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Make sense since this is the only part I will edit in the Porting Disaster: Xbox Series X|S section. Otherwise Porting Disaster / Multi-Platform: Consoles: Far Cry 3 and YMMV / The Callisto Protocol: Porting Disaster are already edited by others, showed my incompetence of editing the research players struggled with these games (and Unreal Engine 4 on PC).
Edited by GamingGuy1802 on Feb 16th 2023 at 1:57:31 PM
Okay so here's my CM write-up to be checked for spelling and grammar errors
- Castle: "Scared To Death": Nigel Malloy, the Grim Reaper, tortured numerous women to death by branding them. Malloy lets a mentally unstable man, David Collier, take the fall for his first murder, resulting in David killing himself, while Malloy goes on to torture and kill five more women, manipulating his mentally ill brother, Leopold, into helping him commit these heinous crimes. When Malloy is found and arrested, Malloy declares that more people will die after he’s been executed, which proves to be true when David’s daughter, Amanda, kills two people as a result of Malloy’s actions.
Edited by G-Editor on Feb 16th 2023 at 2:03:12 PM
My sandbox of EPs and other stuff- Saved from Development Hell: A film adaptation based on Tetris had been attempted by numerous film studios for years, only for all of them to fall into Development Hell due to the property being a Hard-to-Adapt Work. That is, until this film, which makes the smart move to make it less about the game itself and more about the game's real life history.
- And You Thought It Would Fail: My Neighbor Totoro was initially rejected by Tokuma Shoten (the former owner of Ghilbi) and by various distributors several times, as they believed that there was no audience for a Slice of Life film with little conflict set in modern rural Japan and starring two little girls and a furry giant. In fact, the reason why Totoro was paired up with Grave of the Fireflies at all was to try and use Grave of the Fireflies as a way to help boost Totoro's success. Unfortunately, it seemed at first like the distributors were right, as My Neighbor Totoro initially did poorly in Japanese theaters at the time and had the lowest opening of any Ghibli film. However, they would be proven wrong a couple of years later, as the film would become Vindicated by Cable thanks to it airing on Nippon Television, which gave the film the boost it needed and for it to become one of Ghibli's most successful and beloved films today.
Edited by Tylerbear12 on Feb 17th 2023 at 4:53:59 AM
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@ The Incredible Hulk Ensemble Dark Horse
- Gamma mutated rattlesnake Rattilore only appears in one issue, but is well-liked for leading a tribe of animals affected by the gamma rays in cool ways, and for beign a kind but wise leader who knows to Opt Out of the conflict between Hulk and the military to save his tribe from bloodshed.
@ Jeremiah While fans appreciate how the show ends on a resolved and optimistic note, they often think the story could have kept on going for a ways longer.
@ Jeremiah Jeremiah, Kurdy, Markus, and Smith get the lion’s share of focus in the show and they are well-developed and generally cool to watch, but writers also excel at making supporting and minor characters stir up interest and/or empathy in the hearts of fans.
- Erin's Jerk with a Heart of Gold twin sister Lauren and untrusting yet not unfeeling black militant leader Kwame do a lot to make "Moon in Gemini" interesting, and both quickly had fans speculating about whether they would return.
- One of the last flashbacks in "Firewall" shows Markus taking charge of lots of children of the original Cheyenne/Thunder Mountain personnel in the aftermath of the Big Death, but during the main series, most if not all of Markus's named allies are people who started out elsewhere and were brought to the facility later. Their reactions to their old protector turned enemy Major Quantrell returning in "Firewall" and Markus hiding Meaghan's existence from them are never shown. Furthermore, some of these kids were young enough for Markus to have a Promotion to Parent role in their upbringing, providing another reason to lament how they only have background roles in the present.
- Kwame, the leader of the Crescent Shadows black militant group, is a wary but ultimately reasonable potential recruit to The Alliance in his debut but, like so many similar characters, never reappears. It would have been especially interesting seeing him take a role in the Western Alliance and work to find a balance between doing the right thing for everyone and preserving the culture and values of his community while joining a government with white and interracial groups.
- Some people are surprised about how Erin's estranged twin sister Lauren doesn't show up in season 2 after she and Erin had some neat interactions together and began to reconcile after a long estrangement in Lauren's debut and how the emergence of Thunder Mountain and its alliance-building would give Lauren more reasons to seek out Erin again and more information about how to find her.
@ Jeremiah The show has a lot of world-building, a lot of strong guest stars, and a definite sense that there is a lot going on outside of what the (relatively small) core cast see.
- Theo, who begins the show as a hater enemy of Thunder Mountain who slowly becomes their ally, spends most of season one in hiding, fighting a largely offscreen fight against several equally ruthless figures for control of her town. She ultimately wins, despite being the underdog for much of the time between episodes 1 and 10.
- The two-part finale of season 1 and the two-part pilot of season 2 reveal that Devon, Ezekiel, and Lee Chen have spent most of season 1 trying to keep the Valhalla Sector from bringing back the Big Death or coming to Thunder Mountain, with their efforts rarely being shown and initially seeming Ambiguously Evil.
- Throughout season 2, there is a resistance movement against the Army of Daniel operating inside their capital, with notable figures including Action Girl Rachel and Defector from Decadence Karl. However, the group only appears twice, when circumstances bring them into direct contact with Jeremiah and his friends.
- In "The Face in the Mirror", defecting scientist Dr. Frederick Monash encounters a group of resourceful nomads who have been living in the woods near Daniel while avoiding and loathing his government.
@ Jeremiah
However, given that Medicine Joe was a child during the collapse of civilization, it's possible that. as a result of his limited education, he genuinely believes that his products can do all of that.
- One-Steve Limit:
- Simon is the name of both the Thunder Mountain Scout who causes Jeremiah and Kurdy to go to the base in the pilot and Jeremiah's Mysterious Protector for season one, although the latter man is known as Ezekiel until flashbacks from "Rites of Passage" reveal his real name. He started calling himself Ezekiel after reading The Book of Ezekiel in The Bible during a traumatic time.
- Scientist vs. Soldier:
- In the flashbacks in "Firewall", Major Quantrell, the final military leader of Thunder Mountain, and Markus Alexander's CDC scientist father come over blows regarding their attitudes toward what to do in the face of a global pandemic. Quantrell wants to lock down Cheynne Mountain and try to ride things out without making any effort to combat the Big Death. Dr. Alexander is convinced that this won't keep the plague out and wants to let his infected wife inside under quarantine conditions to keep working on a potential cure that he doubts he can find otherwise (not that his chances of finding it anyway are super good).
- Wasteland Warlord:
- The Remnant forces of Valhalla Sector badly want to be this trope in season 1 and plan to use thier cache of weapons to conquer the country, if not the world. However, their fear of being exposed to the Big Death makes them hesitant to leave their survival bunker.
- Throughout season 2, Daniel is mentioned as a Shadow Dictator who can inspire cult-like devotion even as he sends hundreds if not thousands of people to labor camps and has his army attack towns in negotiation with his rivals. Daniel turns out to be an Invented Individual, but the true leaders of "his" army, the Founders, are fine with crushing anyone who stands between them and control of the country.
- In "Rites of Passage", flashbacks show Ezekiel's Doomed by Canon father Paul and Devon in a state of depression after their creation has been used to kill billions. Paul talks about how his son still doesn't understand why they can't leave the Raven Rock bunker and go outdoors. Then, Paul commits suicide to try and stop the virus from being recreated and buy time for his son and Jeremiah's parents to escape. Jeremiah's mother ends up falling to her death in front of the other two, the escape attempt fails, and the camera lingers on “The Book of Ezekiel” in the Bible Paul's son was reading, emphasizing he will grow up to be the fairly unhappy man who calls himself Ezekiel.
- Super Fuzz: There is a big enough age gap between clever and bright-eyed rookie protagonist Dave and his cranky partner Willy Dunlop that Dave is dating Willy's niece.
- Darkness at Noon: Rubashov's chillingly pragmatic old friend Ivanov and the young zealot Gletkin are a Well-Intentioned Extremist Secret Police version who embody the old and new generations of Soviets as they try to make Rubashov confess to crimes that he is sometimes only guilty of From a Certain Point of View.
- In the pre-World War II novel Garden Of Beasts, one point of view character is a middle-aged anti-Nazi Berlin police investigator who teaches his earnest, twenty-something partner about deductive reasoning while engaging in a Sympathetic Inspector Antagonist pursuit of the hero. It turns out that the younger man is a Nazi party member who just wants the best training available before joining the Gestapo. This is one of the last straws for the older detective, who is disillusioned at learning the scope of the Nazis’ early crimes, and he decides to leave police work and Germany behind and emigrate with his family.
- Beware the Silly Ones: Her Villains Out Shopping tendencies and angry outbursts are often a source of comedy. However, she sends some pretty tough hitmen after the protagonists on occasion, can fight back fiercely when cornered, and maintains a strong position in a male-dominated criminal culture due to having lots of well-earning illegal rackets and being willing to kill rival gangsters who don't take her seriously.
- Ensemble Dark Horse:
- Adorkable Giant Mook The Russian is only in a couple of story arcs, but rivals Punisher's Arch-Enemy Jigsaw in iconic status.
- Gadgeteer Genius Tragic Villain and Van Helsing Hate Crimes practitioner Robert Hellsgaard is still remembered fairly positively despite the alienating nature of the Franken-Castle arc he debuted in.
- Rosalie Carbone, The Queenpin, only stuck around for a few years in the nineties but has a decent number of fans for being Laughably Evil at times but having some Beware the Silly Ones moments, sometimes coming across as a A Lighter Shade of Black in comparison to Frank's other rogues, and being the source of frequent Evil Is Sexy moments. Being (loosely) adapted into the Marvel Cinematic Universe has also raised her profile.
- Carlos Cruz only appears in a handful of nineties issues where Microchip tries to get him to replace Frank, but his costume, fighting skills, and nuanced character get him a fair amount of fans.
- Evil Is Sexy:
- Angela, a member of a Knight Templar group that spends a lot of time manipulating Punisher, has some Sexy Shirt Switch and Toplessness from the Back scenes.
- Stephanie Gerard, the leader of the Exchange syndicate, is an antagonist Chess Master (albeit a pragmatic one) whose makeup and striking features are sometimes emphasized, Depending on the Artist.
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Warcraft: Characters (Warcraft 1 armies)
- Color-Coded Armies: By default, human units are colored blue, while orc units are colored red. In rare cases of mirror battles, both colors will be used by the same race.
Spyro the Dragon: Character (Moneybags)
- Inconsistent Dub: He was originally renamed "Gros-Sous" (literally "Big-Cash") in the French games' translation. The Reignited Trilogy changes his French name to "Richard".
- The Cat, from the Le Chat comics, literally has "The" as his first name.
Tintin: YMMV
- Memetic Mutation: The comics' covers are a huge source of parodies. The most parodied cover is the one from Explorers on the Moon, originally titled On a marché sur la lune (We walked on the moon) whose title is a source of parody on its own right.
Creatures: Trivia
- Promoted Fangirl: Lis Morris used to be a Creatures fan who ended up working for Cyberlife/Creatures Labs, the company behind the games.
Edited by jOSEFdelaville on Feb 17th 2023 at 12:33:18 PM
For https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/EnsembleDarkhorse/Pokemon
under the Ruby & Sapphire Anime section:
- For being a Canon Foreigner that only appeared in two episodes, Team Magma's Brodie is insanely popular. This is thanks to him successfully pulling the wool over the heroes, outlasting the organization he worked for, and only accepting defeat on his own terms.
- Sir Aaron from Pokémon: Lucario and the Mystery of Mew has amassed a large number of fans due to his status as one of the greatest Aura Users and the implications that he's Ash's Ancestor making for prime Fan Fic fuel. He even received an Expy in the games in the form of Riley as a result of his popularity.
- Jackie Walker from Pokémon Ranger and the Temple of the Sea is widely popular for his status as The Ace and being a Hero of Another Story to the point many wish the film had been about him instead of May, as was the case in earlier drafts.
- Jessie's Dustox has enamored fans for being an Evil Counterpart to May's Beautifly, securing Jessie her first contest win, and her departure episode being considered one of the saddest epiosdes in the entire anime.
- Ash's Corphish is loved for its battle hungry nature and short-temper while managing to avoid the Can't Catch Up scenario most of Ash's pre-Greninja water-types fell under.
- James' Chimecho is very popular for its cute design, and friendly personality, adding to the Team Rocket Motto and giving attention to a species that was very elusive at the time.
- The wild Ralts Max befriended in the episode "Do I Hear a Ralts?" thanks to its strong bond with Max and The Promise by Max to come back when he's old enough to be a trainer. About 90% of fanworks that depict Max as a trainer will have Ralts be Max's first Pokémon.
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@ Jeremiah
- What Could Have Been: Theo was originally envisioned as a Drag Queen before Kim Hawthorne showed up and did an Ability over Appearance audition.
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@ Jeremiah
- The white power groups from the pilot and the various warlord factions further off that Michael mentions in the fourth episode are strangelyabsent during the conflict between the Western Alliance and Daniel in season 2, with no sign of them either fighting to stay independent or joining the Western Alliance. This is especially pronounced since a Deleted Scene from the pilot has the white power gang leader musing over his encounter with the heroes in a way that implies he will return.
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- Shinobi no Ittoki: Kido Minobe is the current Head of The Koga Clan after succeeding in killing his own brother just for being loved more than him. He covered up his crime by manipulating everyone into thinking Iga is responsible for his death so his village would be destroyed. He then steals the Iga clan's scroll to obtain infinite power to further his goals. He goes further on his plans when experimenting on his children by planting microchips in their heads just to show the entire ninja world the suffering he endured. He then plans to kill every single Ninjas so he can be the last one standing even though he doesn't like ninjas before using his robots to take over Japan.
Anything I should add or edit here such as grammar?
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@ Jeremiah Scientist vs. Soldier
- Disaster Democracy:
- Markus shared some of his decision-making authority at Thunder Mountain with an eight-member council, although they rarely appear onscreen. A Deleted Scene from the pilot says there is a council election every year, although whether this means since the original pandemic or since they started reaching adulthood is unclear.
- Et Tu, Brute?: In "Thieves Honor", Theo is caught off-guard and rattled when Sam and Keith, the head of her enforcers and technicians respectively, side with the coup against her after being her trusted companions and confidants in most of her previous scenes.
- Mole in Charge: Lee Chen, the untrusting Thunder Mountain security chief, was planted in the community as a spy by Devon, although they want to protect the community (albeit by lying to Markus and the others) rather than sabotage it.
- Scientist vs. Soldier:
- The military forces of the Valhalla Sector want to recreate the Big Death (and a vaccine to protect themselves against it) to kill all of their enemies. Devon, the original reluctant creator of the pathogen, wants no part of this and tries to undermine his leaders/captors, with flashbacks showing that several of the other scientists in the bunker felt the same way.
- Suspiciously Similar Substitute: In "The Long Road", a friendly blonde woman named Sarah who is reverently loyal to Markus handles a lot of the administrative work at Thunder Mountain (in a Deleted Scene she calls herself a liaison between Markus and the council) and greeting new arrivals. She is never seen after the pilot, with the third episode introducing regular character Erin, who resembles Sarah and had the exact same duties and attitude toward Markus as her. Their names even have a couple of the same sounds.
@ Sunnydale High
- The Quiet One: Willow says he barely talks to anyone and can privately brood over a book for forty straight minutes (she timed him).
- The Quiet One: Heidi is more quiet than her friends, often preferring to stand in the background and chuckle at their bullying out-downs.
- Necros is said to have killed two men and put two in the hospital while raiding the safehouse, but he is shown strangling a cook, knocking a butler out with a frying pan (after burning his face on a stove during a struggle) and sending three agents flying with grenades. For the later-mentioned to be accurate, one of the five must not have been injured badly enough to be hospitalized, but which one was it? Was one of the men Necros threw grenades at only knocked unconscious and not hurt more seriously? Was the strangled cook only incapacitated and not killed? It seems hard to believe the butler wouldn't require hospitalization, with his burns and a probable concussion.
- Jerkass Woobie: Israel is a hot-tempered criminal who will do almost anything to stay out of prison. However, he is deeply stressed out and conflicted about being marked for death and pressured to testify against his loyal friends and henchmen, which causes him agony even as he begins to stop protesting against that ultimatum. And this is without getting into how his own father wants to kill him for his organs.
- Contrived Coincidence: In the multiple books, key breaks in the case come when lower-ranking cops encounter witnesses or guilty suspects completely by chance while going about their daily lives and not thinking about the case.
- Non-Protagonist Resolver: Those Two Guys Kvant and Kristiansson first appear in the final chapter of the third book, where they, and not any of the main detectives encounter and arrest that book's pedophiliac killer Big Bad after recognizing him when they park near where he is isolating his next planned victim so that Kvant can pee behind some bushes.
- Who Murdered the Asshole?: As The Man Who Went Up in Smoke progresses, it becomes clear that the victim was a heroin dealer who also loved antagonizing his peers by insulting them in deeply personal ways.
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For My Ideal Academia.
- Happily Adopted: While there are some problems, Shirou is perfectly content being adopted by Yu, giving him a mother figure he never had.
- Badass Family: Of course, the Takeyama family is a badass family with Yu, who Izuku noted to be one of the best and a versatile upcoming hero even with her Gigantification Quirk, and her adopted son Shirou, who his classmates considered to be the best at fighting in all of U.A first-year students. Both of them manage to defeat the Hero Killer Stain together.
Edited by sdewap on Feb 17th 2023 at 5:23:22 PM
- Noodle Incident: When the employee charges towards Pandory’s stage, it suggests Aiden isn’t his first victim.
Edited by Tatermater12 on Feb 17th 2023 at 2:55:26 AM
- Berserk Button: After years of hearing his food insulted, David Read understandably snaps.
- What Could Have Been:
- Early concept art for the film
shows that there were originally meant to be multiple giant Totoros. However, the final film keeps it to just one. The idea would be revisited in the film's short film sequel, Mei and the Kittenbus.
- An adventure game based on the film
was originally pitched for the Super Famicom back in 1992. However, the game was immediately disliked and rejected by Hayao Miyazaki after it was pitched to him, causing it to be scrapped.note
- Early concept art for the film
- "Seinfeld" Is Unfunny: My Neighbor Totoro was a very bold film back in 1988, to the point that distributors and Tokuma Shoten were initially unconfident in the film's success, as a grounded Slice of Life animated film set in modern Japan with little conflict was a very unusual and risky idea in the then-action obsessed Japanese film industry at the time. Nowadays, while the film is still regarded as a classic, it's easy to look at the film and its simplistic plot and characters as being quaint and lacking compared to Ghibli's later films and the plethora of Slice of Life animated films that have come out since Totoro.
No Adaptations Allowed: After the disastrous reception of the video games based on Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind caused him to dislike video games as a whole, Miyazaki has forbidden his films from being adapted into video games, and he has had a history of rejecting such pitches immediately. That said, despite his distaste for video games, he doesn't seem to be against Ghibli's involvement in video games as a whole, as the studio would be involved with the art direction on Magic Pengel and the first Ni no Kuni game.
Edited by Tylerbear12 on Feb 17th 2023 at 9:56:45 AM
- In The Arthur episode "The Last Tough Customer", Molly, despite being a tough customer, is appalled when her little brother pushes a girl away from the drinking fountain.
Edited by Tatermater12 on Feb 17th 2023 at 3:48:58 AM
Apologies about the triple post
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My sandbox of EPs and other stuffGlad my CM entry has no spelling nor grammar errors. Anywho I here's my MB entries to check for any spelling and/or grammar errors.
- Jack Ryan’s Season 3:
- Luka Goncharov was a soldier of the Soviet Union who was ordered to execute a group of scientists when his superiors decided to terminate Project Sokol, with Goncharov shooting at is own soldiers when they tried stopping him. Becoming The Spymaster for the modern Russian Government, Goncharov would learn about The Coup who revived Project Sokol, where he infiltrates the coup to dismantle it from the inside. Eventually meeting Jack Ryan, Goncharov would help Ryan escape from the coup and later give Ryan information that allows Ryan to stop the coup from nuking a town, while he confronts the coup’s leader, Petr Lebenev, having the Czech authorities ambush him. When Lebenev dies, Goncharov and Ryan work together prevent war between the United States and Russia, before Goncharov gets arrest for his past crimes, accepting whatever punishment he may receive.
- Petr Lebenev was a subordinate of Luka Goncharov who attempts to stop Goncharov from killing the scientist in charge of Project Sokol. When Petr survives Goncharov’s shot, he kills a Czech citizen who rescue him before taking his name, Kovac, where Lebenev arranges things so that his daughter, Alina, would become president of the Czech Republic, using their influence, resources, and manpower, to form a coup to take over the current Russian Government. Lebenev would orchestrate the assassination of Russian Defense Minister Popov and replace him with his puppet, Alexei Petrov, and restart Project Sokol, which is revealed to be a plan to have his coup would nuke a Russian town and frame the Americans resulting a war between the two countries. Cornered only by the equally brilliant Luka Goncharov, Lebenev had arranged for his plans to continue on after his death, having his friend, Antonov, hijack the Russian ship, The Fearless, and launch missiles at an American ship in his coup’s last attempt to bring America and Russian into war.
- Castle's Season 5:
- "After Hours": Leo is a hitman hired by the O’Reily crime family to kill their enforcer, Mickey Dolan, when the latter considers leaving his criminal life. To get close to Dolan, Leo kills his best friend, Father Joel, knowing he would pursue his friend’s killer. When Castle and Beckett find Leo, he pretends to be a terrified witness to Joel’s death to avoid suspicion from the duo where he helps the two avoid Dolan’s men while biding his time for Dolan to come out himself. When Beckett learns of his charade, Leo forces Beckett to lure Castle and Dolan to lure them into his trap. When Castle and Dolan survives Leo’s ambush, Leo shows no fear when Dolan tries to kill him simply remarking that the O’Reily family with hire another person to kill Dolan.
- "Target & Hunt": Gregory Volkov is a former KGB operative and notorious Russian criminal who seeks vengeance on Jackson Hunt for killing his wife. To his end, Volkov arranges for Hunt’s daughter, Alexis Castle, to be kidnapped in New York City and brought to Paris while also kidnapping the daughter of an Egyptian magnate so the kidnapping would reach international news, luring Hunt to Paris for Volkov to kill. When Alexis’s father and Hunt’s son, Richard Castle, goes to Paris to rescue Alexis, Volkov’s scares his tracker into betraying and ambushing Richard and would later have Richard brought to his compound, where Volkov threatens to kill Richard and Alexis unless Hunt shows up.
Edited by G-Editor on Feb 18th 2023 at 2:27:32 PM
My sandbox of EPs and other stuff- I'd Tell You, but Then I'd Have to Kill You: In the episode "Kraken", Derek says this line to James while talking about treasure.
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