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He beat up a teenaged kennel worker while releasing fox-hunting hounds and gets into a fight with people over his refusal to have a flea bath and kill the fleas.
- Be Careful What You Wish For:
- The contestants all hoped the reality show would give them fame and public exposure, only to get more than they could have imagined (and in unflattering ways) as a murder victim and murder suspects.
- Layla, the first person eliminated, finds herself being treated as a joke due to how unflattering the show made her.
- Because of the show, Woggle is publicly exposed as being wanted for beating up a teenaged girl during an animal rights protest, and is beaten up by a group of people who recognize him.
- Cannot Convey Sarcasm: Inspector Colebridge can spend a whole paragraph being "deeply sarcastic" during The Summation without the hundreds of millions of people watching the televised event getting it. A good example of this is when he describes a hypothetical scenario where one of the eliminated reality show contestants tunnels back inside to commit a murder out of revenge.
The studio erupted. All around the world the press lines jammed. So Woggle had done it after all, the evil kicker of teenage girls had surpassed even his previous levels of brutality. "Of course it wasn't Woggle!" said Colebridge impatiently. "Good heavens, if that highly distinctive fellow had popped up through the carpet I think we would have noticed, don't you?"
- Contempt Crossfire: However much the other contestants may dislike each other, one thing that often unites them is their hostility towards Woggle, due to his horrible hygiene and pride at taking Social Security payments while being an anti-government anarchist (which rankles the others due to how their taxes help fund Social Security).
- Convicted by Public Opinion: David and Sally are both suspected of the murder by the public and suffer a lot of harassment and stigma for it, but neither is guilty.
- Cultured Badass: Inspector Coleridge is an insightful investigator who had to regularly subdue rowdy drunks during his days as a beat cop. He is also a lay minister, gardens, subscribed to a distinguished poetry and non-fiction publisher, and is an amateur Shakespeare actor who shows some amazing showmanship during The Summation. That said, he can be petulant at times in his dislike and incomprehension of modern pop culture.
- Granola Girl: Layla is an intellectual (at least in her own mind) hippie with several liberal opinions.
- Hidden Depths: Not all of the contestants are quite the shallow twenty-something jerks they present themselves as. Apprentice Chef Jazz, who is mostly one of Those Two Guys with slightly racist lout Garry, makes some smart points about consumerism while discussing toothbrushes in one scene and wants the fame the show is bringing him to help jumpstart a career as a comedian (which is part of why he is always making smart aleck comments).
- I Was Young and Needed the Money: Struggling pretentious actor David pays his bills by appearing in hardcore porno flicks and is terrified that this getting out could ruin him, which is implied to indeed happen after the information leaks.
- Screw This, I'm Outta Here!: David and Moon try to quit the reality show after the first eviction after the insufferable Woggle pulls an Elimination Houdini (the public votes on who leaves) and they realize Geraldine is editing the footage to slant events in his favor for the crowd for entertainment value. Geraldine (who needs every contestant to stay until the end of the show) convinces them to stay by hinting that something will happen to Woggle soon and then tips off the police that he is wanted for assault.
- Unspoken Plan Guarantee : The Inspector clearly (and correctly) has a suspect in his sights well before The Summation but never says who. Even when he comes up with a Bluffing the Murderer plan (about fifteen pages before naming the killer), none of the details are given beyond how the plan involves wigs. Things work perfectly and the murderer is Caught on Tape confessing after the bluff (pretending to have a videotape of the killer preparing for the murder when really it is a disguised Constable Trisha) makes it seem like the police have evidence.
- Villainous Lineage. Sally worries that she may be homicidal and have blackouts because her mother killed her father. She is innocent and the police note insanity is far more likely to be inherited by the child when both parents are insane and not just one. Since both of Geraldine’s parents were mentally ill, Coleridge briefly notes that she could be too, although her murder scheme seems to be motivated by pure Greed.
- Monica Shackleford, the leading lady of the School Play in season 3, only makes two appearances but delights a lot of fans for being one of Mike's sweeter love interests and doing such a good job playing the role of Emily in Our Town.
- The Un-Reveal: In Lion Down, the pickup truck of one suspect is registered to a woman named Cassie Martinez, who is obviously not the male driver. Teddy and the others speculate what kind of relationship Cassie and the driver may have (siblings, spouses, boyfriend-girlfriend, or just platonic friends), but this is never revealed, even after they find the person who was driving the pickup on the night of the crime.
Edited by Melinda on Mar 21st 2023 at 3:39:17 AM
Undertale: YMMV
- Common Knowledge: It's widely believed in the Undertale fandom, that Papyrus hates puns to the point of them being his Berserk Button. The truth is that Papyrus can enjoy puns and he even makes some himself in the game. Papyrus only specifically dislikes Sans's jokes, but since Sans is contantly annoying Papyrus with his jokes, it looks like Papyrus has a problem with jokes, especially puns.
Helluva Boss S 2 E 3 "Exes and Oohs"
- Curb-Stomp Cushion: Athough one of the shark goons do manage to get a hit on Millie during the forced wedding, she still ends up slaughtering them all without much trouble. By the end of it, both Crimson and Chaz are cowering in fear when Millie walks up to reclaim Moxxie.
- Non-Standard Character Design: While Crimson's goons all have unique individual design, they are all either shark demons or hybrid between shark demons and other types of demons, except for one single imp. He does not fair any better than the other mooks despite being non-standard to them though.
- Person As Noun: When they are about to interrupt Moxxie's forced wedding, Blitzo tells Millie their gonna do "a Shrek".
Leonard (comic book)
- The Dog Bites Back: Occasionally, Basile is so fed up by Leonard's invention hurting him that he decides to beat up Leonard in retaliation.
- Double Knockout: Leonard and Albert decides to finish their rivalry fight with a gun duel, but they both shoot each others, then it's revealed that they were actually robots controlled by the real Leonard and Albert.
- Early Installment Character-Design Difference:
- In early comics, Leonard's beard was much smaller than usual. It quickly got its iconic lenght.
- Basile had a bigger upper-jaw, slounched his head and had a dopey face.
- Raoul looked like a more realistic cat.
- Bernadete originally didn't wear clothes. she later dresses like a human.
- Early-Installment Weirdness:
- In early comics, Raoul would occasionally chases after Bernadette in a Tom and Jerry-like fashion. This was dropped and they were established as two friends who like to snark at Basile's Chew Toy status.
- It took a moment for the disciple to finally get a name: Basile.
- Everyone Chasing You: Several short stories end with the villagers chasing after Leonard and Basile because Leonard's invention ended up being too destructive.
- Exact Words: After Basile complains about pushing a car and a boat all around the world, Leonard promises he won't need to push the car anymore. Cue Basile pulling the car.
- Fingore: Out all of Basile's body parts, his fingers tends to be the ones that get hurt the most.
- Generation Xerox: Leonard and Basile's prehistoric ancestors were also an inventor and a disciple respectively.
- If You Die, I Call Your Stuff: In "Goblin Mode Brain Rot," Badger shows off the Care Package mechanic. Badger and his friends will casually steal the other's Packages when they die, especially if they just respawned on the other side of the map.
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...with the only hint about what they are is that they might be Greek gods.
It is all a mystery...
...an Anubis statue...real Anubis, it's hard to blame him.
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^ "arch" is not correct English, but I don't know what you meant to write.
@Melinda
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...being "deeply sarcastic" during the The Summation...
...and pride at taking Social Security payments...fund Social Security).
...suffer a lot of harassment and stigma for it, but neither is guilty.
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...but never says who or even...
...father. She is innocent...could be too, although...
...only makes two appearances but delights a lot of fans...
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@jOSEFdelaville
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...Blitzo tells Millie they're gonna do "a Shrek".
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- Unico and Corn from the Osamu Tezuka manga of the same name is a popular ship with fans of Tezuka's works. This is due to Corn (Unico's sister) having a very close relationship with her brother after he reunites with his family and siblings in the manga. Japanese fanart and official merchandise by Tezuka Productions frequently depict her flirting with Unico.
Unico YMMV
- Ho Yay: Despite their relationship having a rocky start. Unico and Beezle/Akuma-kun's relationship with each other in both the manga and 1981 film shows that their interactions can almost border on innocently homoerotic at times.:
- Unico crying as he's silently watching Beezle sitting alone after initially refusing Beezle to borrow his horn as an offer on becoming his "True Friend". Beezle on the other hand gets very frustrated over his feelings with Unico by telling himself "I hate him, but can't stop thinking about him!" due to deeply believing his role as "The Demon of Solitude".
- Beezle's idea of "playing" is by roughhousing with Unico, such as Unico not enjoying being treated like a grown horse due to his weight and getting whipped by Beezle's tail. He ends up hurting himself after falling off Unico's back. When Unico notices Beezle crying, he runs up to quickly calm him down by licking him, much to Beezle's dismay where responds by punching him.
- After transforming into "The Mighty Unicorn" to save Beezle from drowning after returning his horn so Unico will regain his powers and not die in the ocean. He's shocked and confused when noticing Unico's different appearance. After he returns back to normal, Unico explains to him that he has the ability to transform into "The Mighty Unicorn" if someone truly loves him. He then tells Beezle "I guess you love me Beezle." while giving him a warm smile before rewarding Beezle his own horn due to his selfless behavior.
- Incest Yay Shipping: Corn (Unico's sister) is super into him when the protagonist reunites with his family and siblings in the manga. This hasn't gone unnoticed by both Western and Japanese fans of the series where Unico and Corn are shipped together. This even extends to Japanese merchandise by Tezuka Productions where she's seen flirting with him.
- Launcher of a Thousand Ships: Due to his desire of spreading happiness, encouraging kindness, an endless craving of love, and an overall adorable personality and appearance. Unico would usually get shipped by all the friends he's made in the manga and other anime appearances (whether their male or female) by Japanese fans of the series.
- Toy Ship: In Japan and the West, Unico is mainly paired with Chao/Chow, Corn, and Piro/Marusu. The manga and 1981 film adaptation even has moments of Ship Tease between Unico and Chao (Katy in the English Dub) which borders on Interspecies Romance. "Unico x Chao" and "Unico x Corn" are especially popular with longtime Tezuka fans in Japan.
Edited by brb1006 on Mar 21st 2023 at 9:59:58 AM
@Arivne got it.
Megatron
- Adaptational Heroism: During the final arc of the series, he becomes an ally and sacrifices himself to stop Unicron.
- Adaptational Jerkass: Despite being one of the least evil incarnations in Armada, he is still this in his relationship with Starscream. Despite Starscream's loyalty, Megatron is downright abusive toward him. It takes Starscream's Heroic Sacrifice for Megatron to show him any respect.
Starscream
- Adaptational Personality Change: Starscream in past series is an ambitious, cowardly Smug Snake. In Armada, Starscream is the opposite: stubborn, impulsive, and loyal unless pushed past the breaking point.
- Adaptational Nice Guy: This Starscream lacks any of the ambition that typically defines the character and loyally follows Megatron, only turning on him when he's had enough of his abuse.
- Adaptational Sympathy: In Armada. Starscream, in most continuities, is an Asshole Victim when punished by Megatron. As Starscream is a loyal follower in this series and is instead beaten for his failures and disobedience, his relationship with Megatron has the air of a son trying to earn the approval of his abusive father.
Thrust
- Adaptational Villainy: While Thrust is a Decepticon, this series kicks up his villainy with him siding with Unicron over Megatron. He is even worse in the English dub, where he does not care if Unicron destroys Cybertron.
The Sorcerer's Apprentice
- Be Careful What You Wish For: He sees his teacher's power with his Magic Hat and tries using it himself. His lack of training almost kills him, reminding him why his master doesn't allow him to use the hat.
Yen Sid
- Brought Down to Badass: While his Magic Hat does contain power, the end of the segment shows he still has power without it when he removes the overflowing water, something his student couldn't do even with the hat.
- Dinosaur! (1985) has a pair of Deinonychus instead of Velociraptors. While the movie shows their size accurately, their depiction has most of the typical inaccuracies due to dated information. It does, however, avoid the inaccuracy of them killing prey much larger than themselves, and they are instead seen hunting a Struthiomimus, a dinosaur reliant on speed for defense. Despite this, they are still presented as menacing predators. The narration also states the Deinonychus may have been pack hunters, not saying it is certain, while the interactions of the pair after they make their kill imply they are mates who hunt together.
- Kinnikuman has a tag team known as the Hell Missionaries, consisting of Neptuneman and Big the Budo. Neptuneman is made out to be the duo's leader for most of the arc. Toward the end, it turns out that Big the Budo is Neptuneman's mentor Neptune King in disguise, and the team's real leader. As Neptune King despises showing his face, he wears a mask to hide his identity.
- Project G.e.e.K.e.R.'s final episode sees the heroes sent into a Bad Future where the Big Bad Moloch succeeds in his plan to take control of Geeker and uses him to conquer the galaxy. When they destroy Moloch, he turns out to be a robot duplicate. The real Moloch had actually taken control of Geeker by switching bodies with him and masqueraded as his own underling.
The Venture Brothers The Guild
The Sovereign
- Inexplicably Awesome: Very little is known about him besides his shapeshifting powers. The start of season 6 reveals he got his powers thanks to a deal with The Investors.
- Mysterious Past: He has shapeshifting powers, and that is all that is known about him. All that is known about his past is that he made a deal with the Investors to get his current position.
- No Name Given: Eventually, it revealed he is not Davie Bowie. His real name is never revealed.
- Shape Shifter Default Form: Eventually, it is revealed he is not David Bowie. He just uses his appearance for his default form.
The Investors
- Diabolus ex Nihilo: Almost nothing is known about who or what these men are or where they came from. Their names imply they are Greek Gods, but this is never confirmed.
- For the Evulz: The only motive they appear to have. They will commit horrific acts of villainy and cut deals with the intent of betraying their clients for no reason other than because they can.
- Horrifying the Horror: The Sovereign is terrified of these men.
- Inexplicably Awesome: Almost nothing is known about them other than they are evil and extremely powerful, with the only hint about what they are is that they might be Greek gods.
- Invincible Villain: As the Investors can become intangible at will, there is no chance of hurting, let alone stopping them, in most of their appearances. Even when The Sovereign tries to kill them by ensuring they are on Gargantua-2, despite his careful planning, his scheme is shown to have no chance of success as The Investors did not need to set foot on the station. It took Dr. Killinger to stop them for good.
- New Powers as the Plot Demands: The Investors mostly display intangibility and levitation powers. On occasion, they also use Voluntary Shapeshifting. In their final appearance, they also show psychic powers and are revealed to have given The Sovereign his powers. Given they are the same type of being as Killinger, there is likely little limit on what they can do.
- Nothing Is Scarier: Who are these men? What are they, and what is the full extent of their powers? It is all a mystery, and it all makes them more terrifying. They don't even talk in most of their appearances. They simply commit acts of evil.
- Not So Invincible Afterall: After appearing unstoppable throughout all of their appearances, they are finally killed by Dr. Killinger in All This and Gargantua-2.
- Smug Super: When Brock and Shore-Leave both try to fight the Investors, the trio walks away without fighting back, not considering either man a threat since neither has any way to hurt them. The start of season 6 reveals they consider all humanity inferior to them.
Dr. Z
- Surrounded by Idiots: His view of his henchmen during his younger years. Given that they saw an Anubis statue moving the floor because a dog carried it and thought it was the real Anubis, it's hard to blame him.
Red Death
- The Comically Serious: He can switch from being a kindly gentleman to a terrifying Large Ham on a dime, leading to a hilarious contrast within the same scene.
- Kick the Dog: Reveals to Brock that Sphinx was not really behind the "Movie Night" on Gargantua-1 and rubs it in his face that OSI fighting the Pyramid Wars was removing the Guild's competition, just to be a jerk.
Dr. Henry Killinger
- Blue-and-Orange Morality: Henry Killinger operates on a strange sense of ethics where he does help certain people and is willing to kill others in pursuit of helping his clients. However, he will not harm his clients or do something against their wishes. One way or another, the people he helps are better off thanks to him.
- Sheep in Sheep's Clothing: Downplayed. Killinger helping the Monarch and Rusty leads to others suspecting he has some ulterior motive or is planning a double cross. In both cases, he is helping with no strings attached. However, in Rusty's case, Killinger did still murder union leaders who were causing Rusty trouble and nearly set Rusty up to arch his brother. Even then, when Rusty rejects the idea, Killinger accepts his decision. Killinger is willing to kill to help his clients, but only if it is people his clients want dead in the first place.
^"arch" in The Venture Brothers is a term used for when a supervillain acts as someone's Arch-Enemy. In this context, Rusty would have set as the Arch-Enemy for his brother, which may have caused Rusty to kill him.
The Master
- All-Powerful Bystander: Whatever he is, his power far outstrips that of Orpheus, who can, at times, be a Deus ex Machina. However, he prefers not to participate in matters on Earth unless he feels it warrants his attention.
- Ambiguously Human: He takes a new form every time he appears, and his original form, if he has one, is never seen, so it is up in the air if he is simply a powerful human magician or something else entirely.
Brown Widow
- Lightning Bruiser: He has all the speed and agility one would expect from Spider-Man, and he is very strong, once overpowering Brock.
hololive English - Generation Two -Council-
Folder->Ceres Fauna
- On March 21, 2023, Fauna found out that for her birthday, the Saplings got Creator/Jane Perry, the voice of Diana Burnwood in Hitman, to read an order for Agent 47 to kill Faun in character
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Squeaky
Squeaky is a mouse who is the main protagonist.
- Badass Adorable: She's a cute mouse, and she always fight zombie animals.
- Beware the Nice Ones: While Squeakle is friendly, she would take aggressions to the zombie animals who harmed her friends.
- Nice Girl: She's always kind, friendly and gentle.
- Nice Mice: She's a mouse, and she's very kind and friendly.
- Pink Means Feminine: She's a pink mouse, and she's the main protagonist.
- Shrinking Violet: She can be shy and timid at times.
- Socially Awkward Hero: She's the main protagonist, and she's very shy and timid.
- Trade Mark Favorite Food: Her favorite food is cheese.
Barky
Barky is a dimwitted yet friendly dog who is Squeaky's best friend.
- Blue Is Heroic: He's a blue dog, and he's the deuteragonist.
- Comedic Hero: He's a deuteragonist, and he's very silly.
- Dogs Are Dumb: He's a dog, and he's very dimwitted.
- Kindhearted Simpleton: He may not be a smart dog, but he's very kind and friendly.
- Nice Guy: He's always kind and friendly, just like Squeaky.
- Trade Mark Favorite Food: His favorite food is meat.
Meowy
Meowy is a female cat who strict yet cares about Squeaky and Barky.
- Anti-Hero: She's less heroic than Squeaky and Barky.
- Cats Are Mean: Downplayed. She's a cat, but not evil, she's just strict and cold.
- Dark and Troubled Past: When she was a kitten, she was abused and abandoned by her parents.
- Dark Is Not Evil: She has black fur, and she's the deuteragonist.
- Jerk with a Heart of Gold: Despite the fact that Meowy is strict and cold, she actually cares about Squeakle and Meowy.
- Trade Mark Favorite Food: Her favorite drink is milk, and her favorite food is fish.
- Used to Be a Sweet Kid: She used to be sweet and kind when she was a kitten until her parents abused and abandoned her.
Pac-Man and the Ghostly Adventures
- Frame-Up: In "President Possessed", Dr. Buttocks, who has possessed President Spheros, has him lie by saying that Pac-Man and his two friends attacked him, thus causing them to become public enemies.
- Even Evil Has Standards: In the end of "Adam Ruins Games", the Devil shopkeeper refuses to steal Adam's soul after finding him annoying.
- Eye Scream: In the episode "French Foreign Legion vs. Gurkhas", one of the test dummies gets shot in the eye with a MAS-36.
@ A Series of Unfortunate Events (2017)
- While Babs and Jerome being panicky doormats who can’t decide which way to run to escape the fire is Played for Laughs, their potential demise is still sad given how they have constantly been nice to the Baudelaire siblings and (unlike everyone else) believe them about the fire right away. The pained looks on the Baudelaire siblings faces as the elevator doors close make it even worse.
- Rooting for the Empire: The kidnappers are far less trigger happy than the average "Die Hard" on an X film, only wanting to rob the somewhat annoying Robert, being willing to leave him some money, being relatively tolerant of the hostages being difficult, and only turning truly dangerous after Tom and Darcy kill some of them by accident. Their secret leaders, Sean and Harriet, are also two of the more consistently funny characters and can be impressively competent. Between this and how some fans find Tom and Darcy’s relationship troubles annoying, it can be tempting at times to hope that the villains will succeed and escape.
- Uncertain Doom: The Captain, Ludmilla, Alicia, Darius, Uli, the woman complaining about sails, the preteen passenger, and various others onboard the ship are never seen after it sinks. While they probably died, it is possible they simply washed ashore somewhere else, remained adrift at sea, or were kidnapped for ransom by the pirates.
Edited by Melinda on Mar 22nd 2023 at 10:12:59 AM
- Just Here for Godzilla: Many are only interested in Run for the surprising number of playable characters present, including those who aren't typically playable in a mainline Mario platformer, such as Princess Peach (who is only playable in Super Mario Bros. 2 and Super Mario 3D World and is a Damsel in Distress otherwise), Yoshi (who is usually a Power-Up Mount outside of Super Mario 64 DS), and even Princess Daisy (who hasn't been in a mainline Mario title since Super Mario Land and is only playable in spin-offs).
- They Changed It, Now It Sucks!: While the 2D animation is agreed to be fantastic by most, some fans are disappointed that Shake It tones down the exaggerated Deranged Animation from past games. Even Wario's original creator, Hiroji Kiyotake, has criticized
this aspect, finding Wario himself to be too "on-model" compared to past games.
YMMV.Sonic The Hedgehog
- One True Pairing: While these types of pairs are rare in the fandom due to how divided the fandom is, there are nevertheless a couple of ships that are widely accepted and embraced by the fandom with little conflict:
- Vector/Vanilla is widely regarded to be a cute ship by the fandom, with many finding Vector's abrasive but kind personality and Vanilla's softhearted motherly nature to make for a great pairing, on top of finding their few interactions to be adorable. It helps that this is one of the few ships that has official Ship Tease by SEGA.
- Tangle/Whisper from the IDW comics quickly became one thanks to their good chemistry, adorable interactions, and the loads of Les Yay and Homoerotic Subtext between them. It helps that they have little shipping competition (Tangle/Blaze and Silver/Whisper were popular early on, but both have since mostly fallen out of fashion within the fandom in favor of Whispangle) and are one of the few ships to be given Ship Tease by Sega.
Edited by Tylerbear12 on Mar 22nd 2023 at 10:48:39 AM
For FanPreferredCouple.Live Action TV
- In the 2022 adaptation of Darna Narda is canonically paired with Brian, but in the fandom it is more popular to pair Regina. This is mainly because of Narda and Regina's quick friendship, many feeling they have better chemistry then Narda and Brian, and the two being destined enemies.
Any corrections?
Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup threadS-T -"Joel Sliver" is supposed to be Joel Silver.
That One Achievement - There is a "mutliple" that should be multiple. And would like to add to the Adventure folder:
- Return to Monkey Island has 'Free Wally', revolving around releasing Butt-Monkey Wally once he's found in shackles at the start of Part 5. But that requires the player to already have the key in the first place. Which means having zoomed into those shackles (the locksmith builds a key through a serial number found inside the lock) as you were on LeChuck's ship in either part 2 or 3, as the shackles vanish once Wally is captured in part 4 - hence, to get the key once Wally is found chained, the player must load a previous save and play through a lot of the game again. To make matters worse, the lock you have to check does not show up as an item you can interact with when holding down the "Show all items" button.
@brb1006
...almost border on innocently homoerotic at times. <- no colon
...refusing to let Beezle borrow his horn as an offer on...Beezle, <- comma on the other hand, <- comma gets...feelings toward Unico...
...such as treating Unico like a grown horse despite Unico not enjoying this due...and Unico getting...tail. Beezle ends...dismay, <- comma and Beezle responds...
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Corn (Unico's sister) is super into him when he reunites...series, <- comma where...
...(whether they're male or female) by Japanese fans of the series.
...the Devil shopkeeper refuses to steal Adam's soul after finding him annoying.
^ Is the Devil shopkeeper the actual The Devil (aka Satan, Lucifer, etc.) or is he just "a devil" (one of The Devil's demonic servants)? It it's just "a devil", then the word Devil should be not capitalized.
...there are nevertheless <- no comma a couple of ships...
Vector/Vanilla...and Vanilla's softhearted...nature to make for...
...and the heap-loads of...
^ You can use either "heaps" or "loads". "heap-loads" isn't a word.
@igordebraga
However, that requires...place. This means...part 4. <- period Hence, to...
^ You had a run-on sentence
connected together by a dash.

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