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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
From page 615 @Melinda
Rick's gun has a mill order laser sight that he's quite proud of.
^ Did you mean "mail order laser sight"?
...when he finds a scared young girl hiding during Jason's rampage at the summer camp.
She's more submissive during sex outside of Cort but...
^ "outside of Cort" - Did you mean "with people other than Cort"?
She and Cort are having sex strenuously enough to make an RV shake from side to side.
The "Broadway Alien Song" from "Sing Like a Larry Bird" <- no comma is an...
In the original story, Billy's Cowboy-clad father...
^ "Cowboy-clad" is not correct English.
...and eventually fires Skroeder (The Heavy). <- parentheses
...over a slight. They take...(the latter fatally)...heroics <- no comma and triggers...
Edited by Arivne on Oct 5th 2021 at 5:02:37 AM
From page 615 @Bullman
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From page 615 @Stardust 120
Stardust 120: someone is complaining about you on Ask The Tropers. They say that you're making posts with poor grammar.
You can go directly to the complaint here
and respond to it.
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Edited by Arivne on Oct 5th 2021 at 5:24:19 AM
Thanks. For the Aggressive Submissive I meant to say the character is more submissive while not having sex and will make that edit (and the rest) when I have time.
- Ask a Stupid Question...: A woman who has spent five hours in a line of people filing complaints about the police is pretty annoyed at being asked if she has a complaint.
Woman: Obviously I have a complaint. You know what, this is some bullshit. That's why I hate all these motherfucking cops. Fuck all y'all!
- Bald of Evil: Santos has a shaved head and is a smug and brutal Dirty Cop.
- What Happened to the Mouse?: Sergeant Clady is caught in the act of trying to kill Washington's widow and ends up locked in Ludlow's trunk, but it's never revealed what happens to him afterward. He could have either been arrested for his crimes or murdered or released to cover up Ludlow's actions.
@ Duck Tales S 1 E 28 Duckworths Revolt
- Homeworld Evacuation: The Plant Aliens had to flee their planet during a devastating ice age, with the scene subtly implying that many of them had to stay behind to make room for their children. Since then, they have traveled the universe, trying to find a new home and enslaving people to help them subsist until then.
- Tail Slap: One of the alien slaves resembles a humanoid alligator and decks one of the sale overseers with his tail.
- One-Scene Wonder: The show loves featuring over-the-top Large Ham suspects who only appear in a handful of scenes, and sometimes even just one. Notable examples include a Corrupt Corporate Executive (played by Jim Backus of Gilligan's Island) who's very insistent on offering Burke snacks as he's being questioned, and a sportswriter who mimes competing in a horse race to mentally prepare himself to report on one.
- The Lumberjack and the Tree-Elf claims that (as of the announcement for the Third Quarter Quell) Blight was the last victor to join the Rebellion, right after the 72nd Hunger Games. Later stories imply that Cotton and Odysseus, the Victors of the 72nd and 73rd Hunger Games, joined the Rebellion as well before that date.
@ Star Wars – Rise of the Empire Era: Jedi Order
- Morality Chain: Aayla is a major influence in keeping Quinlan from fully going over to the Dark Side of the Force during the last legs of his Double Reverse Quadruple Agent arc, and also urges him not to sacrifice Khaleen's life during a spy mission early in the war.
- Shut Up, Hannibal!: Aayla defeats Aurra Sing in a duel and captures her while delivering a Breaking Speech to her about how her Backstory isn't that different from Aayla's own and is no excuse for all of the actions she's taken.
Edited by Melinda on Oct 6th 2021 at 7:43:10 AM
I'm so sorry from my previous posts and I didn't know. I will try to be carful next time.
Edens Zero Characters
- Eye Scream: Shiki loses an eye from Shura when he uses the full power of his Overdrive by pulling out Shiki’s eyeball.
- Tentacle Hair: Shura’s Overdrive gives him tentacles as hair and bears some resembles his adoptive father.
Fena: Pirate Princess
- Practically Different Generations: Abel is an adult in his late 20's a while his younger half-sister, Fena is somewhere in her mid or late teens.
Edited by Stardust120 on Oct 5th 2021 at 8:57:07 AM
- When Night Falls: Wakaru Mochizuki is a young man set on avenging his beloved sister Saya after her murderers were released from jail. Awakening the ability to enter into the dreams of others to hurt them in real life after fulfilling specific conditions, Wakaru uses his powers to attack Baba Knight and moves to target Sakamoto, disguising himself as a woman and winning a game against him to ask about Saya's murder, being willing to forgive him if he shows regret, killing him when he doesn't. Discovering that Baba survived and told the police about his powers, Wakaru manipulates the memories of Baba's brother into believing that he injured his sibling to clear his own name, and then, Wakaru manipulates Baba into attacking him in real life, using the opportunity to kill Baba as "self-defense". When attempting to deal with the ruthless criminal Akiyama, Wakaru works with a employee trying to get rid of his boss and allows himself to be beaten and be able to enter on Akiyama's dreams before luring Akiyama into dropping his cover, causing his arrest and eventual death.
Hi fellas. It's me again. Let's have another try.
A Headscratcher for Superman Returns:
- The film states that Lex Luthor got away with his plans in Superman: The Movie and Superman II because Superman was unable to testify in his trial to due leaving Earth to seek for Krypton's remains. Was Superman the only available witness? Yeah, Lois Lane couldn't testify against Luthor because she got her memories wiped out by Supes and Zod, Ursa and Non were killed once they lost their powers, but what about Otis and Eve Teschmacher? They were Luthor's accomplices, and given how Luthor treated them, they surely would have testified against him in court.
Trying to make a big post of all the stuff I've posted here so far to keep track, most likely not all of them however
For the Character Page of Vigilante
Traits shared across versions:
- Badass Biker: When he appears in the modern day, he rides a motorcycle instead of a horse.
- Cool Hat: Like any self-respecting cowboy, he wears a white Stetson cowboy hat.
- Cowboy: Greg's whole theme is being a cowboy superhero. In some version he's an actual cowboy from the Old West.
- Guns Akimbo: Like a proper gunslinger, Vigilante carries a pair of revolvers, with one holstered on each hip, two guns for each hand and twelve shots in total.
- The Gunslinger: He's a crack shot with his father's revolvers.
- Knows the Ropes: Greg is second only to Wonder Woman when it comes to expertise with a lasso, and just like the Amazon, he uses his lasso both in combat and post-combat to restrain his opponents.
- Primary-Color Champion: Greg's bright blue jacket, red bandanna and white cowboy hat stand out the most from his design, showing off his role as a protagonist and hero. This is especially notable compared to his darker-colored counterparts.
- Revolvers Are Just Better: Like any gunslinger from the west, he greatly favors the use of six-shooters as his ranged weapon.
- Spell My Name With An S: The spelling of his surname is either Sanders or Saunders.
- Spell My Name with a "The": Greg stands out from the other bearers of the Vigilante title by preceding it with a "The", denoting his status as the first Vigilante.
- Tragic Keepsake: Greg's dual revolvers were his father's before him: he now uses them to dispense his own brand of justice.
- Vigilante Man: As his hero name implies, he takes the law into his own hands to make the guilty pay. However, unlike the later bearers of the Vigilante title, he's much more merciful.
Trivia Page:
- Colbert Bump: Greg Sander's debut in the DCAU through Justice League Unlimited has caused a great deal of interest to spark for the first Vigilante.
- Image Source: Vigilante Man note
Vigilante page:
- First Installment Wins: It's rather telling that DC has tried multiple times to copy Adrian Chase's template when making new bearers of the Vigilante name, yet none have stuck around or gained an audience compared to Greg Saunders. The last version to have copied Chase's style (Donald Fairchild) had his series cancelled just after three issues. Meanwhile, Greg Saunders hasn't had any Legacy Characters compared to Adrian, note but Saunders has consistently remained as a part of the DC universe for decades. It certainly helps that Greg's animated debut in Justice League Unlimited has made him an Ensemble Dark Horse who's loved for his quirks and the Odd Friendship between him and Shining Knight. The surge in his popularity allowed Greg to return to television in Batman: The Brave and the Bold.
For Villain's Dying Grace: In Injustice vs. Masters of the Universe, Skeletor was able to take the powers of Shazam! (due to Billy Batson being deceased in the Injustice universe) and use them to forge his own Sword of Power. When fighting Injustice-verse Superman inside of Castle Grayskull, he is mortally wounded, and with his dying breath gives Prince Adam the power of the wizard Shazam to take on Superman and triumph.
For Superhero Movie Villains Die page:
- In the second season of Batman: The Telltale Series, the Dark Knight faces off against the Riddler in the first episode, but after Nygma is beaten, [[spoiler"he is killed by a poison dart from an unknown culprit by the end of the episode. We don't learn who was responsible until a few episodes later.]]
For DC Future State:
- Character Shilling: Most members of the Future State's Justice League are given some shilling but Jace and Jo (the current bearers of the Batman and Green Lantern mantles respectively) are given some rather egregious ones. It's stated that Jace was able to do something his predecessor didn't, which was truly save Gotham. Something the Batfamily (especially those who had previously held the Batman mantle) have been trying to achieve for several years, both in comics and in real life. The current Superman, says that Jo's "the best detective in the multiverse". Which is hard to swallow, considering she's still a new character by the time of the comic's release and hasn't really established herself to be deserving of that title, in comparison to other detectives within the DC universe. These well-known detectives being: Chimp Detective, John Constantine, Barry Allen, Mister Terrific, The Question and of course the original Batman: Bruce Wayne.
For the YMMV from Venomverse:
- Popular with Furries: While Rocket Rackoon was already quite popular with the furry fandom (the MCU film certainly helped renew interest). It was natural that when a Venomized version of Rocket would also garner quite a lot of interest. note
For Swipe Your Blade Off:
- An interesting case of this trope shows up in Bloodborne. One of the many trick weapons in the game is the Chikage, a "foreign-made weapon" where the trick is simply sheathing the blade and then pulling it out again. Doing so reveals that the blade is now enveloped in coagulated blood, turning it from a one-handed katana into a two-handed odachi. Returning the weapon back to normal is done by simply doing the classic swipe-to-the-ground move.
For Comic Books in Dumb Muscle:
- The Incredible Hulk is one of the most famous examples in comic book media: while he has childlike intelligence, he makes up for it in the insane levels of brawn he can muster in comparison to his alter ego's Omnidisciplinary Scientist level of brains. However, this is mostly relegated to his "Savage" Hulk persona, with his childlike simplicity being justified because the Savage Hulk represents all the repressed rage Bruce had thanks to his very abusive childhood. While his other personalities aren't as dumb as the main Hulk, the Savage Hulk can be remarkably cunning and shrewd when the situation calls for it.
- To somewhat complement the Hulk's simplistic Manchild mindset, most of his rogue's gallery whom can match up to him (barring a few) are mindless monstrosities.
Edited by WolfofBlades on Oct 5th 2021 at 10:26:30 PM
Everything Sucks ForeverIzuku Midoriya
A young boy who had face discrimination for being Quirkless. At the beginning of the story, he moved out of his mother's mother's apartment to live his own. He quickly befriends Tomura Shigaraki and Kurogiri and is unaware that they're villains. According to many characters, his smile is much warmer and brighter than the sun itself.
- Adaptation Relationship Overhaul:
- Izuku's relationship with the villains is much friendlier than canon, mostly since he's unaware of they're villains in the story. He's very close to Tomura and Shuichi, as he sees them as his older brother figures and enjoys spending time with them. He also sees All For One and Kurogiri as the closest things as father figures.
- His relationship with All Might is very different in the story. In canon, they both share a father and son relationship. Here, they aren't close and only met once in the story. All Might even gently tells Izuku to think realistic on a job. Izuku shows to be nervous on the thought of running into the man at U.A. High.
- His relationship with Mei Hatsume is completely different here. Unlike in canon, they are starting to become close friends and Mei sees him a partner after being impressed by his Quirk Analysis.
- All of the Other Reindeer: In his middle school, he's been bullied for being Quirkless. Serveal of his classmates would go extreme lengths to make the school a living hell whenever they have the chance.
- Dark and Troubled Past: Much like in canon, Izuku didn't had a good life. As a child, Izuku wanted to be a hero to help people with a smile on his face, but when it was discovered that he was Quirkless, his classmates immediately bullied him with his closest friend would be his primary bully. His mother, Inko, was caring towards him, but she didn't know how to support him of his dream of becoming a Pro Hero. Despite all this hardship, Izuku held onto his heroic dream with the hope it will one day come true. However, when he met his hero All Might by chance, Izuku discovered that his beloved hero is just a mere mask to keep the people at peace and the man would tell him to be realistic on his future. After getting nearly killed in the Slug Villain event and the heroes chewing him out on his reckless action, All Might would be the last straw for Izuku to realize that his dream will never come true.
- Disappeared Dad: His father, Hisashi, has yet to appear in the story. Chapter 33 reveals that Izuku sees him as a donor instead of a parent.
- Friendless Background: Just like in canon, Izuku haven't had a true friend once his Quirkless status was discovered with his classmates, especially Bakugo, would bullied him merciless.
- Locked Out of the Loop: He has no idea that his friends and neighbors are villains and are planning to destroy the Hero Society and kill All Might.
- Minor Living Alone: He's still a young teenage boy and is living on his own. He does have Kurogiri to look after him, though.
- Morality Pet: To Tomura, Kurogiri, Shuichi, and All For One. His smile alone makes them feel warm. Messing with him will be the last thing anyone would do before they meet a grumesome fate.
- Nice Guy: He's very sweet and kind towards everyone he meets. He barely holds any ill will towards his bullies, especially Bakugo.
- We Used to Be Friends: Like in the canon series, he and Bakugo used to be best friends before their respective Quirked and Quirkless statuses caused a wedged between them, and with Bakugo bullying Izuku for "pitying" him.
Edited by SugarButterfly432 on Oct 5th 2021 at 9:22:09 AM
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/PokemonTheOriginalSeriesCast
Ritchie (Hiroshi)
- Mirror Character: Ritchie also confides in Ash that they both end up underestimating how difficult and competitive winning a Pokemon League can be and they both resolve to learn from their mistakes in order to become better traniers in the long run.
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/OnePieceStrawHatMonkeyDLuffy
"Straw Hat" Monkey D. Luffy
- Coat Cape: Luffy sports a black pirate trench coat during the war at Onigashima in Act III of the Wano arc, which serves to symbolize his genuine ascension into an Emperor of the Sea and a true candidate for the title of Pirate King. So far, it has not fallen off despite all the damage Luffy has taken, including during his fights with Kaido.
This may be a better trope for Luffy's new pirate coat.
When Shiki uses the full power of his Overdrive, he loses an eye because Shura pulls out his eyeball.
^ It was easier to just re-write the whole sentence.
Shura’s Overdrive gives him tentacles as hair, <- comma which makes him resemble his...
Abel is an adult in his late 20's, <- comma while his younger half-sister <- no comma Fena...
Edited by Arivne on Oct 6th 2021 at 9:01:27 AM
...murderers are released...regret <- no comma but killing...Baba's brother so that he believes that...name. <- period Wakaru then manipulates...kill Baba "in self-defense"...beaten so he can enter on Akiyama's...
^ Memories can't believe anything. The person with those memories can.
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He also sees All For One and Kurogiri as the closest things he has to father figures.
...think realistically when on a job. Izuku shows himself to be nervous at the...into him at U.A. High.
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...he and Bakugo...respective Quirkless and Quirked statuses caused a wedge between them, and with...
Adding spoiler mark for newcomers to the work.
@YMMV page of The Simpsons S33 E2 "Bart's in Jail"
- Unexpected Character: Who didn't expect that Bill Cipher of all people to appear in this episode?
- Walking Spoiler: In fact that he faked his death at the marble game, is actually a creator of the Deadly Game and only participated this game just for the trill of it is difficult to talk about this character. Is there any wonder why this file has unmarked spoilers?
Edited by Bubblepig on Oct 6th 2021 at 2:18:47 AM
"Now it's starting to feel like a game!"Admirals
Species: Human

A cyborg imperial Admiral who commanded the fleet stationed over Mustafar in the episodic VR game, Vader Immortal and thus answered directly to the dark lord. He personally leads the interception and capture of the smuggler captain, before bringing them deeper into Vader's Castle.
- Affably Evil: Warns you not to tempt Vader's wrath, but he makes it clear that, regardless, he still expects you to inevitably fail whatever task his Sith superior gives you, but at least he promises you a merciful death afterwords. Fortunately, since you're the player, you prove him wrong.
- Badass Baritone: Steve Blum's voice is made even more badass by the mechanical reverb of the Admiral's respirator.
- Bald of Evil: He has a shiny dome to go along with his shiny metal arm.
- Custom Uniform: The Admiral's attire is slightly different from the standard imperial uniform to accommodate his prosthetics.
- The Dragon: Karius is the second highest ranked Imperial in Vader Immortal, outranked only by the titular dark lord.
- Hollywood Cyborg: His right arm is entirety mechanical, and the left side of his mug is covered by a metal respirator and mask.
- Kick the Dog: Orders Z0-E3 blasted the second she tries to speak when he first confronts her and the captain in person aboard their ship, before having the latter of the pair stunned as well.
- Made of Iron: Survived not only whatever it was that made him a cyborg, but also survives getting electrified and pushed over a walkway by Z0-E3.
- Mythology Gag: His appearance is based on concept art for a Nazi cyborg officer
originally developed for Raiders of the Lost Ark.
- This Is Gonna Suck: Lets out an "Oh karabast!" when the smuggler uses the force to rip out the controls of his TIE fighter before it spins out of control.
- Uncertain Doom: The last we see of him is inside the cockpit of a crashing TIE fighter but we don't see his body. He may have been killed in the crash, or survived it, or he may have survived only to be killed by Vader for failing to impede the smuggler.
Edited by Avenger09 on Oct 10th 2021 at 6:30:57 PM
Thanks @ Wasteland Elder
- Batman: No Man's Land:
- Dr. Leslie Thompkins, a contemporary of Batman's parents, is a respected figure who runs a refugee camp providing medical aid and other vital supplies to the people of Gotham after the city is ravaged by an earthquake and abandoned by the government for a year.
- One-Shot Character Sarge Riley is a respected neighborhood elder who helps the people of his community by standing up to the Wasteland Warlords (albeit with an occasional Know When to Fold 'Em moment) and discretely distributing canned food from his Cold War bomb shelter to refugees.
- Father Papaleo, an elderly, wheelchair-bound clergyman, serves as the co-leader of a pacifistic group and is arguably more worldly and practical than their leader, Father Chris.
- 9: Number One is a rare nonhuman example, being the leader of a group of robots who were built as humanity went extinct and exist in a dangerous and desolate landscape.
- Beasts of the Southern Wild: Wink, the protagonist's father, is the authoritative and determined leader of a shantytown at the edge of a levee. The residents are imperiled by floodwater and live apart from the outside world.
- The Book of Eli:
- Carnegie presents himself as one, running a frontier town and being one of the only people to remember pre-World War III society. However, beneath the surface, he's more of an aspiring Wasteland Warlord.
- The final scene features an old man running a museum in a Hidden Elf Village located in Alcatraz prison. He is happy to provide a safe place for Eli's Bible, while also accepting Solara into the group.
- The Dead: Amidst the Zombie Apocalypse, Brian and Daniel visit a village being run by a middle-aged army officer. He explains that and his men deserted from the army to protect their hometown.
- Tremors 4: The Legend Begins: Fifty-ish hotel owner Christine Lord is the de facto leader of the Dying Town Rejection, a mining community plagued by monster attacks.
- Station Eleven: Clark is at the airport, waiting for a plane, when The Plague hits, and ends up staying there afterward. Twenty years later, Clark is one of the oldest surviving characters featured in the story and has turned the airport into a thriving community and museum of the past.
- Ensemble Dark Horse: Several secondary and tertiary characters are pretty well-liked even among people who think the movie isn't that good.
- Sam and Jimmy, the conductors. Sam's popularity comes from being a Cool Old Guy with some impressive feats of bravery, and Jimmy's comes from being a hilarious Lovable Coward.
- Jackson is pretty popular despite being a decently imposing and suspicious guy, and makes some memorable intelligent and moral comments once he gets around to talking with The Hero.
- Gwen is pretty well-liked for her colorful punk wardrobe and for being played by Florence Pugh.
- The Doctor Who novel The Eyeless features a planet that was targeted with a superweapon, killing everyone except a couple of dozen people who were in a subway tunnel at the time. Decades later, they have a steadily-growing community led by a resourceful, good-natured former primary school teacher named Jeffip, who also acts as the Closest Thing We Got to a Sole Surviving Scientist.
Book
- Johnny Stevens, the Postman's first recruit, drowns while trying to recover a mailbag that falls into the river. This comes right after he survives several chapters of [[spoiler:being a prisoner or a fugitive of the Holnists.]] And then Gordon has to tell Johnny's grandfather about his fate.
- Gordon's attempt to recruit the Umpqua Valley faction is a miserable failure at first. Most of the letters he tries to deliver are addressed to people who have died in recent years, and therefore, his visit stirs up little but sadness.
Movie
- Bethlehem decides to level the town of Benning after the townspeople defy him, due to feeling emboldened by The Postman's presence. The Postman tries to plead for mercy on their behalf, but Bethlehem rejects this and then coldly twists the metaphorical knife in further.
'Bethlehem: These people made it through the bugs and the riots and the three-year winter. But they're not going to survive you.
- The retaliatory executions in Pineview. The Postman can only watch helplessly as Sheriff Briscoe is lined up to be shot. To make things worse, one of the letter carriers accompanying him recognizes one of the other condemned hostages as his father.
- When The Postman disbands the postal service, it's a sad moment on multiple levels. First, because of the crushing disappointment of his recruits. Second, because of how few of those recruits are left to hear his speech after the Holnists have spent the last several weeks targeting them.
- Johnny's slowly dawning Broken Pedestal suspicions that his False Friend Oscar might be using him to commit a robbery, and the way Oscar manages to keep fooling him. And then Oscar repeatedly tries to kill him in brutal ways."
The robot's deep respect for life, loyalty to his friends, and fondness for movie quotes all make him pretty lovable.
- Toy company purchasing agent Sandy, from the sequel. Her enthusiasm for novelty toys that her boss dislikes and the way she's eventually charmed by Ben's awkward flirting are pretty cute.
Edited by Melinda on Oct 7th 2021 at 7:41:19 AM
For Wrestle Angels Ai Character Page Sa-Ki:
- Nun Too Holy: Fortunately subverted. She's a church nun who is kind-hearted and takes care of orphans. However, she also works as a masked wrestler (she donates her pay to the church she serves in, obviously) with surprisingly good acting as a heel wrestler (complete with an Evil Laugh when performing certain type of attacks). It certainly doesn't help that her wrestling dress (which was modified from her mom's wrestling dress), has Absolute Cleavage (which also counts as Naughty Nuns), and her wrestling brief description is "Fallen Angel".
For Migiri Oosora:
- Super-Strength: She's unable to join the volleyball team due to her ridiculous physical strength. However, this ability benefits her in wrestling matches in a form of "Superhuman Strength" passive skill. In her vacation event, she can cut a whole piece of watermelon into two pieces, only with her finger (not hands, but only one finger).
Edited by Minorica on Oct 7th 2021 at 7:26:23 PM
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."
@Bubblepig
Who didn't expect that Bill Cipher of all people to appear in this episode?
^ You can either delete the word "that" or change the word "to" to "would". Your choice.
The fact...death in the...participated in the game just for the thrill of it makes it difficult...
Edited by Arivne on Oct 7th 2021 at 3:31:38 AM

From page 615 @Minorica
Chiharu (one of the Murakami twins) says this words in two of her lines when <- no colon she wins the match or gets heavily injured in the game.
^ Zero-Context Example - Says what words? To whom? Her opponent?
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^ Zero-Context Example - Can become what? How does she become it?
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^ ^^ Weblinks Are Not Examples
Edited by Arivne on Oct 5th 2021 at 4:44:30 AM