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Donomni Kick Food to the Kirb! from Florida Since: Nov, 2021
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#226: May 10th 2010 at 10:19:55 AM

We could have Aizen create a sort of soul receptical/storage unit for storing lost souls to go towards the King's Key instead of him trying to do the whole shebang in one go.

The whole SS arc would be Aizen's testing phase to see if it works.

Predictably, it works.

EDIT: As for targeting Rukia specifically, we could make Byakuya be skeptical of Aizen's methods as a captain and/or be a bit nosy regarding Urahara's involvement with Aizen, which in turn gives Aizen an excuse to be a dick towards him via Rukia.

edited 10th May '10 10:24:39 AM by Donomni

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#227: May 10th 2010 at 12:15:55 PM

I like it. That would explain his defection, he's out to collect lost souls, thus explaining the need to find him.

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#228: May 10th 2010 at 3:05:54 PM

Or perhaps instead of Urahara sealing the Hogyoku in Rukia, he sealed another object needed to make the King's Key? Or maybe rework the Hogyoku to be needed to make the King's Key. Make it so that Aizen would have to store the souls in that object.

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#229: May 10th 2010 at 3:39:41 PM

The Hogyoku is a massive Soul Jar!

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#230: May 10th 2010 at 5:55:21 PM

Here's the outline I've made so far. Tell me what you guys think.

Soul Society Arc Outline:

  • Ikkaku, Yumichika, and Jirōbō are dispatched to investigate the menos incident and the spike of spirit energy in Karakura Town. They encounter Ichigo, Chad, and Uryu respectively.
    • Ichigo vs. Ikkaku: Ichigo wins.
    • Chad vs. Yumichika: Chad wins.
    • Uryu vs. Jirobo: Uryu wins, killing Jirobo.
  • After being spared, Ikkaku and Yumichika regroup in the Soul Society, informing their captains of what happened.
  • Hitsugaya, Rangiku, Byakuya, and Renji are sent to retrieve Rukia and subdue Ichigo's group.
    • Ichigo and Kon (Ichigo's Body) vs. Byakuya and Renji (Unreleased): Stalemate
    • Uryu and Chad vs. Hitsugaya and Rangiku (Unreleased): Stalemate
  • Hitsugaya and Byakuya are given permission to use Shikai.
    • Ichigo and Kon vs. Byakuya and Renji: Team Byakuya wins, punctures Ichigo's Soul Sleeve, and takes Rukia and Kon (Capsule Form) back to Soul Society for execution.
    • Uryu and Chad vs. Hitsugaya and Rangiku: Team Hitsugaya wins.
  • Ichigo and crew go to train with Urahara and Yourichi. Ichigo learns Shikai.
  • While waiting for the portal to be opened to the Soul Society, Grand Fisher appears, though something seems off.
    • Ichigo vs. Grand Fisher: Ichigo shows off his release, killing Grand Fisher easily.
  • Grand Fisher smiles as the Gates of Hell open and he is impaled and pulled in, hinting at some ulterior motive. Ichigo doesn't care and is relieved to see his mother's killer dead.
  • A few days later Urahara opens the portal to the Soul Society. Ichigo, Uryu, Chad, Orihime, and Yourichi (Cat Form) travel to the Soul Society.
  • Upon arrival they attempt to enter the main city, only to be booted out by Gin.
  • After soliciting Kukaku's help they team up with Ganju and form a Five Man band, in similar events to the canon.
    • Hero: Ichigo
    • Lancer: Ganju
    • Smart Guy: Uryu
    • Big Guy: Chad
    • The Chick: Orihime
    • Team Mentor: Yourichi
  • Upon entering, the group is scattered 3 ways:
    • Ichigo, Ganju
    • Chad, Orihime, Uryu
    • Yourichi
  • Team Ichigo runs into Ikkaku and Yumichika, who challenge them to a rematch using their released forms.
    • Ichigo vs. Ikkaku: Ichigo wins again.
    • Ganju vs. Yumichika: Ganju wins.
  • Deeper within the city, tension runs high as Captain Aizen is found dead. Captain Ichimaru is one of the prime suspects.
  • Momo reacts rashly, lashing out as Gin, only to be stopped by Kira. They fight briefly, being stopped by Hitsugaya who has them both incarcerated.
  • Moving deeper into the city, Team Uryu encounters Mayuri and Nemu. Uryu urges Chad to take Orihime and run. Chad reluctantly agrees.
    • Uryu vs. Mayuri and Nemu: Uryu wins, though only after expending almost all of his power as a Quincy.
  • Making their way towards Rukia's detention center, Renji appears before Team Ichigo looking for a rematch.
    • Ichigo vs. Renji: Ichigo wins, though barely.
  • Byakuya has Renji incarcerated for being defeated.
  • Upon hearing the news of a Captain and a Lt's defeat, Yamamoto sics Kenpachi, his dragon, after Ichigo.
  • Kenpachi finds them as they almost make it to Rukia's cell. Ichigo tells Ganju to go on and rescue Rukia.
    • Ichigo vs. Kenpachi: Ichigo puts up a good fight, but is ultimately defeated.
  • Kenpachi is stopped from killing them by Captain Unohana, who has been ordered to take the Ryoka in for questioning.
  • Uryu makes his way towards Rukia's cell, only to be captured by Gin.
  • Lt. Hanatarō is the one in charge of healing and interrogating them. Upon learning of their mission, Hanatarō reveals that Rukia is a friend of his and he has been petitioning his captain to try and stop the execution along with Captain Hitsugaya. Deciding to take matters into his own hands, he frees Ichigo and Ganju, as well as accompanying to the repentance cell.
  • Renji, Izuru, and Momo also break out of prison, though separately.
  • Chad and Orihime are confronted by Hitsugaya and Rangiku as they make their way towards the research facility to rescue Kon.
    • Chad and Orihime vs. Hitsugaya and Rangiku: Team Hitsugaya is winning, but are forced to retreat due to news of mass break outs.
  • Chad and Orihime proceed into the Research Facility and manage to retrieve Kon's capsule form. It turns out Mayuri was experimenting on it before it was supposed to be destroyed.
  • Chad and Orihime notice a large suit of armor in the corner and insert Kon into it.
  • Team Ichigo arrives at the repentance cell, only to be stopped by Byakuya. Byakuya releases, making short work of Ganju and Hanatarō.
  • Unohana shows up in time to prevent Ganju and her Lt's death.
  • Yourichi appears, whisking Ichigo away to a safe place.

Tell me if you think it's too convulted, there's something you don't like, etc., etc....

edited 10th May '10 6:00:39 PM by Beta Ray

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#231: May 10th 2010 at 8:05:35 PM

I like the Kon armor. I would also like to raise my previous idea of Kon being used as a bug for the good guys.

edited 10th May '10 8:05:47 PM by KSPAM

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#232: May 11th 2010 at 3:55:31 AM

^^Is Kon's armour just going to be randomly there or is it something Mayuri designed specifically for him? It'd probably be a good idea not to make it too much like FMA. Want me to do some sketches?

Your script seems fine to me, I have nothing to add.

Grahf Since: Jan, 2001
#233: May 11th 2010 at 2:18:58 PM

One question: is Hanataro going to be as much of a buttmonkey in this one, or is his character going to be reworked a little?

I don't know why, but he way he is in canon just bugs me.

silver2195 Since: Jan, 2001
#234: May 11th 2010 at 3:02:55 PM

punctures Ichigo's Soul Sleeve

This is the only bit I don't like. The Left for Dead thing requires Byakuya to be very Genre Blind. However, Ichigo running away instead would be out of character for him. Can anyone else think of a way for Ichigo to not die during this fight?

edited 11th May '10 3:03:05 PM by silver2195

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#235: May 11th 2010 at 3:11:54 PM

Urahara pulls him out. Think about it. He needs him to secure Rukia, thus securing the Hogyoku from SS and Aizen, one of his primary objectives. Just as Byakuya is about to kill Ichigo, Urahara swoops in and drags a kicking and screaming Ichigo back to Urahara Shoten.

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#236: May 11th 2010 at 7:18:25 PM

^ Works for me.

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#237: May 11th 2010 at 7:37:29 PM

This is a really long term question, but I'm wondering if Ichigo will ever learn Bankai in this version of the continuity?

If so, will it be mostly the same, or will it be different?

Thing is, seeing the Ichigo vs Ulquiorra fight animated, I thought that if they clashed in this version again, then it could be the perfect opportunity for him to get his Bankai at a more legitimate time and for a somewhat more legitimate reason, that being that it's what he needs to evenly match Ulquiorra's second release rather than going uberhollow.

Any thoughts on this?

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#238: May 11th 2010 at 7:44:12 PM

Ulquiorra won't have a second release, and neither will anyone else.

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#239: May 11th 2010 at 8:43:41 PM

Yeah, we're cutting out Bankai entirely, so Ichigo's never going to learn it; it's a non-existent skill in this version.

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#240: May 11th 2010 at 9:06:52 PM

Oh, okay. I was wondering if Bankai still existed, just as something that everyone and their dog doesn't have.

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#241: May 11th 2010 at 10:54:49 PM

nope. "the same but more" is still pretty useless.

Is there anyone who's bankai would actually make more sense than their shikai? Tosen, yes, but he's not in this.

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#242: May 12th 2010 at 6:34:32 AM

Mayuri's I guess but we already said that can just be one of his experiments.

Ikkaku's maybe, although I guess the sansetsu-spear thingy is more managable.

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#243: May 12th 2010 at 3:03:19 PM

To be honest I'm liking my outline less and less the more I look at it. I might take it all the way back to the drawing board.

About the Kon Armor: It's a special battlesuit developed by Soul Society R&D designed to augment a Soul Reaper's natural abilities and provide extra protection to the wearer. More specifically, it's a prototype, which explains why everyone doesn't have one. And Kon most likely won't be able to keep the armor, sticking him with the lion doll body.

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#244: May 12th 2010 at 3:07:28 PM

^I liked it.

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#245: May 12th 2010 at 3:51:23 PM

I'm going to clean it up at least, looks majorly convulted to me to be honest.

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#246: May 12th 2010 at 4:08:57 PM

Convoluted is good, it adds to the conspiracy feel if there's a shitload of things going down at once.

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#247: May 12th 2010 at 9:25:37 PM

Hello, Lunatique here. I'm a real-life friend of K*spam's. He's the one who told you he knew someone who could help out illustrating every once and a while. Well, that's ME! *Evil laughter* evil grinwink Unfortunately, my computer crashed about a week ago, and I'm still in the process of re-installing my tablet stuff. So, for now, I'm just going to use the school scanner to upload some of my spantabulous, lurvely hand-drawn arts. I don't know when this will get done, but they'll probably be up by next monday on my DA if all goes well. tongue So, yeah... Just reply if you want me.

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#248: May 13th 2010 at 12:23:45 AM

I haven't read the new stuff yet, but I will when finals are over.

Welcome, Lunatique!

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#249: May 13th 2010 at 5:54:19 PM

Always nice to see a fresh face, Lunatique! I'm ecstatic that you'll be helping us out with this project.

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#250: May 17th 2010 at 8:29:17 PM

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