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Edited by Mrph1 on Oct 22nd 2024 at 8:06:39 PM
There, done.
Sandbox.The Bible now contains the draft for the new version of the article.
The mods should review it before replacing the current article with this one, lest they implement something they might regret.
Also tried to fix some more problems which I didn't pick up the first time.
(About Biggus Dickus: I changed it to the New International Version of the same verse because it's clearer. At least its license permits it to be used like that
).
- DC And Vertigo: For Vandal Savage, please change Vander Og to Vander Adg.
- Metal Gear:: Please change Wiseman's entry to: The non-canon METAL GEAR AC!D 2 has Wiseman. He instigated a horrific event known as the Praulia Massacre: Wiseman felt that the data about the Model 2 soldiers was insufficient, so he had technicians provoke said soldiers into going berserk, causing the deaths of 10,000 people. He then sent the Model 3 soldiers in to eliminate the Model 2 soldiers, knowing that eliminating their brethren hurt them. Besides this, Wiseman was also responsible for the death of Koppelthorne's wife, which also resulted in the events of what happened later on. In addition, he had Venus render Snake amnesiac in to help him obtain the Lucinda File with the evidence of the massacre, and had Venus execute him simply because he outlived his usefulness.
Done to here. I unlocked the sandbox right after you said it was locked, Karjam, so hopefully that mystery is solved.
Randomtroper89, can you be sure to always include links to the page in question? Thanks!
That was the amazing part. Things just keep going.Karjam, looks as though your finger slipped a bit when commenting out Crucified Hero Shot and David Versus Goliath for the sandbox version of Literature.The Bible; they're "commented out" with a double "T" rather than a double percent sign.
For America Saves the Day in the Live Action Television folder:
- In Helix, this is lampshaded by Dr. Sarah Jordan when she points out to their army liaison that neither the CDC nor USAMRIID should have jurisdiction over an outbreak at an Arctic Biosystems research facility, as its in international territory. Major Balleseros handwaves this away, noting they've been allowed temporary access as the first to receive a distress call.
Please change
- Loved (or worshipped) by the writers
to
- Loved (or worshipped) by the writers (Creator's Favorite)
For Video Games And Visual Novels, please replace the Max Payne entry with(I changed the third game's entry a bit and unspoilered some of each):
- The Big Bad of the third game is Victor Branco, the The Man Behind the Man who recruits Max himself as a fall guy for his criminal enterprises. In his plan to seize control of the family fortune and garner sympathy for elections, Victor has his own brothers murdered, one by being burned alive, and Max soon discovers the extent of his evil: He runs a secret ring where the poor of Brazil are kidnapped, held hostage and are harvested of all their organs for the black market organ trade.
edited 13th Jan '14 7:26:15 AM by ACW
Ew, that's terrible. The spoiler tags make me want to shoot myself.
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"reub 2000, you probably should have mentioned that Creepy Catholicism was made NRLEP at the YKTTW stage, the only reason to bypass the "Real Life section maintenance" thread
where NRLEP listings are discussed.
(For a while there was a burst of people making fiat declarations of NRLEP status, which is why I now preface my edit requests with a mention of the NRLEP discussion thread.)
All your safe space are belong to Trump![]()
You think THAT'S bad, you should have seen the original ones. Though Horne can PROBABLY be unspoiled (game's been out for over a decade); Branco not so much though.
EDIT: Where exactly at YKTTW was Creepy Catholicism made NRLEP?
edited 13th Jan '14 11:04:46 AM by ACW
The No Real Life Examples Please link seems to be included in the first draft of Creepy Catholicism.
There is a link to heroes on The Vampire Diaries. Should link to the series instead.
Fuhrmann, es kostet dir noch dein Leben^^ Yes, I know, I said that. I was just suggesting you mention it in the edit request post to make it clear that it was NRLEP at the YKTTW stage.
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Anyway, please add to No Real Life Examples, Please! the following entry, as per "Real Life section maintenance" thread in Long Term Projects forum:
* MarryThemAll: Real life examples are {{Shoehorn|edExample}}ing to fit them to a narrative device.
All your safe space are belong to Trump- Raiders of the Lost Parody: Disaster Movie, like most films made by them, contains a parody of Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull.
Could you replace the current entry for Lotso Huggin'Bear with this entry on the YMMV.Toy Story page?
edited 14th Jan '14 3:22:59 PM by AustinDR
To clarify, replace Lotso's writeup on Monster.Disney with the writeup on YMMV.Toy Story 3.
Please hold off on the Payne ones; I'm working with the CM thread to fix that.
EDIT: Also, for Video Games And Visual Novels, Zoltun and Adria are part of Diablo III.
edited 14th Jan '14 4:55:22 PM by ACW
Monster.Star Wars replace Cronal with Exister's writeup here
Add to Monster.Live Action TV
- Set mere months after the rampage of Jack The Ripper, Ripper Street shows that he wasn't the only monster in Whitechapel.
- Sir Arthur Donaldson had an ambition: to be a pioneer in the history of film. Specifically snuff films. To this end, he abducts women and drugs them, before having himself filmed raping and strangling them before mutilating them so they will appear to be new victims of Jack.
- Claxton, a Glory Hound whose only issue with the Ripper is that he took fame that Claxton felt was deservedly his. To fix this, Claxton began to poison his victims in a manner to simulate an outbreak of cholera. Killing many people, Claxton bragged when caught that he'd more than tripled The Ripper's total
- Sir Victor Silver, a noble who hid a remarkably evil mind behind a pleasant demeanor had a business model of luring women to his family's estate before drugging them and having them shipped to South America for the sex trade. Silver was adept at gaining their trust before shackling them to a bed for days before drugging them and locking them in small boxes to be sent overseas.
Add Junko
to Monster.Anime And Manga
Same page, replace the Black Butler entries with these
- Angela Blanc/Ash Landers in the latter half in the first season. While they try to present themselves as well intentioned, in reality they're nothing more than Holier Than Thou hypocrites who enjoy the suffering of those they view inferior to themselves. Angela being a dominatrix going after everything that can move including a transforming dog, fusing Ciel's parent's together as an abomination they'd later use to try and murder him, toss their loyal doll minion like trash and faithfully turning little girls into dolls, trying kill the cultists who had been loyal to them once they served their purpose, manipulating the queen into planning a world war, only to leave her to die and sacrificing the population of London to create a barrier bridge against demons and empowering themselves. No wonder Sebastian calls them fallen.
- The former head of House Trancy, a Dirty Old Man with a creepy taste for little boys. He refers to his boys as 'dolls' and subjected them to beatings and abuse while holding them as sex slaves for his pleasure. We see Lord Trancy have multiple boys brought to him at one point, his intention to pick the 'best' out so he can sexually abuse them. In the first episode of Season 2, we see Alois Trancy, his adopted son, naked near Lord Trancy sleeping in bed, with a cold, and vacant look in his eyes.
Replace Cutey Honey villain Jewel Princess with this:
- Jewel Princess from the updated series of Cutey Honey is a Psycho Lesbian who runs a jewelry shop as a front for entrapping beautiful girls. When she finds one she wants, she has her brought to the basement, stripped naked and subjected to a gas that results in the girl being turned into a statue, so she can preserve their beauty and keep them around for her to admire. She even loves their screams of despair and pain as they're converted into statutes. She forces the captive heroine Honey to watch as she does this to an innocent girl, and once Honey bests her in a fight, Jewel Princess takes a serum to change into a monstrous creature to simply rend Honey apart that way.
Replace the Fate/Zero entry entry with
- Ryunosuke Uryu of Fate/Zero, the master of the equally sadistic and twisted Caster Gilles de Rais. Initially a serial killer who targeted women, children and whole families, Ryunosuke opted to read a magic spell on a whim which led to him summoning the fiendish Caster who began to help his master learn how to really hurt others. Ryunosuke would capture children for himself and Caster to kill together and help his servant torture others. Ryunosuke found nothing so amazing as watching Caster kill others in inventive ways. While Caster once cared about Jeanne D'Arc, Ryunosuke's only interest was seeing how much depravity he could get away with. His last moments of life were even spent admiring his own blood and marveling how beautiful it was.
Replace the Fushigi Yugi examples with
- Miboshi is a Creepy Child appearing member of the warriors of Seiryu who is truly far older than he appears. Miboshi's MO is to possess his victims and turn them against their friends, forcing the friends to experience the pain of betrayal and delighting at the agony he causes to his host by forcing them to harm the ones they love the most.
- The Emperor of Kutou acts as the commander of the Big Bad Nakago until Nakago opts to overthrow him. We soon learn the reason that the villainous Nakago always hated him. A sleazy Smug Snake who sent his armies on campaigns of extermination and conquest, Nakago saw his people slaughtered and his beloved mother being raped by the Emperor's soldiers before his powers awakened and he accidentlly killed her and the soldiers. The Emperor decided to use Nakago as a tool from then on, knowing his potential. Captivated by his beauty, he opted to keep him as a Sex Slave as well despite Nakago being only a little boy.
Replace Hougen from Ginga Densetsu Weed with these
- Hougen from Ginga Densetsu Weed has the distinction of being one of the most vile and cruel canines imaginable. When he encounters the warriors known as the Heroes of Ohu for their defeat of the evil bear Akakabuto, Hougen threatens them by using the life of a young female dog named Reika and has the heroes beaten near to death. Hougen shows no respect for heroism and even defiles the corpses of the dead, even using his minions as shields and sending them as cannon fodder against enemies he could defeat himself. He's also prone to brutal temper tantrums where he slaughters anything around him, loyal or not. Hougen is also a serial rapist and doesn't take well to any children around. At one point, he forced another minion to murder a bunch of abandoned puppies simply because he thought they meant the minion had been hiding females from him.
- Shogun, the axe wielding baboon and ruler of the monkeys and apes. Shogun is a vicious tyrant who will kill anyone and anything that gets in his way, or even if it's simply in the area to vent frustration on. what sets Shogun apart is his eating habits. When he's hungry, he simply wrenches a baby out of the arms of its mother and takes it to his private lair to devour.
Replace Prince Braunschweig's entry with:
- Prince Braunschweig, heir of the Goldenbaum dynasty. Braunschweig acts swiftly to crush any hint of rebellion from any subordinate and shows no remorse at all at any deaths that occur. He continues the Goldenbaum dynasty's despicable policies of eugenics and oppress to the populace, but his crowning achievement of villainy is when protests against the Goldenbaums occur at the colony world of Westerland. Braunschweig simply decides to kill every inhabitant on the world with a nuclear strike. Ironically this has the opposite effect he intended and simply makes the Anti-Hero Reinhard's campaign against him more popular.
And make Emperor Rudolf under him so it's all only one block for the entry.
Add
- From ''Gamaran...
- Ryugo Daimaru, heir of the Daimaru, is obsessed with the ascendance of the family- or more accurately himself. To that end, Ryugo has cultivated the talent of his mentally unhinged younger brother Sakon who is known as the strongest in the school's history. When Sakon was young, Ryugo threw him into a basement with multiple other prisoners with the promise only one man would be allowed to leave after the others were dead. When a berserk Sakon emerged, Ryugo directed him to kill their father who he determined as worthless. Ryugo uses Sakon's violent side to destroy all those who stand in his way and when Gamaran fights Sakon, Ryugo rants how Sakon isn't allowed to lose because of how perfect Ryugo made him.
- Jinsuke Kurogane, the mightiest sword in the world and the most wicked. Jinsuke joined the Ogame school, only to later give its leaders the ultimatum of joining with him to conquer the world or die if they refused. When they showed their reluctance, Jinsuke slaughtered the entire school with his followers, including the friends of his son Gama in front of Gama's eyes before defeating Gama as well and only sparing him on a whim. Jinsuke shows no hesitance in an attempt to kill Gama later and no remorse in killing his own students should he decide to. He manipulates the Washitzu clan by holding the mother of its new Daimyo captive with her life on the line and builds a power base where he plans to create a world where he, the strongest rules, and any who oppose him fall to his sword. In the end, when asked if he has any regrets, he declares he has not a single one.
- Mario Kujo, initially Jinsuke right hand man who is in reality a spy for the Shogunate. Kujo aided Jinsuke in the slaughter of the Ogame school, not for the sake of his sword skills but for his eventual political power. To that end, Kujo has no compunction destroying sword schools and anyone else while also betraying his own Muho school to be exterminated by the Shogunate. He also, unlike nearly every other fighter, has no compunction cheating in his fights by having guards ambush his victims. In a series defined by honor in battle, Kujo sticks out by having none and viewing all around him as nothing more than stepping stones to his rise to glory. Even his initially stoicism is an act as he displays nothing more than glee at killing the brother of one opponent in front of him.
Cut Yukino from Yakitate Japan from that page and cut Barb from the Monster.Yu Gi Oh page. Cut Bryan Hawk from Hajime No Ippo as well.
Exister's post here
, please replace and add the entries from Dollhouse and Lost to the Monster.Live Action TV page
Add to Monster.Film The Rock features Anti-Villain General Hummel attempting to extort money to distribute to families of soldiers whose deaths went unrecognized and without compensation. However, when it becomes apparent Hummel is bluffing, his chief subordinates Captains Frye and Darrow are mostly certainly not. The two act swift to remove Hummel from command and eventually kill him while proceeding with the plan to attack San Francisco. Even when it becomes apparent they've lost, Frye and Darrow try to send a rocket at the city armed with poison gas to kill every civilian they possibly can and attempt to kill the 81 tourists they have locked in Alcatraz to ensure a lack of witnesses. Their whole motivation for this is as Darrow sums up himself: "I want my fucking money!"
Same page add these two
- The Serial Killer known only as J from The Korean film Confession To Murder begins the film by killing an innocent woman and then slashing the face of The Hero Detective Choi before making his escape and ending his killing spree of nearly a dozen women for 15 years. When another man claims credit for J's murders after the statute of limitations expires, J's ego is unable to bear it, so he releases a video showing a murder of Choi's fiancee where he taunted her by having her listening to Choi's voice over the phone before he killed her. J reveals she was pregnant at the time of her death from his raping her and thought it'd spare her. Only for J to reveal he hated children more than anything. When he is exposed, J tries to beg for forgiveness only to reveal he is mimicking Choi's fiancee's last words before trying to make his escape and kill who gets in his way.
- Ramon Cota, the Big Bad of the Chuck Norris film Delta Force 2: The Colombian Connection is a powerful drug dealer who pushes cocaine into the US. We see he uses slave labor on his estate where he has a woman who tends to her baby beaten. When her husband tries to help her, Cota guts him personally and orders the baby killed and the woman sent to his bed. When he's caught and extradited to the US, Cota makes his escape but not before he murders the wife and 13 year old brother of the agent responsible for his capture. When the man goes for Cota himself in revenge, Cota tortures him to death and later captures another agent who comes calling. He tries to execute him by placing him in a homemade gas chamber. When Cota's estate is under siege by the rest of Delta Force, he kills the woman he abused at the beginning of the film when she comes for revenge and lets himself be taken alive before bragging he'll increase the flow of cocaine and murder the hero's family, and that there's nothing he can't buy thanks to cocaine. Just before his rope tethering him to the helicopter snaps.
For Monster.Literature make it so the Goosebumps books entries have the complete monsters from TV Rulez post here
and add Karl to Monster.Live Action TV
Cut the Dark Dragon from Monster.Disney and from Monster.Video Games And Visual Novels we need to cut the entire Monster.Grand Theft Auto page and move only Donald Love to the main video game page with Exister's entry here
edited 14th Jan '14 11:01:53 PM by Lightysnake
Also, for Donald Love, please use my slight edits:
- Wrap a Moral Event Horizon around "worst crime".
- Remove "3-D era" from the GTA pothole.
- Dig a Greed pothole around "fill his pockets;" dig a It's All About Me pothole for "glorify his ego".
Max Payne: please use the entries HERE
with the indentation fixed and a Kill It with Fire wrapped around "by being burned alive" and a Big Bad around Nicole Horne for the first one.
edited 15th Jan '14 4:02:57 AM by ACW

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