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Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#5026: Mar 30th 2011 at 8:10:34 AM

Chapter 8:

The class had a party to celebrate being the top class and the fact that Anya was going to stay on as their teacher at Fumika’s suggestion. It took a lot to convince Chisame to come, but she seemed to be happy for Anya anyway. As such they all enjoyed the party.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#5027: Mar 30th 2011 at 8:14:38 AM

This is a shory and depressing chapter.

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#5028: Mar 30th 2011 at 9:51:03 AM

That's just the beggining of the chapter. I must admit that I'm spending more time looking forward to writing chapter 9 than I am actually writing 8 though. I'll put some more up tomorrow.

gwonbush Lurking Puma Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Lurking Puma
#5029: Mar 30th 2011 at 10:00:36 AM

[up]Chapter 9 should be the "Evangeline A. K. McDowell scares Anya to pieces" chapter. I can see why you would enjoy it.

edited 30th Mar '11 10:07:37 AM by gwonbush

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#5030: Mar 30th 2011 at 10:36:43 AM

Since this Haruna is THAT kind of Saotome, that can't be the end of it. There will be a rival. And an Arch Enemy. And a rich suitor. And foreign princes and princesses kidnapping her love interests left and right.

Also, I think Misora and Misa need more focus as characters. They've been out of focus for some time now.

Lesson 24 is split between Quartum, Akira, Ayaka, Haruna and Madoka, with a wee bit of Kazumi and Negi thrown in between. But Misora will get her spotlight soon at the 2814 crossover, and Misa will get her share shortly after her.

Right now, I'm shuffling the deck on who gets to learn about Negi's secret at Kyoto. Konoka is a must, and the way I have laid the story out, Haruna must learn as well. Nodoka and Yue are also strong possibilities, and the latter already figured it out by herself anyway. Other than that, I don't want to go overboard yet, although poor Sakurako's probably earned it by the time the full shit hits the Kyoto fan, and naturally, the Negi Rescue Team girls are probably needed as well. For some reason, though, I want to leave Kazumi in the dark for a while longer than in canon.

edited 30th Mar '11 10:37:05 AM by NapoleonDeCheese

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#5031: Mar 30th 2011 at 10:40:18 AM

[up] Maybe it's because Kazumi would then immediately find out about Sayo, since you introduced her to Negi earlier than in the manga? Considering those two's close relationship, I'd suspect you probably want to wait for a better time for the two to meet.

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#5032: Mar 30th 2011 at 10:44:26 AM

[up] The thing with Sayo is I already pulled her into a tangent of sorts. Right now, she's got more contact with Rukia and Kiri than she's got with her own classmates.

I think I'll have to wait until Rukia gets pulled into the Soul Society business and Sayo has to stand for her at the living world using her body for her to get more interaction with 3-A. Which suits me fine, actually, since there are far too many other character interactions currently going on there.

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#5033: Mar 30th 2011 at 10:47:51 AM

I will be endlessly amused if Rukia's classmates catch the scene of Sayo-possessing Rukia's body forming a pactio with Negi and completely misinterpret it.

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#5034: Mar 30th 2011 at 10:50:51 AM

[up] There is an actual strong possibility of that happening, actually.

Also, manga Chapter 322 is giving me a sudden urge to tack a Sister Shakti fanservice scene somewhere. NNGHHHH...

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#5035: Mar 30th 2011 at 11:44:39 AM

Very brief first draft for the start of the Chachamaru/Midori fight in the 2814 crossover. It's tougher than I had expected, to write it. But I want to persevere!

Right then, Chachamaru's sensors sent a buzzing alarm through her nervous system. She barely moved aside in time as a giant bladed weapon cut through thin air where she had been moments before, missing her right arm for inches.

The gigantic bladed weapon, a collossal labrys, made a curve in midair, then returned to the hands of the redhaired woman who had thrown it. She had started to sing aloud without any fear at all, in a clear and strong voice.

"Who are those little girls in pain. Just trapped in a castle of the dark side of moon. Twelve of them shining bright in vain. Like flowers that blossom just once in the year."

Chachamaru flew a few feet back, re-assuming a battle stance. Out of all the opponents at the battlefield, she lacked files on that woman and the pale scrawny man currently fighting Haruna.

Still, the readings she was getting from the woman's weapon pointed at it being an Artifact of sorts. If she was a Ministra Magi, and she was limited to that kind of apparently attack only Artifact, then she should be just as vulnerable as any human being once the weapon itself was dealt with. Nothing in her stance seemed to indicate any sort of martial arts training, either. Still, the confident way she stood while facing her gave her pause for thought. She even kept on singing while lunging ahead, and the labrys' strike proved being powerful enough for Chachamaru to have serious problems blocking it.

"They're dancing in the shadows like whispers of love. Just dreaming a place where they are free as a dove. They've never been allowed to love in this cursed cage. It's only the fairy tale they believe."

The woman smirked in a somewhat unnerving way, her white teeth sparkling at the sunlight. Chachamaru only pushed the labrys down, pinning it against the ground, although the woman still refused to let its handle go. "Please cease and desist. I have no desire to hurt you."

Again, she only sang.

"They're dancing in the shadows like whispers of love. Just dreaming a place where they are free as a dove. They've never been allowed to love in this cursed cage."

And then she lifted her head up, and called out in a single confident word, "GAKUTENOU!"

The ground right under Chachamaru quaked and rumbled, and in a single moment, before she even could jump aside or fly up, it exploded below her feet, sending her flying against a tree's trunk. The gynoid looked up to stare at the towering, monstrous creature erupting from the ground's depths, attempting to locate her files on a similar sort of beast, and failing.

The redhaired woman smiled again. "This is my Child. And you'd better give up right now, honey."

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#5036: Mar 30th 2011 at 2:25:42 PM

At this point, Chachamaru thought Screw it, took a page out of the Green Devil's book,shifted her arm to canon mode and fired, maximum power.

That should be enough. It's not like all the battles in that segment finished.

edited 30th Mar '11 2:36:04 PM by SCMof2814

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#5037: Mar 30th 2011 at 3:55:53 PM

[up] Simple plans are the best, huh? Okay. I'll write Midori's reaction to it later and we'll wrap that part up, then.

By the way, you said you'd be given the results of your test today, right? At this time, you must have had them already, so how did it go?

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#5038: Mar 30th 2011 at 4:30:12 PM

Hey cheese, you're not gonna put MLP into U Ra E, are you?

You know you want to add love
SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#5039: Mar 30th 2011 at 5:37:08 PM

No results yet, unfortunately. Nothing to do but wait and write. As I'm fond of saying, a lot of prayer never hurt.

edited 30th Mar '11 6:31:09 PM by SCMof2814

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
mega-dark Moe Game Console from Planeptune Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Moe Game Console
#5041: Mar 30th 2011 at 6:15:53 PM

By the way SCM, are you still going to draw us (tropers)? Just asking.

Also Anemoi, I linked the trope page of E&OA to the Negima fanfiction section.

edited 30th Mar '11 6:16:20 PM by mega-dark

Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2
Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#5043: Mar 30th 2011 at 6:32:15 PM

Still working on it, but you know how I work. I'm no faster at drawing than writing.

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#5044: Mar 30th 2011 at 6:46:09 PM

MLP? What is—

Oh, that MLP.

Yes, like I said a while ago, I'm toying with the idea of an omake with Twilight Sparkle as Ariadne's newest exchange student, or something like that. We'll see.

SCM, I wish you the best of lucks.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#5045: Mar 30th 2011 at 6:53:43 PM

Well, we already have a chicken, a duck, an ermine, a rabbit, maybe a ferret, and Haruna. A pony, and maybe a mouse (Servant Mickey? Or is that too much of a gamebreaker? Loonatics) should round it out.

BTW, there was once that DC/Loonwy Tubes crossover in the late 90s. There is no indicator it wasn't canon.

edited 30th Mar '11 6:54:31 PM by SCMof2814

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#5046: Mar 30th 2011 at 6:56:07 PM

Be vewy vewy quiet. I'm hunting 10-yeaw-old teachers. Heheheheheheheheh.

...Wow, I just realized how pedophilic that sounds.

edited 30th Mar '11 6:56:32 PM by NoLimit

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#5047: Mar 30th 2011 at 6:56:56 PM

Don't worry Mage, you did FINE

You know you want to add love
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#5048: Mar 30th 2011 at 6:58:11 PM

[up][up][up] You are thinking of the Superman/ Bugs Bunny mini series. Never read it myself, but I read in reviews it was mediocre at best.

As for Kingdom Hearts, all I'll say is, we already have a Sora in the cast. And she's likely to follow her sister into Mundus Magicus. Mundus Magicus is a world of fantasy no stranger to talking humanoid animals.

Do the math. tongue

edited 30th Mar '11 6:59:43 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

mega-dark Moe Game Console from Planeptune Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#5050: Mar 30th 2011 at 7:16:50 PM

[up] And if you multiply the Key with Absurdly Stupid Weapon, add some angst, and divide by infinity games, you get Final Fantasy!


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