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• After the second season's 5th episode, Many YohaRiko shippers believe that their mothers actually shipping their daughters wholeheartedly, given on how Mrs. Tsushima left her phone at the Sakurauchi household.

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• After the second season's 5th episode, Many YohaRiko shippers believe that their mothers are actually shipping their daughters wholeheartedly, given on how Mrs. Tsushima left her phone at the Sakurauchi household. Also, given on how the yuri fans pair both the mother and daughter with them, they also assume that the Tsushima family's women are fated to be the Sakurauchi family maidens' true love in spite of both being inevitably married to a man.

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Jun 21st 2019 at 10:57:22 PM

Creation of Crash Team Racing Nitro-Fueled :

• The fun begins immediately at the title screen! Not only you get the "Crash gets clobbered by the CTR letters" made even funnier with the improved graphics, but if you deliberately wait at said screen, Crash will not appreciate it. He'll get a cramp at his cheeks from smiling, point at the "Press START" text, roll his eyes exasperatedly, start sleeping, look a butterfly fly...
• Remember the glitches accompanying Penta Penguin in the NTSC version of the original? Especially "Penguin Yay 1" and the fact he has both Aku Aku AND Uka Uka for the Mask powerup? Well, Beenox did, and instead of just correcting the bugs, they decided to run with it! Penta now does say "Penguin Yay 1" for real, and he has Ambiguously Evil moments in his victory animations!
• Many podium victory anmations are just hilarious:
  • Khan!Komodo Joe shows off with a huge morning star, but it's clearly too heavy for him, and it falls first on his head, then on his foot.
  • Bulldog!Zam... pisses. Nothing explicit is shown, but it's cringingly obvious what's he's doing...
• The new "Where Are They Now?" Epilogue offers loads of moments, expanding on the original's ones or downright creating new ones:
  • The sheer irony in the fact that Dingodile becomes... a firefighter!!

Update of Crash Team Racing Nitro-Fueled :

• Komodo Joe's boss fight's cutscenes turn him in a freaking Ninja, expert in the art of Smoke Out.
• Some podium victory animations are pretty damn impressive:
  • Ninja!Cortex and Ninja!Penta will execute flawless katas.
  • Punk!Zem plays Air Guitar, and it really does music!

Edited by Mekal on Jun 21st 2019 at 1:47:51 AM

x 5 @brb1006

Even before we see Chirin as an adult, seeing him angry as a young lamb is even worse, <- comma mainly when he starts yelling or screaming in rage, such as the two scenes when he gives an angry speech. It gets worse once he starts growing horns and his wool starts looking less cuddly and more menacing (as seen in the page image).

^ I deleted "(as seen in the page image)" because it violates How to Write an Example - Remember That This Is A Wiki.

While also sad, any time Chirin is frightened or very upset as a lamb.

@Mekal

The fun begins immediately at the title screen! Not only do you get the "Crash gets clobbered by the CTR letters", <- comma made even funnier with the improved graphics, but if you deliberately wait at said screen, Crash will not appreciate it. He'll get a cramp in his cheeks from smiling, point at the "Press START" text, roll his eyes exasperatedly, start sleeping, look at a butterfly flying by...

Remember the glitches accompanying Penta Penguin in the NTSC version of the original? Especially "Penguin Yay 1" and the fact that he has both Aku Aku AND Uka Uka for the Mask powerup?

Many podium victory animations are just hilarious:

Khan!Komodo Joe shows off with a huge morning star, but it's clearly too heavy for him, and it falls first on his head, then on his foot.

Bulldog!Zam... pisses. Nothing explicit is shown, but it's cringingly obvious what's he's doing...

^ ^^ "Khan!Komodo" and "Bulldog!Zam" both violate Characterization Tags.

• The new "Where Are They Now?" epilogue offers loads of moments, expanding on the original's ones or downright creating new ones:
  • The sheer irony in the fact that Dingodile becomes... a firefighter!!

^ This violates Example Indentation. Warning: this rules violation can result in being suspended from editing.

Komodo Joe's boss fight's cutscenes turn him into a freaking ninja, expert in the art of Smoke Out.

Ninja!Cortex, Ninja!Penta, Punk!Zem

^ See above.

Edited by Arivne on Jun 21st 2019 at 2:07:52 AM

Naruto - Sakura Haruno:

• Leeroy Jenkins: For someone so intelligent, Sakura is prone to be just as stubbornly impulsive as Naruto, making rash choices with nearly disastrous results, which is more suicidal and boneheaded on her part, considering she doesn't have Naruto's incredible powers, endurance, or even the ability to work around the trait's drawback. It's worse when Naruto and Sasuke are part of the situation.

Edited by jahman on Jun 22nd 2019 at 6:10:52 AM

Catwoman

• Oblivious to Hatred: Deconstruction. Selina Kyle's childhood friend Sylvia Sinclair had a deep hatred for her because when they were teenagers working the streets together as prostitutes, Sylvia took Selina's place during their first time so Selina wouldn't have to go through with it. Selina didn't know how to handle Sylvia after the incident or attempt to comfort her, causing Sylvia to develop a deep hatred of Selina because she felt Selina abandoned her. Despite there shaky history and in a past during a heist gone bad, Selina was forced to leave Sylvia to be arrested, Selina was in dark about Sylvia hatred for her and trusted her considering Sylvia her closest childhood friend. Sylvia abuse that trust by revealing her identity to her enemy Black Mask. Who kidnap Selina's little sister Maggie and her husband Simon Burton. Simon is tortured to death, while Maggie is tortured to insanity.

• Green Arrow
• Good Is Not Nice: Deconstruction. While Oliver Queen ultimately a force of good, he has never been particularly nice about it. On his best days, he's rude, arrogant, and is always convinced that his idea is better. On most days, he's a sanctimonious, elitist jackass. At his worst, he's a complete asshole. Oliver personal life and professional life are a wreck because of his behavior and actions. His relationship with his friends and family is strained, with him constantly cheating on his long time girlfriend Black Canary (Dinah Lance), neglecting his sidekick and ward Speedy I/Arsenal/Red Arrow I (Roy Harper), abandoning his biological son Green Arrow II (Connor Hawke) at birth and lying to Connor that he did not know he was his son when they meet and Connor become his sidekick. Oliver also doesn't have a great reputation among the superhero community due to his smug tendencies and boorish behavior. While Oliver generally tries and usually manages to do the right thing, there are times were even his teammates at the Justice League barely tolerates him. While he made a genuinely effort to be a better boyfriend and husband to his girlfriend/wife Black Canary (Dinah Lance), and reconnection with his sons Roy and Connor while being a better father to them. And was able to repair his relationship with them and become a better superhero. Things went crashing down in the Cry for Justice & Rise and Fall storyline where Green Arrow I (Oliver Queen) murders Prometheus for destroying Star City and causing the death of his adopted granddaughter Lian Harper. His family washes their hands of him, with his wife Dinah Lance returning her wedding ring and declaring their marriage over and his adopted son Roy Harper and biological son Connor Hawke tell him they are through with him. With it being implied that Oliver killing Prometheus is the last straw for his family and his mistreat of them was the main cause of them leaving Oliver.

• Black Canary
• Moment of Weakness: Implied. During the Cry for Justice & Rise and Fall storyline, Black Canary (Dinah Lance) abandons her husband Green Arrow I (Oliver Queen) and her adopted son Speedy I/Arsenal/Red Arrow I (Roy Harper). She left the both of them because Oliver Queen murders Prometheus for destroying Star City and causing the death of his adopted granddaughter Lian Harper, while Roy goes back to using heroin after the pain in his right arm becomes too unbearable because of the infection and the horrible prosthetic Cyborg made, she officially considers him a lost cause. However it is hinted that Dinah was traumatized because of the events of the story and was lashing out at them. Also it is hinted that Dinah was subconsciously was looking for a excuse to abandon them and leave the painful tragedy behind her. In Birds of Prey, it is revealed Dinah harbors a hug amount of guilt for her actions and regrets abandoning them when they needed her the most.

• Recess
• All for Nothing: In season 1 episode Officer Mikey, Mikey Blumberg wants to become a safety ranger, he was rejected because he made a bad impression on there leader Captain Brad. Mikey because sad, stating that becoming a safety ranger was his dream. So Mikey friends try to get him a safety ranger, they learn that the captain can be overruled if a potential recruit is personally sponsored by two other guards. They find two guards, Allen and Ronnie are willing to sponsored Mikey if they can make there dream of singing the national anthem over the school PA at the weekly flag raising ceremony come true. They go to Menlo who help Miss Lemon with the flag ceremony every week, he agree to help them if them make his dream of carrying Ashley A. book come true, Ashley A. agree if they can get her diary back from her little sister Brittany who stole it. Brittany agree to give back the diary if they can make her dream come true of her sitting on King Bob throne, Bob agree if the gang can give him a true friend that does not care that he king, someone that just see him as Bob. The gang give Bob a puppy, who let Brittany sit on his throne, who give Ashley A. her diary back, who let Menlo carry her books, who has Allen and Ronnie sing the national anthem over the school PA at the weekly flag raising ceremony. Finally Allen and Ronnie sponsored Mikey and he get in the safety rangers. The gang go into school happy they made Mikey dream come true, only to find Mikey eating in the cafeteria. Shock they ask him what he doing, Mikey revealed he quit. Shock they said Mikey has not even been a safety ranger for a day, Mikey explains how he had a rotten day he has to get up early, miss breakfast, and it rains. Also, when he tries to stop kids from skateboarding, they spit at him. Mikey told his friends he had a new dream of being a jet pilot; as he finishes talking he notices the gang has left.
• All of the Other Reindeer:
  • Gus Griswald was unpopular because he was the new kid, also being a little shy and somewhat dweeby did not help. While Gus escape the new kid label, unfortunately Gus unpopularly never completely went away and some episodes focus on this. Sadly in season 3 episode The Ratings Game", when The Ashleys start a rating system where 1 is the lowest and 10 is the highest, it telling that Gus got a 0 were even Randall who unpopular himself get a 1.
  • Mikey Blumberg is a nice guy. Unfortunately there are kids who dislike Mikey because he can come across as too nice and because he can be a bit of a Extreme Doormat, a lot of kids take advantage of that and push him around. In season 3 episode The Ratings Game", when The Ashleys start a rating system where 1 is the lowest and 10 is the highest, Mikey got a 1, the same as the unpopular Randall.
• Innocently Insensitive: Mikey in season 1 episode Officer Mikey wanted to be a safety ranger, going as far to say it his dream. His friends work hard to make his dream a reality, doing a bunch of favors to different kids, until they finally get him into the safety rangers.The gang go into school happy they made Mikey dream come true, only to be shock to find Mikey eating in the cafeteria. Mikey told them he quit, shock they said Mikey has not even been a safety ranger for a day, Mikey told them the awfully day he had with him having to get up early, miss breakfast, and it rains. Also, when he tries to stop kids from skateboarding, they spit at him. Mikey told his friends he had a new dream of being a jet pilot; as Mikey telling his friends this he does not notice how shock and devastated his friends are because of all the work they did for Mikey was for nothing, when Mikey stop talking he notice his friends were gone.
• Reality Ensues: In season 1 episode Officer Mikey, Mikey Blumberg wants to become a safety ranger because he was impress with a demonstration on the safety rangers, he was rejected because he made a bad impression on there leader Captain Brad. Mikey because sad, stating that becoming a safety ranger was his dream. Going as far to saying being a safety ranger was the only thing he really wanted. So Mikey friends try to get him a safety ranger, doing all kind a favors for kids across the playground, until they finally get him into the safety rangers. The gang go into the school happy that they made Mikey dream come true, only to find Mikey eating in the cafeteria. Mikey told them he quit after one day, because he had a rotten day he has to get up early, miss breakfast, and it rains. Also, when he tries to stop kids from skateboarding, they spit at him. Mikey told his friends he had a new dream of being a jet pilot. Mikey is a kid and most kids could not handle that tip of responsibility, and most kids have new dreams all the time, if his friends give Mikey time, he probably forgot about his dream of being a safety ranger.

Edited by AmazingCartoonHero on Jun 22nd 2019 at 12:25:00 PM

• Abusive Parents: Marina never trust Natasha because she is verbally abusive to her since when she still a child.
• Freudian Excuse: In Travel In Time case 10 shown that Lev is not only a terrible husband to her mother due to he has affair with another woman, but also verbally abusive to Natasha when she still young. Marina ultimately understand why her mother treat her in the same way with Lev when she still a child.
• Knight of Cerebus: While she indeed sympathetic 10 years old Child Soldier with some standards, Ple-Two proved to be one of formidable antagonist since she has none of Elpeo Ple cheerful side, her newtypes power even more powerful than her, piloting two gigantic and powerful mobile suit, and the person who responsible for Elpeo Ple's death.
• Super-Soldier: A cloned Child Soldier that create by Glemmy from Elpeo Ple.
• Real Name as an Alias: Jenny still use her real name instead of using another name when Uno order her to become TEKNO Agents.
• Psychopathic Manchild: Cinco is cute and soft-spoken full-grown woman, but her manner is resemble with a teenage-girl and never put away her sadistic side. In episode Mission:Legacy, her frustration after many young agents engage a battle is more looks like a annoyed teenage girls who wanted to shoot them out of frustration.

@Arivne How is it a violation of Example Indentation? I've been at the page, and I don't understand. Also, I AM suspended :(

x 4 @jahman

For someone as intelligent as she is, Sakura is prone to be just as stubbornly impulsive as Naruto, making rash choices with nearly disastrous results. <- period This is more suicidal and boneheaded on her part, considering she doesn't have Naruto's incredible powers, endurance, or even the ability to work around the trait's drawback.

@ICHISHI-SHIPPER

Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Marina doesn't trust Natasha because she has been verbally abusive to her since when she was a child.

In Travel In Time case 10, <- comma it is shown that Lev is not only a terrible husband to her mother due to his affair with another woman, but was also verbally abusive to Natasha when she was still young. Marina ultimately understands why her mother treats her in the same way as she did with Lev when she was still a child.

While she is indeed a sympathetic 10 year old Child Soldier with some standards, Ple-Two proves to be a formidable antagonist since she has none of Elpeo Ple's cheerful side, her newtypes power is even more powerful than hers, she pilots two gigantic and powerful mobile suits, and is the person who responsible for Elpeo Ple's death.

A cloned Child Soldier who was created from Elpeo Ple by Glemmy.

When Uno orders her to become a TEKNO Agent, Jenny still uses her real name instead of using another name.

Cinco is a cute and soft-spoken fully-grown woman, but her manner is resembles that of a teenage-girl and she never puts away her sadistic side. In episode "Mission:Legacy", after many young agents engage in a battle, her frustration is makes her look more like an annoyed teenage girl who wants to shoot them out of frustration.

^ Put an episode title in quotes instead of italics as per How to Write an Example - Emphasis For Work Names.

^ You don't need to mention "frustration" twice.

Edited by Arivne on Jun 22nd 2019 at 7:16:04 AM

x3, 7 @Metal

This is what you wrote:

If you read Example Indentation you will see the following:

You only put one example at the second level of indentation, which is illegal.

It should have been written like this:

• The new "Where Are They Now?" epilogue offers loads of moments, expanding on the original's ones or downright creating new ones, such as this: The sheer irony in the fact that Dingodile becomes... a firefighter!!

Edited by Arivne on Jun 22nd 2019 at 7:26:12 AM

~FigureGunplaFan, this post:

This example does not illustrate how it fits Die for Our Ship.

• To a minor extent, the brunette-haired female fan seen in the first season's 12th episode is occasionally seen as Mari's contender for Kanan's love.

~FigureGunplaFan, this post:

• After the second season's 5th episode, many YohaRiko shippers believe that their mothers are actually ship their daughters wholeheartedly, given on how Mrs. Tsushima left her phone at the Sakurauchi household. Also, Given on how the yuri fans pair both the mother and daughter with them, they also assume that the Tsushima family's women are fated to be the Sakurauchi family maidens' true love, in spite of both being inevitably married to a man.

Hey it me tell me again how to get unsuspended so i can do editing again and i will not make the same mistake ever again!

Trope Replace/change request:

YMMV.Love Live Sunshine

One of the info from Broken Base to...

Alternative Character Interpretation:

• Is Dia actually the genuine Third Wheel of her own group? Many of the fans know that she never caused this kind of awkwardness as she actually communicated with Kanan and Dia frequently, But the other side of the fandom pointed out that she is sometimes quietly left out (Season 2, episode 11 where Dia had no one to get near with) and/or ignored by Kanan and Mari (in Season 1, episode 9 where Dia unsuccessfully prevented Kanan and Mari's argument) in several occasions.

YMMV.Love Live Sunshine

• Discredited Meme:
  • The eventual reveal of Tsuki's gender in the movie (and the music video uploaded by Love Live's YouTube channel) made fans stop speculating her as a feminine-looking boy. It doesn't stop people from making fun of her as a "handsome man with breasts" though.

• Germans Love David Hasselhoff:

From:

• Like Nozomi, Mari is also viewed as one of the popular gay icons in anime by the fanbase.

To:

• In spite of her ambiguous sexuality in the anime, Riko is also viewed as one of the most popular lesbian icons (along with Mari) in anime by the LGBT Fanbase.

HolyShitQuotient.Love Live

Love Live! Sunshine!!

• In the "Aqours Gourmet Report 2" audio drama, Yoshiko spoke out "Go to Hell!" during Mari's English lesson.

EpilepticTrees.Love Live

Love Live! Sunshine!!

• The misprinted Kanan acrylic keychain (with her surname written as "Takami")◊ made fans believe that they finally canonize the ChikaKanan couple without a single word. ^note This is not the first time as the fans previously assume that the merchandise stuff "canonized" the ChikaYou ship, as some of the Chika-themed rubber wristbands are colored in You-themed livery.

Edited by nombretomado on Jun 24th 2019 at 6:55:46 AM

So yeah, my grammar is bad, but I want to know where was I wrong.

• Decoy Protagonist: In the intro of Heads and Tails (not to be confused with Heads Or Tails) 13th season (Heaven and Hell) there is a bald man. It looks like he's going to be one of the hosts of this season, but it turns out he's actually holding this season's real hosts, Regina and Lesya. Both beg him not to send them to Hell (Wretched Hive), but he says they can't decide but coin can and never appears anywhere except this intro. Even his name isn't said.

Edited by Ratyher on Jun 23rd 2019 at 6:17:34 PM

The Promised Neverland

• Destroy the Abusive Home: Lucas and his hunting group decides to destroy Goldy Pond, which demons hunt humen there as their game.

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*3 @KeithTropes

Maybe you want to go to "would like to edit again" thread.

@Ratyher

Decoy Protagonist: In the intro of "Heads and Tails?" (not to be confused with Heads or Tails?) 13th season ("Heaven and Hell"), <- comma there is a bald man. It looks like he's going to be one of the hosts of this season, but it turns out he's actually holding this season's real hosts, Regina and Lesya, <- comma prisoner. Both beg him not to send them to Hell (Wretched Hive), but he says they can't decide but the coin can. <- period He never appears anywhere except this intro. Even his name isn't said.

^ I put Heads and Tails and Heaven and Hell in quotes since they appear to be the names of episodes. These changes are as stated in How to Write an Example - Emphasis For Work Names.

^ It's not clear what you mean by "Hell (Wretched Hive)". Is it another episode title?

^ As far as I can tell, two entire segments have nothing to do with the trope and are unnecessary. I would recommend removing them:

"(not to be confused with Heads or Tails?) 13th season ("Heaven and Hell")"

"Both beg him not to send them to Hell (Wretched Hive), but he says they can't decide but the coin can".

It ends up looking like this:

Decoy Protagonist: In the intro of "Heads and Tails" (not to be confused with Heads or Tails?) 13th season ("Heaven and Hell"), <- comma there is a bald man. It looks like he's going to be one of the hosts of this season, but it turns out he's actually holding this season's real hosts, Regina and Lesya, <- comma prisoner. Both beg him not to send them to Hell (Wretched Hive), but he says they can't decide but the coin can, <- period and He never appears anywhere except this intro. Even his name isn't said.

Edited by Arivne on Jun 24th 2019 at 12:02:04 PM

@iigmir

Lucas and his hunting group decide to destroy Goldy Pond, where demons hunt humans there as their prey.

@Arivne : Okay, I understand now, thanks.

~FigureGunplaFan, this post:

• Is Dia actually the genuinely the Third Wheel of in her own group? Many of the fans know note that she never seems to cause this kind of awkwardness, as she actually communicates with Kanan and Dia frequently. But However, the other fans point out that she is sometimes quietly left out (Season 2, episode 11 where Dia had no one to get near with) and/or ignored by Kanan and Mari (in Season 1, episode 9 where Dia unsuccessfully prevented Kanan and Mari's argument) in several occasions.
  • There's no reason to italicize Third Wheel. It's not a work, and you're not emphasizing it.
  • I'm also not sure where you wanted to place this. Did you want this entry, currently under Broken Base, duplicated under Alternative Character Interpretation? Using the same text for two separate tropes is not advisable.

• The eventual reveal of Tsuki's gender in the movie (and the music video uploaded by Love Live's YouTube channel) made fans stop speculating her as a feminine-looking boy. However, it hasn't stopped people from making fun of her as a "handsome man with breasts" though.'''
  • Still not sure why "and" is getting italics.

• Germans Love David Hasselhoff: Despite of her ambiguous sexuality in the anime, Riko is also viewed as one of the most popular lesbian icons (along with Mari) in of the anime by the LGBT Fanbase.

• In the "Aqours Gourmet Report 2" audio drama, Yoshiko spoke out says "Go to Hell!" during Mari's English lesson.
  • This is a Zero-Context Example, it does not explain why this is a "holy shit!" moment.

• The misprinted Kanan acrylic keychain (with her surname written as "Takami")◊ made led fans to believe that they finally canonized the ChikaKanan couple without a single word. ^note This was not the first time, as the fans previously assumed that the merchandise stuff "canonized" the ChikaYou ship, as when some of the Chika-themed rubber wristbands were colored in You-themed livery.

Edited by nombretomado on Jun 24th 2019 at 6:56:53 AM

To nombretomado

1. Sorry for not being specific, I was saying that you need to copy-then-delete that Broken Base info to the Alternate Character Interpretation trope.

2. Here's the context (Starts at 0:35)

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Jun 24th 2019 at 10:09:18 PM

Please adjust the example to include the context yourself, and keep in mind that Weblinks Are Not Examples.

OK, thanks for explaining. Does it not meet the stipulations of Broken Base?

Edited by nombretomado on Jun 24th 2019 at 7:39:22 AM

To nombretomado: I almost forgot one request:

YMMV.Bumblebee

• Author's Saving Throw:
  • This incarnation of Optimus Prime is now less of a Combat Pragmatist compared to his previous movie counterpart.

Original post

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Jun 24th 2019 at 11:43:58 PM

HolyShitQuotient.Love Live

Love Live!

• In the first chapter of the School Idol Diary manga's first volume, Eli (nearly) kissed Nozomi◊ in the Romeo and Juliet stage play, much to the Yuri fans' surprise.

School Idol Diary (novel, manga)

• "Let's Celebrate the Eve of the School Festival": During the Romeo and Juliet stage play, Eli nearly kissed Nozomi in the play's climax, at least until Umi and Honoka accidentally knocked down a box of petals, interrupting the play.

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on Jun 25th 2019 at 5:32:07 PM