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SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#37776: Apr 27th 2012 at 6:14:38 AM

Okay, that works. I'll still throw in a cryptozoologist, though.

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#37777: Apr 27th 2012 at 6:28:40 AM

How about making it that he shoehorns his way into the investigation and everyone else thinks he's a quack

You know you want to add love
SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#37779: Apr 27th 2012 at 6:37:56 AM

For the record, me and Eva Unit 01 are "slacking" around in our backup forum right now.

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
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#37780: Apr 27th 2012 at 6:38:31 AM

We are? <engages brain> Oh. I've got the tab open, but I'm actually stalking this thread, waiting for something to say.

edited 27th Apr '12 6:40:49 AM by EvaUnit01

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#37781: Apr 27th 2012 at 6:43:28 AM

THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!

Ok, while you work on the next part, I've got one scene where Cadence is with Shining Armor and she runs into Celestia talking baby talk to Mouse.

Hilarity Ensues when Celestia tries to pass off the 'dog treats' as a foreign delecasy.

I'm currently in Internet Explorer right now, no spellcheck

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EvaUnit01 Fandom Heretic Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
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#37782: Apr 27th 2012 at 6:51:53 AM

Question about Out of Control: I recall that the rules were

1. roughly 1000 words.

Is that ironclad, or do I get some wiggle room if it's close?

2. No God-moding the story.

I think I can handle that one.

3. Keep it PG-13-ish.

That'll restrict me a little, but it's not too big of a problem at all.

Now then, pick one - Chamo, Ako, or Haruna? Doesn't matter what for, just pick one.

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#37783: Apr 27th 2012 at 7:41:57 AM

@Eva Unit One: The first rule is part of the challenge, but I think that you can have a bit of leniency if necessary. The second is important to keep the plot progressing. The third is necessary to avoid upping the rating. Oh, and any using crossovers must be done in a way that doesn't make things difficult for someone who doesn't know the other series.

Back to MSA:

“Kenko to unmei. Ab somno haut deliberato tuae, excitare nova. Excitabar novum.” said Konoka as she waved her wand over Ayaka. Golden, glowing sparkles fell from the wand and onto Ayaka who sat upright as her eyes opened.

“What happened?” she asked.

“You fainted after kissing Kotaro-kun.” replied Chamo. “And you got one of these.” He handed her one of the recently duplicated cards.

“I’ll cherish it forever!” cried Ayaka as she clutched it to her chest.

“Come on, Nodoka, Iinchou, show us what they do!” Haruna demanded.

“What must I do?” asked Ayaka.

“Hold out you card and say, ‘Adeat!’” Chamo explained. Ayaka got to her feet as Chamo passed Nodoka her own card.

“Adeat!” they cried. Nodoka’s card transformed into a book. At the same time, Ayaka was dressed in an elegant, blue ballroom dress and tiara with high-heeled shoes as her card turned into a pair of glasses. Nodoka, when presented with a book, followed her instincts and opened it.

“I got a book, just like Yue-Yue got last time. That’s nice. I like books. And kissing Negi-san felt very nice. I’m glad that I’m helping him. I wonder if it would feel more nice if I kissed him for lon-“ said the book before Nodoka snapped it shut.

“Should I wear these?” asked Ayaka. She put on the glasses before the door opened.

“I found them!” Kazumi called before turning back towards the others through the now open door.

“Asakura-san? What are you doing here?” asked Ayaka. “And tell us who you’re talking too!” Kazumi’s eyes flashed. “I was talking to Anya-sensei, Ku Fei-san and Nagase-san.” She replied.

Perspicillum Auctoritatus (Glasses of Authority): By the power of her pactio with Inugami Kotaro, Ayaka is granted this artifact. The ability to sway armies with words is more deadly than any weapon. While wearing these glasses and looking an individual in the eyes, Ayaka can give someone any order. Such an order will be followed as long as Ayaka continues to wear the glasses, they understand the order, they are capable of carrying out the order and following the order does not directly and obviously harm themselves or someone they care about. They are, however, forced to obey an order which would cause indirect harm. As a Great Communicator, all of Ayaka’s orders will be understood.

EvaUnit01 Fandom Heretic Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
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#37784: Apr 27th 2012 at 7:50:05 AM

So you basically gave the Class Rep a Geass?

Ah. While all three of my ideas involve some slight crossover, it's more in a meta sense in two of them and the third one might not technically be a crossover, although none of them require much familiarity with the works in question.

edited 27th Apr '12 7:51:38 AM by EvaUnit01

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37785: Apr 27th 2012 at 8:19:19 AM

We randomly had ponies for a chapter and immediately got rid of them, while murdering one of them. I think we can allow that. tongue

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37786: Apr 27th 2012 at 8:21:33 AM

As long as, of course, it ends in murder.

Say, can anyone tell me how to say Lucifer Son Of The Morning, I call you, come down to earth, and then Morning Star?

edited 27th Apr '12 8:23:48 AM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

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NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37787: Apr 27th 2012 at 8:22:15 AM

*holds pinky up to lip* Murder.

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#37788: Apr 27th 2012 at 8:23:32 AM

Yes, I basically gave her a Geass. I intend to make a joke about that in the next omake. And yeah, that sounds fine. Also, may as well go for Ako as she hasn't done much in Out of Control yet.

EDIT: Oh yeah, Konoka's spell should mean something to the effect of: From your forced and restful sleep, wake up fresh and new. Refreshed awakening.

edited 27th Apr '12 8:26:11 AM by Sereg

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37789: Apr 27th 2012 at 8:24:27 AM

Those Belgians made my dear King Arthur so evil... I approve!

edited 27th Apr '12 8:25:07 AM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

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#37790: Apr 27th 2012 at 8:24:29 AM

I might use Ako then, but I'll hold off for a few more votes before I start.

edited 27th Apr '12 8:47:01 AM by EvaUnit01

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#37791: Apr 27th 2012 at 9:49:11 AM

By the way, does anybody know of any good Negi/Takane fics?

Kurush from Stockholm Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Desperate
#37792: Apr 27th 2012 at 9:55:41 AM

[up]I can't exactly recall any fic that was made with that specific pairing but if you want that kind of action anyway, then I just have to recommend Fang Vice Addiction, since it featured those two together a great deal, even if the main pairing was Negi and Eva.

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#37793: Apr 27th 2012 at 9:57:11 AM

@Eva: Rule 1 was just a precaution so that we don't hold up progress with somebody writing a Doorstopper. As long as it's close, it's fine if you go a bit over.

The rule of thumb for crossovers is "as long at makes sense without having seen the other series, it's fine".

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NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37794: Apr 27th 2012 at 9:58:29 AM

SCM broke that rule once. As did Anemoi...

Why is it the crazy ones that don't follow the rules? tongue

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37796: Apr 27th 2012 at 10:10:06 AM

No, they're just bad at following rules.

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#37798: Apr 27th 2012 at 10:46:27 AM

Well, I don't know about anything making sense per se, but you shouldn't need to have seen the other show/played the game to get it.

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#37799: Apr 27th 2012 at 10:53:29 AM

Unequally, Continuation.

Rebirth by Fire

The divination sticks worked by predicting the immediate future. Wherever Konoeko aimed them at, they gave her a brief mental image of what would happen there in the next few moments. It was even more efficient than mind reading during battle, since it predicted even factors out of the attacker's original intent.

However, they had their drawbacks as well. For instance, they still didn't enhance Konoeko's reaction time, so when faced against something or someone that acted faster than she could react to, they weren't of much use but preparing for the unavoidable. Fortunately for her, in this particular case, they allowed her to navigate through the fire with relative ease, although she still couldn't go fast enough (or had free access to) every part of her surroundings to find the children. With the coughing, all but dead weight, beaten guard tucked under an arm, the still fit and healthy woman made her way between the flames, predicting at each step where it would be safe to be next, moving with an agility seemingly unfitting her lithe frame.

It bothered and alarmed her being unable to find the youngsters no matter where she went, and inwardly she cursed the relatively short range of her Artifact. She could get glimpses of the rest of the guards limping away to the exit, one of them trying to drag a still groggy and hurt Roberta with himself. Screaming for her young mistress, the maid elbowed the man in the face and pulled herself out of his grasp, venturing into the fiery inferno with maniacal, nearly suicidal drive. Konoeko's divination told her she should be safe at least for the moment. Even half-berserker as she was, she seemed experienced enough in matters of life and death to know what she was doing.

Then Konoeko felt the presence of the Miyazaki girl and her pet a few steps away. She turned her head in that direction and saw the student fidgeting with a card. The plush lion was perched on her shoulder, shouting advice that Konoeko couldn't hear over the flames and the demonic screams in the distance.

Nodoka didn't need Kero's advice, actually, to soon decide against using The Windy yet. In such a closed space, a burst of wind could only worsen things and send the fire directly against her friends. The Jump wasn't of much use if she wasn't sure if she was going to jump straight into the flames or not. That left her with The Create, but to write something useful down, she needed more time than she could have, having to move at left and right continously just to keep herself alive.

"Can't I write 'The fire disappeared'?-!" she yelled for Kero to hear.

"The Create only can make things appear, not disappear!" Kero shouted back. "It CREATES, it doesn't destroy! You'd need another card for that!"

"Okay, then..." Nodoka pulled The Create out, and idea already in her mind. She summoned the Clow Card as fast as she could, but before she could even touch the pages with her quill, Konoeko-san grabbed her and began pulling her along with herself, for the exit. "Ah! Konoe-sama!"

"This is no moment to write, child," the woman chided her. "It's no time for your last will and testament yet, if I have something to say about it!"

"N-No, it's not that, I—" Nodoka struggled to be able to write something while the woman held her left arm and tugged on her amidst all the chaos. Finally, she could write 'GIANT SPRINKLERS APPEARED ON THE CEILING AND DOUSED THE FIRE OFF', somehow.

And just as soon, that happened.

Konoeko blinked as she saw a heavy curtain of water falling from above all around them, quickly extinguishing the flames, perhaps too fast to be believable. She looked down at the coughing and wheezing Nodoka, who had resorted to fanning her face with the book now. "Child, what kind of miracle is that? A Pactio...?"

"P-P-Puh-Pactio?-!" Nodoka's face became even redder than the flames. "NO! This... This is..."

"This is," Kerberos announced as grandly as he could with a blackened face and a size that tiny, sitting on Nodoka's shoulder, "Clow Reed's legacy, the power of the Clow Cards!"

Konoeko blinked while ignoring the guards slowly gathering around her asking for her wellbeing. "Clow Reed? I see..."

Then she looked around and pinpointed Roberta's location. The maid was coughing violently, her braids undone, and several medium burnt marks over her face. "Ojou-sama..." she hissed.

The mistress of the house approached her. "Stay still. I'm a healer. If your mistress is still alive, she'll need you in the best of conditions."

Roberta grunted like a caged animal, but still allowed her to place her hands on her, muttering a spell in what sounded like really arcaic Japanese. Much to the taller woman's surprise, and a loud gasp of shock from Nodoka, her body fully healed back in a matter of moments. Even the spot where the mysterious pale boy had hit her didn't ache anymore. "Thanks..." she grunted reluctantly, working back to her feet.

Konoeko smiled. It was a beautiful smile, Nodoka decided, noticing it was the first time she had seen the woman smiling since meeting her. Not as pure and happy as Konoka's, but perhaps wiser and more actually sure of itself. "It's the least I could do for a friend of this house. Your devotion to Yukihiro-san is... certainly admirable."

"Where is she?-!" Roberta looked in all directions, madly, mouth about to boil in foam. "If those bastards killed her, I'll—"

Kero flew high above the scene and hummed. "I don't see anyone hurt or dead anywhere from here, although the structure collapsed in several points. I think everyone else must have managed to escape..."

"I'll kill them anyway. With my bare hands if I need to," Roberta roared viciously, in such a way it made Nodoka's skin crawl as much as the Joker's daughter. "But first, finding her. I won't rest easy until I see her again!"

Nodoka found herseld nodding. "Y-Yeah, we will..."

Konoeko placed a hand on the schoolgirl's vacant shoulder. "Truly, my daughter is fortunate to have classmates like you. You might have just saved all our lives, heiress of Clow Reed. My eternal thanks."

Nodoka blushed again even as Kero's chest puffed up in pride. She looked down. "Oh, oh, it's n-nothing. At-At the time, I was just saving my own life... I... I was so scared I think I forgot everyone else... Sorry, I panicked, and..."

"No, you thought of the right thing to do under pressure. And in range of the fire everywhere, so even if you didn't realize it, you were thinking about everyone's safety. Never undersell yourself, Miyazaki Nodoka."

Nodoka gasped and nodded as best as she could. She was unused to any praise from adults that didn't involve her academic output.

It felt actually great, as Haruna would say.

edited 27th Apr '12 10:54:27 AM by NapoleonDeCheese

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37800: Apr 27th 2012 at 12:19:52 PM

GAH! I really need to post CH. 13, but I can't write anything worth a damn.

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