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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
wingedcatgirl, yes. Just follow the instructions in that Administrivia?
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."How do I add an redirect, like this ? “[[redirect:MGCM Magicami]]”
Edited by Minorica on Jul 18th 2020 at 5:53:18 PM
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."I don't think you're supposed to include the name of the page you're redirecting from.
Also, the redirect coding isn't supposed to be on the page you're redirecting to. You're supposed to create a new page for the name Magicami and make that page only include the redirect coding.
Edited by MichaelKatsuro on Jul 18th 2020 at 2:54:19 PM
Michael Katsuro so on the empty page I want to make a redirect for... I should use [[redirect:Name]] inside the edit section?
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."Ok, it works. Thanks Michael Katsuro and wingedcatgirl.
Edited by Minorica on Jul 18th 2020 at 9:55:24 PM
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."Michael Katsuro, can you go over these and post them to their pages after you corrected them?
For Slap Stick;
- Tex Avery MGM Cartoons has heavily relied on slapstick, with characters getting hit on the head with mallets and other stuff, blowing up from bombs and TNT, getting Squashed Flat by heavy objects or bigger animals, and characters having their teeth fall out or even shattering to little pieces after getting hit, one of the most biggest examples to feature slapstick in the cartoons are Bad Luck Blackie, and Magical Maestro.
- While Most Classic Disney Shorts don’t use slapstick that much when compared to other studios at the time, their Goofy cartoons revolve all around violent slapstick, especially the "How To" shorts.
For Accordion Man;
- Scooby-Doo, Where Are You!: Scooby's arm gets crushed into an accordion while punching the mummy on "Scooby-Doo and a Mummy Too".
Tex Avery MGM Cartoons rely heavily on slapstick, with characters getting hit on the head with mallets and other stuff, blowing up from bombs and TNT, getting Squashed Flat by heavy objects or bigger animals, and having their teeth fall out or shattering to little pieces after getting hit.
I removed the last part since you said that two cartoons were one of the biggest examples. Imma need some more context for the Disney example.
Scooby-Doo, Where Are You!: Scooby's arm gets crushed into an accordion when he punches a mummy in "Scooby-Doo and a Mummy Too".
Edited by MichaelKatsuro on Jul 19th 2020 at 2:51:35 PM
For "Groundhog Day" Loop Video Game section:
- In Magicami, everytime one or more heroines die and in some cases, corrupted into a demon after they’re ambushed by demons, the time resets into the moment before the unwinnable battle and all the heroines are alive and intact. However, it’s revealed those aren’t time-loops at all, but actually Omnis’ special ability to self-teleport into identical alternate universes after one or more heroines die in previous universes, which also makes this a strange variant of decoy protagonists until Chapter 6 Episode 5 where the mind-torturing heroines’ deaths are over.
Edited by Minorica on Jul 19th 2020 at 8:35:30 PM
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."In MGCM, every time one or more heroines die and in some cases, get corrupted by demons into another demon, the time resets into the moment before the unwinnable battle and all the heroines are alive and intact. However, it’s revealed those aren’t time-loops at all, but actually Omnis's special ability to teleport into identical alternate universes after one or more heroines die in previous universes.
I removed the natter; if something is also a case of another trope then it goes under that trope.
Edited by MichaelKatsuro on Jul 19th 2020 at 6:56:23 PM
Ok Michael Katsuro.
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."- While Most Classic Disney Shorts don’t use slapstick that much when compared to other studios at the time, their Goofy cartoons revolve all around violent slapstick, with Goofy and Goofy look-alike characters getting punched in the face and hit on the head repeatedly, falling from high places with the signature "Goofy Holler" added to it, crashing into each others' cars, having cigars blow up in their faces, getting electrocuted, tipping over, having their underwear comedically exposed, getting kicked in the butt, and many other Amusing Injuries you could think of.
How’s this? Can you go over it and add it to Slap Stick?
You also forgot to add an * in front of Scooby-Doo, Where Are You! on Accordion Man.
Edited by Josh1999 on Jul 19th 2020 at 2:23:43 AM
For Misplaced Wildlife,
For Films - Animation folder;
- Disney's Song of the South:
- One of the antagonists, Br'er Bear, is a Grizzly Bear/Brown Bear, who lives in the southern United States. Grizzly Bears don’t live in the southern parts of the United States and live in the northwestern parts such as Alaska. Though, Black Bears do thrive around parts of the southern US.
- The popular Disney ride, Splash Mountain, not only featured the particularly misplaced Br'er Bear, it also featured a porcupine at one point of the ride, porcupines live in the western and northeastern parts of the United States rather than the southeastern parts.
Edited by Josh1999 on Jul 19th 2020 at 3:53:33 AM
Splash Mountain takes place in the southern United States and is based on Song of the South.
- Disney's Song of the South:
- One of the antagonists, Br'er Bear, is a Grizzly Bear/Brown Bear, who lives in the southern United States. Grizzly Bears don’t live in the southern parts of the United States and live in the northwestern parts such as Alaska. Though, Black Bears do thrive around parts of the southern US.
- The popular Disney ride, Splash Mountain, which is based on Song of the South and also takes place in the southern United States, not only featured the particularly misplaced Br'er Bear, it also featured a porcupine at one point of the ride, porcupines live in the western and northeastern parts of the United States rather than the southeastern parts.
Can you also add these to Misplaced Wildlife as well along with my Song of the South and Splash Mountain entries?;
For Films - Animation folder;
- Tweety's High Flying Adventure has Pete Puma, a mountain lion, living in an African jungle when mountain lions are supposed to live in the Americas rather than in Africa.
For Western Animation folder;
- Zig & Sharko with an exception of Zig the Hyena (who was introduced to an island in the South Pacific where the show takes place by getting lost at sea as a child before the events of the show), the show has several animals that aren’t normally found in deserted islands in the South Pacific such as Gorillas, Raccoons, Giraffes, Walruses, Kangaroos, Elephants, and Rhinos just to name a few.
Edited by Josh1999 on Jul 20th 2020 at 2:33:39 AM
Specifically, Splash Mountain is a ride based on Song of the South.
Working on: Author Appeal | Sandbox | Troper WallFor Decoy Protagonist Video Game section:
- A strange and Zig-Zagged variant in MGCM. It’s revealed that heroines who die in the time-loops and in some cases, corrupted into demons, are just identical alternate selves from previous alternate universes until Chapter 6 Episode 5 where he commands the heroines to retreat from the unwinnable battle where they died.
For MGCM:
- Concept Art Gallery: The official artbook of MGCM can be preordered online
. Unfortunately they’re only available to be preordered from 20th July to 27th August. Everyone who own this book will also get the code to get a UR dress ticket, a code-exclusive SR dress, code-exclusive in-game stickers, and 50 stamina drink items as in-game rewards.
For MGCM YMMV section:
- Hype Aversion: The upcoming official English server
for Magicami receives a few negative reactions from overseas, not because of its Surprise Creepy or Mind Screw premises, but because one of the English servers is held by Nutaku, that has a few bad reputations for localizing Japanese games for Westerners and some real money-induced in-game currencies. Another thing is a narmy Dub Name Change for Riri and Kokoa, must be seen
to believe.
Edited by Minorica on Jul 21st 2020 at 6:16:15 PM
"No matter how bad the heroes can get or how bad the situation is, we're sure we can overcome it and get our happy endings..."That doesn't really fit Decoy Protagonist.
Concept Art Gallery: The official art book of MGCM can be preordered online.
Unfortunately, it's only available for a limited time.
I deleted the last part since it sounded like a commercial, and wasn't really about the art book itself.
Now, the trope below isn't Hype Aversion, which is when people avoid something specifically because it's popular. But I still fixed it, because it probably does fit some trope.
- The upcoming official English server
for MGCM has received a few negative reactions from overseas because one of the English servers is held by Nutaku, a company that has a bad reputation for localizing Japanese games for Westerners and using real money to buy in-game money. Another thing is the narmy Dub Name Change for Riri and Kokoa, that has to be seen to be believed.
It'd be good to include what those name changes are, too. Heck, I'm curious myself!
Michael Katsuro, how's this?
For Misplaced Wildlife;
- Disney's Song of the South:
- One of the antagonists, Br'er Bear, is a Grizzly Bear/Brown Bear, who lives in the southern United States. Grizzly Bears don’t live in the southern parts of the United States and live in the northwestern parts such as Alaska. Though, Black Bears do thrive around parts of the southern US.
- The popular Disney ride, Splash Mountain, which is based on Song of the South and also takes place in the southern United States, not only featured the particularly misplaced Br'er Bear, it also featured a porcupine at one point of the ride, porcupines live in the western and northeastern parts of the United States rather than the southeastern parts.
- Tweety's High Flying Adventure has Pete Puma, a mountain lion, living in an African jungle when mountain lions are supposed to live in the Americas rather than in Africa.
- Zig & Sharko with an exception of Zig the Hyena (who was introduced to an island in the South Pacific where the show takes place by getting lost at sea as a child before the events of the show), the show has several animals that aren’t normally found in deserted islands in the South Pacific such as Gorillas, Raccoons, Giraffes, Walruses, Kangaroos, Elephants, and Rhinos just to name a few.
For Slap Stick;
- While Most Classic Disney Shorts don’t use slapstick that much when compared to other studios at the time, their Goofy cartoons revolve all around violent slapstick, with Goofy and Goofy look-alike characters getting punched in the face and hit on the head repeatedly, falling from high places with the signature "Goofy Holler" added to it, crashing into each others' cars, having cigars blow up in their faces, getting electrocuted, tipping over, having their underwear comedically exposed, getting kicked in the butt, and many other Amusing Injuries you could think of.
Can you go over these and add them to their respective folders?
You also forgot to add an * in front of Scooby-Doo, Where Are You! on Accordion Man.
Oh, I see. Thank you Michael Katsuro ![]()
Michael Katsuro can you add these then;
For Misplaced Wildlife;
For Films - Animation folder;
- Disney's Song of the South:
- One of the antagonists, Br'er Bear, is a Grizzly Bear/Brown Bear, who lives in the southern United States. Grizzly Bears don’t live in the southern parts of the United States and live in the northwestern parts such as Alaska. Though, Black Bears do thrive around parts of the southern US.
- The popular Disney ride, Splash Mountain, which is based on Song of the South and also takes place in the southern United States, not only featured the particularly misplaced Br'er Bear, it also featured a porcupine at one point of the ride, porcupines live in the western and northeastern parts of the United States rather than the southeastern parts.
- Tweety's High Flying Adventure has Pete Puma, a mountain lion, living in an African jungle when mountain lions are supposed to live in the Americas rather than in Africa.
For Western Animation folder;
- Johnny Bravo on "Bungle in the Jungle" Johnny Bravo gets chased by several animals after accidentally injuring Jungle Boy while falling from a plane such as a bear and two beavers, bears and beavers do not live in Africa and live in more temperate places like forests such as in North America, Europe, and Asia.
- Cow and Chicken "Grizzly Beaver Safari" has Cow and Chicken going against a grizzly beaver in Africa, there are no beavers in Africa.
- Zig & Sharko with an exception of Zig the Hyena (who was introduced to an island in the South Pacific where the show takes place by getting lost at sea as a child before the events of the show started), the show has several animals that aren’t normally found in deserted islands in the South Pacific such as Gorillas, Raccoons, Giraffes, Walruses, Kangaroos, Elephants, and Rhinos just to name a few.
- The Grim Adventures of Billy & Mandy on "Short Tall Tales" on Grim's Pecos Bill story, Billy (as Pecos Bill) is seen riding an Ostrich in the American west, Ostriches are only found in Africa and not North America.
- The Angry Beavers:
- Norbert is an interesting example due to him being a Eurasian Beaver (from Europe) rather than being a North American Beaver (like Dagget) in a North American forest where the show takes place.
- Bing is also another interesting case, due to him being half Gecko and half Chameleon when Chameleons in real life are supposed to live in Africa, the Middle East, Asia, and the Mediterranean coast rather than in North American forests.
For Slap Stick;
- While Most Classic Disney Shorts don’t use slapstick that much when compared to other studios at the time, their Goofy cartoons revolve all around violent slapstick, with Goofy and Goofy look-alike characters getting punched in the face and hit on the head repeatedly, falling from high places with the signature "Goofy Holler" added to it, crashing into each others' cars, having cigars blow up in their faces, getting electrocuted, tipping over, having their underwear comedically exposed, getting kicked in the butt, and many other Amusing Injuries you could think of.
Edited by Josh1999 on Jul 21st 2020 at 8:30:01 AM

You mean a redirect? See Creating New Redirects.
Suddenly I'm... still rotating Fallen London in my mind even though I've stopped actively playing it.