I corrected the 'magister' mistake, thanks. Also, I'm not too sure about 'expectations' since English isn't my native tongue. I have seen it written both ways, is 'expectatives' really wrong?
Ack Sed, after I'm done with the epilogue, I'd still like to take you on that offer to correct my drafts into pieces for FF.Net submission, if you still are up for it.
After I'm finished, I've been thinking of following up with either another series of vignettes, this time centered on 'What If' crossovers built around a framing device, or a stab at a multipart ongoing retelling with a twist.
@D Omen: I perfectly understand what "Cosmo Entelecheia" means. If Akamatsu hasn't made that clear, then the online translators certainly have. The issue was that it took me an absurdly long amount of time to pronounce it right. And I'm never calling it "Final purpose of the world" or any of that bullcrap because "Cosmo Entelecheia" sounds 10x more badass.
The only problem I noticed on the flowchart when I put it up is that the arrow from "Already Did It - Yes" should go to "FIGHT" rather than "Training from Hell". The whole "is she a relative" thing only applies to Chao and Asuna, and he didn't really have an "Oh Crap" moment in either case. I didn't bother with the whole "Massive misunderstanding" thing because he ultimately solves the problem through violence or pactio anyway, and the "romantic moment" is usually either not involved in the problem solving process, and if it is, it's because it leads to a pactio. Also, I'm trying to make the chart as simple as possible because it's funnier that way, so it's not completely accurate. It's more of a general rule thing. *.
I don't see Fate joining the class, mainly because he has absolutely zero reason to do so. The only possible means would be if he gets hit by the same curse as Eva, and I don't see that happening. It would be too much of a slap on the wrist for all the trouble he's caused. Luna/Shiori definitely could get in, though. I mean, the pactio card number pretty much guarantees her a spot.
I'm still calling it Cosmo Enchilada, because it's funnier, and easier to spell.
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@Radical Taoist-
If that scenario actually took place, who else thinks that Kotaro would be horribly behaved. Would probably start a fight with Negi or something.
Reaction Image RepositoryMost fans believe Negi will hit Fate with a big non lethal spell. Team up with him and fight the true big bad. Fate ends up going to working for the government, and then save another Macgruff who has four knights. And in the future they will run a secret organization that will stop another government conspircy Either that or open a toco stand and name it cosmo enchilada.
edited 2nd Aug '10 7:28:45 PM by mega-dark
Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2*snaps fingers* Got it!
In order to teach him humanity, after sealing up most of his power, the authorities force Fate to become Negi's teaching assistant.
Share it so that people can get into this conversation, 'cause we're not the only ones who think like this.^ and when Ayaka notes how close they are, Paru will set up a series of events and/or make some comments that will convince Ayaka they're yaoi guys.
Edit: @Japanese Teeth- oh yes, and Negi would probably have to give the entire class a death glare with those same evil black eyes Eva does all the time to make them STFU and pay attention. admit it. it would be funnier then hell
edited 3rd Aug '10 3:01:24 AM by n00bguy
It was more like a large hunk of iron in the shape of a sword.I can see it now:
- Negi: Please don't talk in class, Kotaro-kun.
- Kotaro: Oh, come on. You really think you can waltz in here and act like the teacher? Even if you weren't only as old as me, you'd still just be a substitute.
- Negi: Kotaro-kun, if you continue I will have to issue you a detention. Please be quiet.
- Kotaro: Make me.
*beatdown commences*
Reaction Image RepositoryNah, he'll just need to do this:
Kotarou: ACK! Okay okay okay! I'll be good! Just don't tell her!!!
edited 3rd Aug '10 8:12:43 PM by MarqFJA
Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.Because he would like to set a good example to his students: "When in school, disputes should always be resolved peacefully; violence is to be reserved as the last resort among a hundred different ones."
Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.^ And can you name one time that he followed that approach in a strictly academic/class issue?
edited 3rd Aug '10 8:55:16 PM by MarqFJA
Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.

^I think I saw that Shiori's Pactio number was XXXII, or 32. Seems to me like that means she's in the class now.