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This thread is for tropers who have trouble with English and would like some help with the crazy grammar of this crazy language.

Write down what you wish to edit on the wiki. If you have been suspended from editing, another troper might be kind enough to edit for you after your suggestions have been corrected.

The thread is for help and feedback on your own suggested edits.

If you want help correcting other people's edits (e.g., if you find a page which seems to have grammar problems but want a second opinion, or you don't feel able to fix it by yourself) then that's off-topic here, but we have a separate Grammar Police cleanup thread that can provide assistance.

Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM

Stardust120 Since: May, 2019
#11326: Apr 30th 2021 at 11:27:50 AM

Hi Michael Katsuro and Arivne , thank you so much for correcting my grammars these past months, I notice you guys haven't check my post that I made two days ago. It's on Page 451. It is because it's sound correct, you guys need time to look at it or you guys forgot? Just curious.

I Guess I Became The Mother Of The Great Demon King's 10 Children in Another World

  • All Love Is Unrequited: Albert has a crush on Akari even though she's married to Demon King Gran and has children, but she doesn't feel the same way.
  • Oblivious to Love:: Albert is unaware An has romantic feeling for him and thinks she love for him as a father figure.

Edited by Stardust120 on Apr 30th 2021 at 11:30:09 AM

ElJuaco Since: Aug, 2019
#11327: Apr 30th 2021 at 1:23:14 PM

Hi guys. It's me once again. Let's have another try.

For a potential Headscratchers page of Como dice el dicho. Here's one for the episode "Al que de ajeno se viste, en la calle lo desvisten":

  • How do Paola and Federica know that it's going to rain the night Luz has her date with Paola's cousin René when they trick her to steal the paper dress that Lore did for them? What if Luz had never gotten the dress wet? Their plan would not have worked.
  • After Paola and Federica take a photo of Luz in her underwear after her dress was ruined by the rain, they share the photo in the gym next day to humiliate her. How did they take the photo? When they followed Luz, they were behind her and in the photo Luz appears from the front...
  • Why does the security guard take so long to go down from the second floor to the first floor after calling a patrol for Luz? When René asks her what she was doing, she responds that she was following them, but she arrived like three minutes later.

P.D.: Michael Katsuro, thanks for your previous explanation. It really makes sense, I'm going to be more cautious with the Headscratchers from now on. In regards to the characters' decisions, I have one I want to know if it can count like a Headscratcher or not. When Luz steals some clothes from a clothing shop, she tries to escape just as the shop's employee was about to enter into the storage area to check if they had clothes of Luz's seize. Why didn't she wait until the employee was busy checking for the clothes to run away?

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#11328: Apr 30th 2021 at 1:36:46 PM

"* Surprise Pregnancy: This happens to Akari at least four times.

  • Akari becomes pregnant with her second child after she and Gran share a cookie together without realizing it was actually a magic item called "love belly cookie". If a man and a woman share a cookie together, their child will be born.
  • As Akari and Gran are about to make love, she suddenly becomes pregnant with twins (a boy and girl) as the result of absorbing a large amount of Gran's magic energy. The dress Akari wore was actually a babymaker dress that Gran's mother created secretly. The dress magically created children from touching it.
  • Akari becomes pregnant with her fifth child from a magic hot spring that offers babies. According to a member of the staff, when a couple love each other very much and bathe in that hot spring, it will result in them having a child.

Tales of Crestoria Characters

  • Sadist: Esvanilla enjoys seeing his victims suffer and get eaten or killed by monsters after they [Who are "they"?] eat their victim's darker thoughts.
  • Would Hurt a Child: Esvanilla is not beyond hurting and killing children. He has no problem using the truesight stone [Are you sure that's the stone's name? I found nothing on Google] on Nash, feed it to Graddic Claw, and attack him. [Which "him"? Nash or Graddic?]

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#11329: Apr 30th 2021 at 1:43:51 PM

El Juaco:

  • How do Paola and Federica know that it's going to rain the night Luz has her date with Paola's cousin René and Paola and Federica trick her into stealing the paper dress that Lore made for them? What if Luz had never gotten the dress wet? Their plan would not have worked.
Methinks they read the weather report. smile
  • After Paola and Federica take a photo of Luz in her underwear after her dress is ruined by the rain, they share the photo in the gym next day to humiliate her. How did they take the photo? When they followed Luz, they were behind her and in the photo Luz appears from the front...
  • Why does the security guard take so long to go down from the second floor to the first floor after calling a patrol [What do you mean with "calling a patrol?] for Luz? When René asks her what she was doing, she responds that she was following them, but she arrived like three minutes later.

mariovsonic999 Since: Feb, 2012
#11330: Apr 30th 2021 at 4:23:53 PM

Here's are example in Fire Emblem: Mystery of the Emblem page that I want to fix.

  • That Man Is Dead: Sirius insist that Camus, his previous life, is dead and will deny anyone that claims that he was that man. He dons a secret identity during his return to Archanea because the revelation of his survival would cause further bloodshed in his beloved Grust. Once the war is over with both Grust and Princess Nyna's life safe, he returns back to Valentia to be with Tatiana.
  • You Didn't See That: In his last support conversation with Kris, an assailant jumps them out of nowhere and in the scuffle, Sirius's mask is knocked off. Kris gets a brief glimpse of his face, to which Sirius bluntly asks them to forget what they just saw and he'll consider it even.

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#11331: Apr 30th 2021 at 5:26:49 PM

Here are some examples in Fire Emblem: Mystery of the Emblem page that I want to fix.

  • That Man Is Dead: Sirius insist that Camus, his previous identity, is dead. Sirius will contradict anyone that claims that he was that man. He dons a secret identity during his return to Archanea because the revelation of his survival would cause further bloodshed in his beloved Grust. Once the war is over with both Grust's and Princess Nyna's life safe, he returns back to Valentia to be with Tatiana.
  • You Didn't See That: In Sirius's last support conversation with Kris, an assailant jumps them out of nowhere and in the scuffle, Sirius's mask is knocked off. Kris gets a brief glimpse of his face, and Sirius bluntly asks them to forget what they just saw and he'll consider it even.

ElJuaco Since: Aug, 2019
#11332: Apr 30th 2021 at 9:15:05 PM

Hi guys. It's me once again. Let's have another try.

For a potential Headscratchers page of Como dice el dicho. Here's one for the episode "Hijo malo, más vale doliente que sano":

  • After Saúl is arrested and taken to juvenile hall for murdering Luisito, his mother talks with the officer who arrested Saúl and he tells her that Saúl was bullied at school, but says that they can't use the bullying Saúl endured at school to reduce his sentence. Why don't they still arrest Saúl's main bully and his friends? They still threatened, abused and coerced Saúl, and these types of bullying are considered crimes.

SugarButterfly432 Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
#11333: Apr 30th 2021 at 11:08:05 PM

An Apple For The Teacher

  • Amnesiac Lover: After an apple that Iruma gave to him, Kalego finds out that some of his memories of his mystery lover have blocked. It's this, that Kalego looks for clues of his missing past and the current location of his lover.
  • Beach Kiss: Chapter 6 has a flashback of Kalego and his lover on a beach, with his lover playing in the water and twirling around while Kalego watched her in case she fell on her face before she ran up to him and kissed him.

Edited by SugarButterfly432 on May 1st 2021 at 12:41:22 PM

jOSEFdelaville Since: Dec, 2018
#11334: May 1st 2021 at 12:44:55 AM

I Spy

  • Mind over Matter: In the first ending of Spooky Mansion Deluxe, Skelly opens a window by waving at it from a distance, suggesting telekinesic powers.

Harry Potter - Character (Draco Malefoy)

Death Note (2017 movie)

  • Plot Hole: When Light threaten to write Ryuk's name in the Death Note, Ryuk dares Light to try, because no one ever managed to write more than the first two letter of his name. However, we see earlier in the film that a previous user of the Death Note did write Ryuk's full name, as part of a warning message for future users.

My Hero Academia - Character (Innsmouth's Siblings)

  • Chromatic Arrangement: All three of them wear similar clothes with different colors. One is dressed in red, one in blue and one in yellow.

Sock Series

  • Fungi Are Plants: Gaeous's parasitic fluid can grow both plants and fungi alike.

Edited by jOSEFdelaville on May 1st 2021 at 9:45:07 PM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#11335: May 1st 2021 at 1:24:19 AM

From page 453 @Melinda

...the story of a man whose neighbor said...

In Atlantis Found, the Nazi Arctic submarine base...

Prior to the events of The Treasure of Khan...

Then she discovers there are flaws...her own, <- comma and...he can fix...

Sourcebooks for The Thrawn Trilogy reveal that...no one but he could...

...final stage of the Death Star's construction. <- period Then...

Then <- no comma Lemelisk is resurrected...

...in creating the Death Star, <- comma but suffers this fate...

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#11336: May 1st 2021 at 1:27:40 AM

[up] x 10 @Stardust 120

Oblivious to Love: <- delete extra colon Albert is unaware An has romantic feelings for him and thinks her love for him is as for a father figure.

From page 451

...called a love...cookie. If a man and a woman...together, they will have a child.

As Akari and Gran are about...result of absorbing...The dress Akari was wearing was actually...secretly. When worn, the dress magically creates children from touch.

...magic hot spring that offer babies. According...the staff, when ...much, <- comma bathing in the spring will result in their having a child together.

...suffer and get eaten and killed by monsters after they eat their victim's darker thoughts.

problem using the truesight stone on Nash, feeding it to Graddic Claw, and attacking him.

Edited by Arivne on May 1st 2021 at 1:51:37 AM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#11337: May 1st 2021 at 1:30:59 AM

[up] x 5 @ElJuaco

...who arrested him and...sentence. Why don't they still arrest...

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#11338: May 1st 2021 at 1:36:50 AM

[up] x 5 @Sugar Butterfly 432

After an apple that Iruma gave to him, ...have been blocked. It's after this <- no comma that Kalego looks for clues about his missing past and the current location of his lover.

^ "After an apple that Iruma gave to him" what?

If there is no what, change to: "After Iruma gives him an apple,"

Chapter 6 has a flashback of Kalego and his lover on a beach, with his lover playing in the water and twirling around while Kalego watches her in case she falls on her face before she runs up to him and kisses him.

redandready45 Since: Mar, 2014
#11339: May 1st 2021 at 3:47:47 AM

@A Rabbit Among Wolves

  • Affably Evil: Junior is a criminal boss, but he does not use his organization to exploit Faunus, nor does he give out information that would endanger innocent civilians. Jaune is willing to work with him to track down Cinder and her criminal gang. He's also polite enough to offer his guests drinks.
  • Character Development: After seeing Jaune's lighter methods work in the sphere of public opinion, Sienna agrees to soften her approach, and is willing to tolerate Jaune working with humans. However, she still remains bigoted against humanity and believes her violent acts are justified.
  • The Dreaded: Jaune's (accidental) murder of Adam makes him a feared figure throughout Vale. Civilians who encounter him and his crew go into various shades of terror.
  • Make an Example of Them: Since Jaune refuses to work with her, Cinder coerces several criminal gangs to work with her by burning some of their goons alive .
  • Mrs. Robinson:
    • Elizabeth Tanner is a very negative example. She blackmails young Faunus men into having sex with her, on top of being a withered old lady. Her feeling up of Jaune is treated by everyone as Sick and Wrong.
    • Sienna Kahn is in her thirties, and chooses to engage in a relationship with Jaune. Her putting the moves on Jaune is presented is a more positive light, since Sienna actually likes Jaune as a person and admires him as a brilliant strategist.
  • The One Thing I Don't Hate About You: Ironwood sees Jaune as a criminal, but thinks his ability to sway public opinion would make him a good diplomat and politician.
  • Refuge in Audacity: Since Jaune is notorious for not wearing a mask in public, he and his crew decide to sneak into Junior's nightclub by publicly wearing full White Fang attire. The partygoers and employees mistake them for being partygoers...until he removes his mask.
  • Right Behind Me: Ilia gushes about Jaune's potential sexual adventures with Sienna, with Sienna standing right behind her, much to her embarassment.
  • Statuesque Stunner: Sienna Kahn, who is almost as tall as Jaune, and is seen as a knockout by men (and Ilia)
  • The Tease: Sienna has no problem using her beauty to rile others up. When she hears Ilia making noise about her soft skin, Sienna shoves her breast against Ilia's head and rubs her bare arms against Ilia's cheeks while grabbing for Jaune's newspaper.
  • Took a Level in Badass: Jaune starts out the story as a reluctant and timid agent of the White Fang whose only concern is making himself look good to the public. But as he becomes exposed to more and more injustice, and is more and more tied into the White Fang's power structure, he engages in bolder stunts and actions: he goes from doing simple charity work to disrupting the Vytal Festival with a vicious tirade about humanity's indifference to the plight of Faunus.

Edited by redandready45 on May 1st 2021 at 3:48:12 AM

Minorica Rhythm Heroine from Earth Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: It's so nice to be turned on again
Rhythm Heroine
#11340: May 1st 2021 at 5:55:29 AM

For Happy Ending Override Video Games:

For YMMV.Kuukiyomi:
  • That One Level: Although this game can be hard due to the fact that every minigame stage doesn't have any tutorials/how-to-play information (the game only tells you to act correctly), there are some instances:
    • Kuukiyomi: Consider It More! -New Era-:
      • In the 97th situation, unless you have played similar stages like this in the previous game, this can be made annoying by the fact that the game doesn't tell you in this situation, you have to raise your hands up instead of clapping them.
      • In the 100th situation, the player controls a baby (who suddenly knows how to walk) of the player protagonist and C-Ko. Some people don't know that the actual correct action is to not stand up and walk immediately, but to wait until the player protagonist grabs the camcorder. Because if you do, both couples will panic, the player protagonist will accidentally shove the camcorder due to panicking, and they won't have a chance to record their walking baby.
    • Kuukiyomi 3: Consider It More and More!! -Father to Son-:
      • The 19th situation adds the principle of Morton's Fork. Opening the window completely will let the cool air enter the classroom so the students can feel it, but at the same time they'll be disturbed and the teacher's explanation will be overshadowed by a loud announcement by a waste collection truck outside. Close the window, the students can focus on the teacher's explanation, but they'll suffer from the high temperature. The answer? Just open the window when there's no outside sound, but partially close it when the announcement speech bubble from the waste collection truck appears, and make sure the speech bubble size from the waste collection truck is smaller than the teacher's speech bubble.
      • In the 61st situation, the player controls the player protagonist to answer the question either correctly or not. Many virtual youtubers and players fall into a trap where they answer the question correctly and quickly, because in a few seconds, the staff slowly enters the screen with a placard saying "No Budget", implying that the quiz company doesn't have money as the player protagonist's prize.
For Bouquet Toss Video Games:
  • Kuukiyomi 2: Consider It More! -New Era-: In the 55th situation, the player controls the player protagonist either to catch the bouquet thrown by a bride or avoid it and let a crowd of women catch it instead.
For Kuukiyomi: For Lions and Tigers and Humans... Oh, My! Video Games:
  • Kuukiyomi: Being a Gag Series Minigame Game, it isn't surprising that it has both anthropomorphic and regular animals existing in this world.
    • Kuukiyomi: Consider It:
      • There's a situation where the player protagonist, who is a human, dates an anthropomorphic cow.
      • Another one is a situation where the player protagonist eats at the sushi bar while an anthropomorphic chicken is also in the same place. There's a type of sushi which the anthropomorphic chicken shouldn't eat.
      • In the Co-Op mode. There's a school specially for anthopomorphic animals.
    • Kuukiyomi 2: Consider It More! -New Era-: There's a situation where a human woman dates an anthropomorphic reindeer. However, there are also some situations involving regular animals with their human masters.
    • Kuukiyomi 3: Consider It More and More!! -Father to Son:
      • In the 55th situation, there's an anthropomorphic hare and a talking regular tortoise from The Tortoise and the Hare.
      • In the 95th situation, the player controls the human baby to look at the player protagonist and her spouse while the baby is on the baby bed in the hospital. And there are anthropomorphic baby animals between the baby, who are sleeping on their beds.
For Big Ol' Eyebrows Video Game:

Edited by Minorica on May 2nd 2021 at 9:39:41 PM

"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."
Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love
#11341: May 1st 2021 at 6:27:38 AM

Thanks Arivne. Also, I've been informed by a Mod I contacted that my Magnificent Bastard posts get edited well enough on that thread and so I don't need to keep posting them here as well.

Edited by Melinda on May 1st 2021 at 7:03:03 AM

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#11342: May 1st 2021 at 7:39:28 AM

Mind over Matter: In the first ending of Spooky Mansion Deluxe, Skelly opens a window by waving at it from a distance, suggesting telekinesic powers.

Harry Potter —Use an em dash and not a hyphen [ Character (Draco Malfoy)

Death Note (2017 movie)

  • Plot Hole: When Light threatens to write Ryuk's name in the Death Note, Ryuk dares Light to try, because no one ever managed to write more than the first two letter of his name. However, we see earlier in the film that a previous user of the Death Note did write Ryuk's full name, as part of a warning message for future users.

My Hero Academia — Character (Innsmouth's Siblings)

  • Chromatic Arrangement: All three of them wear similar clothes with different colors. One is dressed in red, one in blue and one in yellow.

Sock Series

  • Fungi Are Plants: Gaeous's parasitic fluid can grow both plants and fungi alike.

jOSEFdelaville Since: Dec, 2018
#11343: May 1st 2021 at 8:55:07 AM

[up] Does the way I write the indication of the page where I want to post my edit that important? That's just my way of saying where I'm gonna edit, I don't think there should be any wrong or right way to do this as long as people know what I mean. Plus, it's not directly part of the edit.

Edited by jOSEFdelaville on May 1st 2021 at 5:55:34 PM

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#11344: May 1st 2021 at 8:59:36 AM

As long as you don't post it on the actual page, sure, it's no big deal. I just figured I'd tell you, since using an em dash is the correct punctuation and that's the kind of thing I'm here to tell people about.

mariovsonic999 Since: Feb, 2012
#11345: May 1st 2021 at 9:29:37 AM

One example for Age of Wonders.

  • The Pig-Pen: As the result of Goblins living in wet and filthy swamps filled with deadly diseases, their irregular units, the Untouchables, have the Disgusting Stench ability which inflicts a debuff to adjacent units outside of their race. A Racial Governance upgrade can grant their Big Beetles the Disgusting Stench ability.

Edited by mariovsonic999 on May 1st 2021 at 9:32:18 AM

ElJuaco Since: Aug, 2019
#11346: May 1st 2021 at 10:55:53 AM

Hi guys. It's me once again. Let's have another try.

For a potential Headscratchers page of Como dice el dicho. Here's one for the episode "A quien no ama a sus parientes, deben romperle los dientes":

  • This one may bug some LGBT viewers of the show. In the flashback about when Gabriel's father rejects him for not being straight, Gabriel tells him that he is gay. However, back to the present time, Gabriel says that he feels like a woman and wants to be called Gabriela, but her father, her former friend Gerardo and the priest who was to initially organize her Quinceañera mass either insult her by calling her "faggot" or call her "gay" and Gabriela doesn't correct them, only speaking about her sexual orientation. Don't the show's crew know that gay and transgender are two different things?
  • When Gabriela's father comes to El Dicho to yell at her for inviting him to her Quinceañera party, Don Tomás asks him to calm down and don't insult Gabriela, but he refers to her as a "young man". If Gabriela feels like a woman, isn't Don Tomás misgendering her?
  • The priest that Catalina, Gabriela's mother, had hired to organize Gabriela's Quinceañera mass six months ago, goes back on his word and says that he can't do the mass because her "son" is an aberration and abnormal and he could get lynched or have his church burned if he does the mass. If the priest was against doing a mass for a trans girl, then why did he accept to organize it in the first place?
  • When Gabriela decides to sell her action figures to get money to pay for her Quinceañera dress after one of her father's friends stole her mother's money, her mother tells her that she loved to play with those action figures when she was little. Yet the action figures are packed. Does this mean that Gabriela never opened the boxes of her action figures? It's really unlikely that she would have kept the empty boxes.

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#11347: May 1st 2021 at 11:25:43 AM

  • [I cut the first sentence.] In the flashback about when Gabriel's father rejects him for not being straight, Gabriel tells him that he is gay. However, back in the present day, Gabriel says that he feels like a woman and wants to be called Gabriela, but her father, her former friend Gerardo and the priest who was to initially organize her Quinceañera mass either insult her by calling her "faggot" or call her "gay" and Gabriela doesn't correct them, only speaking about her sexual orientation. [What does she say about it?] Don't the show's crew know that gay and transgender are two different things?
  • When Gabriela's father comes to El Dicho to yell at her for inviting him to her Quinceañera party, Don Tomás asks him to calm down and not insult Gabriela, but he refers to her as a "young man". If Gabriela feels like a woman, isn't Don Tomás misgendering her?
'''So just to be clear: Is Don Tomás calling her by the name Gabriela while also calling her a "young man"?
  • The priest that Catalina, Gabriela's mother, has hired six months ago to organize Gabriela's Quinceañera mass, goes back on his word and says that he can't perform the mass because her "son" is an aberration and abnormal and he could get lynched or have his church burned if he performs the mass. If the priest was against doing a mass for a trans girl, then why did he accept to organize it in the first place?
  • When Gabriela decides to sell her action figures to get money to pay for her Quinceañera dress after one of her father's friends steals her mother's money, her mother tells her that she loved to play with those action figures when she was little. Yet the action figures are in their original packaging. Does this mean that Gabriela never opened the boxes of her action figures? It's really unlikely that she would have kept the empty boxes.
Here, it seems to me that you're looking for problems where there are none. Is there any specific reason why Gabriela couldn't have saved those boxes? Some people do, so why not Gabriela?

Edited by MichaelKatsuro on May 1st 2021 at 1:17:36 AM

Melinda Since: Dec, 2019 Relationship Status: Puppy love
#11348: May 1st 2021 at 12:42:42 PM

A brief explanation for a couple of my mistakes. The tense mistake in Lost City was initially because I was describing everything but the last sentence in the past tense (because some of the events happen just before the book starts and others after it starts) before deciding that was too confusing. I actually did have Arctic capitalized at first but then I thought because it was referring to a location and not an actual title of the building then it didn't apply.

@ Castle S 2 E 2 The Double Down

  • Contrived Coincidence: Both victims of the "Strangers on a Train"-Plot Murder were involved in bringing charges against a domestic abuser, and the murderers are completely unaware of this.
    Castle: It turns out our two victims were connected, it just had nothing to do with their deaths.
  • Not So Above It All: Beckett goes from lecturing the others for betting on who will close one of the cases first to placing $100.00 on her and Castle after a promising piece of evidence drops into their lap.
  • Pass the Popcorn: The opening scene shows Castle eating popcorn while watching the police struggling with colorful prisoners in the booking office. He comments that they should sell tickets.
@ The Nice Guys
  • A bartender who Healy roughs up for information still shows concern for the two detectives and warns them about the dangerous-looking people who are upstairs.
@ Pet Heir
  • In Journey of the Mountain Man by William Johnstone, two outlaws about to face down a vastly superior gunfighter write wills leaving their money to their horses. One of them says that it's so his horse will spend the rest of his life relaxing in a pasture full of hay.
@ Castle S 5 E 17 Scared To Death
  • Furniture Blockade: The opening scene has the victim sliding her sofa against her door (after already locking the deadbolts) to try and ward off whoever's threatened to kill her that night.
@ 100 Bullets
  • Broken Base: The series deliberately having exactly 100 issues is either a great thematic device that keeps it from going on for too long or an annoying gimmick that causes it to be wrapped up prematurely.
  • Fanon Discontinuity: The last issue isn't universally loved and accepted due to the way it wraps up some of the story arcs without explaining everything, leaves several unanswered questions and has some of the cast arguably behaving out of character.
  • He's Just Hiding: Some people like to think that the execution of Sigmar Rhone's family was faked, if only because it causes the otherwise well-liked Victor to border on crossing the Moral Event Horizon.
@ The Last Days of Krypton
  • Please, I Will Do Anything!: Gil-Ex freaks out during the destruction of Krypton and is ready to do whatever Jor-El wants if the scientist who he's spent several chapters antagonizing can pull off an eleventh-hour miracle. Unfortunately for everyone involved, it's too late for that.
    Gil-Ex: Contact Jor-El again! Give him anything he wants. The Council will support him now, so long as he tells us how to save ourselves.
@ Star Wars Legends
  • Laranth Tarak from the Coruscant Nights series is popular enough just for being a blaster-using Jedi. Many fans also appreciate her philosophy of letting the Force augment existing skills rather than becoming dependent on it and managing to defy expectations by using her blaster in a primarily defensive way.
@ The Nice Guys
  • While nursing a hangover, March does a nice Sherlock Scan of a note that Amelia wrote to determine that it refers to an address and not a flight number.
@ The Nice Guys
  • Jerkass Woobie: Amelia comes across as somewhat loony, rude, and ungrateful once March and Healy manage to have a long conversation with her. Still, the death of her boyfriend (which she briefly looks genuinely pained over) and her knowledge that her mother is a Corrupt Bureaucrat who's working with the people who want her dead can make her somewhat pitiable.

Edited by Melinda on May 2nd 2021 at 7:06:54 AM

Stardust120 Since: May, 2019
#11349: May 1st 2021 at 1:02:38 PM

Thunderbolt Fantasy Characters

  • The Caretaker: Implied. Tian Gong Gui Jiang become Mu Tian Ming's caretaker after she lost her sights from her last battle against Huo Shi Ming Huang in Xi-You.

Thunderbolt Fantasy Funny Page

  • In Sorcerous Sojourn a running gag where Juan Can Yun always stand on his butt or back after being the last one to transport in comic way.
  • In Legend of the Demon Princess, when Shang Bu Huan opens the bag that Shang Bu Huan gave him, only to find is a Nendoroid Lin Xue Ya (Good Smile Company product). He thinks the doll of Lin Xue Ya is a curse-looking thing. Plus the doll can be use communication device.

Edited by Stardust120 on May 1st 2021 at 5:37:33 AM

MichaelKatsuro Since: Apr, 2011
#11350: May 1st 2021 at 1:17:14 PM

"Implied. Tian Gong Gui Jiang become this to Mu Tian Ming after lost her sights from her last battle." This is a Zero-Context Example. You need more context.

  • In Sorcerous Sojourn, there's a running gag where Juan Can Yun always lands on his butt or back after being the last one to transport.'''
  • In Legend of the Demon Princess, when Shang Bu Huan opens the bag that Shang Bu Huan gave him, only to find a Nendoroid Lin Xue Ya. He thinks the doll of Lin Xue Ya is a cursed-looking thing.


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