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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
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Character tropes for Hulk:
- Ambiguous Situation: Given that Spider-Man: No Way Home has established non-MCU films as part of the same multiverse, he may or may not be the same entity as The Watcher Informant.
- The Cameo: Because this is Stan Lee we're talking about./He is portrayed by Lou Ferrigno, who is best known for having played the Hulk with Bill Bixby as Bruce Banner in The Incredible Hulk television show and its three Made For TV Movies.
- Nice Guy: He pauses his conversation with a fellow guard to greet Bruce Kenzler.
- Those Two Guys: He is seen talking with a fellow security guard, who is portrayed by Lou Ferrigno, another important figure from The Incredible Hulk mythos./He is seen talking with a fellow security guard, who is portrayed by Stan Lee, another important figure from The Incredible Hulk mythos.
Character tropes for Fantastic Four Duology:
- Ambiguous Situation: Given that Spider-Man: No Way Home has established non-MCU films as part of the same multiverse, he may or may not be the same entity as The Watcher Informant.
- Celebrity Paradox: This is Stan Lee in a cameo As Himself.
- Creator Cameo: Because this is Stan Lee we're talking about.
- Inexplicably Identical Individuals: Shares the same actor as Willie Lumpkin from the first movie.
- Mythology Gag: Him trying to sneak into Reed's and Sue's wedding without success is a reference to how in the comic book issue where the couple married, the Author Avatars of Stan Lee and Jack Kirby tried to sneak into the wedding only to be turned away by Nick Fury.
In addition I want to know if the following descriptions are well-written:
- An old man who works as a security guard at the Berkeley Lab./A security guard of the Berkeley Lab.
- An old man who tries to sneak into the wedding of Reed Richards and Susan Storm.
For Miraculous Ladybug S04E02 "Lies"
- Unfortunate Implication:
- Some fans found the episode is very sexist because the narrative unfairly paint Kagami as toxic and Control Freak girlfriend who Not So Different from Lila and Chloe just because she wanted Adrien to be serious and charming person after feel his Cat Noir pose is make him looks like a clown as Adrien defense it was his "true self" all along. While Adrien didn't even feel regret for breaking her heart. Unlike Marintte's problem with Luka during their relationship, Adrien actively cheating on Kagami by wishing someone get akumatized for sake to see and flirt Ladybug again is erase any sympathetic light for Adrien. Thus fans feel that the episode convince to viewer that girls need accept whatever the boys is no matter how terrible their attitude to them and girls wanted their boyfriend to change become more serious is bad
- After defeating Lies, fans found Cat Noir word about how he "can't resist to see Ladybug angry pout-face" after Ladybug scold him for acting recklessly is incredibly terrible and inappropriate for younger viewer because the words is usually told by someone who like to harass a girl instead of a fun and normal tease at their partner
@Teekah
- Some fans found the episode 's very sexist because the narrative unfairly paints Kagami as toxic and a Control Freak girlfriend who 's not so different from Lila and Chloe just because she wanted Adrien to be a serious and charming person after she feels that his Cat Noir 's pose makes him look like a clown while Adrien claims to his defense it was his "true self" all along. While Adrien didn't even feel regret for breaking her heart. Unlike Marinette's problem with Luka during their relationship, Adrien shamelessly cheats on Kagami by wishing someone get akumatized for her sake to see and flirt Ladybug again erasing any sympathetic light for Adrien. Thus fans feel that the episode convinces viewers that girls need to accept whatever any boys are no matter how terrible their attitudes to them and girls wanting their boyfriends to change to their preferable image of them.
- After defeating Lies, fans found Cat Noir's word about how he "can't resist to see Ladybug's angry pout-face" after Ladybug scolds him for acting recklessly is incredibly terrible and inappropriate for younger viewers because the words are usually told by someone who likes to harass a girl instead of a fun and normal tease at their partner <-period
Edited by VoicelessCob on May 9th 2022 at 8:27:42 PM
@ Melinda
- His story from Star Wars Journals feels similar in tone to some of the stuff from Visions.
- Alternate Character Interpretation: While McNally, Cordona, and Tuscarora definitely end up Fire-Forged Friends in the end, do the two Confederates help McNally try to find the traitors out of decency and friendship from the start, or do they only contact McNally because his enemies are threatening Tuscarora and his father? (question mark)
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- The Dead: Only three of the soldiers and deserters from the unnamed African country (implied to be Ghana) the protagonist is stranded in get much dialogue or screen time, but almost every soldier who appears is evacuating civilians to defended areas, defending their Homs, or killing zombies, and doing so effectively. Any serious failures they do experience are only because there are more zombies than the soldiers have bullets.
- Halo: The Cole Protocol: The "Helljumpers" special forces troops have a higher survival rate than in the games and other books and provide effective support for Keyes and the Spartans.
- Gentleman Adventurer: Edward Champenis comes from five centuries of aristocratic lineage and has the appearance of a dignified gentleman, but Grant reminds himself that this look is deceiving, as Edward explores for fun, writes books, and "married an artist picked up at the other side of the world."
Edited by Melinda on May 10th 2022 at 6:08:35 AM
Laws of Attraction (Pixelberry)
- I Need a Freaking Drink: In Chapter 2, the party spends hours looking over legal depositions until they agree they need a drink or two to take a break.
- Made of Incendium: Koenig's water treatment of Sweetbrook is so bad that besides getting people sick, it can be lit on fire from the tap that it's become an in-universe meme.
- Photographic Memory: Chapter 2 shows off Gigi's talent for photographic memory by reciting stuff she read or saw years ago, no matter how exciting or boring it was. For Beau, she remembers the party he was involved in; For Martin she remembers he majored in sociology; For Aislynn she remembers she writes summaries for the ABA.
- Wacky Fratboy Hijinx: Talking to Beau in Chapter 2 has Gigi reveal during his time at Cornell he was part of the "One-L Bacchanalia." He gets flustered that she even heard about it since it wasn't public information.
- Water Source Tampering: Chapter 2's case is a class action lawsuit against Koenig Chemical in Nebraska. The whiteboard in the chapter shows that people and animals in Sweetbrook are sick at best or dead at worst.
- N-Word Privileges: "Korone Don't Say It
" has Korone Inugami singing N.W.A's "Fuck the Police." Pikamee is reacting in horror to Korone uttering the "gamer word" in the background.
@ Melinda
- The Dead: Only three of the soldiers and deserters from the unnamed African country (implied to be Ghana) the protagonist is stranded in get much dialogue or screen time, but almost every soldier who appears is (superfluous word - cut) evacuating civilians to defended areas, defending their homes, or killing zombies, and doing so effectively. Any serious failures they do experience are only because there are more zombies than the soldiers have bullets.
- Gentleman Adventurer: Edward Champenis comes from five centuries of aristocratic lineage and has the appearance of a dignified gentleman, but Grant reminds himself that this look is deceiving, as Edward explores for fun, writes books, and "married an artist picked up at the other side of the world."
From page 722 @Minorica
...the fame of the agency has been lost fallen to the ground...
...and, <- comma seeing...The Conspiracy, <- comma which is responsible...
...(the writer of the Kazu Ichiyanagi...of the Kuon no Kizuna series).
Has a character page under construction.
...from reading the trope example lists below...
"The Pendant of Remembrance" x3
Although some items aren't directly involved with the episodic murder cases...
Case 3 has the ensigned paperknife.
^ "ensigned" is not correct English.
......affected by it...unwittingly kill himself...killers to their...in the modern Japan of the early 2000's, where All Deaths Are Final and ...supernatural phenomena are neither...surprising <- no period that supernatural events are...and aren't discussed...in future episodes.
If you complete all first six chapters in the Complete/PSP version...
- Leroy & Stitch: Stitch's 625 fellow genetic experiments all do a good job in the final battle against Leroy despite their limited experience working together. They probably would have been overwhelmed in a Zerg Rush eventually if not for the main characters, but it would have been a close fight.
- CSI: In the episode "Happenstance", the second victim's therapist is intrigued to learn that she was adopted and says it explains a lot about how she had a harder time connecting with her family.
- Psych: In the episode "Shawn Versus Darth Vader", when a foreign exchange student learns that his host is a Stalker with a Crush who was obsessed with his girlfriend and is being accused of killing her, he muses that that would explain why his girlfriend stopped going to his host's house and had him meet her elsewhere.
Edited by Melinda on May 10th 2022 at 6:15:47 AM
@Melinda
...but they are a bold and heroic military force that...
..."married an artist picked up at the other side of the world."
^ Does the work actually say "at"? Because that should be "on the other side of the world."
...and is being accused of killing her, he muses that that would explain why his girlfriend stopped him from going to his host's house and had him meet her elsewhere.
Edited by Arivne on May 9th 2022 at 9:52:52 AM
@Teekah
Some fans found the episode is' very sexist because the narrative unfairly paints Kagami as a toxic and Control Freak girlfriend who is Not So Different from Lila and Chloe just because she wanted Adrien to be a serious and charming person after feeling his Cat Noir pose is makes him look like a clown. <- period Adrien's defense is that it was his "true self" all along. While Adrien didn't even feel regret over breaking her heart. Unlike Marintte's problem with Luka during their relationship, Adrien actively cheating on Kagami by wishing someone would get akumatized for the sake of seeing and flirting with Ladybug again erases any sympathetic feeling for Adrien. Thus fans feel that the episode convinces the viewer that girls need to accept whatever the boys do no matter how terrible their attitude to them and girls wanting their boyfriends to change become more serious is bad. <- period
^ I found it very difficult to understand your writing in this paragraph, so my changes might not match what you intended to write.
After defeating Lies, fans found Cat Noir's words about how he "can't resist seeing Ladybug's angry pout-face" after Ladybug scolds him for acting recklessly is incredibly terrible and inappropriate for younger viewers because the words are usually used by someone who likes to harass girls instead of a fun and normal teasing of their partner. <- period
Edited by Arivne on May 9th 2022 at 9:48:05 AM
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- An American Werewolf in London:
- The crowd of surly, unnamed pub dwellers venture out to kill the first werewolf and do so quickly and with no trouble, albeit too late to stop him from killing one of the main characters and infecting the other.
- The unarmed Scotland Yard officers manage to trap and contain the werewolf for a while and later kill him after getting guns.
- Willow:
- Vohnkar and his fellow village warriors slay a Death Dog that's much bigger than them and is menacing their village and then provide The Hero and the Living MacGuffin with an escort for a while before going home.
- The Galladoorn army starts out as a Red Shirt Army and is slaughtered offscreen, but in the final act, the few dozen survivors and lots of village volunteers prove to be an effective fighting force with a good life expectancy.
- Twilight: Jake's wolf pack is constantly growing over the last three books and has several members who get little or no focus or development. They protect the area from hostile vampires, ultimately avoid coming to blows with the Friendly Neighborhood Vampires, and survive every battle or showdown they have with vampires without losing a single shapeshifter.
- Characterization Marches On: Cindy is the ditziest of the older girls, but in the Growing Pains two-parter where she debuted, she seemed witty and down-to-earth.
Edited by Melinda on May 10th 2022 at 9:01:16 AM
Laws of Attraction (Pixelberry)
- Courtroom Episode: Chapter 4 has everyone from senior partners to paralegals participating in the annual McGraw Byrne moot court.
- Injection Plot: Chapter 3's case involves McGraw Byrne representing the defendant, Eva Pereira, who's being sued by her former boss, Willow Harrington, who is a fitness guru and anti-vax for getting her daughter vaccinated. Quinn believes she's just milking it for the publicity.
- Must Have Caffeine: During Chapter 4, Quinn gets a coffee in Central Park with Ryan while looking over files for moot court.
The drink of champions.
Edited by kawaiineko333 on May 9th 2022 at 3:41:13 PM
@ Melinda
- An American Werewolf in London:
- The crowd of surly, unnamed pub dwellers venture out to kill the first werewolf and do so quickly and with no trouble, albeit too late to stop him from killing one of the main characters and infecting the other.
Wanted to rewrite an entry for the William Burnside iteration of Captain America since I think the original is a tad... well see for yourselves:
- Deliberate Values Dissonance: It's pretty obvious that the writers aren't exactly enamored of the 1950s, and they tend to play up the bits of its values they dislike when portraying him.
This is what I've written:
- Deliberate Values Dissonance: He is a man who still holds to the 1950's, American Conservative, values which are not only severely out of date but put him in direct opposition to those of the The New '10s.
If anyone has better ideas on how to improve the entry feel free to write a suggestion.
Edited by Avenger09 on May 9th 2022 at 10:07:16 AM
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Some Trivia for Doctor Strange in the Multiverse of Madness:
- Michael Waldron discussed with Kevin Feige the possibility
of casting Tom Cruise as an Iron Man variant from another universe as an Easter Egg to how Cruise would have been cast in the role had Iron Man 1 been produced in The '90s. However, Cruise was never approached due to his unavailability, as he was busy filming back-to-back the Mission: Impossible — Dead Reckoning two-parter.
- Shout-Out:
- The achievement/trophy names:
All of these names are as written down on the achievement/trophy listings.
- Heroic Sacrifice: Chapter 19 is when the sacrifices start piling up. If Darren the blacksmith is still alive during the solstice, he'll give his life by saving Ash from zombies. The achievement for it is even named "Heroic Sacrifice." If Angel's zombie parents were killed in Chapter 4, Mack dies in this chapter by sacrificing himself to kill a scout. Walt makes a Last Stand, so his daughter Minna can live while everyone else hunkers inside the house. He shoots zombies until his ammo runs out, then uses his gun as a club until he's swarmed and eaten.
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/WakeTheDead
Folder->Zombies
In General
- Animal Motif: The zombie ranks are named after bees. The basic zombies are drones at the lowest level to the Queen at the highest level.
@Scouts
- Enemy Summoner: Their screams are able to bring hordes of drones down on colonies.
- Fragile Speedster: The scouts are faster than regular drones because they tore most of their own organs out
@The Queen
- Big Bad: She's the final obstacle Olympus faces on the solstice.
- Eye Scream: Ash stabs the Anti-Queen Serum needle into her eye during the final battle.
- Mook Maker: She feeds each particular zombie a different jelly, allowing her to change a drone to a scout, soldier, or siren as she sees fit.
- Mutual Kill: Brynn kills her by slicing her head off just after being impaled by her claws, with Brynn dying soon after.
- Villainous Breakdown: She suffers this in Chapter 20 if Ash manages to get through to Brynn and turn her new "daughter" against her when Brynn attacks, as well as gets a needle into her eye.
- Was Once a Man: Collecting all the lore documents reveals that she was once a human named Candice who rescued a young Ash and Brynn from Reno. While she got them on the truck that took them to the Tower, she was dragged by zombies to the Hive, where she became the Queen.
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- Mitt's status as an endearing practical joker who avoids intentionally hurting anyone in the arena and then suffers from devastating PTSD afterward makes it easy to feel sympathetic toward him.
- Abram, for being a shy, kind Momma's Boy who is more upset than most about having to kill in the arena and becomes both friendlier and a better fighter at the same time during his Character Development.
- Jason Goes to Hell: The Final Friday: In the opening scene, an FBI team lure undead Serial Killer Jason Voorhes (who has killed almost every authority figure to meet him up until that point) into a trap and blow him apart. His powers let him come back, but those agents avoid encountering him again and survive.
@ Scooby-Doo Direct-to-Video Film Series
- Voiced by: Phil LaMarr
- Expy: Of Crazy Ralph from Friday the 13th (1980), as both of them act as a doomsayer who spreads warnings about an Ax-Crazy villain.
- The Prankster: He dresses up as campfire story villain The Woodsman to scare some campers.
- Screw This Im Outa Here: He runs away in terror when he sees The Woodsman and packs up his bags and heads off to Camp Big Moose the next morning.
- Took a Level in Jerkass: He's a good-natured counselor in his first scene and later warns the gang about the danger before fleeing Camp Little Moose. However, upon getting a job at Camp Big Moose, he angrily confronts Shaggy and Scooby for not being from Camp Big Moose (even though they're invited guests) and doesn't intervene when his campers pelt them with food.
- Timmy's method of luring Dark Laser to Earth. Two of Dark Laser's crew are seen laughing about a streaming video, but nervously tell Dark Laser he wouldn't find it funny when he shows up. Dark Laser insists he has a great sense of humor, then screams and rubs his eyes when he sees the video is of him, with a dubbed-over voice saying "Pull my finger, I'm Fart Blazer" accompanied by farting noises. Dark Laser screams that he will get revenge on whoever posted "these lies" and then sees Timmy's user name.
- Mark refers to the Ragtag Bunch of Misfits as a "Timmy-hating army" and asks if they need anyone else. Timmy lures in Vicky by shaking around some money.
- Connie is a budding Teen Genius and fairly perky Little Miss Snarker, while she's more of an Emo Teen in her Growing Pains appearance.
- Chapter 5: Romulus Thread prepares a firing squad to massacre 1/10th of District 5's children, but the firing squad members display a sudden change of heart.
As one, Thimble and his men turn towards Thread and the elite forces and fire.
- Chapter 10: The victims of the District 10 Death March seemingly need The Cavalry to save them, but then reveal they've spent days faking frightened docility.
As one, the Settlers rise from the dirt. From their packs and bags they pull out the weapons they smuggled on the march. Meat cleavers, butcher knives, [and] firearms that the Anasazi smuggled to them from the moment the Quell was announced. Every man, every woman, every child has something to fight with.
- Chapter 4: The Reveal about the possible fate of Orchus, the victor who disappeared. Many old people in District 11 claimed to be Orchus decades later, and the one of them who may be telling the truth is a Canon Character All Along.
The old man was executed six months after during the Victory Tour for Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark. He was killed for whistling a four-note tune and raising three fingers in a salute.
- Chapter 25: A Rape Is a Special Kind of Evil reveal when Caesar's predecessor and his aides watch the Games as Virtus's treacherous ally Lucious is "defeated in every way woman can be defeated."
- Chapter 61: Two in quick succession. The girl from District 1 moves in to make a seemingly easy kill when suddenly, without warning, "the smile across her throat is far redder [than her lipstick] as a curtain of scarlet courses down." The girl from 1's killer is named a few paragraphs later. "Johanna Mason. District 7.'"
- Chapter 62: The motive behind Crystal's suicide when she's found with a reaping slip that says "It's you", before the third Quarter Quell is even announced, indicating a lot of awareness about the twist beforehand.
- Chapter 64: As Gloss watches Halibut freak out over a dead tribute and shows a Lack of Empathy, another victor tells him, "That was Hal's son."
- Chapter 65:
- Cashmere telling Beetee "I know you were the one who warned Crystal she was going into the Quell."
- A character from the last chapter has a Dropped a Bridge on Him fate revealed when Beetee tells Cashmere, "I know Enobaria killed your father."
The Bonds of Blood
- The Speaker, Enobaria's Marauder captor in the weeks before she becomes a tribute, has a Saying Too Much moment.
Enobaria: "When Tigellinus retires" is a joke among the cadets. It means something is likely to never happen. And I never told you about that. I had no reason to. You're a Two! No, you're more than that, you're one of us. You are at the Institute, you snake, you traitor!
- After Enobaria's games, The Speaker reveals his identity after being mortally wounded; that of a major character from Fall Into the River.
The Speaker: My name is Brittanicus Romano. They...They called me Tanni.
Secrets
- Ben abruptly and determinedly coming out of retirement to mentor Abram in the main story is cast in a new light by his secret, which concerns Abram's mother.
Ben Cooper had a drunken one-night stand with the chocolatier he'd always had a fancy for and even though Abram Mills looked nothing like him he was never able to shake off the suspicion that his last victor might have also been his son.
Edited by Melinda on May 10th 2022 at 9:15:53 AM
@ Melinda
- Moe
- Abram, for being a shy, kind Momma's Boy who is more upset than most about having to kill in the arena and becomes both friendlier and a better fighter at the same time during his Character Development.
- Jason Goes to Hell: The Final Friday: In the opening scene, an FBI team lure undead Serial Killer Jason Voorhes (who has killed almost every authority figure to meet him up until that point) into a trap and blows him apart. His powers let him come back, but those agents avoid encountering him again and survive.
Scooby-Doo Direct-to-Video Film Series
Darryl
- The Prankster: He dresses up as The Woodsman to scare some campers.
- Screw This, I'm Outta Here!: He runs away in terror when he sees The Woodsman and packs up his bags and heads off to Camp Big Moose the next morning.
- Timmy's method of luring Dark Laser to Earth. Two of Dark Laser's crew are seen laughing about a streaming video, (comma) but nervously say he wouldn't find it funny. (period) When he shows up, (comma) Dark Laser insists he has a great sense of humor, (comma) then screams and rubs his eyes when he sees the video is of him, with a voice dubbed over saying "Pull my finger, I'm Fart Blazer" accompanied by farting noises. Dark Laser screams that he will get revenge on whoever posted "these lies" and then sees Timmy's user name.
- Chapter 4: The Reveal about the possible fate of Orchus, the victor who disappeared. Many old people in District 11 claimed to be Orchus decades later, and the one of them who may be telling the truth is a Canon Character All Along.
- Chapter 25: A Rape Is a Special Kind of Evil reveal.
[The host before Caesar] and his aides and his confidants watched and ate fruit pastries as Lucious was defeated in every way woman can be defeated.
- Chapter 61: The girl from District 1 moves in to make a seemingly easy kill when suddenly, without warning "the smile across her throat is far redder [than her lipstick] as a curtain of scarlet courses down." The girl from 1's killer is named a few paragraphs later as Johanna Mason from District 7.
- Chapter 62: The motive behind Crystal's suicide (remove comma) when she's found with a reaping slip that says "It's you", before the third Quarter Quell is even announced, indicating a lot of awareness about the twist beforehand.
The Bonds of Blood
- The Speaker, Enobaria's Marauder captor in the weeks before she becomes a tribute, (comma) has a Saying Too Much moment.
Enobaria: "When Tigellinus retires" is a joke among the cadets. It means something is likely to never happen. And I never told you about that. I had no reason to. You're a Two! No, you're more than that, you're one of us. You are at the Institute, you snake, you traitor!
- After Enobaria's games, The Speaker reveals his identity after being mortally wounded.
The Speaker: My name is Brittanicus Romano. They...They called me Tanni.
Secrets
- Ben's determined mentorship of Abram is cast in a new light by his secret.
Ben Cooper had a drunken one-night stand with the chocolatier he'd always had a fancy for and even though Abram Mills looked nothing like him he was never able to shake off the suspicion that his last victor might have also been his son.
Edited by Clare on May 10th 2022 at 12:50:03 PM
Arivne. In A Shilling for Candles it was "at" the other side of the world. Sometimes the authors make grammar mistakes. @ Power Rangers Ninja Storm
- Marah and Kapri's talent show song
is a fun Sarcastic Confession about their criminal nature and probably has catchier lyrics and rhythm than the season's theme song. They probably would have won if they'd really been singing and not lip-syncing.
- Marah and Kapri's talent show song
- In Conagher, grudge-holding gunman Kiowa Staples abandons his vendetta with Conagher after being beaten in a physical fight for the second time and scared off. In the film. this just makes him madder, and he joins the villains and becomes the most Ax-Crazy member.
@ Limitless new page The Legend of Marco Ramos
- Brian breaking up with Shauna right after they cutely reconnect is a crushing Shoo the Dog moment.
Personality Crisis
- Everything with Chris Gabler, who lost his mother to cancer and his father to alcoholism in the past. He finds out that his brother is a terrorist and takes a lot of persuading to help with a sting operation, then is shot in the process. Brian, who convinced him to help the sting, is devastated.
Side Effects May Include
- Dr. Epperly talking about the deaths and disappearances of the initial, innocent NZT patients, including Rebecca's father.
- Epperly getting a package bomb himself at the end of the episode.
This is Your Brain on Drugs
- Ike being shot and nearly killed by thieves stealing NZT right after talking about how much his life sucks.
- Everything in the second half of the episode.
- Casey's devastation when Rebecca dumps him.
- Casey and his team decide to use the recovered NZT pills just once for a relatable night of fun at their full potential because they're curious to see what it can do to try to cover up a murder when the NZT lets one man learn another team member is sleeping with his wife. This leads to a hostage situation and Casey committing Suicide by Cop after the others are captured.
- Rebecca is clearly upset seeing Casey get shot and Boyle tries to convince himself it was the right thing to do, while Brian tells him that NZT makes it clear they could have resolved things peacefully.
- Casey's devastation when Rebecca dumps him.
Edited by Melinda on May 10th 2022 at 8:56:03 AM

@ Star Wars: Visions
@ Rio Lobo
@ Men of Sherwood
- Master and Commander: The marines and sailors aboard the ship all make up a cohesive and efficient unit that carry out their captain's orders in an impressive way.
- A Song of Ice and Fire The Legion of Lost Souls Night's Watch has dozens of rank and file members who handle themselves well and never act as a Red Shirt Army except during the Great Ranging, and plenty of minor characters still survive that bloodbath. Even members who die tend to have prominent scenes in multiple chapters, or even multiple books, first.
- The Lord of the Rings: The Riders of Rohan are almost all unnamed except for their leader, but they are a bold and heroic military force that acts as The Cavalry more than once.
@ TaleSpinEdited by Melinda on May 10th 2022 at 5:59:00 AM