Negi has had to deal with angry fathers ever since he started teaching at Mahora. Once Alicia brings home stories of the cute little boy that teaches her english, Negi will have a new enemy in the form of an angry mother.
Years later, much to 3-A's chagrin, they get married...
... only for Nanoha and Fate to crash the wedding in order to arrest Precia.
Somehow, Chrono ends up sharing a bed with the Narutaki and the Lieze sets of twins at the end, and enters depression because he knows last night was awesome, and he will never be able to remember it.
You'd have to justify why they hadn't arrested her yet in all those years.
Not to mention the 'Can't remember a thing about last night's sex, do ho ho ho' cliche is up there with 'stumbles and gets head between breasts' and 'walks into another person undressing, tired hilarity ensues'.
edited 18th Sep '13 10:31:59 AM by NapoleonDeCheese
A very simple "They couldn't find her until then" should work. The reason they found her now is because Precia got complacent after a lot of time away from detection.
@Cganale
Negi is not a sarcastic ass.
However, his relationship with Asuna is fraternal, and generally, brothers and sisters like to annoy each other. While Negi is not a sarcastic ass, he is capable of sarcasm and wit. Negi does fight with Asuna, even before he becomes really close to her.
Paipan incident anyone?
It's more of a hangover thing, though. Or maybe Dude Where's My Car when Chrono can't remember where he parked the Asura.
edited 18th Sep '13 10:51:13 AM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
I don't quite think Negi, given his demeanor, would be capable of sarcasm on most days. Even as he grows older...I have a hard time seeing it. Maybe if he's legitimately annoyed...so yeah, I can see those two bickering like that down the line. We've seen how Fate irked him during the great Coffee/Tea debate.
edited 18th Sep '13 11:21:16 AM by SkormSnow-Strider
I imagine that he wouldn't be in a good mood when his wedding is crashed by people trying to arrest his mother in law whom he knows only as Alicia's doting mother who also happens to be a genius that has helped in the integration of magic and technology.
Asuna pointing out that he's been reduced to a Non-Action Guy from lack of training wouldn't help.
Of course, immediately after the danger passes he'd start brooding about how he should have found time to train so people didn't have to fight his battles for him and how if he'd kept up his training he could have won that fight and all that.
edited 18th Sep '13 11:24:43 AM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariI didn't say he wouldn't try or that he was useless in a fight. What he doesn't have is Raiten Taisou. Well, technically he can still do Duplex Complexio and enter Perpetual Lightning Form, but he can't control it. Controlling his movements when he's a living lightning bolt requires very fine wind manipulation to get himself to go exactly the way he wants to go.
Considering he hasn't had to do it for a very long time, he's rusted to the point that he can't control it as well as he would need to if he wanted to get into a fight with another Lightning Bruiser.
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariTruth be told, I think Asuna would probably be the one to suffer from lack any real combat. Negi (Granted, it was in the future she where Negi supposedly died, but her presence didn't seem to affect a lot of 3-A's careers, if at all.) went on to become a Secretary-General of whatever hands were involved in his Terraforming operation. While he may not see actual combat all that much, he'd probably be in a better position then Asuna would be, provided she didn't keep up with any sort of training regimen. They both would equally suffer when compared to Mana who makes a career out of conflict.
I'm digging the idea though, even if cross-overs aren't my speed.
edited 18th Sep '13 2:29:31 PM by SkormSnow-Strider
Even without Raiten Taisou, Negi is still pretty fast, IIRC. I guess minus that Fate could outspeed him, but he's also durable enough that she might not be able to put him down. (Which is an inherent property of Magia Erebea, again IIRC, and so isn't amenable to being lost through lack of practice.) I don't think that Nanoha or anyone else in the TSAB except maybe Zest or Signum could outspeed Negi, even without Raiten Taisou.
And if it's Precia + Asuna + Negi-without-Raiten + rest of Ala Alba's combat-capables on one side, vs. just Nanoha and Fate on the other, I can't see the latter winning. They'd probably bring backup of some kind; if that was the Wolks, or other similarly capable types, there'd be a better chance.
Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)Asuna took the throne of Vespertatia, but she's as able a politician as a banana is a gun. Therefore, she needs to delegate a lot of the work to people who actually know how to do it. Thus she is left with a lot of free time. She is friends with a lot of people who fight a lot. I imagine that she at least regularly spars with Setsuna.
Contrast with Negi, who I really can't see as the kind of guy to delegate the work when he can avoid doing so. He does not have any pressing reasons why he needs to train himself to fight, thus he would concentrate on his work.
Negi sees no combat whatsoever in his job. While he has more raw power than he had before, that doesn't do much if he can't use it right.
Of course Nanoha and Fate alone can't win.
They wouldn't be able to beat Precia by working together on their own. Of course they brought backup. Even so, they're not going to win that fight. Even if they were on the verge of winning, Ala Rubra would step in and turn the tides. Point is, they don't know that. The only people there who have an active Linker Core are Alicia and Precia, who are also the only ones expected to be capable of defending themselves.
edited 18th Sep '13 2:44:47 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariI suppose this also depends on where Nanoha and Fate are. If Alicia showed up at Mahora after the first season, and she was old enough to be in Negi's class (when in canon her frozen body seems to be around 6-7), and it's been fifteen years since then, we're already well past Striker S; depending on what happened to Nanoha and Fate over that time period, the two of them together might well be able to beat Precia alone. (They're both S-rank in Striker S, while Precia is SS in season 1. It also depends on what Precia's been doing that isn't playing doting mother.)
If Ala Rubra also participated, I can't see any force that the TSAB could field at all beating them + Ala Alba + Precia. If Eva joins in, they're even more fucked.
Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)Jack tanks the Arc En Ciel.
It kills him, of course, but it's not like that'll stop him for long...
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I don't know how much Precia's power declined given how sick she was (she was pretty much dead on her feet by the end of the first season), but I'm running on the theory that when she found a way to revive Alicia she also used it to heal herself. Precia was SS ranked despite being as sick as she was. Just how insanely powerful would a healthy Precia be?
edited 18th Sep '13 3:11:15 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariArc-en-Ciel is hard, but Precia canonically has anti-ship-level attacks. (So do many of the Negima heavies, but we can't be completely sure those would work out of atmosphere.) Given any warning, she could take out the ship before it fired. (That and the TSAB is highly unlikely to be willing to fire Arc-en-Ciel just to deal with a fugitive who isn't an immediate threat. In canon, they used it when the alternative was Earth-Shattering Kaboom.)
Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)Yeah, the TSAB is not going to commit genocide on the off chance they might kill Precia with it too.
Precia can cast anti-ship spells from across dimensions. I'm willing to bet she can do much more damage if she's healthy and in the same dimension as the spaceship this time.
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariFor some reason, I now really want to read this story. Probably because Game Theory has left me desperately hungry for sympathetic!Precia.
Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)Meh. I don't write fast enough for Na No Wri Mo, or I would. :p
As it is, I'm 2 1/2 months into a chapter that shoulda been done in a month. :p
I'll stick to working on what I have, thanks. ^_^
The Clock is Wound, The Future Must Commence! (tm)Na No Wri Mo is 5000 words, right? Or was it 50000? I can never remember...
edited 19th Sep '13 10:08:05 AM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariIt's 50000. that's more than 6 current length chapters for me.
And yes, I realize that my chapters are very sad for how small they are. :p :)
edited 19th Sep '13 10:28:39 AM by CarrieTheTroper
The Clock is Wound, The Future Must Commence! (tm)

Given the whole "a little courage" thing, I think he'd end up in Griffindor, after the Hat spends a lot of time deliberating.