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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
For Crossover Ship:
- A lot of fans ship Miranda Priestly and Andy Sachs with Cruella DeVil, either individually or together. A lot of this comes from how similar Miranda and Cruella are to each other. So a lot of fans feel they would have good chemistry. They also feel that Andy would have a similar dynamic with Cruella and will often rewrite the film with Cruella in Miranda's role. The fact that both their actresses have appeared opposite Glenn Close before in different films also helps. The threesome pairing has a lot of fanfiction about it and is only topped by the very popular Miranda/Andy/Emily.
Any corrections?
Edited by Bullman on May 27th 2021 at 11:13:43 AM
Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup threadSomething I wanted to add to Web Videos.
- Fate/stay night [Unlimited Blade Works] Abridged, unlike in canon, Rin is doesn't believe Archer's claim about having amnesia. Archer clearly remembering Noble Phantasms and how to use magecraft gave away that he hadn't lost his memory, so while Rin isn't able to figure out his identity, she isn't fooled by his claims that he can't remember his name since he clearly hasn't lost his memory.
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- Fate/stay night [Unlimited Blade Works] Abridged: Unlike in canon, Rin doesn't believe Archer's claim about having amnesia. Archer clearly remembering Noble Phantasms and how to use magecraft gives away the fact that he hasn't lost his memory, so while Rin isn't able to figure out his identity, she isn't fooled by his claims that he can't remember his name.
Hi fellas. It's me again. Let's have another try.
For the The Delightful Children from Down the Lane page:
- Uncertain Doom: In the series finale "Operation: I.N.T.E.R.V.I.E.W.S.", Numbuh 1 manages to recover Father's pipe and escaping from their clutches in an unfinished log river bride, leading the DCFDTL to fall off the ride into a deep hole below, and that's the last we see them in the show.
- Uncertain Doom: In the series finale "Operation: I.N.T.E.R.V.I.E.W.S.", Numbuh 1 manages to recover Father's pipe and escape from their clutches on an unfinished log river bridge, leading the DCFDTL to fall off the ride [what ride?] into a deep hole below, and that's the last we see of them in the show.
[What do you mean, more concretely, when you say that he leads them to fall off?]
EDIT: [Also, you can remove the fact that Numbuh one recovers Father's pipe. That doesn't seem relevant to the trope.]
Edited by MichaelKatsuro on May 27th 2021 at 11:09:55 AM
Tales of Crestoria
- Death Seeker: When Esvanilla uses truesight stone on Kanata's inner thoughts reveals Kanata secretly wants to die because he can't stand being hate by everyone and finds living too awful and painful to bear. He says no matter what he does, he can't make his crimes go away and he can't be forgiven that why he wants to vanish.
- Driven to Suicide: Esvanilla commit suicide by thrown himself off the ledge. According to Aegis, there's no way his can survive the fall.
- Heroic Sacrifice: Nash sacrifice himself to protect Kanata from Esvanilla, who fused with King of Arabumi with a cost of his life.
- Last Request: Before Nash dies from his wounds, he request Sonia to take his eyes, uses them and watch over Kanata. They fulfilled Nash's final request and prepare to transplant his eyes to Sonia, but the doctor says one of his eyes was damaged and they can only save the other eye.
- Misanthrope Supreme: Esvanilla is a misanthrope and thinks humans are despicable and hideous creatures. He wants wipe out humanity and creates a utopia without humans. Esvanilla's reason for hating humans started when they condemned his father for proactive someone disturbed artworks. They accused his father for censorship of descanting art and was condemned on Vison Central.
Edited by Stardust120 on May 27th 2021 at 11:21:36 AM
Better this way?
For the The Delightful Children from Down the Lane page:
- Uncertain Doom: In the series finale "Operation: I.N.T.E.R.V.I.E.W.S.", Numbuh 1 defeats them on an unfinished log river bridge, which causes the DCFDTL to fall off into a deep hole below, and that's the last we see of them in the show.
Edited by ElJuaco on May 27th 2021 at 11:16:19 AM
So this is for the page of a strategy game mod called red flood:
- Non-Indicative Name: With a name like the Helsinki Veteran's Association they sound more like a veteran's advocacy group than anarchist bandits.
Edit: Forgot to mention I’m putting this here because of a suspension.
Edited by math3299 on May 27th 2021 at 1:26:02 PM
I'm suspended from editing for the time being, so could somebody else please publish my edits?
- Adaptational Intelligence: Gohan was a Badass Bookworm in canon, but he gets to show off his intelligence far more here. He has memorized the exact distance from Earth to the moon, the speed of sound, and has learned multiple foreign languages despite his young age.
- Fate/stay night [Unlimited Blade Works] Abridged: Unlike in canon, Rin doesn't believe Archer's claim about having amnesia. Archer clearly remembering Noble Phantasms and how to use magecraft gives away the fact that he hasn't lost his memory, so while Rin isn't able to figure out his identity, she isn't fooled by his claims that he can't remember his name.
Edited by FateStayWho on May 27th 2021 at 5:05:46 AM
Hello, since I'm suspended, mind if someone add this example to Fire Emblem: Genealogy of the Holy War - Non-Playable Characters (Scipio's folder).
- Clashing Cousins: If Scipio fights his male cousins, Lester and Febail, he is eager to kill them for being children of his "traitorous" aunts. Strangely, he has nothing special to say to his female cousins, Lana and Patty.
NOTE: I am aware that this was a week old, but it'll take a while for me to restore my editing privilege.
Edited by mariovsonic999 on May 27th 2021 at 4:47:25 AM
@Stardust
- Death Seeker: When Esvanilla uses the truesight stone [note:Is "truesight stone" a proper noun?] on Kanata's inner thoughts, it's revealed that Kanata secretly wants to die because he can't stand being hated by everyone and finds living too awful and painful to bear. He says no matter what he does, he can't make his crimes go away and [delete "he can't"] be forgiven, fueling his desire to vanish.
- Driven to Suicide: Esvanilla commits suicide by throwing himself off a ledge. According to Aegis, there's no way he can survive the fall.
- Heroic Sacrifice: Nash sacrifices himself to protect Kanata from Esvanilla, who fused himself with the King of Arabumi at the cost of his life.
- Last Request: Before Nash dies from his wounds, he requests Sonia to take his eyes and use them to watch over Kanata. They agree to fulfill Nash's final request and prepare to transplant his eyes to Sonia, but the doctor says one of his eyes was damaged and they can only save the other eye.
- Misanthrope Supreme: Esvanilla is a misanthrope and thinks humans are despicable and hideous creatures. He wants to wipe out humanity and create a utopia without humans. Esvanilla's reason for hating humans started when they condemned his father for proactive someone disturbed artworks [note:cannot understand what "proactive someone disturbed artworks" means]. They accused his father for censoring descanting art and was condemned on Vison Central.
Thank you @Excessive-Menace for correcting my grammars.
Tales of Crestoria characters
- Five Stages of Grief: Acceptance. Sonia finally got over her father's death and neutral terms with her brother Kanata, who killed their father. She still can't forgive him what he did, but she doesn't want him dead yet since she promised Nash she will keep watching him.
- It's All My Fault: When the truesight stone used on Misella to reveals her inner thoughts, it is revealed she secretly blames herself for not only being the reason Kanata committed a crime, but corrupted him. She believes Kanata will never forgive her for what she did. She wonders if she's punished by get hurt, impaled, burn to ash, tortured, disintegrate or kill, Kanata will forgive her and cancel out his sin.
Could someone post this in My Hero Academia - Artificial Humans under the USJ Nomu?
- Awesome, but Impractical: Retroactively he was deemed this. While he has the strength and Quirks to match All Might, he won't do anything without a direct order meaning he can't be sent on his own like the later Nomus. Kyudai later states that too much modification to the body will take its toll on the brain, which likely why the USJ Nomu can't act on his own and why no Nomu after him has the same level of physical strength or speed.
- The movie "Seven Female Prisoners" was banned there, and an Korean filmmaker who working on that film were also arrested, because of the portrayal of the North Korean soldiers in an light. He was later released, but he must make an anti-communist movie, and he then made another movie "Codeless Soldier". He was then arrested again due to one North Korean soldier were portrayed as handsome in the movie.
@Sheruru
- The movie Seven Female Prisoners was banned in [country (South Korea?)] due to portraying North Korean soldiers in a positive light. The Korean director of the film was also arrested due to his involvement in the film. He was later released, but was arrested again for making the film Codeless Soldier due to the film portraying a North Korean soldier as handsome.
If there's anything I got wrong factually about the movie and the circumstances of the arrests, please let me know.
@Fatestaywho
- Awesome, but Impractical: Retroactively [delete "he"] was deemed this. While he has the strength and Quirks to match All Might, he won't do anything without a direct order, meaning he can't be sent on his own like the later Nomus. Kyudai later states that too many modifications to the body will take its toll on the brain, which is likely why the USJ Nomu can't act on his own and why no Nomu after him has the same level of physical strength or speed.
Edited by Excessive-Menace on May 27th 2021 at 8:35:35 AM
SING TO ME, LEND ME THE SONG OF BLASPHEMYHere's one last post for the day (with some more stuff from that book being saved for later). The quotes are directly copied and pasted.
- Badass Boast: Artagan has this to say when Voystock betrays his escape attempt and wants him to beg.
Artagan: I am Artagan Truax. I have killed men in eleven systems. I have fought well and withstood much and have not given quarter. I will not be broken by the likes of you today, nor will my son. And I will not beg for mercy.
- Chekhov's Gunman: On his first day in prison, Maul sees a blind prisoner and wonders if he lost his eyes in a gladiator fight. The man is a worker in Radique's hidden arms factory and was blinded for security reasons.
- Dented Iron: Artagan is a famous prizefighter and former cult enforcer who has recently suffered a punctured lung and brain damage that gives him epilepsy.
In his fifty-fifth year of life he'd become what the other prisoners referred to as a knockout mouse, a former champion who'd hit the ceiling of his abilities and was waiting for the inevitable final bout. The one that would kill him.
- No One Sees the Boss: Radique is a powerful intergalactic arms dealer operating within the prison. Many (including the warden) believe that he's an Invented Individual. Maul begins to suspect he's Hidden in Plain Sight, posing as another prisoner. Neither is true. Radique is hiding in the prison's tunnel system.
- The Old Convict: Zero's name comes from how he's been at Cog Hive Seven since it opened. He isn't a real prisoner, but an administrator in disguise.
- Used to Be a Sweet Kid: Referenced when Zero reveals in-depth knowledge about the sister of cannibalistic gang leader Vas Nailhead after Vas bullies him.
Zero: After everything you've done, she hasn't stopped hoping you'll come back and be the boy that she remembers. The one who could always sing and make her laugh with every verse of "Sweet Fronda Fane."
Edited by Melinda on May 28th 2021 at 7:44:55 AM
What Could Have Been: Writer Peter Mehlman revealed that NBC suggested a crossover between Friends and Seinfeld. The event would take place in two episodes aired on the same night, with the characters from Seinfeld appearing on Friends, and vice versa. Larry David immediately rejected the idea.
Edited by verissimoallan on May 27th 2021 at 10:07:46 AM
Another Iron Harvest revise
Amazon Brigade: The Polanian Powered Armor unit, the Rycerz, is composed of women. With the Operation Eagle DLC, a good number of the Usonian mech and air units are piloted by women.
Note: There are likely more units voiced by women so adding more example would be appreciated
Gunther:
Hand Cannon: His main weapon is a single shot grenade launcher capable of destroying a tree, which he wields in one hand without difficulty. It is recognisable enough that he becomes a scapegoat when Wilhelm used it to murder his father.
Power Fist: His other weapon is an armoured mechanical gauntlet known as the iron fist, which contains a bayonet and is capable of destroying armour.
Adding additional stuff for the upcoming Usonia
Death from Above: Fitting for their DLC coming with the introduction of air units. Usonia comes additional air units to fight with. Including the Samson, an airship that uses six Attack Drones to drop bombs on their enemies, and the Revere, which combats air and ground with a barrage of rockets.
Note: This should likely be added upon the DLC release, to go into greater detail
It's Raining Men: One of Usonia special units is the paratrooper, who can drop to anyone on the map.
Eagleland: Adding on an additional sentence
But, judging by the trailers, they could easily slip into the boorish, seeing as how the first mission has them invade Alaska, which is under Rusviet rule, and intends to take over Arabia, under Saxony rule, to claim oil.
William Mason:
BFG: He wields an autocannon in a chainsaw grip when fighting in his suit
Hair of Gold, Heart of Gold: He has a neatly combed blonde hair and, by the trailers, he's against Usonia invading Arabia to take it's oil.
Note: This will likely be put in greater detail, or deleted, once we can get a better look upon release.
Powered Armor: William enters the battlefield in his own powered armor, which has a jetpack. And can also exit from it, turning the suit into a turret.
George Mason:
Cool Airship: George enters the battlefield in the Queen Langley, the largest airship in game, armed with two pairs of naval guns and four flamethrowers in the front to burn any ground forces in front of it.
So does it need editing?
Edited by ssbob90 on May 27th 2021 at 10:12:55 AM

@Arivne Would this revision work?