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Man, the mods are very strict when it comes to grammar and spelling.

And I'm not very good in making many examples without any mistakes.

I wish the mods are more forgiving with one, two, or even three minor mistakes in an edit. I'm sure minor mistakes aren't that big of a deal. Especially when the user tries their best not to make any mistakes.

I used Reverso to check my spelling.

Edited by kennydarmawan13 on May 9th 2021 at 8:21:40 AM

@ Splash

• Held Gaze: Madison and Al romantically look at each other when they met at the police station.

Here's an idea for Age of Wonders.

• Flaming Sword: The Fire Giant's Weapon Of Choice is a massive sword made of fire.

Fire Emblem Heroes Code: 4547311645 Fate/Grand Order Code: 188037115

@ Thrown from the Zeppelin

• The Three Investigators: In the Back Story of The Mystery of the Flaming Footprints, the founder of Lapathia gathered all of the local chieftains and nobles to propose his plan for a new kingdom. Only one man, who was dubbed Ivan the Bold, refused. His severed head was put on a pike outside by the end of the day.

@ Star Wars: Republic

• Adult Fear: Near the end of the Clone Wars, Tholme discusses how he always found it comforting to know that his former padawans Quinlan and Aayla would probably outlive him, but the war has destroyed that certainty.

@ Return of the Jedi

• Mood Whiplash: A somewhat lighthearted moment in Jabba's palace with lots of music and dancing takes a much darker turn when poor Oola ends up in the rancor pit.
• What Happened to the Mouse?: Two scout troopers are knocked unconscious rather than killed (the one Han fights right before the speeder chase and the one who briefly takes Leia prisoner), then are never seen or mentioned again as the Rebels continue on.

@ John Putnam Thatcher

• For Want Of A Nail: In Going for the Gold, a plan to distribute forged Eurocheques during the Winter Olympics is derailed when one of the criminals accidentally uses one of the forged checks to make a purchase instead of one of his actual checks. This attracts the attention of the authorities much earlier than anticipated.

@ Drag Me to Hell

• Ending Aversion: While the Downer Ending does have its fans, there are plenty of fans who utterly demonize it, and either pretend the movie stopped before that point or like to imagine that Christine somehow escapes or is rescued from Hell afterward.

@ The Insider

• When Don Hewitt angrily confronts Lowell for tipping off another station about the censorship of Wigand's interview.
  Hewit: Did you tell them that we're lying?
  Lowell: No. I should have.

Edited by Melinda on May 10th 2021 at 6:24:21 AM

Legends of Tomorrow S6E2 "Meat: The Legends" YMMV page (not yet created):

Anti-Climax Boss: The alien is all set up to be a major problem for the heroes - and then he is easily defeated, with just one shot.

For Recurring Extra Video Games:

• Kuukiyomi: There are some extras who also appear in some installments.
  • The pretty idol named B.B. appears in the background commercial posters, in her gravures, in her signage stand situation in the first and second games. She appears in the train machinist situation in the "Considerate Mode" and the concert situation in the "Considerate Together Mode" from the third game.
  • The 3 punk rock members: The bassist, the vocalist and the guitarist. The bassist appears in the 49th, 64th and 94th situations from the first game; 10th and 81st situations from the second game; and 76th and 89th situation from the third game. He also appears with B.B. in one of Co-Op situations when the train departs. The vocalist appears in the 58th and 63rd situations from the first game. And the guitarist only appears in the 64th and 94th situations in the "Considerate Mode" and B.B.'s concert situation of the Co-Op mode.
  • C-Ko's parents first appear in the 2nd game, especially the 72nd and the 89th situations. C-Ko's father also appears in the 100th situation of the third game.
  • The Big Bro and Setsuko from Grave of the Fireflies appear in some morality-based situations.

Proposed Trope grammar repair:
Some people are considered attractive and/or very adorable or whatsoever because they disguise as someone else, but what happens if their identities get revealed by accident/by misfortune?
Variants of accidental reveal:

1. The reveal is done without any digital devices involved, just sheer amount of misfortune, coincidence, uncontrollable emotions or nature's mischief.

2. The technical problems from people who are using avatars on the internet, but gets revealed due to a technical glitch.

3. someone unintentionally sees or takes a camera shot of something on the internet or someone in real life that reveals their true identity.

4. Someone who (doesn't) work(s) for stage and technical stuffs accidentally sets the wrong camera, turns on/off the wrong button and whatsoever due to sheer amount of stupidity, clumsiness, etc.

5. The reveal is done when someone stumbles upon the documents, which have the actual identity of someone and nobody expects that.

However, no matter how it occurs, this is often Played for Laughs or Played for Drama. This trope can be overlapped with So Much for Stealth and Conveniently Timed Guard if the someone fails to do a stealth mission. This can only be applied when The Reveal is unintentional and it can happen in real life. If someone intentionally or fantastically reveals their identity like unmasking someone, the magical camouflage potion wears off or intentionally finding someone's documents to prove something, this trope won't apply.

Remember that Tropes Are Tools. If it's done well, it will create a massive punchline and twist. Done poorly it will just create an offensive implication or downright disappointing.

A Sub-Trope of The Reveal and Secret Identity. A Sister Trope to Accidental Public Confession and Accidental Truth for the verbal equivalent. Not to be confused with Glamour Failure, when that trope describes the disguise fails due to some aspects and the second or third person knows it, not revealed by accident. This may be related to The Man Behind the Curtain, if the one who disguises is a villain or a Big Bad.\\

Edited by Minorica on May 12th 2021 at 1:33:46 AM

"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."

From page 467 @redandready45

The show's first two seasons...Daria worries about whether or not she's...

Edited by Arivne on May 10th 2021 at 2:58:02 AM

From page 468 @brb1006

...seriously by the...appearances by some...Sanrio characters (such...Sanrio characters in...seriously by other...With Their film...Suzu <- no comma and...adaptations of Osamu...Magic) are their...

Edited by Arivne on May 10th 2021 at 3:03:25 AM

From page 468, x6 @mariovsonic999

...which prevents enemies...afflicting the effect on the card, <- comma so...

Entomb obliterates the target — either friendly or enemy — and...Unless you have a way to...

x 8 @Squid Roofan 4 Ever

Madison and Al romantically look at each other when they meet at the police station.

x 7 @Melinda

Only one man, who was dubbed Ivan the Bold, <- comma refused.

A somewhat lighthearted moment in Jabba's palace with lots of music and dancing takes a much...

...prisoner), <- comma then are never seen or mentioned again as the Rebels continue on.

...instead of one of his actual checks.

Edited by Arivne on May 10th 2021 at 3:15:17 AM

x 7 @verissimoallan

The alien is all set up to be a major problem for the heroes - but then he is easily defeated...

x 7 @Minorica

There are some extras who are also appear in some installments.

Even She also appears in the concert situation in the...

...third game. <- period He also appears with...of the Co-Op...And The guitarist...

C-Ko's parents first appear in the 2nd game, especially the 72nd and the 89th situations...

Some people are considered attractive and/or adorable or whatsoever because they disguise themselves as...by accident or misfortune?

The reveal is done without any digital devices involved, just sheer amount of misfortune...

The technical problems from People who...the Internet <- no comma but get revealed...

Someone unintentionally sees or takes a camera shot of something on the Internet or...

Someone inexperienced with technical stagecraft accidentally...button or whatever due to sheer amount of stupidity...

The reveal occurs when someone unexpectedly stumbles upon the documents <- no comma revealing the person's actual identity.

...can overlap with...if the someone fails on a...identity, <- comma like...potion wearing off...

Done poorly, <- comma it...or be downright disappointing.

...Glamour Failure, which describes the disguise failing, <- comma due to some aspects and the second or third person knows it, not being revealed...one in disguise is a villain or the Big Bad.

Edited by Arivne on May 10th 2021 at 3:52:07 AM

Thank you Arivne.

"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."

For Magnificent Bastard.

• Nicolai Technus, ghost master of science and electrical technology is a hilarious Large Ham whose far more dangerous then he appears. Technus over the series keeps Danny on his toes, constantly upgrading and adapting himself to face off and fight Danny on an even playing field. Technus infiltrates the game Doomed and uses his powers and skils to try and win it in order to conquer the world wide web, coming dangerously close to winning. Eventually purging himself of his goofier quirks which were effecting his plans, Technus upgrades into the more sleek and sauve Technus 2.0. Technus 2.0 manipulates Danny and Valerie Gray into getting together in order to distract him so he can hack into and take control of her father's computer satellite allowing him control over all the world's technology. He later exploits Danny's Secret Identity to force him to not transform in public so he can kill him with valerie's suit and later in a move of quick thinking transforms Valerie into a new ghost hunter form to stall Danny as Technus 2.0 begins his digital ascension into a world wide threat.

• Desiree is a sultry ghost genie who in life was a harem girl whose heart broken was by the Sultan leading to her becoming twisted over time due to bitterness. Desiree grants the wishes of others and twists them to create chaos leading to best friends Danny and Tucker getting into blows. In her return, Desiree discovers that Sam was the person who convinced Danny to go into the Ghost Portal and hence get his powers and formulates a plan to get rid of him. She manipulates monsters into being sent against Danny's crush and then has them subtly hint that Sam is behind them causing them to come to blows and having Sam wish that they never meet which takes away Danny's powers. Desiree seeks to get him out of the way so she can use the wishes of the Shooting Star festival to give her ultimate power.
• Walker is the snarky warden of Ghost Zone's prison and a southern ghost who seeks to bring "order" to the Ghost Zone. After Danny escapes from him, Walker has his army invade the human world to flush him out. Walker sends the ghostly prisoner Wulf to sniff out all of the people Danny is close to in order to possess them and use them to manipulate public favour away from Danny by making him hated and feared by all. Framing him for the attacks, Walker when being defeated uses the body of the Mayor to proclaim that Danny is attacking him to permanently ruin his reputation stating "the town he lives in will now be his prison". Later kidnapping Danny's classmates, Walker plans to capture him when he arrives back in a backstab. A brilliance plotter with a love for sadistic jokes, Walker would end up being one of Danny's toughest opponents.

• Ghost Writer is a wisecracking ghost who decides to teach Danny a lesson about how ruining Christmas for others is wrong after Danny destroys his prized poem and mocks him for it. The Ghost Writer traps Danny in a world where everything rhymes in order to do so. Using his powers to summon and control monsters such as ghost reindeer or living Christmas tree monsters, The Ghost Writer cleverly sets about framing Danny for the destruction to the town and holiday they cause to make him into an outcast in order to to show him how ruining the holiday for others feels. When Danny returns to the Ghost Zone to defeat him, he summons all of Danny's Rogues Gallery to aid him and when they side with Danny against him due to a christmas truce has them mind controlled into fighting each other. Even though he's defeated, the Ghost Writer was still able to teach Danny his lesson and ends the episode being proud of him.

Edited by miraculous on May 10th 2021 at 11:19:12 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."

"Man, the mods are very strict when it comes to grammar and spelling.

And I'm not very good at making many examples without any mistakes.

I wish the mods were more forgiving with one, two, or even three minor mistakes in an edit. I'm sure minor mistakes aren't that big of a deal. Especially when the user tries their best not to make any mistakes.

I used Reverso to check my spelling."

(And to be honest, it doesn't matter whether the user tries their best or not if the result still has too many errors.)

Edited by MichaelKatsuro on May 10th 2021 at 7:11:29 AM

~kennydarmawan13 Sorry, forgot to tag you in the earlier post.

It's okay.

Speaking of, the post I made recently only had two minor errors that you corrected. I doubt those two errors were big enough to warrant a red flag.

Anyways, is it possible for me to have my suspension lifted on the condition that I will check my edits first? I promise to have a thorough examination of my edits in the future, and I am willing to take full responsibility of my actions and edits.

If I fail to uphold my condition, then I am more than happy to be banned from editing in TV Tropes again.

P.S. Thanks for correcting the mistakes.

I used Reverso to check my spelling.

Edited by kennydarmawan13 on May 10th 2021 at 7:39:48 AM

@ The Pyramid

• Adult Fear: Nora gets a phone call from her mother asking if she's in danger because of the nearby rioting, and Nora assures her that they'll be safer staying at the dig site.
• Doomed Predecessor: The party enters the pyramid through a somewhat out-of-place tunnel. They later realize it was dug by an earlier expedition when they discover the body of one of those explorers. His Apocalyptic Log (dated almost 120 years earlier) describes how he and his companions were trapped inside and mentions an escape route they'd been looking for.
• Who Wears Short Shorts: Nora spends the film wearing short shorts.

Edited by Melinda on May 10th 2021 at 9:54:04 AM

Kenny: All I can say is, other people have been unsuspended on the condition that they check their edits here first before they post them. Problem is, the majority of people who get unsuspended that way don't actually check their edits here every time. Or they do, but then they make small changes later that don't have proper grammar.

In short, they keep thinking "a small edit like this doesn't count, and besides, I know what I'm doing," when they clearly don't know what they're doing. Avoid that at all costs.

Edited by MichaelKatsuro on May 10th 2021 at 7:39:56 AM

Michael: Well, I can assure you that I will take the situation regarding spelling seriously. I am sure I have learned my lesson about editing now, and I am not going to just edit recklessly like before.

I now know that every edit counts now, and I will take every proper procedure until I am sure that I have made an edit without any mistakes.

I will check my spelling using a spell checker now, and I will also make sure that I'm not just making zero-context examples.

I will try to avoid the mentality that you described, and I will try to not repeat the same mistakes again.

I used Reverso to check my spelling.

I know that every edit counts now, and I will go through every proper procedure until I am sure that I have made an edit without any mistakes.

Melinda:

"...and Nora assures her that..."

"of the group who enter the pyramid" is unclear. Do you mean that it's the group that enters the pyramid, or the two members?

Hi guys. It's me again. Let's have another try.

Some potential Headscratchers for Pirates of the Caribbean: On Stranger Tides:

• If Blackbeard really wanted to be immortal, then why didn't he go after Davy Jones and kill him? Being captain of the Flying Dutchman guarantees immortality as long your heart is protected. The possibility of the Flying Dutchman's crew defeating the Queen Anne's Revenge's crew is slim considering that Blackbeard has the Sword of Triton and can use magic against his enemies.
• How did The Spaniard and his men to avoid the mermaids in Whitecap Bay? When they arrive to the Fountain of Youth's cave, they have suffered no losses, whereas Blackbeard lost some of his crewmen while trying to capture the mermaids and Barbossa's ship was sunken down by the mermaids with little effort.
• Upon discovering the Fountain of Youth, Blackbeard yells at Jack and tells him to not touch the water because only he can drink from it. But what if Jack touched the water? The water only affects you as long you have the Chalices of Cartagena and a mermaid's tear. Do Blackbeard believed that if Jack touched the water the Fountain was gonna explode or what?
• What happens with Barbossa's crew at the end? The British soldiers Barbossa brought to the cave mysteriously vanish after dragging away the corpses of Groves and Gillette. Did they join the Queen Anne's Revenge's crew afterwards or not? They don't appear to have joined it at the end of the film and the Spanish left immediately after destroying the Fountain, so they couldn't have slaughtered them.

And two Headscratchers for Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Men Tell No Tales:

• What happened with Bootstrap Turner? He promised Will to stay with him aboard the Flying Dutchman at the end of the third film but he is nowhere to be seen here. What's more, Will doesn't even mention his father while talking to Henry, not even saying something like "You're trying to free me just like I tried to do with your grandfather"? Did Bootstrap get bored of sailing with Will or what?
• If the Trident of Poseidon could break all curses of the Seven Seas, why didn't Barbossa and his cursed crew search for it once they got the curse of the Treasure of Cortés prior to the first film? They only became aware that they needed to keep Bootstrap with them to break the curse so they went after Will, but why didn't they consider to go for the Trident if tracking down Will was hard?

P.D. Michael Katsuro, yeah you're right. After your note, I concluded that Maximus's son Headscratcher for Gladiator isn't really a plot hole. The child surely missed his father a lot and didn't think that the horses were going to kill him.

Edited by ElJuaco on May 10th 2021 at 9:35:13 AM

Michael: Man, this is what I fear the most in editing now. And I'm still afraid of making new forum posts until today because I worry that I might make another spelling mistake.

I have been trying my best currently. I want to make sure that I don't make any mistakes while editing.

If a spell checker doesn't guarantee an edit without any mistakes in TV Tropes, then I'm not sure if I can ever improve enough to meet the standards of editing in this website.

I am taking my mistakes seriously, but the standards of editing in TV Tropes are too strict for me.

All I know, I want to prove to myself that I can make a new page in TV Tropes without making more than ten, if not five, mistakes. In fact, I am more than happy to proofread the page that I am making.

I used Reverso to check my spelling.

Edited by kennydarmawan13 on May 10th 2021 at 9:32:53 AM