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NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#37401: Apr 24th 2012 at 10:47:30 AM

Unequally, Continuation.

A Girl's Thing

All Hasegawa Sora knew was, suddenly the world had gone very hot all around her, and then it suddenly was impossible to breathe. She heard a scream from Miyazaki-san and insane, ear piercing evil laughter, and it all was too much for her and she fainted back on a pair of thin but strong arms.

She had vague flashes of awareness after that. She thought she felt herself coughing violently several times, and she also felt, above it all, the unbearable, blistering heat, which almost was bad enough to force her to wake up, but in the end, she just ended up surrendering completely to blackness.

For the next few moments, she had brief glimpses of a very nice pale girl with black hair, all in black and carrying an umbrella. Not the Roberta-san kind of umbrella. Or was it a parasol? She couldn't make such details out.

The girl was saying a few things, all of them nice and encouraging, and since Sora always needed encouragement, she might have benefited from remembering them. But in the end, she only could truly understand one thing of what she was saying.

"— your sister needs you."

She struggled back, but it was difficult. It was like pushing her way through a lake of tar. But finally, she could see something at the end of her path, just as she started feeling like coughing again (although her breath still wouldn't come out).

She saw a blushing, awkward looking face right above hers, its details sketchy. She felt a soft breath on her nose, and she heard a reluctant "I guess there's no choice..."

Then there was something warm and soft on her lips, and even warmer air was blown into her.

Now Sora's eyes finally fully opened out of their own acord. She saw Yukihiro Ayaka-san on her hands and knees over her, their mouths connected, and that moved her to gag and sputter on that mouth, and her limbs moved weakly. Ayaka-san reacted by pulling her head back, grimacing, and when Sora tried to speak but only could make more choked sounds, she gently pressed her hands on the older female's chest, helping her to regain her breath.

Sora coughed and spat, turning her head aside and shuddering from head to toes. After wheezing a lot for a couple of minutes, she remained still and supporting herself on her hands, head down and brown hair falling all over her features.

"Can you move?" Ayaka asked her.

"Wh—Where are we?" she spoke as best as she could, looking around to find they were at a darkened dancing hall, and there were rumbling and exploding sounds coming from all directions. "Where are they—?" she asked weakly, not seeing anyone else with them.

"I managed to drag you out of the fire," the rich girl said, making Sora blink. "Looks like we were separated by the flames, but never mind that now. The fire's advancing quickly, and even without that, the fight against Evangeline-san seems to be destroying the building. Can you walk? Because we need to get out here immediately."

Sora nodded and tried to stood up, although she needed Ayaka's help for that. Her legs were shaky, her head was spinning and ringing, and she had such a flavor in her mouth she wondered if she hadn't puked at some point. "Thanks. Where are we—"

"Out. To rejoin Negi-sensei. He'll know what to do." With undying faith on him, Ayaka placed the shuddering Sora against a wall, grabbed a chair, and smashed it through a large nearby window. She kicked the largest pieces of sharp glass left attached to the frame loose and grabbed Sora once more, carefully working her way out with her, into the cold open night. "Don't fear. We're at ground level now."

They landed on the grass, hearing howls, screams and gunfire in the distance. "What is that—" Sora rasped, adjusting her glasses on her face. A few spots of it ached, and that made her notice she had some slight burnts. So did Ayaka, for that matter. Not that it stopped her as she helped her advance into the forest. But in the direction most of the noise seemed to come from.

"We need Negi-sensei, but odds are he needs us too," Ayaka whispered. "Your sister too, come to think about it. So if you can, try to recover fast, because— Duck," she urged, puhsing Sora down with herself into a bush as three winged gremlins flew over their heads. "Oh, my God. Did you see that?"

Sora nodded. "I... I don't know what's going on anymore..."

"Quick," Ayaka directed her to follow her between the bushes, taking a more or less straight path for the main gate. "As long as we're alone, we aren't safe no matter what."

"Why... Why don't we head the other way around? W-We should see if..." another fit of cough she tried to keep low, "... sorry, if Konoeko-san and the others made it into the river..."

"But your sister and Negi-sensei aren't there, are they?" Ayaka asked, not looking at her.

"No. No, they aren't," Sora sighed, and she kept on following her, limping just the teeniest bit. For some reason, her right leg wasn't giving its all.

They kept on advancing for torturously long moments. Sora suspected Ayaka was holding back from going as fast as she could and wanted because of her, and that made her feel even worse. Besides, it was difficult to see their way in the darkness. And they had to be quiet, since more winged beings often flew over them, going from one side to another of the grounds.

At some point, Sora noticed Ayaka was starting to sob softly. She placed a hand on her shoulder and tried to console her as best as she could. "I'm sure Roberta-san and everyone else came out just fine..."

"I-I know," Ayaka sniffed, trying to sound as if she wasn't sniffing, although she was far from sounding convincing in her confidence. "I saw Morisato-san and Makie-san getting away from the fire. I tried calling for them, but they couldn't hear me in the commotion, and I couldn't follow them into the fire, carrying you."

"S-So sorry..."

"Don't be! Sheesh, it could have happened to anyone, okay? Hush," she urged again, making her hide behind a large tree with herself as three demons similar to boars ran near, passing away without seeing them quickly. Ayaka sighed and shook her head. "I can't believe I wasted my first kiss on you. I was saving my virginity... I mean, the virginity of my lips for Negi-sensei! I only had practiced mouth to mouth breathing on dummies before..."

"Ah, well, it worked fine all the same, thanks," Sora said clumsily. "I-If it makes you feel any better, it was my f-first kiss too..."

"No, it doesn't," Ayaka mumbled. "Wait, your first? How old are you, again?"

"Nineteen. Why?"

Ayaka all but chuckled bitterly. "Your sister's fourteen, and she already kissed Negi-sensei and Asuna-san..."

"Wait, what?-!"

"Shhh! I just had an idea. I should've done this from the start. Damn my confusion," the heiress said. She had lost her own cellphone in Cinema Town, but Roberta had given hers since, and she was pulling it out now. "I know what to do."

"A-Are you calling the police?"

"Even better. A professional."

edited 24th Apr '12 10:50:20 AM by NapoleonDeCheese

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#37402: Apr 24th 2012 at 10:54:27 AM

@SCM:Negi turning Pinkie's party canon into an actual canon sounds like a lot of fun!

But we know from the last episode that it is already useable as a weapon.

(Seriously, how AWESOME was that finale!? And yeah, Queen Chrysalis, ruler of the Changelings may have replaced Discord as best villain so far IMO.)

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#37403: Apr 24th 2012 at 11:15:13 AM

Magey, could you PM me the login info for the gmail?

I never got the new password

I'm writing an introduction to the story ATM

edited 24th Apr '12 11:24:38 AM by Anemoi

You know you want to add love
JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#37404: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:03:20 PM

You could always give Negi a bunch of Shen Gong Wu. Kinda like Batman's utility belt, but with magic artifacts.

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NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37405: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:06:13 PM

Well. I just woke up at 3:00 PM. That can't be healthy.

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37406: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:18:04 PM

Bullshit it isn't.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#37407: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:19:47 PM

That depends...

Did you go to bed at 9:00 AM?

You know you want to add love
NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37408: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:20:12 PM

Went to bed around...5 AM-ish?

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#37409: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:21:06 PM

Close enough

Hell I once went to bed at midnight, woke up at noon

And not a single fuck was given that day

You know you want to add love
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37410: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:31:51 PM

Wish I could sleep that much, T_T

Okay, I'm about to go home. I got someone else to make a cake for me.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37411: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:34:25 PM

Was the cake promised? If so...you might be lied to.

Anemoi Snow Queen and Proctologist from Arendelle Proctology Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
Snow Queen and Proctologist
#37412: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:37:32 PM

No

I'm stopping this before it gets out of hand

You know you want to add love
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37413: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:48:02 PM

No, it was paid for.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37414: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:48:52 PM

Ah, so the cake is made by someone you don't know...

POISON.

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37415: Apr 24th 2012 at 12:58:51 PM

It's not for me, so it's completely fine. The one I'll eat I conveniently made myself yesterday, so 'tis all fine.

You know, I just noticed something. There is a fic that sticks Negi to a love triangle (he's not the common point of it either) and gave Naruto a mass harem. I wonder, are they trying to make the fics worse on purpose?

Now I'm wondering, Maestro, where the hell did you get your avatar?

On an unrelated note, still keeping a hawk's eye out for a possible translation to Eiyuu Senki.

edited 24th Apr '12 1:50:51 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
EvaUnit01 Fandom Heretic Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Fandom Heretic
#37416: Apr 24th 2012 at 1:56:21 PM

It's mostly just dumbass narutards that do that - the Naruto writers who are actually good (no seriously, they are out there) normally don't stoop to such things or else use that plot as a joke. Although it we were to try a crossover of the two works seriously and include a pairing thing.... maybe Naruto/Asuna, on the basis that she reminds him somewhat of Sakura and her feelings for Negi are only that of a Cool Big Sis? <is shot for heresy>

NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37417: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:05:54 PM

[up][up] To answer for him, it kind of looks like it's from Carnival Phantasm.

boristus Since: Apr, 2009
#37418: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:07:45 PM

[up]Yup, from when Red Saber crashes the Taiga's dojo segment.

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37419: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:09:36 PM

Heresy? Dood, I don't like the Negi/Asuna romantic pairing, I very much prefer his relationship with her as that one would have with a pseudo sibling.

In any case, I'm currently writing a fic that begins with Gogeta and Janemba's one on one fight. Except that Janemba does what Buu couldn't. Utterly rape the fabric of the multiverse itself.

Thank you, dudes.

edited 24th Apr '12 2:10:08 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37420: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:09:43 PM

I'm torn. My heart belongs to normal Saber, but Red Saber has a pretty nice bod. tongue *Excalibur to the crotch* x.x

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37421: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:10:44 PM

Well... Nero has absolutely no problem with polygamy...

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37422: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:12:05 PM

But would Arturia be so willing...? A man could dream~.

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37423: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:20:20 PM

She was willing to share Shirou with Rin, and if you can convince her that any relationship of hers with Nero would be considered masturbatory, she might be willing to agree...

Besides, all Britannians love Nero. Pretty much the only people who hated Nero were the Roman Senate, hilariously enough. Well, and Christians.

edited 24th Apr '12 2:21:38 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
NoLimit Since: Oct, 2009
#37424: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:26:36 PM

Do we know what religion King Arthur practiced? That might be a sticking point for her...

But, hey. The two seemed to get along in that All Around Type-Moon manga. tongue

IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#37425: Apr 24th 2012 at 2:31:37 PM

Unlikely. Ain't she prior to the wide spread of christianism?

Besides, I'd like to think they are related in some way.

edited 24th Apr '12 2:32:28 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari

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