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LuckyRevenant ALMSIVI from The Flood Since: Jan, 2001
ALMSIVI
#26: May 20th 2010 at 6:30:12 PM

I keep hearing of this "Book of Enoch". I feel like I should look into it.

Also, many thanks to the both of you, both for reading it and for commenting.

Those who only read it, you only get some thanks.

"I can't imagine what Hell will have in store, but I know when I'm there, I won't wander anymore."
jseblan WARGARGARBL from that one place Since: Dec, 2009
WARGARGARBL
#27: May 20th 2010 at 6:34:33 PM

I loved it. Waaaaay better than mine in any case. The machine god is scary, and his infant is MIGHTY scary.

Moar?

I HAVE BIG TEETH FOR CHEWING
Kinkajou I'm Only Sleeping Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Hiding
I'm Only Sleeping
#28: May 20th 2010 at 6:38:26 PM

The king was dying. Stabbed, by Imperial soldiers, right in front of his children.

"Crying will not bring father to life! We must be strong." The prince called after his sister, who replied with a defiant "You don't understand! How can we rule a kingdom on the cusp of being conquered by the Imperium?" The princess then rushed into her room.

When the servants opened Her Royal Highness, the Countess Lea's bedchambers, she was gone.

Later that day Prince Leo of Lesallia proclaimed the surrender of his kingdom to the Imperium, making it a vassal state.

It's part of the backstory to an RPG I'm making.

INT is knowing a tomato is a fruit. WIS is knowing it doesn't belong in a fruit salad. CHA is convincing people that it does.
Cable Cable from Neither the US or Canada Since: Jan, 2001
Cable
#29: May 20th 2010 at 6:51:15 PM

A crazy idea for a slash ganbang fic.

O regained consciousness, from the little deatil he could gather was tied down in a chair down in the middle of a room, the light gazing upon his head flickered periodicly. Otherwise the room had no features that he could see.

From behind a door suddenly opened, there was the patter of several footsteps, O estimated that there were two other people in there.

"Hello O," a male voice said, "I believe that you know us as H." H, the infamous elements in this operation, apparently he defected from the agency. "But anyway let's get to business."

The two H's grabbed O's shirt, and ripped it off to reveal his bare chest. Both of the H's started rubbing his abs, when suddenly they turned to water. The end.

grin

"...Ah! Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal!" -Wash
Kinkajou I'm Only Sleeping Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Hiding
I'm Only Sleeping
#30: May 20th 2010 at 6:52:51 PM

AAAAAAA

INT is knowing a tomato is a fruit. WIS is knowing it doesn't belong in a fruit salad. CHA is convincing people that it does.
LuckyRevenant ALMSIVI from The Flood Since: Jan, 2001
ALMSIVI
#31: May 20th 2010 at 7:05:57 PM

@Jsbelan: Do you just mean you want more from me or more of that story? Because, and I do apologise, but there is no more to that story.

My mind has been doing things a lot lately, though. Maybe one of these things will develop into a story?

"I can't imagine what Hell will have in store, but I know when I'm there, I won't wander anymore."
krrackknut Not here, look elsewhere from The empty Aether. Since: Jan, 2001
Not here, look elsewhere
#32: May 20th 2010 at 7:10:36 PM

That's a good idea, Lucky. Good stories always spring out of your head in a sea of chaos.

An useless name, a forsaken connection.
LuckyRevenant ALMSIVI from The Flood Since: Jan, 2001
ALMSIVI
#33: May 20th 2010 at 7:15:03 PM

Well, not always. I do need to start sitting down and writing again, though. I suspect that this summer I'll actually be able to do it. Especially after some re-evaluation and shit I've had about my life.

However, this is Troper Story-Time not, Lucky Talks About His Boring Life Time, so yeah

"I can't imagine what Hell will have in store, but I know when I'm there, I won't wander anymore."
Leanan Laughing Mad from Rokkenjima Since: Dec, 1969
#34: May 20th 2010 at 7:27:51 PM

You know what, I'll put this in a new post.

edited 20th May '10 8:35:57 PM by Leanan

WHO WANTS STAKE? *CACKLE*CACKLE*
Myrmidon The Ant King from In Antartica Since: Nov, 2009
The Ant King
#35: May 20th 2010 at 7:30:43 PM

I had an idea about a scientist who finds a rewire his brain against the Kantian forms of perception in favor of pure experience, but I don't know where to go with it.

Kill all math nerds
jseblan WARGARGARBL from that one place Since: Dec, 2009
WARGARGARBL
#36: May 20th 2010 at 7:31:15 PM

More of anything you can write. I don't expect a sequel to the last one, it would lessen it's quality.

I HAVE BIG TEETH FOR CHEWING
LuckyRevenant ALMSIVI from The Flood Since: Jan, 2001
ALMSIVI
#37: May 20th 2010 at 7:34:07 PM

I agree. Also, like I said, I'm gonna try to sit down and write more soon, so I should have more output in due time.

"I can't imagine what Hell will have in store, but I know when I'm there, I won't wander anymore."
wannabeotaku I can't breathe in this from Earth Since: May, 2009
I can't breathe in this
#38: May 20th 2010 at 7:34:58 PM

Stories are hard to write. How do you do it?

Hello again tropers
wannabeotaku I can't breathe in this from Earth Since: May, 2009
I can't breathe in this
#40: May 20th 2010 at 7:37:44 PM

that makes sense

Hello again tropers
jseblan WARGARGARBL from that one place Since: Dec, 2009
WARGARGARBL
#41: May 20th 2010 at 7:37:46 PM

I think about how it begins, find a character for the setting, write a bit, think of a good ending, fill the plot holes and write said ending.

If I can't find a satisfying ending or the plot holes are just horrible, I don't finish the story and I abandon it.

I HAVE BIG TEETH FOR CHEWING
LuckyRevenant ALMSIVI from The Flood Since: Jan, 2001
TuefelHundenIV Night Clerk of the Apocalypse from Doomsday Facility Corner Store. Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: I'd need a PowerPoint presentation
Night Clerk of the Apocalypse
#43: May 20th 2010 at 7:42:06 PM

Well Done lucky. You could make that into a kick ass comic strip.

Blood Pouch broke my brain.

Who watches the watchmen?
krrackknut Not here, look elsewhere from The empty Aether. Since: Jan, 2001
Not here, look elsewhere
#44: May 20th 2010 at 7:50:32 PM

I just think of it as entertaining some children. It's sort of magical to me.

An useless name, a forsaken connection.
Kinkajou I'm Only Sleeping Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Hiding
I'm Only Sleeping
#45: May 20th 2010 at 8:04:18 PM

My stories are comparably minor, Minor enough that they pass without comment.

I'm used to it.

INT is knowing a tomato is a fruit. WIS is knowing it doesn't belong in a fruit salad. CHA is convincing people that it does.
Tofu gtfo Steve from Minecraft Since: Jan, 2001
gtfo Steve
#46: May 20th 2010 at 8:05:16 PM

Thinking in the POV from one of my own characters and how she probably feels about her Chew Toy status.

Do you hate me?

Doesn't everyone?

Why do you hate me?

You exist to be hated, dear. Nobody is supposed to like you.

Even if that's the answer, my heart breaks. Why? I never did anything to hurt you, mun. Why do you hate me? I try, I try, I keep trying and I fall down. Please stop hating me, please, just like me for a little while?

Huh? I get to be the hero of this story? ...you're lying. It's All Just a Dream, isn't it? I know to expect it. I know never to expect a happy ending for me, because nobody likes Nessarose. Nobody likes me.

I'll stop being Nessarose, okay? I'm Tofu now. Since I'm not Nessarose any more, does that mean you love me now? Does this mean they'll love me too? ...can anyone love me? It's not fair.

Look at them, the players. They don't love me. They ignore me. I just want to help them. They'll die if I don't.

See? They died. Now I have to clean it up.

...Slip, crash. Was that really necessary? I'm all covered in blood now. Is it to amuse them? You make me a pariah, you hate me, why do you even let me exist?

...I love her, mun. She's wonderful, mun. Are you going to kill her, mun? Because any time I have my happiness, you do something and the happy breaks. You're going to kill her! I know you! You'll do it because if it's me that suffers, everyone is happy! You'll kill her and then... and then...

hic, sorry, i cant see the keyboard cause my eys are teary

Okay, not crying. I'm like you, mun, I don't cry at anything! I'm strong, too! I play games like you do! I laugh and sing and... do you love me yet?

No? But why? I'm not Nessarose anymore, and everyone hates Nessarose. So they shouldn't hate Tofu, right? They should accept her. They should like her.

...why? Why don't they like me?! I've done everything, mun! I just want to be loved! Why doesn't anyone like me?! Please, mun, please make them like me! I don't wanna be alone, please, just let her be alive, let her exist, let somebody here care about me!

...It's been two weeks, mun. They like me. I have two friends today. I bet you'll kill them, too. I know you will. You hate me and when I suffer, they laugh. So you'll hurt them and make me suffer to amuse those faceless people? Cruel.

...You're so cruel mun. Three weeks and that nasty player girl took one of my friends. He's in love with her, but I don't care. If she's here I should be fine. But still, she took my friend. I hope you feel proud, Mun, because I'm not gonna cry. It would make you laugh if I did.

...why mun. Why. I didn't hurt you. Was it because I was happy? Is this why? You made him take them all. Even the people who hated me.

Even Her.

My precious, my darling, Her.

How could you, mun?

...I'm in a new place. It's warm.

Sand. Lots.

Blonde hair. Brown hair. White hair

where am i who are you where are you timestamp

...They don't know Nessarose, mun! Is this true? You're going to be mean, I can feel it. But oh, joy, they don't know Nessarose, they won't hate me! ...will they? Please, please, don't let them meet Nessarose, don't let them hate me too

...A year. A year since they went away. They don't know Nessarose yet. You've been kind lately. I feel suspicious. I know you're up to something but I don't know what. What do you want, mun?

...I found him. I found the man you used as a proxy to kill them, mun. I hate you. I want you to hurt. Because he is your proxy, you must care. You must like him.

I will destroy him

...You don't hurt, do you? I broke your proxy. But you're not upset. whathaveidonetodeservethisineverhurtanyoneijustwantedtobeloved

...I broke him, I destroyed him, I conquered him and you laughed, you laughed, YOU LAUGHED! Why, why why? Do you have no heart? That explains it. You have no heart. You callous, cruel bitch. I hate you.

...somuchhate

...mustdestroy

...mustrevenge

...cannotcomputetoohurt

...where are you who are you timestamp

...I'm awake. They aren't here, but the new They is. They look at me. Concern? Does someone care? Do you care? Please care, I feel so broken

...They came to visit me again. The white and red boy- Ash, his name is Ash, oh, he cares- is cheerful and the tall man and woman are very nice. I like them. Will you kill this new They too? dontbreakthemmunihavenothingelse —

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Kinkajou I'm Only Sleeping Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Hiding
I'm Only Sleeping
#47: May 20th 2010 at 8:10:30 PM

What a woobie.

INT is knowing a tomato is a fruit. WIS is knowing it doesn't belong in a fruit salad. CHA is convincing people that it does.
BLOODPOUCH The Ugly Barnacle Since: Dec, 1969
#48: May 20th 2010 at 8:17:27 PM

"Krrackknut, what's going on?" Kinkajou asked, as he slowly spun Krrackknut around. "What's with this game you're playing?" All he wanted to do was end the dance and get back to his girlfriend Lucky Revenant.

Krrackknut laid her head on his shoulder, positioning her lips a breath away from his neck, her short, dark brown hair gently brushing against his cheek. Without missing a beat, she answered, "I'm not up to anything," she said innocently. "It's been a long time since I've seen you and I just wanted to say hello and have a dance with my buddy. Is there any harm in that?"

He didn't believe her - not in a New York minute. "Wrong answer," he said, his impatience growing.

Krrackknut gently brushed her warm, wet lips against his neck. "Stop that!" he pleaded, glancing again at Lucky Revenant to see if she was watching. His girlfriend's eyes glared back at him from their table. She hadn't missed a thing. The glance spoke volumes - the rest of the evening was going to be hell.

Krrackknut, once again, moved her lips ever so slowly along his neck. "That bothers you?" she said, in a soft, sultry voice....

Later:

"Kinkajou, I really enjoyed myself this afternoon. Would you care to come in for a bite to eat?" Krrackknut asked, as she unlocked the front door to her home.

Kinkajou stood watching as the fading sunlight caught the ends of her dark brown hair, turning them a golden hue. The whole time they were together, the feelings that had been hidden for so long suddenly came rushing back to life. Every turn of her head, the brush of her arm, even the sound of her laughter, made him want to hold her and smother her with kisses. And those breath-taking blue eyes.

"Hello, Kinkajou! Are you there?"

His face suddenly flushed, making Krrackknut laugh. "Sure, I'd love to come in. . .I thought you'd never ask," he said, smiling broadly, climbing the steps and entering into the foyer.

Krrackknut took his coat and hung it next to hers.

Kinkajou I'm Only Sleeping Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Hiding
I'm Only Sleeping
#49: May 20th 2010 at 8:19:24 PM

ಠ_ಠ

INT is knowing a tomato is a fruit. WIS is knowing it doesn't belong in a fruit salad. CHA is convincing people that it does.
Tofu gtfo Steve from Minecraft Since: Jan, 2001
gtfo Steve
#50: May 20th 2010 at 8:20:52 PM

...aaaaand we have Bloodpouch being the kinkmeme.

be warned, user is known affectionately as The Sneakiest Bastard

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