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OverMaster?! You Da Man, Dawg from Valencia, Venezuela Since: Mar, 2010
You Da Man, Dawg
#7076: Oct 9th 2010 at 4:35:29 PM

Most Bleach fanfics I have seen aren't as bad at Deus ex Machina as Tite Kubo himself is, but yeah, Kingdom Hearts fanfic fandom is usually... scary as Heck.

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#7077: Oct 9th 2010 at 4:36:01 PM

I think its because Nagi is a lot like Naruto's own father, the fourth Hokage, Minato. They are both considered the strongest of their respective powerhouses, Nagi for Wizards, and Minato for Shinobi.

And a lot of them have Naruto become a full blown demon and or become Negi's older brother, sort of.

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#7078: Oct 9th 2010 at 4:36:04 PM

^^^^ Thanks. I'll check it over and upload it eventually.

Yeah, I can pretty much guarantee that Naruto is probably never going to show up in any of my stuff.

^^^Bleach was pretty good at the beginning. Hasn't gone well since then, though. Kingdom Hearts was a good game, but the fandom...eaugh.

^Nagi would kick Minato's ass.wink Even that similarity isn't that strong; there are probably tons of other characters that would fit better.

edited 9th Oct '10 4:39:47 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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Zeether Knight of Legend from Mahora (I wish) Since: Jan, 2001
Knight of Legend
#7079: Oct 9th 2010 at 5:09:49 PM

@JT: Here's the new chapter. There's another one after it

I had to insert line breaks at right points because FF.net's editor doesn't add them.

edited 9th Oct '10 5:13:19 PM by Zeether

Heidegger, Heidegger was a boozy beggar who could drink you under the table~
JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#7080: Oct 9th 2010 at 5:53:45 PM

How do you insert the line breaks into the story? I tried to do that with mine, but it didn't work for some reason.

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RedSavant Since: Jan, 2001
#7081: Oct 9th 2010 at 5:57:01 PM

There's a button on the formatting bar near the Bold, Underline and Italics thing.

It's been fun.
JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#7082: Oct 9th 2010 at 6:03:48 PM

On FF.net, or the word processing program?

EDIT: Nevermind, I'm an idiot. I forgot that you can edit the uploaded documents.

edited 9th Oct '10 6:05:25 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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Zeether Knight of Legend from Mahora (I wish) Since: Jan, 2001
Knight of Legend
#7083: Oct 9th 2010 at 6:04:15 PM

On FF.net. It's a line icon.

Heidegger, Heidegger was a boozy beggar who could drink you under the table~
JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#7084: Oct 9th 2010 at 6:09:14 PM

Ugh, had a brain fart there...

^Good job on your story. I'd probably appreciate more if I actually knew something about Initial D.tongue

EDIT: Okay, for the stuff coming up, I'm going to need names for m!Ayaka and m!Nodoka. I'm currently thinking of Hayate and Nobuo,respectively, but I think I could do better.

edited 9th Oct '10 6:23:19 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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uui Lic Lac La Lac Lilac Since: Jan, 2010
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#7085: Oct 9th 2010 at 6:53:38 PM

cnet's trans is out, so scans should follow shortly.

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#7086: Oct 9th 2010 at 6:58:56 PM

Awesome. Can't wait for it.

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Izaak Since: Apr, 2009
#7087: Oct 9th 2010 at 7:35:24 PM

Quick, I need somebody's help. Sometime back somebody posted a HUGE relationship chart. What I want to know is what image hoster you used for it? I have a heavy file (a SRW model chart) I want to post.

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing
#7088: Oct 9th 2010 at 7:48:25 PM

Imagehost.org

Anyway, I upload that Haruna story from a few pages back, now with a brand new overdramatic prologue.

Artifact Abuse.

edited 9th Oct '10 7:48:52 PM by JapaneseTeeth

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Arha Since: Jan, 2010
#7089: Oct 9th 2010 at 7:50:01 PM

I used imagehost for that chart.

Izaak Since: Apr, 2009
#7090: Oct 9th 2010 at 7:58:50 PM

Thanks.

edited 9th Oct '10 7:59:02 PM by Izaak

Arha Since: Jan, 2010
#7091: Oct 9th 2010 at 8:05:55 PM

I have no idea what that is, but you seem to have done a good job. Nice work.

Huh, I just looked back to when I originally posted that and it was apparently 200 pages ago... this thread has certainly grown since then.

edited 9th Oct '10 8:08:59 PM by Arha

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#7092: Oct 9th 2010 at 8:11:10 PM

^ Yeah, this thread really goes at an insane pace sometimes. I remember once my internet was down for like 2 days and I missed like 9 pages.

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#7093: Oct 9th 2010 at 8:59:24 PM

Dynamis's chapter moment,now in color

Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2
OverMaster?! You Da Man, Dawg from Valencia, Venezuela Since: Mar, 2010
You Da Man, Dawg
#7094: Oct 9th 2010 at 9:03:03 PM

Chapter Ten, Act Two.

"Okay, class!" the young teacher had clapped her hands vigorously. "I want you all to meet our new student and friend, Kagurazaka Asuna!" she kindly had announced. "She just transferred here from overseas, so please, make her to feel welcome!".

And then the diminutive redhead with spindly legs and golden bells in her hair had stepped into sight, appearing for the first time in Ayaka's life, with a completely emotionless face. Even then, Ayaka had not liked her. Her face was that of a sulking troublemaker, and her mismatched eyes were simply creepy.

Everyone had greeted the new girl effusively, but she had not even bothered to reply to any of them. Through the whole day, she had remained distant and silent, ignoring anyone's attempts to establish any kind of communication.

And so, after the day's classes were over, and the newcomer was getting ready to leave, the little cute blonde had marched into her way, fists balled up at her own narrow hips. The rest of the class had eagerly gathered around them, watching on with intense curiosity, unsure about the result of the epic facedown sure to ensue.

"Kagurazaka Asuna!" Ayaka had said. "Yes, you! As the Class Representative, I must ask you to explain the motives behind your bad attitude! Do you think you're too good for us?".

A really impressive speech for a child of that tender age. But the rude foreigner had not talked then either. She only had given the local authority figure a blank stare up and down, not even beginning to move her mouth or forming any kind of sound.

It had been only when Ayaka had angrily opened her lips to urge her again that Kagurazaka let out an unintelligible mumble.

"What?" the blonde asked.

"Stpdshrmp" Asuna had muttered under her breath.

Ayaka had leaned her ear near Asuna's mouth. "Louder, please?".

"STUPID SHRIMP!!" Asuna had yelled as loud as she could.

"Ahhh!" the Class Rep, scared, had stumbled back before her afce flushed as red as blood. "Why, you, how do you dare!". She had immediately pounced onto her. "My ears are delicate!".

"They can't be!" the redhead had quickly grabbed her by the hair. "If you have to listen to your own grating voice all the time—!".

"You hooligan!" Ayaka had pinched her cheeks as hard as she could. "You'll regret saying that!".

"I only regret meeting you!" Asuna had started to try and headbutt her several times.

"A fight! They started to fight!" another girl laughed.

"I bet six yen on Iincho!" Sakurako had jumped on the chance.

"Eight yen on the new girl!".

"Oh no, Sensei's coming back! Someone distract her 'til it's over!".

It was with that final memory of her beloved and so disciplined former classmates (and Sakurako) cheering on her misery that Yukihiro Ayaka woke up that bright Sunday morning.

"AHHH! I WON'T FORGIVE YOU!!" she screamed, sitting up as if an electric bolt had just zapped her.

Then she noticed she was 14. And she was alone at her bedroom, with golden hair all over face. Brushing it aside, she groaned and looked at the clock. Seven and fifteen minutes.

"Ugh" she licked the morning's bad taste out of her mouth. "That again".

She hated when she had that dream. It was usually nothing but an omen of unpleasant things to come.

A few minutes after, however, she was fresh like a newly bloomed rose and sporting her most charming smile as she walked across the halls of her manor, radiant in a white dress, greeting the domestic service along her way. "Good morning, girls! Good morning, Fubuki-san, Siesta-san, Minazuki-san, Cisneros-san, Iglesias-san!"

"Good morning, honorable Ojou-sama!" all the maids bowed to her, although one of them overdid it too clumsily and fell down flat on her face, making all the others to quietly groan to themselves.

"Oh, Minazuki-san!" Ayaka laughed as she helped the brown haired, bespectacled and big chested older girl back to her feet. "Remember, a good posture is the basis for a good balance!".

"I-I'll remember it next time, Ojou-sama!" the young woman tearfully nodded, making tiny embarrassed sobs.

The heiress went to take her seat at the main table, calling on her lead butler with a soft tapping of her silver spoon on her plate. "Sebastian!".

The old, white haired man appeared at her right side immediately. "Ojou-sama?".

"I will drink my tea before deciding on a breakfast" she haughtily commanded. "Get on it right now, please".

"As you wish. But before it, perhaps, you would like to hear about a phone call we received half a hour ago" the gentleman respectfully said, keeping his head low.

"If it's anything related to businesses, it can wait until tomorrow" she strictly said. "I wish for no interruptions of any sort today".

"Understood" Sebastian nodded. "In that case, I shall call Springfield-sama right now and—".

"Springfield?" Ayaka sprang up in alarm. "Negi Springfield?".

"Why, yes, he said such was his name" the butler confirmed. "He claimed being your homeroom teacher, although at first I believed it was a woman calling".

"He hasn't hit puberty yet..." she explained, with her eyes wide. "What did he say? Does he need my help with anything?!".

"Oh, no, actually, he simply asked for permission to visit this estate today...".

"OF COURSE HE CAN!!" she jumped up from her chair, her tone fully changed to a frantic euphoria. "Call him immediately and tell him he's welcome here at any hour of any day! I-I'd call him myself, but I need to change to something decent first!" she stuttered, embarrassed all of a sudden like a traditional newlywed, before quickly running away back to her bedroom.

The maids all stood there in silent stupor.

"So the rumors were true" the one with short black hair whispered.

"Ours is not to question her interests... but to honor her kindness" the one with long silvery hair sighed.

The tallest one scowled ever so slightly behind her thick glasses, but said absolutely nothing.

Nearly two hours later, it was an even better dressed Ayaka, looking like a fairy tale charmed princess, who ran to the front door after hearing the announcement of her teacher's entrance to her grounds.

"I wish for Sensei to be treated with nothing but the utmost respect!" she instructed her servants. "Anyone who fails at that shall be severely punished! Do I look good enough? What do you think?".

"As fascinating and gorgeous as ever, Ojou-sama" the one with silver hair complimented her.

"Sebastian-sama is bringing him over as we speak" the youngest of the lot, a girl with a heavy foreign accent, her black hair made up in a single small bun, bowed as she opened the front door for her.

"Excellent, simply excellent!" Ayaka giggled happily while walking out, then friendly waving a hand up under the heavy rays of the sun. "Good morning, dear Negi-sensei! Welcome! Please feel right at home!".

And then she screeched to a halt.

"Ah... Good morning!" Negi-sensei, wearing his usual formal suit ensemble, and always carrying his bandaged staff around, bashfully greeted her, standing at Sebastian's right. Behind them, Hasegawa Chisame, in a plain white shirt and blue pants, merely nodded her head once in the rich girl's direction. Hakase Satomi stood nearby, not looking at the hostess at all, clad in shorts and a black shirt, taking some samples of wood from a tree and carefully placing them inside of a small metallic container.

"Good morning, Iincho-chan!" Shiina Sakurako, in a very short and tight skirt and sleeveless orange top, smiled at her, a red cap perched on the top of her head.

"Hello! You look very good today!" Konoe Konoka chirped, happy as a free bird, at Sakurako's left and wearing a pretty summer dress with sandals.

"A bit too fancy for a simple short visit, though..." Finally, the bane of Ayaka's existence, Kagurazaka Asuna, completed the group, crossing her arms and looking rather nonchalant, in a simple but elegant ensemble of a light red blouse and a matching skirt.

No wonder Ayaka hated when she had that dream. It was usually nothing but an omen of unpleasant things to come.

JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#7095: Oct 9th 2010 at 9:07:19 PM

^Very nice. I like your version of events. Especially the bit about Negi sounding like a woman.

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#7096: Oct 9th 2010 at 9:42:07 PM

So I got books 18 & 19 and in the back of book 18 it says Eva's middle name "Athanasia" as "The dictionary defines this word as 'the quality of being deathless; immortality.'"

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#7097: Oct 9th 2010 at 9:49:20 PM

^At this point, it doesn't surprise me at all.

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Raso Cure Candy Since: Jul, 2009
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#7098: Oct 9th 2010 at 9:58:20 PM

In the back of 19 it says Yuna was first suppose to be named "Yuno" and she was suppose to be "the energetic nanny with large breasts" and Chizuru was suppose to have the father complex but didn't have large breasts... some things were switched.

Also Eva's castle is named Lebens Schuld Castle.

edited 9th Oct '10 10:02:36 PM by Raso

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Watchtower Since: Jul, 2010
#7099: Oct 9th 2010 at 9:59:03 PM

^^KEN DID THE RESEARCH *brick*

Also, yeah, I actually did look at several of the Naruto/Negima crossovers. Several tried to tie in Naruto's devil possession in, while others tried to tie Kaede in with the "Narutoverse". Then again, I don't care that much, so oh well.

OverMaster?! You Da Man, Dawg from Valencia, Venezuela Since: Mar, 2010
You Da Man, Dawg
#7100: Oct 9th 2010 at 10:02:55 PM

^^ Well, Yuuna got her large breasts in the end anyway. Not at Chizuru's level yet, but she's still growing....


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