush. “Well, here we are.”

“So what is it that I'm-” Nelly gasped at the sight that greeted her as she emerged from the bushes. She certainly already see the enormous tree that stood on the hill next to the campus; it was impossible to miss. But she had never realized how magnificent it truly was until she found herself standing practically underneath it. It's branches seemed to fill the entire sky. The light of the sunset filtered through its foliage painting the leaves with a pale golden glow. Behind it, she could see the rest of the campus stretched out along the plain below.

“Isn't it cool?” Fujio slapped Nelly on the back. “Told you you'd like it.”

“It's...beautiful....It almost looks like it's glowing.”

“Sometimes the tree actually does glow.” Fujiko offered. “Something about luminescent moss. You should come out here and look at it at night sometime.”

“I see...” Nelly murmured, still entranced by the scenery.

“Yeah, this tree has been here for hundreds of years.” Fujio tried to sound as scholarly as he could manage, which wasn't very scholarly at all. “It's part of the reason that Mahora Academy was built here. There are all sorts of legends about it.”

“Uh huh...” She nodded.

“Like some people say that if you confess your love for someone under the tree they'll fall in love with you.”

“Interesting.” She nodded again, still staring into the shimmering light bouncing off of the tree's leaves.

“Well...” Fujio moved closer. “In that case, I just want to tell you that-”

“Stop that!” Fujiko shoved his brother away from the girl. “Don't do it!”

“What, I was only joking!” Fujio put a hand behind his head. “I wasn't really going to...”

“It's not nice to mess with a girl's head like that!” Fujiko huffed. “She's just a kid! What if she takes you seriously?”

“Oh come on, she's smarter than that...”

“And what if she told Hayate about it...”

“Eh?” The blood drained from Fujio's face. “Uh...right. Thanks, you just saved me from a life of pain.”

“You owe me.” Fujiko looked down at his watch before jabbing Nelly in the back with his finger. “Time to go.”

“Huh!” She jumped as she snapped out of her tree-induced trance. “Already?”

“It's going to get dark soon.” He tapped on his watch. “You don't want to find your way back to the dorm in the dark, do you?”

“I suppose not...”

“Besides..” Fujio shoved the bushes out of the way again. “..Asuma would get pissed at us if you came back too late.”

“He would?” Nelly tilted her head.

“Yeah.” Fujiko shuttered. “While we were waiting for you to show up this morning, he gave us this big speech about how if we screwed with you too much he would kick our butts.”

“Really...”

“Yup.” Fujio nodded as he followed his brother and teacher back onto the main path. “We should probably head back now. I don't want to get on Asuma's bad side.”

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#8038: May 14th 2011 at 1:19:29 PM

[up] Interesting divergence from the original, as well as a nice way of firming up Asuma's male tsundere status.

I'm presently writing Decadent Habits 21 with the intention of releasing it simultaneously with the 20th chapter written by OM. While most of it is going to be ... far, far too racy to be posted here, this is what I have so far.

"So let me see if I have an accurate grasp of this entire situation," Ayaka began, sitting on the opposite side of the kotatsu from Negi and Asuna. Arika was seated around the corner from them. "Asuna-san is your daughter, Arika-sama. And I am, as I have recently learned, the daughter of Negi-sensei's father, the Thousand Master. As is Chisame-san.

"Because of this blood connection, Evangeline-san has taken an interest in myself and Chisame-san, in hopes of using us to end some sort of curse that keeps her bound to this school. Further, Nodoka-san is attempting to travel to the magical world in order to kidnap Yue-san, and enlisted Evangeline-san's aid in doing so, using these events as a distraction to prevent anyone from stopping her.

"Unrelated to all of this, Arika-sama, you have been encouraging and training Asuna-san and Negi-sensei in erotic arts, encouraging them to form a sexual relationship despite the taboo of their status as half-siblings. You are also intimate with the two of them. And have, as a group, also enjoyed the company of Konoka-san, Setsuna-san, and Yuna-san, as well as their respective fathers. Have I left anything out?"

"No, I think you've got it all," Arika said. Asuna was looking off to the side, fully expecting a classic Iincho outburst. Negi just looked scared.

"Well, then. I have a question, and I hope you will do me the favor of answering it, Arika-sama," Ayaka said calmly.

"Ask," Arika bade her.

"Is Nekane-san also one of Nagi-san's offspring?"

"Eh?" asked Negi, eyes going wide. Asuna's head whipped around to look at Ayaka. That wasn't the question she'd been expecting at all. The words 'have you quite lost your minds' had been much more prominent in her imagination.

"It is possible," Arika allowed. "She is ostensibly the daughter of Nagi's older brother, Seoman, and her mother was actually a childhood friend of them both. He once confessed to me that he had cuckolded his brother, shortly after Seoman's marriage, which was when Nekane was born. When all of this happened, though, there were no tests to prove or disprove such matters, at least not in the mountains of Wales."

Negi felt stunned. Nekane-oneechan might actually be his real sister, not just a cousin!

"I see," said Ayaka, then picked up the tea cup in front of her and sipped from it.

"You see," said Asuna after a moment.

"Yes, I see," replied Ayaka.

"Have you quite lost your mind?" Asuna said. "No commentary about how I'm a complete and utter hypocrite for taunting you all those times about being a shotacon and then ending up having sex with a ten year old boy?"

"I'm eleven," interjected Negi.

"Twelve, technically," noted Arika mildly.

"No snippy remarks about how I've ventured beyond the moral event horizon by having sex with my little brother?" Asuna continued as though she hadn't been interrupted. "What's the matter, iincho, you used to be a lot meaner!"

"Perhaps that's so," Ayaka allowed. "However, for me to insult you on that ground would be the hypocrisy you spoke of, since I have also violated that taboo, recently by offering ... comfort to Chisame-san, and somewhat less recently when Chizuru and I offered similar comfort to Nekane-san. Whether she is my cousin or half-sister is not, I think, actually pertinent. I asked solely to clarify matters."

She finished her tea, lowered it and said, "I want in."


Evangeline had been as good as her word, Nodoka decided as she made her way along the river. The warning that Chamo brought to Negi would come just late enough that even if he started pursuing her immediately, rather than going to the rescue of Chisame and Ayaka, he'd only have caught up with her now. And since he hadn't, he wasn't going to, and she was in sight of the cave entrance the vampire had told her about. It was too late.

She felt herself wishing that it wasn't, and throttled the feeling.

Less easily banished thoughts had her wondering why Ayaka? Surely Ako would have been a better target, and wouldn't have required her to put Chizuru in danger too. But Evangeline had been insistent, and Nodoka supposed that it didn't really matter why the vampire had wanted what she wanted. Demons didn't wonder about those sorts of things. Probably.

And now here she was descending into the Underworld. "How Campbellian," she muttered as she walked into the mouth of the cave.

She wasn't sure what to expect. Surely, there wouldn't be any large structures like the gateport in Wales or the one in the ruins of Ostia, which were the only ones she'd ever seen. This was supposedly a small gate used by smugglers to bring things from Mundus Vetus to Mundus Magicus. It needed to operate below the awareness of authorities on both sides, and so —

And so, she realized quite suddenly, she could almost blink and miss the point where she lifted up a foot in one world and set it down again in another. Still, there were clues. She'd been marching forward into darkness, and now the cave instead lead towards a faint, flickering light. Very subtle spell!

Eventually, she emerged into a world lit by torches. It was night, in this part of Mundus Magicus at the moment, and she was coming out of the side of a hill into a market of some sort. All around her were stalls where she could see vendors hawking a variety of goods. The scent of torchsmoke filled the air, making her gag just a little.

"Ker-hem," said a voice to her left. She turned to see a man shorter than she was, grossly fat with a bushy beard and a pair of thick glasses, seated at a table just outside the passageway leading into the hill. "Welcome to the Goblin Market," he said in a surprisingly deep voice. "Aaaand who might you be?"

"I'm, well, I'm nobody, much," Nodoka said, correctly suspecting that this fellow was some sort of authority. "I'm just passing through."

"I see. You're just passing through a gate between worlds that doesn't officially exist. Have a seat," he said, gesturing to a chair that was on the other side of the table; as he did so, he pulled out a bottle of dark liquid, set it down to produce two glasses, and started pouring the contents of the bottle into one of them. "And we'll have a drink."

"I'm not really thirsty, thank you, and I've actually got to be going," Nodoka explained, starting to back away.

The small man was still smiling. "I think we've gotten off on the wrong foot. Yes, I suspect that you're mistaking my friendly and avuncular manner for actual friendliness, and misinterpreting my instructions as polite requests. Now sit down or I'll use the blasting rod I'm holding under the table to put holes in you."

Nodoka sighed in relief. Threats, she could handle. "What's your name?" she asked.

"uh?" he answered.

She nodded, then pitched her voice to carry. "If there's a Julyan Norrich within the sound of my voice, then you should know that Mr. Mac Tavish, here, has been having sex with your wife. Repeatedly. And pretty much everyone here should know that —"

"You!" Mr. Mac Tavish shouted, pulled up the blasting rod and fired.

Nodoka knew he was going to do so a half-second before he did, and dropped out of the lightning bolt's narrow path, feeling profoundly grateful he wasn't using a fireball gun. She continued speaking in the same loud voice. "— that he's been charging twice the rent the people who own this land pay him to collect from your shops, and pocketing the difference."

That got their attention. (Nodoka wasn't to know that Julyan Norrich was presently enjoying the attentions of his brother-in-law and couldn't care less what his wife did.) As the mob surrounded Mac Tavish and began to express their dissatisfaction with his gouging by returning the favor, Nodoka quickly backed away and started for the outskirts of the market.

"That was nicely done," said a voice as she passed by an alley between two booths.

"Thank —" said Nodoka, who was a polite girl, and turned to see who was congratulating her. "— you," she finished weakly when she realized who it was.

"Is it not amazing, the places in which old friends meet?" Tsukuyomi asked sweetly as she slowly drew her sword.


Sagisawa Yohko, head nurse for all of Mahora Academy, was more than familiar with students and faculty coming into her office with injuries they didn't want to talk about. Not a mage herself, nor even a ministra, she was all too familiar with the habits of those who were. Often she found herself wishing that people who could violate the laws of physics actually acted like storybook wizards and spent most of their time holed up in remote towers contemplating how to do so.

So it was a bit of a surprise when, after her pro forma question about what happened, Naba-san wearily answered her by saying, "I attempted to commit suicide by vampire loita and failed." It was the sort of answer that faintly cried out for elaboration, but from the look of the girl's face, Yohko wasn't going to get one. Pity, it was probably an interesting story.

"All right, from the looks of things, you've got fractures in all five metacarpals of your hand," Yohko explained. "So we're going to have to put you in a cast."

"The children will enjoy signing it, I'm sure," Chizuru said indifferently.

"That's a good attitude to take. I'll go get the plaster. Good job bringing her in, Konoe, Sakurazaki," she added to the two students who'd done so, then left for the moment.

"Does it hurt?" Konoka asked hesitantly. "I can probably —"

"It's fine. The pain keeps me from thinking about how much it sucks that my girlfriend is probably cheating on me even now," Chizuru said. "Not to mention probably engaging in unnatural love."

Konoka blushed brightly, while Setsuna turned and coughed. "Well, I mean, you don't know that's going to happen. It might not," Setsuna said weakly, even though she was fairly sure that she was lying.

"It doesn't matter, really," Chizuru replied, dismissively. "Ever since the very first time I saw the two of them together, I knew that they were meant for each other, and that sooner or later I'd have to bow out. Nobody can make Ayaka so ... lively ... as Asuna-san does. No one." She closed her eyes.

"Maybe ... maybe you could ..." Konoka started to suggest.

"No," Chizuru answered, her eyes still closed. "I am monogamous. One lover at a time, thank you. And even if I wasn't, there are certain things which I will never tolerate in a relationship. And ... unnatural love ... is one of them." One eye slid open. "Not that I'm judging the two of you, mind."

Konoka gaped. "You know?" she asked faintly.

"Please," the motherly girl replied, eye sliding closed again. "You two are obviously sisters. It's as plain as the noses on your faces. And anyway —"

"Cough, cough, cough," said a voice from the hallway. A moment later, Yohko walked in carrying plaster and bandages for the cast. "All right, let's get down to the business of healing. Thank you, girls, you should go now."

"Yes," said Konoka, practically luminescent. "Let's go, Secchan."

"Mm-hm," Setsuna replied, tight-lipped.

Chizuru noted the absence of an 'oujousama' there, but it really wasn't any of her business, was it?

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starwavegal My brother is a alien! from Candyland Since: Jan, 2011
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#8039: May 14th 2011 at 2:28:04 PM

sorry, i can't remember, which fanfic universe is Madoka being sent to? tongue

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#8040: May 14th 2011 at 3:44:01 PM

[up] Nerima Magistra Nelly Magi, crossed over with a bit of Suzumiya Haruhi no Seitenkan, I believe.

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#8041: May 14th 2011 at 3:47:14 PM

Anybody know how much a Big Gulp soda would cost in yen?

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#8042: May 14th 2011 at 3:48:37 PM

[up][up] Yep. Also, Marq, actually, there's at least one girl in the Unequally verse who is not only straight, BUT absolutely immune to Negi's charms, although I haven't had a chance to have them meeting yet.

Her name is Asuka.

Expect to see a Running Gag on it later on.

edited 14th May '11 3:49:13 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

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#8043: May 14th 2011 at 3:54:40 PM

[up]A gag involving her and Asuna being mixed up?

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#8045: May 14th 2011 at 4:38:54 PM

Going to need a name for m!Eva shortly.

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Darkenning She's Back Since: Apr, 2011
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#8046: May 14th 2011 at 4:49:02 PM

[up] Gabriel Athanasius Peter McDowell

Gabriel is the name of Evangeline's beloved in the poem of the same name, by Longfellow.

Peter is a form of Petruchio, the husband of "Kate", in Shakespeare's The Taming Of The Shrew.

f!Albireo call him Petey.

edited 14th May '11 4:50:13 PM by Darkenning

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#8047: May 14th 2011 at 4:50:01 PM

[up]That's a possibility, although I've been trying to keep the first names at least somewhat similar so it's easier to keep track of everybody.

Athanasius Peter MacDowell works, but "Gabriel" has too many other connotations.

edited 14th May '11 4:51:14 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#8048: May 14th 2011 at 4:50:40 PM

[up] How about Ethanael? Which can be shortened to Ethan like how Eva is...Eva. Yeah.

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#8049: May 14th 2011 at 5:01:22 PM

[up]Is Ethaneal actually a name? I don't think I've ever heard that one.

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NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#8050: May 14th 2011 at 5:16:11 PM

According to this it is. *shrug*

edited 14th May '11 5:16:30 PM by NoLimit


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