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rumetzen Since: Jan, 2010
#176: Jul 30th 2010 at 10:54:13 AM

The second one. Definitely the second one

edited 30th Jul '10 10:54:26 AM by rumetzen

EnglishIvy Since: Aug, 2011
#177: Jul 30th 2010 at 12:10:27 PM

Either the first or second one.

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DonZabu Since: May, 2009
#179: Jul 30th 2010 at 3:08:04 PM

I think he gets it, guys.

"Wax on, wax off..." "But Mr. Miyagi, I don't see how this is helping me do Karate..." "Pubic hair is weakness, Daniel-san!"
krrackknut Not here, look elsewhere from The empty Aether. Since: Jan, 2001
Not here, look elsewhere
#180: Jul 30th 2010 at 7:56:51 PM

Write whatever you want, but I'll only read the second one.

An useless name, a forsaken connection.
kashchei Since: May, 2010
#181: Jul 31st 2010 at 6:01:47 PM

Definitely the second one.

And better than thy stroke; why swellest thou then?
Nohbody "In distress", my ass. from Somewhere in Dixie Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
"In distress", my ass.
#182: Jul 31st 2010 at 8:38:03 PM

I think he gets the idea, guys.

Let's not turn this into some lame Overly Long Gag, shall we? tongue

All your safe space are belong to Trump
elemcee Since: Dec, 2009
#183: Jul 31st 2010 at 8:47:36 PM

Hmm, sounds like fun. Count me in!waii

landstander God Of Cake from Somewhere else Since: Jan, 2001
God Of Cake
#184: Jul 31st 2010 at 9:11:46 PM

Skipped some posts, but definitely signing up now!

Emperor Wu liked cake, but not exploding cake!
FurikoMaru Reverse the Curse from The Arrogant Wasteland Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: He makes me feel like I have a heart
DonZabu Since: May, 2009
#186: Jul 31st 2010 at 9:57:30 PM

This shit just got real.

"Wax on, wax off..." "But Mr. Miyagi, I don't see how this is helping me do Karate..." "Pubic hair is weakness, Daniel-san!"
rumetzen Since: Jan, 2010
#187: Jul 31st 2010 at 9:59:48 PM

I wonder who'll have the more fucked up story, Landy or EI.

feotakahari Fuzzy Orange Doomsayer from Looking out at the city Since: Sep, 2009
Fuzzy Orange Doomsayer
#188: Jul 31st 2010 at 10:57:54 PM

El's will be more outlandish, but Landy's will be more likely to make the reader hate himself or herself for being aroused.

That's Feo . . . He's a disgusting, mysoginistic, paedophilic asshat who moonlights as a shitty writer—Something Awful
Aondeug Oh My from Our Dreams Since: Jun, 2009
Oh My
#190: Aug 1st 2010 at 1:12:44 PM

Fuck yes Landy is writing!

If someone wants to accuse us of eating coconut shells, then that's their business. We know what we're doing. - Achaan Chah
Landstander God Of Cake from Somewhere else Since: Jan, 2001
God Of Cake
#191: Aug 1st 2010 at 1:14:40 PM

*laughs evilly*

Also, by what exactly would constitute plot as opposed to PWP? I don't have any big fancy sci-fi/fantasy scenarios here, they're all real world but these scenarios are ridiculously drawn out and probably not going to be covered by just one sex scene. I've never written a long actual story before, but I do have plenty upon plenty of role-playing chat logs with many scenarios to choose from to flesh out...

Also, I'm presuming there's no age limit, right? Cause what I have in mind is a distressed 13 year old girl who goes to her favorite teacher's house after her classmates play a mean prank on her, and he convinces himself that the best way to comfort her and make her feel pretty and special is to take her virginity. The dub-con would be pretty mild.

I'd also make it from the older man's point of view. Its a kind of hybrid of sweetness and fucked-upedness. Or should I go darker?

edited 1st Aug '10 1:33:12 PM by Landstander

Emperor Wu liked cake, but not exploding cake!
DonZabu Since: May, 2009
#192: Aug 1st 2010 at 1:28:09 PM

My synopsis:

Vampy psychic girl swaps bodies with a guy via sex, and while he has a pretty good time of it being in this hot girl's body, she's not getting the best of the experience. So she constantly tries and fails to have sex with him again in order to revert things back to normal.

What do you think? Plot or PWP?

edited 1st Aug '10 1:28:30 PM by DonZabu

"Wax on, wax off..." "But Mr. Miyagi, I don't see how this is helping me do Karate..." "Pubic hair is weakness, Daniel-san!"
ZeroPotential Since: Jun, 2010
#193: Aug 1st 2010 at 1:32:47 PM

Hmm, sounds like a good enough reason to have sex and it's certainly an interesting premise.

To my mind, porn with plot is like reading a story and not minding that a sex scene somehow popped up in the middle. In a sense, this means that the story wasn't written soley for the sex but instead was written to support the sex and not make everythign else feel intrusive. When you got people ctrl=f their way straight to the sex and have them not care about the plot whatsoever, then to me that counts as just a plotless excuse just to get jiggy with it. There shoudl be a good story there to not only justify the smut but also to help enhance it.

But hey, maybe I'm just being a tad too analytical over here.......

Landstander God Of Cake from Somewhere else Since: Jan, 2001
God Of Cake
#194: Aug 1st 2010 at 1:34:47 PM

^^ Sounds intriguing. Is the reason she keeps failing is cause he keeps rejecting her, not wanting to fuck himself, or are there other reasons?

Emperor Wu liked cake, but not exploding cake!
DonZabu Since: May, 2009
#195: Aug 1st 2010 at 1:44:25 PM

^ Well this guy isn't the most studly guy in the world, so that certainly complicates things for the girl trapped in this clod's body. Not to mention how nobody else in these people's proximity knows about the switch, so that complicates things as well.

edited 1st Aug '10 1:45:20 PM by DonZabu

"Wax on, wax off..." "But Mr. Miyagi, I don't see how this is helping me do Karate..." "Pubic hair is weakness, Daniel-san!"
kashchei Since: May, 2010
#196: Aug 1st 2010 at 2:00:48 PM

"Also, I'm presuming there's no age limit, right? Cause what I have in mind is a distressed 13 year old girl who goes to her favorite teacher's house after her classmates play a mean prank on her, and he convinces himself that the best way to comfort her and make her feel pretty and special is to take her virginity. The dub-con would be pretty mild."

This is just me, but pedophilia is an instant turn-off regardless of how smutty you make it.

And better than thy stroke; why swellest thou then?
Landstander God Of Cake from Somewhere else Since: Jan, 2001
God Of Cake
#197: Aug 1st 2010 at 2:05:51 PM

Wouldn't it technically be ephebophilia if she's 13 and pubescent?

Emperor Wu liked cake, but not exploding cake!
kashchei Since: May, 2010
#198: Aug 1st 2010 at 2:49:03 PM

Technically, sure, but the thought of an adult allowing him/herself to have sex with anyone under the age of 17-ish is distrubing to me. It's got less to do with the young un's physical appearance and more with the idea that the adult should know better and realize that they cannot possibly be on a level playing field in terms of maturity, desire, and need.

edited 1st Aug '10 2:50:36 PM by kashchei

And better than thy stroke; why swellest thou then?
Landstander God Of Cake from Somewhere else Since: Jan, 2001
God Of Cake
#199: Aug 1st 2010 at 2:52:35 PM

Alas that is precisely what turns me on about it, and plays heavily into to Victorian scenarios I mentioned in the Fetishes thread.

Emperor Wu liked cake, but not exploding cake!
kashchei Since: May, 2010
#200: Aug 1st 2010 at 2:54:59 PM

I'm really all for non-con and power play fiction, and 90% of erotica I consume is rape-based, but underage is the one thing where I draw the line.

Unless it's more of a older-benefactor-teaches-innocent-teen-Jenny sorta scenario, cause that could be pretty hot.

And better than thy stroke; why swellest thou then?

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