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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
Better? Or still needs work?
- Evil Overlord: The medieval chapter introduces (and is so named after) The Lord of Dark, a powerful Archon thought killed twenty years prior who's seemingly returned to again reign terror upon the kingdom, with the twist being, he hasn't, turns out the Lord of Dark isn't actually a singular person, but rather a role anyone can fill should they submit to their worst aspects. Oersted, the chapter hero, tragically demonstrates this by his tales end, when he declares himself the new Lord of Dark after a brutal Trauma Conga Line leads to him being consumed by a hatred for humanity, becoming the game's overarching Big Bad.
Also would this quote fit here?
Edited by Avenger09 on Sep 21st 2022 at 3:03:33 PM
For YMMV BoBoiBoy
- Complete Monster: Emperor Reramos is a Evil Overlord of Windara and a successor of Kuputeri during her absent after her fight against Retak'ka. During his reign, Reramos enslave both his soldiers and citizen, leaving the children on Windara forced to feed and defense themselves from his minion to avoid being captured. Resulting the situation in Windara get worse over one hundred year. After successfully capture Kuputeri, Reramos show that he has no problem to brainwash his own solider to fight-to-death against the heroes. Didn't want to waste any time with the heroes, Reramos force the ex-master of Tempest to give a key of a tracking crystal machine to make total obedient of his citizen or she will get mauled to death by Karantular which is cementing his overall pettiness of his Control Freak side.
- What Do You Mean, It's for Kids?: Windara Arc is consider to be a darker arc compare to the other Arc in both Original Series and Galaxy Series. This arc also show a blatant heavy topic like war, rebellion and slavery which is do by Emperor Reramos and his allies. Not to mention that BoBoiBoy Cyclone action to defeat Karantular is pretty suicidal given that he fully aware that he already weakened but still willingly to perform Heroic Sacrifice to save his allies. BoBoiBoy Cyclone transformation to BoBoiBoy Tempest is cool but also pretty gruesome since he visibly get hurt and Mind Rape due to unable to control huge amount a wind power.
^ Complete Monster examples need to be approved by the cleanup thread.
Working on: Author Appeal | Sandbox | Troper WallFor https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Trivia/TheGoldbergs
specifically the 2010s sitcom:
- Actor Leaves, Character Dies: Towards the end of Season 9, Jeff Garlin would leave the show following long-standing allegations of verbal and emotional abuse
. While a Fake Shemp would be used for the remainder of Season 9, Season 10 would open with the reveal Murray Goldberg had died during the Time Skip.
- The Alcoholic: His character in part 2 "My Summer Car" becomes an outright alcoholic that he gets blackout drunk and deep in debt.
- Determinator: He stayed up for 32+ hours straight on his "Just Cause 2," stopping only to eat and go to the bathroom.
Martin: (after 20 straight hours) I feel unwell.
- Running Gag:
- Any time a boat comes up during his "Just Cause" streams, the chat spams BOAT.
- He frequently invokes Murphy's Law in his episodes.
Martin: Did I (do the objective successfully)? No.- He uses the Vine boom when he's either making a point or very upset.
- The Scottish Trope: The "BOAT" gag was blocked across various spellings, though the Twitch chat gets around it by spamming "AQUATIC VEHICLE" for example.
- Yet Another Stupid Death: Invoked during "My Summer Car" when he pees on the TV, electrocuting himself to death.
Okay, just need insight how to word some edits for https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/ComicBook/ScoobyDooTeamUp
For WMG page:
"Scrappy Doo's role in the last issue:
The promotional/solicitation for the final issue of series ACTUALLY acknowledges that Scrappy Doo might have role in it. Will he be a good guy to work with the Gang on one last mystery? Or is he really the villain to the whole story like he?
A bit of both: Halfway into the issue, the Gang(s) all get attack by a rampaging giant Scrappy Doo... then it turns out that it was fake being controlled by bitter extras from past shows/movies, who stated that Scrappy was too annoying even for them, and then the REAL classic Scrappy Doo appears, as well as his other multiversal counterparts, and chase after the extras... all the while NOT interacting with the Gang at all."
And Considering adding a Tearjerker page
In a comic about Scooby Doo teaming up various characters, from some stand out Hanna Barbera Stars to the most Obscure DC comics characters, be it heroes or villains; Not only is Scrappy Doo only brought up in the VERY last issue, he and the Gang don't even interact AT ALL. Most of the issue itself just make Scrappy look like a villain, a stark contrast how this series portray their cameo. This REALLY cements how despised Scrappy is and how unlikely he will ever get a legit 2nd Chance."
From “Out Of Jimmy’s Head” I want to add to the WMG
@ Reacher
Resolute confirms the existence of at least two more alien species whose territory is marked in a star map the Dancers give Geary. Neither has appeared yet, but one of them borders the Rift Federation and the other is separated from human space by a cluster of unoccupied stars.
- Ambiguously Evil: Geary and his allies observe that the star map revealing the existence of the two races could be either a warning or harmless knowledge trading. It is also implied that the species bordering the Rift Federation have been destroying or intercepting their space probes, although they may not be doing so maliciously.
- Hufflepuff House: Neither species has physically appeared as of the twentieth novel. Little is known about them besides their locations on a map and that they control large amounts of territory.
- Class Princess: James mentions that when he and Sally were in second grade, everyone liked her and would have felt lucky just to touch her hand, although he never mentions if she retained her popularity as a teenager after befriending him. He initially avoided her due to fearing that his status as the class outcast would get him beaten up for talking to her. However, Sally didn't feel that way about him and got into a fight with another kid when she saw him bullying James, who admiringly recalls that she won the fight without even messing up her hair.
- Desperately Looking for a Purpose in Life: Marie spends several years wanting to grow up to be a nun. After she starts having serious doubts about that path near the end of the show, she has a period of feeling unsure of what she is good for and what she should do with her life.
- Wise Beyond Their Years: The preadolescent Sherry is the third youngest of eight siblings but is assertive, well-read and savvy about the mischief her older sisters get into. She resents not being taken seriously because of her young age and sometimes acts out as a result.
Edited by Melinda on Sep 24th 2022 at 5:43:24 AM
From page 814 @Lenore Lynchfast
^ I am not upset with you for violating Example Indentation in Trope Lists. However, you need to know that certain TV Tropes rules (such as Example Indentation in Trope Lists and Zero-Context Example) are taken very seriously on TV Tropes. If you violate them on trope or work pages after being warned not to and are reported to the moderators, they could suspend you from editing.
Edited by Arivne on Sep 22nd 2022 at 9:15:01 AM
From page 814 @March To 49
...actors who committed acts of misconduct, <- comma such as using drugs...that included them...appearances, or had their credits edited out, were only released outside the Chinese mainland, etc. And Any of...works in China will...but here are two notable examples:
^ Since actors are intelligent, they're a "who", not a "which".
In September 22, 2022, a Guangdong KTV was fined...
...visiting the Yakasuni Shrine (which reveres soldiers...who committed atrocities...on the Chinese Internet.
...bodies with one...off some stairs...same thing happen to...members when they accidentally go inside...after they fall off...
A variation in Season 2 occurs when the Roselia members switch with their...
The second example violates Example Indentation in Trope Lists because it's a single entry at the second level of indentation (2 asterisks).
The first example should be split off to a second level indentation like so:
- "Freaky Friday" Flip: PICO
- Season 1...
- A variation in Season 2...
Edited by Arivne on Sep 22nd 2022 at 9:32:48 AM
...her absence after...Reramos enslaves both...and his citizens, forcing the...Windara forced to feed and defend themselves from his minions to...captured. Resulting The situation in Windara gets worse over the next hundred years. After successfully capturing Kuputeri, Reramos shows that he has no problem brainwashing his own soldiers to fight to the death against the heroes. Not wanting to ...Reramos forces the...make his citizens totally obedient...Karantular, <- comma which cements the overall...
Windara Arc is considered to...arc compared to...both the Original...also shows blatant heavy topics like...slavery being carried out by...that BoBoiBoy's Cyclone...he is fully...he is already...but is still willing to perform a Heroic...allies. BoBoiBoy's Cyclone...is cool, <- comma but...visibly gets hurt and Mind Raped due to being unable to control the huge amount of wind power.
Edited by Arivne on Sep 22nd 2022 at 9:46:42 AM
...Season 10 would open with the reveal that Murray Goldberg had died during the Time Skip.
...of the series actually acknowledges...have a role...villain of the...he <missing text>?
^ Putting a word in all capital letters means you're SHOUTING it.
...get attacked by...was a fake...who state that...all. <- no quote mark
...up with various ...interact at all. Most...just makes Scrappy...contrast to how this series portrays their...legit second chance. <- no quote mark
Edited by Arivne on Sep 22nd 2022 at 10:02:49 AM
To be more specific His mom...ignorance, <- comma she...found Yancy and...she and Jimmy share her mother's brunette hair along with Jimmy. In the Movie, <- comma when Sunny asks why Yancy is green, <- comma it...That can further imply her actions <missing text> if...point them out....shown the aliens...have a sped-up development rate?
^ Imply her actions were what?
Thanks
- Lovable Alpha Bitch: Annie muses that her old friend Sophie Vargas-Jackson got elected cheer captain during her sophomore year by promoting a policy of letting girls besides "skinny blondes" onto the squad and "not being a jerk without good reason." She would go from snapping at Annie for arriving late to practice to expressing concern over signs that made her think Annie had an abusive boyfriend. This carries over to Sophie's present adult career, where she wears a pantsuit the same color as the paint in her office building (making it look like a uniform), and is demanding but considerate toward new employees.
@ G.I. Joe: A Real American Hero
- :The pilot miniseries has two impressive Science Hero accomplishments between action scenes.
- Cobra has spent months, if not years, building their MASS device, but the previously Kidnapped Scientist and the Joes manage to make a perfect duplicate in a matter of days and use it to great effect for the remainder of the arc.
- In just a few hours, a trio of D-List Joes manages to build a crude but effective Kill Sat to send against the relay satellite that the MASS device depends on to direct its beams. The Joes’ satellite nearly succeeds before Cobra uses the MASS device to teleport spacesuit-wearing troops to defend their satellite.
- I Was Never Here: After Gordon learns that his FBI contact is working with the villains, the man reveals that he used his vacation days to come to Gotham and his superiors have no idea that Gordon ever contacted him.
Agent Thorpe: I kill you and no one even knows I was here.
- Stealth Hi/Bye: During his Darkest Hour, Gordon is alone in his office and hears a sound behind him. He tells Batman that he was wrong to order him off the case and is ready to take his help...only to realize that all he heard was the wind coming through the open window.
Gordon: The one time I think you're there and it's just the blinds.
- Accidental Athlete: Kyle joins the lacrosse team after proving his speed as a runner by racing to stop a dog (who has just outrun the other applicants) from racing in front of a truck.
- Affectionate Nickname: Roger calls his girlfriend Spring his sun, moon, and stars. This gets multiple grim call backs after they start having problems and he commits suicide due to feeling he has nothing left.
- The Baby of the Bunch: Tanner is much younger and shorter than his lacrosse teammates and is one of the less jaded characters.
- Chekhov's Gunman: Maggie initially just seems to be the pet dog of a kid who commits suicide to establish the bleak setting. Later, Russ adopts Maggie as a Team Pet.
@ Jason X
- Fanon Discontinuity: Some fans prefer to disregard everything after Jason's first fight with Kay-Em. Seeing Jason on the receiving end of such a Curb-Stomp Battle is a satisfying ending for many fans, several popular characters who subsequently die are still alive at that point, and many people have trouble taking Jason's subsequent cyborg upgrade seriously.
Edited by Melinda on Sep 24th 2022 at 8:31:31 AM
For the Magnificent Bastard thread:
- Power Rangers Jungle Fury:
- Jarrod, the Black Lion Warrior, started off as a mere bully before accidentally releasing Dai Shi and becoming his vessel. Under Dai Shi's influence, Jarrod makes repeated attempts to destroy Ocean Bluff to collect enough fear to start a second Beast War, at one point sending the deadly Five Fingers of Poison to take out the Rangers, before giving Camille tips on how to beat the treacherous Naja. Jarrod revives the three overlords to train him and is constantly improving himself to the point that even masters like R.J. can't be him one on one. When Grizzaka overthrows him, Jarrod plots from the shadows to master Zocato Power and to do so outmaneuvers everyone to get to the Rhino Nexus, before taking back his thrown. When Scorch's plan with the Spirit Rangers fails, Jarrod has Whiger steal Casey's Spirit. Eventually breaking free from Dai Shi, Jarrod helps the Rangers destroy both Snapper and Dai Shi himself. Constantly growing along with the heroes, Jarrod ultimately proves that he has the heart to go along with his Lion Spirit.
- Camille, the Green Chameleon Warrior, is beautiful and snarky right hand women. Responsible for sending monsters to destroy Ocean Bluff, Camille regularly comes up with plans that nearly defeat the Rangers such as; helping two monsters become a Battle Couple; sending a monster to trap the Rangers in a deadly game show; and cloning one monster into an army, while having the original hide. In one of her finest moment, Camille singlehandedly defeats the treacherous Naja, even tricking the Rangers into helping her, and pretending to turn to lure Naja into letting his gaurd down. When Grizzaka overthrows Dai Shi, Camille steals the Control Dagger and helps Dai Shi reach the Rhino Nexus. Later falling for Jarrod when he saves her life, Camille joins the heroes in the final fight and enlists at the Pai Zhua academy along with Jarrod. A skilled warrior, master of disguise, and not without her softer moments, Camille repeats that she should never be underestimated by enemies or allies alike.
- Carnisoar, the Overlord of the Skies, contrasts his fellow overlords by constantly keeping a cool head. Revived to help Jarrod/Dai Shi reach the penical of evil, Carnisoar does so by changing Jarrod's memories of his past good deeds and then putting him through Training from Hell, even sending a pair of monsters to destroy Ocean Bluff, by opening a vortex to suck it into. When Camille revives Jellica, Carnisoar gracefully steps aside to allow her to take over Dai Shi's training and later helping capture R.J. Joining Grizzaka's coup, Carnisoar later uses his illusions to trick the Rangers into attacking each other and later defeats to megazords with ease. Even when defeated, Carnisoar definitely tells the Rangers that the war is far from over.
- Scorch is the leader of the Phantom Beasts, who opposed Dai Shi in the original Beast War. After being freed from his Crystal Eye, Scorch plays along with Jellica's plan in order to kill her in front of Dai Shi to prove his loyalty. Task with destroying the Rangers, Scorch has a monster act as a destraction while he and his fellow generals kidnap the three still living Rangers to create the Spirit Rangers which nearly destroy the Rangers repeatedly. When this fails, Scorch has a pair of monster kidnap the entire city to harvest their fear. Angered at Camille being made a general while Whiger was punished, Scorch undermines her plan of a clone monster army, by leading the Rangers to the original one. Later attempting to kill Camille in order to keep Dai Shi strong, Scorch later leads the final charge to collectively fear and aid Dai Shi regain his true form.
- Whiger is a Phantom Beast general with the Spirit of the White Tiger and is the one who captures Master Finn to help make the Spirit Rangers. Tasked with taking Casey's Tiger spirit, Whiger ambushes Casey when he is alone and successfully steals his spirit. Later challenging Casey to finish their fight but faced with the test of the team, Whiger bests all four of them and later attacks the city, though avoiding attacking children. Banished and stripped of his Rinzen by Dai Shi, Whiger tries to regain his honer by challenging Casey a final time, only to be saved by him instead. Repaying the favor by helping Casey find the kidnapped citizens, Whiger even gives Casey his spirit back and helps him battle Camille, proudly proclaiming Casey his friend and fellow Tiger.
Any corrections?
Edited by Bullman on Sep 22nd 2022 at 7:39:30 AM
Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup threadFor WALL•E.
Accidental Hero: A variation with the Buy N Large corporation. Their initial plan was to send humanity in a cruise away from Earth for 5 years. They would spend those 5 years cleaning up the planet. But since the Earth became too toxic, they were forced to abandon that idea and leave humanity in space for eternity. All things considered though, they definitely saved the human race, since they were evacuated before the Earth became inhospitable.
Folder->Sandbox
- Horizon Forbidden West has a Polite Point of No Return at the campfire before going through with "Singularity." It tells you that until you complete the mission, you're locked into the endgame.
I'm back with another draft for Arena of Valor. This time, another Mage hero...
Iggy
Iggy was born into a family of black mages in the Norman Kingdom. Ever since childhood, he displayed an extraordinary talent for the dark arts. At his 6th birthday, his parents turned their backs against the Black Magic, revealing themselves to the crowd of Veda followers. They naively thought they would be accepted into society, but they were instead shunned and cast out of it. Iggy had his privileges and pampered life taken away from him, and he hated his parents' foolishness for it. Against his will, the parents decided to take away something that meant everything to him: his ability to cast black magic. They succeeded, but this left Iggy absolutely bitter. He killed his parents in an event that would be known as the "Casanova Massacre". After several time periods of becoming a fugitive, Iggy was arrested at Carano while trying to undo the seal his parents put on him to prevent him from using Black Magic. In that time, Lorion personally interfered, taking an interest in Iggy, destroying the seal, and leaving his captors to rot. Lorion has found a worthy apprentice for his black magic. After several years of training, Iggy mastered the black magic and inherited the leadership of Dark Den while Lorion was away. He is prepared to burn everything in Athanor to ashes in retaliation for the humiliations he has suffered.
Iggy is a rapid-fire Mage hero who relentlessly throws out a barrage of purple flames to decimate his foes.
- His passive is Gaze. Iggy uses the Energy system for his first skill, storing up to five energies. When he damages an enemy with his second ability during the Ember state, he reveals the enemy's location for a period of time. If he hits these targets with an ability of his while being revealed, he restores Energy for himself.
- His first skill is Explosive Fireball. Iggy throws a fireball at a target, dealing damage and more damage to the enemy caught in the center of the blast. The player can continue to tap the skill button. When this happens, instead of the skill entering cooldown, Iggy will continuously throw more fireballs as long as he has enough Energy.
- His second skill is Fire Shadow. Iggy enters the Ember state, gaining a diminishing speed bonus. He can recast this skill after a few seconds, where he will instead throw one homing fireball to one enemy, dealing damage and knocking back the hit target on contact, and then it explodes again, dealing area damage.
- His ultimate is Ember's Gaze. Iggy throws one very big fireball into the sky at a great range. It looms over an area for a while before dropping down and dealing massive damage to everyone in it.
- Attention Whore: Iggy always wanted to be the center of attention. When his parents tried to deny that by trying to seal his black magic talent, he threw a temper tantrum and eventually murdered them to reclaim what could get him to the center of attention. Even some of his quotes demand attention to how grand he is.
”Look at me! The black magic genius!!”
- Dude Looks Like a Lady: He's petite, long-haired, and voiced by a woman (in every languages). Iggy is easily mistaken as a petite young girl.
- Enfant Terrible, Kids Are Cruel: One of the youngest heroes in the game. And yet, Iggy is a murderous young boy and a willing practitioner of the corruptive Black Magic.
- Evil Counterpart: For his fellow black magic student, Keera, whom Iggy comes to blows with at times. Keera rejects her black magic teaching (though not fully), still dearly loves her deceased parents, and despite her flaws, still tries to socialize with others. Iggy, on the other hand, wholly embraces the corruption of black magic, kills his own parents out of spite, and is so self-absorbed that he sees everyone else as beneath him; he clearly doesn’t value socialization.
- Foil: For fellow fire magic user, Ignis (coincidentally, their names start with ‘Ig’). Ignis commands a sacred, normal-colored flame, fires it in rapid succession due to his low cooldown, and is a good person among the ranks of Veda. Iggy controls a dark, purple-colored flame, fires it in rapid succession by holding the ability button down (as long as he has enough charges), and is proudly evil, leading the Dark Den in Lorion’s stead.
- Insufferable Genius: He'll never stop reminding you that he is the genius black mage and everyone else is just an idiot, only existing to be burnt. Deconstructed in a way that he values his genius above all else, and that he'll murder his parents the moment they're trying to take away his gift that only his genius mind can use.
- It's All About Me: He wants the world to revolve around him and his genius. Back in his days as a rich boy, he got all the attention he ever wanted. He was furious when his life was turned upside down and he was no longer being praised or being the center of the universe.
- Playing with Fire: His black magic manifests in fire manipulation. Iggy’s fire is purple-colored due to the nature of black magic.
- Self-Made Orphan: He killed his own parents for causing him to lose all his riches and privileges and then trying to seal his black magic. While in his eyes, his parents were terribly naive, they were actually people who were aware of the dangers of black magic, so they were normally good people... and tragic victims of Iggy's murderous rampage.
- Spoiled Brat: Iggy enjoyed all his riches when he was a kid, and got mightily pissed that he lost all of them because of his parents' actions. He ignored everything about the dangers of black magic and its history. He just got pissed that he lost all his riches and everything that made him respected. His murderous rampage and willing apprenticeship with Lorion can be seen as Iggy throwing a temper tantrum because he didn't get what he wanted in life.
Correction appreciated. Thank you!
Edited by ChrisX on Sep 23rd 2022 at 6:53:36 PM
I prefer Enfant Terrible over Kids Are Cruel.
Otherwise, fix language by removing the s from languages
Edited by Siegfried1337 on Sep 23rd 2022 at 4:58:32 AM
Eh, good enough.

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