I think he gets the idea, guys.
Let's not turn this into some lame Overly Long Gag, shall we?
El's will be more outlandish, but Landy's will be more likely to make the reader hate himself or herself for being aroused.
That's Feo . . . He's a disgusting, mysoginistic, paedophilic asshat who moonlights as a shitty writer—Something Awful*laughs evilly*
Also, by what exactly would constitute plot as opposed to PWP? I don't have any big fancy sci-fi/fantasy scenarios here, they're all real world but these scenarios are ridiculously drawn out and probably not going to be covered by just one sex scene. I've never written a long actual story before, but I do have plenty upon plenty of role-playing chat logs with many scenarios to choose from to flesh out...
Also, I'm presuming there's no age limit, right? Cause what I have in mind is a distressed 13 year old girl who goes to her favorite teacher's house after her classmates play a mean prank on her, and he convinces himself that the best way to comfort her and make her feel pretty and special is to take her virginity. The dub-con would be pretty mild.
I'd also make it from the older man's point of view. Its a kind of hybrid of sweetness and fucked-upedness. Or should I go darker?
edited 1st Aug '10 1:33:12 PM by Landstander
Emperor Wu liked cake, but not exploding cake!My synopsis:
Vampy psychic girl swaps bodies with a guy via sex, and while he has a pretty good time of it being in this hot girl's body, she's not getting the best of the experience. So she constantly tries and fails to have sex with him again in order to revert things back to normal.
What do you think? Plot or PWP?
edited 1st Aug '10 1:28:30 PM by DonZabu
"Wax on, wax off..." "But Mr. Miyagi, I don't see how this is helping me do Karate..." "Pubic hair is weakness, Daniel-san!"Hmm, sounds like a good enough reason to have sex and it's certainly an interesting premise.
To my mind, porn with plot is like reading a story and not minding that a sex scene somehow popped up in the middle. In a sense, this means that the story wasn't written soley for the sex but instead was written to support the sex and not make everythign else feel intrusive. When you got people ctrl=f their way straight to the sex and have them not care about the plot whatsoever, then to me that counts as just a plotless excuse just to get jiggy with it. There shoudl be a good story there to not only justify the smut but also to help enhance it.
But hey, maybe I'm just being a tad too analytical over here.......
^ Well this guy isn't the most studly guy in the world, so that certainly complicates things for the girl trapped in this clod's body. Not to mention how nobody else in these people's proximity knows about the switch, so that complicates things as well.
edited 1st Aug '10 1:45:20 PM by DonZabu
"Wax on, wax off..." "But Mr. Miyagi, I don't see how this is helping me do Karate..." "Pubic hair is weakness, Daniel-san!""Also, I'm presuming there's no age limit, right? Cause what I have in mind is a distressed 13 year old girl who goes to her favorite teacher's house after her classmates play a mean prank on her, and he convinces himself that the best way to comfort her and make her feel pretty and special is to take her virginity. The dub-con would be pretty mild."
This is just me, but pedophilia is an instant turn-off regardless of how smutty you make it.
And better than thy stroke; why swellest thou then?Technically, sure, but the thought of an adult allowing him/herself to have sex with anyone under the age of 17-ish is distrubing to me. It's got less to do with the young un's physical appearance and more with the idea that the adult should know better and realize that they cannot possibly be on a level playing field in terms of maturity, desire, and need.
edited 1st Aug '10 2:50:36 PM by kashchei
And better than thy stroke; why swellest thou then?I'm really all for non-con and power play fiction, and 90% of erotica I consume is rape-based, but underage is the one thing where I draw the line.
Unless it's more of a older-benefactor-teaches-innocent-teen-Jenny sorta scenario, cause that could be pretty hot.
And better than thy stroke; why swellest thou then?

The second one. Definitely the second one
edited 30th Jul '10 10:54:26 AM by rumetzen