Bumping...
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanSkimmed to the relevant section: it's a detailed rape scene between a 14 year old and an 18 year old. Definitely played for titillation, not horror.
Yikes. Exterminatus.
Started on the first one, decided I was in no world going to read 130k words of that. Skimmed forward using chapter warnings, main character is somewhere in the 14-15 range and is creepily hit on by a presumably older character (in a way that the narrative portrays as sexy/good/love interest material) when she's 13-14. Haven't gotten to the sex scenes but Orbiting saying they're played for titilation is in line with the way the rest of the narrative is written.
It's also just... really poorly written but that's not a P5 issue, but it still violates P5 policy.
Cut.
Edited by 4maskwolf on Aug 25th 2022 at 2:23:42 AM
Per the above reasons, I agree with a cut.
TRS Queue | Works That Require Cleanup of Complaining | Troper WallCut
Current Project: Incorruptible Pure PurenessCut
"Leftover items still have value!"Cut.
Victor of HGS S320 | "There's rosemary, that's for remembrance. Pray you, love, remember."Not clearly played for horror, so cut away.
...It's weird having so many websites and no way to properly display now, lol.Cut. The fanfic's not played for horror.
Edited by callmeamuffin on Aug 26th 2022 at 3:36:16 AM
TV Tropes accidentally referenced me in relationship status???/j | My Troper WallJust for double checking purposes, where is the scene in question.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanChapter 53 in Gentle, Decayed Hands
Aye, that looks like an explicit sex scene without mitigating factors.
Looks like we have consensus to cut. Locking, cutlisting & cutting, noting on discussion and content policy page, locking.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
The flag here for VillainousLove was sent with the rationale