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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
Arivne, for Kyousuke Magami's gender, he's male. Sorry, there was a typo in my entry.
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."- Loophole Abuse in Real Life Law: Under Italian and European Union laws, only the Italian regions of Emilia-Romagna and Lombardy can use the name Parmesan (Parmigiano Reggiano in Italian) for their cheeses. However, since these laws only apply in Europe, Cheesemakers in other non-European countries can use the name Parmesan on their cheeses.
Iruma Suzuki
A young human boy who was abused and neglected by his parents before having his soul sold to the demon Sullivan (who would become his adoptive grandfather) by them. At the beginning of the story, Iruma accidentally creates an apple tree, which results in his teacher Naberius Kalego remembering his forgotten past.
- Big Eater: Like in canon, Iruma eats a lot of food. During his trip to an all-you-can-eat restaurant with Sullivan and Opera, Iruma ate thirty-six plates of food, much to the shock of the other customers.
- Broken Bird: A male example. Iruma used to work multiple jobs despite being underage for some of them just so he could support his parents. Unfortunately, his parents didn't care about him and would abuse and neglect him while not showing any gratitude for his hard work. His former human teachers and employers also didn't care for him
- Bystander Syndrome: A lot of human adults knew that Iruma was being abused and neglected by his parents, from his teachers to his employers, but none of them did anything to help Iruma, as they saw his troubled home life as not their problem.
- Interspecies Adoption: After his parents sold his soul to the demon Sullivan, Iruma ends up becoming Sullivan's grandson. Despite the circumstances, Iruma is actually pretty happy with this arrangement, getting love and affection that he could never get from his biological family.
- Love Martyr: A parental example. Iruma used to love his parents and wanted them to love him back. However, the only things that he ever got from them were abuse and neglect. By the time Iruma is a teenager, all the love he once had for his parents is completely gone.
- Momma's Boy: Iruma wanted to be closer to his mother than to his father when Iruma was a child. However, Iruma no longer cares for his mother since she was equally guilty of abusing and neglecting him just as much as his father.
- Surprisingly Realistic Outcome:
- Even though he's now in a much more loving home with two adults that actually care about him, Iruma doesn't completely get over the abuse he went through his entire life, with it bothering him so much that he wants to have his memories of his old life and his parents being erased from his mind.
- Since Iruma is still learning about the Demon World, he can still find himself in danger without anyone helping him.
Edited by SugarButterfly432 on May 20th 2022 at 10:15:41 AM
@kawaiineko333 I think you might be misunderstanding what I wrote.
It's not about Emilia-Romagna and Lombardy (two regions in Italy) being allowed to use Parmesan in their cheese. It's about Emilia-Romagna and Lombardy are the only places in Italy and Europe where they can make Parmesan cheese and use the word "Parmesan" in the name. This is because those Italian regions are where the cheese originally came from. Plus, under Italian and European Union laws, they have exclusive rights to use the name "Parmesan" on their cheese so consumers know it's genuine, Italian Parmesan cheese and not a fake. However, since these laws only apply in Europe, other Cheesemakers from other countries can call their cheese "Parmesan" even if it's not the real thing.
Iruma
- Cordon Bleugh Chef. Iruma and Ameri's first attempt at cooking together ends up with them creating an absolute monstrosity
◊ that barely looks like a cake with creatures parts sticking out of it.
Playing With Fire (the game, not the trope)
- Palette Swap: All four player looks the same except for their color.
Madness Combat: Trivia
- Flip-Flop of God: The mini-series starring Deimos in hell is called Deimos Adventure on Krinkels's Youtube playlist. but is instead called Dedmos Adventure in the video that compile all mini-episodes.
From page 728 @Melinda
They chase all of the established villains out of the Galaxy...
^ I looked on the Power Rangers Zeo and Power Rangers Zeo pages and couldn't find the word "galaxy".
^ Is "Galaxy" the name of a thing (in which case the capitalization is correct) or is it just a generic reference to the galaxy they are in (in which case it should not be capitalized)?
...help deactivate the nuclear reactor...crew, <- comma and...can deactivate the device...
^ You disarm a bomb or similar item that is intended to explode.
While she isn't undercover for a heist, almost every shirt Korina wears exposes her stomach.
@kawaiineko333
You are a young villager who finds themselves drawn into the Fae Kingdom <- no comma and claimed...
...with Radiance being the Queen of Day <- no comma and Kieran being Prince(ss) of Night.
The Fae Woods are blocked off by an iron wall to keep the villagers from going too far out for fear of a winged demon who feeds on people.
^ This is confusingly worded. Is the iron wall there to prevent the villagers from going too far out because someone else is afraid they'll be eaten by the winged demon, because the villagers themselves are afraid of the demon, or so the villagers won't be scared (or eaten) by the demon? Does the demon even exist?
^ Note that you don't have to tell me the answer, please just re-write it so it's clear.
...Europe, cheesemakers in other non-European countries...
^ You're using "cheesemakers" as a common/generic noun here, so it isn't capitalized.
^ If you were using it as a proper noun/name
(like the name of a sports team), it would be capitalized as "Cheesemakers".
Reposting these to not get buried.
Rewrite for the Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup:
- Pitch Perfect: Beca/Chloe, aka Bechloe, is easily the most popular ship in the fandom and easily more popular than Beca's canon ship with Jesse. In fact, fans had already started shipping them from the first trailer and this increased tenfold when the film came out and had loads of Les Yay between them, such as the infamous scene where Chloe walks into Beca's shower to force her to sing. Even win the third film gave Chloe a love interest in the form of Chicago, more fans still shipped her with Beca.
And a new entry for Preemptive Shipping:
- Pitch Perfect: Even as far back as the first trailer, when the characters names weren't known yet, fans had already started to massively ship Beca ad Chloe together. This continued even when the film aired and Beca was revealed to have a love interest in the form of Jesse, mainly thanks to the massive Les Yay between them.
Any corrections?
Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup threadThanks
- Kat spends a lot of "Every Dog Has his Day" eluding and fighting Cogs single-handed while she has a twisted ankle that affects her even in her Ranger form, and she has to rely on a search-and-rescue dog to help fight the villains and bring a message to her friends (who come in guns blazing for a Big Damn Heroes moment).
Edited by Melinda on May 21st 2022 at 9:24:27 AM
A young human boy who was abused and neglected by his parents before they sold his soul sold to the demon Sullivan (who would become his adoptive grandfather) by them.
At the beginning of the story, Iruma accidentally creates an apple tree, which results in his teacher Naberius Kalego remembering his forgotten past.
^ Whose forgotten past does Naberius Kalego remember, Iruma's or his own? Because you're talking about two male characters, it isn't clear who the "his" refers to. Please change the "his" in "his forgotten past" to either "Iruma's" or "his own".
...Iruma eats thirty-six plates of food...
Iruma ends up becoming Sullivan's adopted grandson.
When Iruma was a child, he wanted...than to his father . However, he no...was as guilty...him just as much as his father.
Iruma hasn't completely gotten over...have the''' memories...parents being] erased...
...he can still find himself in danger with no one to help him.
@jOSEFdelaville
...that barely looks like a cake, <- comma with creatures parts sticking out of it.
All four players look the same except for their color.
The mini-series starring Deimos in Hell is...Krinkels's Website/Youtube playlist, <- comma but...that compiles all of the mini-episodes.
Edited by Arivne on May 21st 2022 at 9:44:13 AM
From page 728 and
@Bullman
Reposting these to not get buried.
^ Please be advised that if you make a new post while I'm correcting other tropers' posts, I can't see yours until I'm finished with the others', so I may miss it. That's what happened here.
...survivors, <- comma there are fans who ship...interests, <- comma like...part, <- comma the shipping...
...the characters' names...Beca and Chloe...form of the male Jesse...
Edited by Arivne on May 21st 2022 at 10:01:19 AM
@Arivne Ok, thanks. Here's some for Soul Plane.
- Irony: Everyone assumes the only Arab passenger on the plane is a terrorist, unaware that Captain Mack is a former terrorist who used to work with the Taliban.
- Too Dumb to Live: Captain Mack dies eating poisonous mushrooms despite being warned earlier not to eat them.
Edited by MrTerrorist on May 21st 2022 at 6:31:50 AM
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Funny/HonestTrailers2022Episodes
- Deep Rock Galactic
- Starring... Cousin It (The Engineer), Heavy (The Gunner), Duck Dynasty (The Scout), The Drills to Pierce the Heavens (The Driller), and Zerg Rush (The Glyphids).
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Funny/HonestTrailers2021Episodes
- No More Heroes III
- Starring... Fear and Loathing in Santa Destroy (Travis Touchdown), Not Armstrong (Shinobu), Tonya Harding (Bad Girl), God Tier Waifu (Sylvia), Stripper Zer0 (Native Dancer), Black Lightning (Notorious), Costco Vergil (Henry Cooldown), Every Bad Power Ranger monster (the Galactic Superhero Corps), The Fabulous Flamboyant Freeza (FU [sic]), The Most Important Character in the Series (Jeanne), and Takashi Miike, Obviously (Takashi Miike As Himself).
- The Stinger: "Okay, if they don't put Travis in Smash after all this, I'm certain that Suda will cry. You don't wanna see a grown man cry, do you, Sakurai?"
- Vigilante Militia: There are unofficial militias in the protagonists' hometown who remain ready to defend their land and people by fighting off invaders from the Fringes, who kidnap people and steal crops ready to defend their land and people. Of course, the residents of the Fringes were cruelly exiled to the limits of the known habitable world by the community as a whole, and often by their own families) just for having birth defects, so the people who make up the militias don’t exactly have the moral high ground.
- Secret Secret-Keeper: When Rosalind has to flee after her telepathy is discovered, she tells David that her mother's sad but unsurprised reaction showed that she knew why Rosalind was leaving even if she and Rosalind never discussed the subject openly.
- Power Rangers Lost Galaxy: Some fans would like to see the filmed but unreleased episode (described as "Air Force One on the Megaship) where Cassie from Turbo and In Space joins the team instead of Karone.
- Moe: Bob's sense of naïveté (a reflection of his actor being new to film making), kindness and determination to his friends, and growing love for the countryside absolutely charm scores of viewers.
- Ensemble Dark Horse: Deputy Potts is just a secondary villain without much personality or redeeming traits, but Victor Buono plays him as having enough cunning and subtly humorous traits to make him popular despite his lack of singing in a musical film.
- One Scene: Big Jim (Edward G. Robinson) dies in the first scene but is a fantastically memorable Affably Evil, Oblivious to Hatred, Large Ham crime boss.
- Signature Song: The "Mr. Booze" song, which is meant to fool the police during the fake revival meeting at the casino, is probably the best-liked song, especially since it showed up in an episode of Family Guy.
Edited by Melinda on May 22nd 2022 at 6:45:03 AM
Hi fellas. It's me again. Let's have another try.
A Headscratcher for Chip 'n Dale: Rescue Rangers:
- How was this movie able to include Stan Marsh, a character from SOUTH FREAKIN' PARK in this film? The show is known for being one of the most vulgar and innappropiate for young children and is only for teens and adults. Not only that, but the show has even mocked The Walt Disney Company before, like in the episode "The Ring", where they had Mickey Mouse forcing the Jonas Brothers to sell sex to underage girls. Isn't Disney encouraging young children watching a show that isn't for them by including Stan? The same for that quick cameo of Butthead, because Beavis and Butt-Head isn't any better if parental guardians want to talk about appropiate programming for children.
And two Headscratchers for South Park:
- Where are Thomas and Nellie, Chef's parents, during his funeral? How would they miss the funeral of their own son? Or are they aware that the Super Adventure Club resurrected him so they didn't bother to go?
- Is Chef canonically dead or alive? The ending of the episode confirms that he was revived by being put into a Darth Vader-esque armor, but he never returned, most likely due to Isaac Hayes' death. However, what does this mean for Darth Chef? Is the scene still canon? In South Park: The Stick of Truth, Chef appears as a Nazi zombie and vague references to the events of this episode are made but the Darth armor is nowhere to be seen. By the way, can't Darth Chef return if he was voiced by Peter Serafinowicz?
Edited by ElJuaco on May 21st 2022 at 10:39:10 AM
@ Melinda
- Vigilante Militia: There are unofficial militias in the protagonists' hometown that remain ready to fight off invaders from the Fringes, (comma) who kidnap people and steal crops (superfluous words - cut). Of course, the residents of the Fringes were cruelly exiled to the limits of the known habitable world (by the community as a whole, (comma) and often by their own families) to live in poverty (superfluous words - cut) just for having birth defects, so the people who make up the militias don’t exactly have the moral high ground.
- Secret Secret-Keeper: When Rosalind has to flee after her telepathy is discovered, she tells David that her mother's sad but unsurprised reaction showed that she knew why Rosalind was leaving even if she and Rosalind never discussed the subject openly.
- Signature Song: The "Mr. Booze" song, (comma) which is meant to fool the police during the fake revival meeting at the casino, (comma) is probably the best-liked song, (comma, remove parentheses) especially since it showed up in an episode of Family Guy. (period, remove parentheses)
@ ElJuaco
- How was this movie able to include Stan Marsh, a character from SOUTH FREAKIN' PARK (superfluous words - cut)? That show is known for being one of the most vulgar and inappropriate for young children and is only for teens and adults. Not only that, but South Park has even mocked The Walt Disney Company before, like in the episode "The Ring", where they had Mickey Mouse forcing the Jonas Brothers to sell sex to underage girls. Isn't Disney encouraging young children to watch a show that isn't for them by including Stan? The same applies to that quick cameo by Butthead, because Beavis and Butt-Head isn't any better if parents or guardians want to talk about appropriate programming for children.
- Is Chef canonically dead or alive? The ending of the episode confirms that he was revived by being put into a Darth Vader-esque armor, but he never returned, most likely due to Isaac Hayes' death. However, what does this mean for Darth Chef? Is the scene still canon? In South Park: The Stick of Truth, Chef appears as a Nazi zombie and vague references to the events of this episode are made, (comma) but the Darth armor is nowhere to be seen. By the way, can't Darth Chef return if he was voiced by Peter Serafinowicz?
Edited by Clare on May 22nd 2022 at 11:47:39 AM
For the page Fan-Disliked Explanation I have an example:
While the twist was liked at the time, in recent years Return of the Jedi has received scrutiny for its reveal that Leia is Luke's sister and the "other hope" Yoda referred to in The Empire Strikes Back. Like the reveal of Vader being Luke's father, this was not planned from the start but unlike Vader's reveal it didn't have a proper setup and the idea of Leia being the "other" made little contextual sense given Vader had Leia captive at the time of that statementnote . Furthermore, thanks to Disney wiping out the pre-2014 Expanded Universe and Carrie Fisher's death in 2016, Leia being Force Sensitive didn't amount to much in canon, beyond her passing it on to her son Ben. While not universally despised, it is becoming more common for people to view it less as a clever twist and more as a lazy conclusion to the OT's love triangle.
Edited by Mariofan99 on May 22nd 2022 at 10:41:16 AM

Adding a new page for The Cursed Heart
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You are a young villager who finds themselves drawn into the Fae Kingdom, and claimed by the ruler of the Fairies.