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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#1: Jul 21st 2022 at 2:45:50 PM

The flag here for Monster in the Mountain was sent with the rationale

I need a second opinion on if the page needs to be purged before I even consider recommending the fanfic on the original work's tropes page.

Is it porn/pedo-pandering? -Labeled as Porn with Plot tag on AO 3 -Contains one masturbation scene -Rated M (Erroneously under-rated?) -Incomplete. It is certain to have more explicit content in future updates. -The shipping pair were originally prepubescent children in canon Is it not porn/pedo-pandering? -The pair are chronologically and biologically adults in this fanfic, set 11 years after canon -Only one masturbation scene after 84,000 words -The plot is not an excuse plot, with actual character development and dramatic tension unrelated to sex

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Walkinshadows Since: Jun, 2012
#2: Jul 21st 2022 at 7:19:52 PM

The story isn't entirely smut. They are adults, although the characters are children in the game.

Edited by Walkinshadows on Jul 21st 2022 at 10:32:53 AM

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#3: Aug 19th 2022 at 5:43:34 AM

Okay so seems fine to keep. Characters are adults, their isn't that much explicit stuff, has a detailed plot. Everything we want.

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TheLivingDrawing Lucas the Dreamer from The Town of Clayton Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
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#4: Aug 19th 2022 at 12:23:02 PM

The characters are adults and it looks more like a detailed ship fic with a side of lemon than a detailed lemon fic with a side of ship. Keep

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Ramidel Since: Jan, 2001
#5: Aug 19th 2022 at 12:37:30 PM

For the above reasons, keep.

Was a legit request, but the work doesn't seem to be a problem.

mightymewtron Word Up from New New York Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
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#6: Aug 26th 2022 at 7:55:34 PM

We don't penalize age-up fics if the characters are believably aged-up, and this sounds like it isn't just done for the sake of porn if most of the story is plot. Easy keep.

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4maskwolf Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Barbecuing
#7: Sep 10th 2022 at 11:13:53 AM

Sounds like a pretty easy keep.

Siegfried1337 Calabash. from The Eastern Luminant Since: Sep, 2018 Relationship Status: Will you go out with me to the End?
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#9: Sep 11th 2022 at 2:04:23 AM

Seems like this is a keep. I'll do the record-keeping; closing here.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
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