Okay, some characters from a story I'm working on.
New Blood is a high-end mercenary unit comprised of Child Soldiers trained to be the ultimate killing machines. Operating under the guise of a Catholic school (from which new recruits are taken, of course), New Blood is engaged in combat situations all over the world, and has had a hand in every major armed conflict since 1998.
Deadeye (Jacob Lawson, 16) - Of the initial batch of 250 recruits collected in '98, Deadeye is the oldest one still alive. Specializing in conventional weapons and tactics, Deadeye was trained to be at home in all possible combat environments.
Angel Baby (Titus Carlotta, 11) - Angel Baby has received aggressive gene therapy and daily hormonal supplements to make him look like an actual angel or cherub - including a small pair of nonfunctioning wings. Allegedly an experiment in psychological warfare, in reality he's just the foster son/sex toy of project head Dr. Rachel Carlotta.
Throwdown (Derek Hao, 17) - Though older than Deadeye, Throwdown was recruited much later. Put through a revolutionary and intensely grueling diet and exercise regimen and subjected to subliminal brainwashing, Throwdown is stronger than an ox and almost as smart. Intended as the perfect bodyguard and a shock and awe specialist in combat.
Plague Rat (Alissa Ryan, 14) - Biological and chemical weapons expert. Uniquely immunized to virtually all known toxins and poisons, she must still wear a custom containment suit to protect her from the diseases she handles. A chaotic element on the battlefield.
Wild Thing (Brianne Wilde, 15) - Guerilla combat operative. Obsessed with violence, Wild Thing is especially fixated on her close combat knife. An expert at rigging traps in the wild and taking the fight to the enemy.
Grr. Argh.DUDE. NEED MORE INFO. HAVE YOU NOT SEEN THE REST OF THE THREAD?
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serialI love how riled up people get when other people don't post enough info. So great.
But I mean yeah, those are pitch statements for characters. At this point, I say "Okay, I'm interested, tell me more" because I can't say anything else.
"Never let the truth get in the way of a good story." TwitterSpeaking of, has anyone gotten to my post last page?
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serialI actually posted a while ago, but... You were sick, or something XD. And seriously, it was tl;dr.
But yeah. My problem is that I don't know when I'm giving too much information and when I'm not giving it enough.
I was told to give more information, but to say I overdid it would be an understatement XD.
Ah, summer, what power you have to make us suffer and like it. ~Russel BakerFrom Post 978#
Yeah, you're right about the likes/dislikes.
Uhhhh Likes: Wandering, Poetry, drawing(but as a hobby), family, he want to feel like he's made a difference.
dislikes: waiting, inaction for people in need of help, conspiracy theories
As for bizarre, There will be things that are odd but accepted, and then there will just confusing things.
If skeletons popping out of people's skins isn't weird than I need whatever drugs you're on
edited 5th Dec '10 3:25:35 AM by Counterclock
Oh, sorry about that, didn't see that.
ok, uhh, uhh, well, friends: he only really has one main one (as of the beginning of the story, this does not include friendly associations with contacts or clients) Ben Gehkden with whom Dairy mostly plays straight man to when going to business, he trusts in him enough to get the job down, despite some of his particular behaviors.
Family, nuclear includes Mother, Little Sister, he doesn't even regard the remarriage with any attention. He cares about his Mother but since she hasn't told him anything of her past, can't really be an accurate judge as to who she is. His sister is smarter than him, two grades above where he was and loves to annoy him with this, so he mostly tries to ignore her as a way to get her back, though this was all before he left(explained that already)
No real connections to the tribe aside from that, his Teachers mostly annoyed him with puns(explained already too >.<) and he didn't grow too fond of their philosophy not to interfere with wars.
As for co-workers, well, his commanding officer(in the army, explained that too)
Ok, just needed some space for this.
ok.
His commanding officer, Commander Ham Hander he regards as sort of a pseudo-father figure, he went through basic training and then got put under his regiment. when a certain "battle" went down, it was Ham who handled the resulting mess for him, so he highly respects him for it.

GODDAMMIT AHR YOU STOLE MY 1000TH POST
:P
There are too many toasters in my chimney!