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jahman Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
#5726: May 10th 2019 at 3:29:39 PM

Heartwarming / Spider-Man: Far From Home:

  • Heartwarming in Hindsight: Back in the climax of Infinty War, Thanos says to Tony "I hope they'll remember you" as he nearly kills Iron-Man. In this movie, after Tony sacrifices his life in Endgame to end Thanos' threat to the universe once and for all, his memory is greatly honored thorough murals, drawing and most of all, his loved ones.

jahman Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
#5727: May 10th 2019 at 3:48:05 PM

Film / Spider-Man: Far From Home:

  • Passing the Torch: A major plot point in the film as with Tony Stark/Iron-Man gone, people will be looking up to Spider-Man as the successor to the title, "Earth's Greatest Defender."

Edited by jahman on May 10th 2019 at 4:06:02 AM

AmazingCartoonHero Since: Jan, 2019
#5728: May 10th 2019 at 5:24:19 PM

Cassandra Sandsmark / Wonder Girl II
  • Accuser of the Brethren: Cassandra had a very antagonistic relationship with Rose Wilson/Ravager. Cassandra was also the one to think the worse of Rose Wilson, believe that she does not belong on the team and at times fights with her. Even when it look like she making peace with Rose, she revealed still dislike her and consider her a one-eye sociopath. Stating that she a murderer who is homicidal and warped beyond words. That she both cannot be help and does not want to be help.
  • Everyone Has Standards: Despite her dislike and distress of Rose Wilson, when Bombshell accused Rose of being traitor, working for Deathstroke, Cassandra defend her believing after everything her father did to her, Rose would never work for him again.

  • Screaming Gophers
Gwen, the Loner
  • Amicable Exes: With Trent. Averted with Duncan.
    • Things were rather awkward between her and Trent with her break up with him because of a mix of his jealously of her friendship with Duncan and and learning he was throwing the game so she can win. Trent was heartbroken to learn that Gwen asked his team to vote him off and was too heartbroken from their breakup to defend her when the other contestants give her a hard time over there break up. However, when Geoff wants to throw Gwen in a dunk tank full of piranhas, he puts his foot down and tells Geoff that that is enough, he was the one who threw the game, not Gwen, and it was not her fault. Gwen thanks Trent and apologizes to him, with him telling her that they're cool. After that they seem to move on from there break up and become good friends.
    • Originally Gwen had a strong friendship with Duncan that formed into a relationship. However by the time of All-Stars they're shown to lack chemistry and affection at the start of the season. Eventually they break up because of a mix of Gwen's attempts to make up with Courtney combined with Duncan's attempts to get Courtney's attention. It's telling that Duncan's more confused than heartbroken regarding the break-up. While she does not bitterly hate Duncan the same way Courtney does, it clear that the love, friendship, and respect Gwen had for Duncan is gone. Duncan leaves the competition on bad terms with Gwen, as she sarcastically mocks him while he is being escorted away by the police after blowing up Chris' cottage showing no remorse for Duncan's imprisonment.
  • Irony: In All-Stars when Gwen was put in the villains team, she protested stating she was nice, in confessional she bitterly sating she spend seasons being a nice girl only to be in the villain team. While Gwen was never as bad as her new teammate she was not exactly nice, being at best a cold and anti-social Jerk with a Heart of Gold. It was only in this season that she turn into a complete nice girl.

  • Ed, Edd n Eddy's Big Picture Show
  • Didn't Think This Through: Eddy's entire plan on sparing himself and his friends the wrath of the other cul-de-sac kids hinged on locating his older brother's current residence so he could protect them from their pursuers. It's clear that he didn't account for the possibility that his brother would beat him up instead. Justified because it implied that Eddy was lying so long about his brother being a cool order brother that he started to believe it and he was that desperate to go to his brother because he and his friends were running for there lives.

  • Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III
  • Positive Friend Influence: Hiccup was this to Astrid. Hiccup got her to be more open and empath. And cause her to become a more cheerful and happier person. Lampshade in How to Train Your Dragon: The Hidden World Astrid tells Hiccup that she credits him with making her the person she is today.

  • New Team Avatar
Bolin
  • All for Nothing: Bolin work on the Earth Empire and with Kuvira is this. He joined Kuvira because he wanted to do what was right, and he let himself believe that they were making lives better. Bolin strain his relationships with his brother Mako and girlfriend Opal who disapprove of Kuvira because he believe and idolizes her. Bolin went as far as to lash out at Mako for not thinking she a good leader. In "Enemy at the Gates" when he was send to Zaofu to negotiation, he found that Opal was angry and want nothing to do with him. When Bolin try to tell all the good the Earth Empire has done to improve the lives of the towns, Opal tells him all the towns that were forced to join the Earth Empire have turned into labor camps so Kuvira can get their resources and call him out on never checking on those towns. Bolin refused to believe her and snapped at her that he was one hundred percent certain that they were making the Earth Empire a better place to live. The tension between the couple was defused, however, when Bolin grew shocked upon hearing Kuvira issue a twenty-four hour ultimatum to surrender Zaofu, lest she would take it by force. Kuvira then comforted to Bolin that what he heard was true and threaten to send him to a reeducation camps, he lost faith in her and abandons her army. Painfully aware of how badly he misjudged her and how many people he's hurt and alienated in the process, Bolin goes to great lengths to help derail Kuvira's plans. Lampshade in
"Remembrances"
Bolin: How can you call me "the hero of the world"? [Looks down.] I left my friends and family to join up with a psychotic dictator who imprisoned me and now, [Looks away in shame.] I'm running back home with my tail between my legs.
  • Berserk Button: In season 4 during the first half of the season questing if Kuvira a bad leader or saying his work on the Earth Empire was bad was a good way to make him mad as his brother Mako and girlfriend Opal learns. Bolin learn the hard way that they were right and he regrets not listening to them.
  • Didn't Think This Through: Bolin never thought of the full consequences with siding with Kuvira. Especially with Opal reaction. Early in season 4 she made it clear to Bolin that she does not trust Kuvira or approve of him working with her. And when Kuvira take power and Bolin stay with her it appear he never consider how Opal would react and think they still would be good. To Bolin credit in episode "Enemy at the Gates" when Kuvira inducts Bolin into her "inner circle" on the basis that he would do a better job of reaching common ground with Suyin, when they arrive at Zaofu with the rest of the Earth Empire army, he point out that would send the wrong message. Arriving in the city, Bolin and Kuvira were led by Baatar Jr. to the room where the rest of the Beifong family was awaiting them. Upon noticing Opal, he enthusiastically greeted her and moved to embrace her, though was angrily told off, as he had "chosen [his] side". Surprised about the outburst, he told everyone that there should not be sides. The negotiations fail and he learn the truth about Kuvira, he desert Kuvira army. Even so he lost the trust and respect of his girlfriend Opal that he work hard to regain.
  • My God, What Have I Done?: Downplayed, It appears that Bolin so focus on stoping Kuvira that he not alouding himself thank about his he messed up by trusting her, but Bolin is upset when he meets the innocent people Kuvira is interning in her camps, realizing that he has had a part (albeit unwittingly) in ruining their lives. Played Straight in episode "Remembrances" were he spend the episode depressed because he left his friends and family to join up with a psychotic dictator, and fear that his girlfriend Opal would never forgive him.

Mako

  • Defrosting Ice Queen: At the beginning of season 4 Mako was annoyed and irritation with Prince Wu. And could not wait until the royal would return to Ba Sing Se. However thought out the season he grow to closer and sympathetic to Prince Wu when he see his positive traits, like how he can freely accept criticism, is genuine grateful for Mako for his help, and see him become a more thoughtful and mature person. The ending of the last episode show Mako proud of Prince Wu and with it implied that Mako and Korra are warming up to him and becoming friends with him.
Only Friend: Mako is forced to work with and be around Prince Wu, and Team Avatar saves him. None of them bother hiding dislike at his antics and the friendliest behavior he gets from them is stone-faced tolerance. He still says they're the best friends a guy could have. Is this pure obliviousness, or has he never had friends? Despite some supporters early on he also suggests that he's never had a girlfriend. In the second half of the season however Mako start to warm up to Prince Wu when he see his positive traits when Prince Wu grow into a more mature and thoughtful person and at the end of the last episode both Mako and Korra are proud of Prince Wu and it implied they are warming up to him, and are becoming his friends.

Numbuh Eighty Six / Fanny Fulbright
  • O.O.C. Is Serious Business: During the episode Operation: M.A.U.R.I.C.E. Number 86 a know boy hater and who is really dedicated to her job at hunt down all KND operatives who have turned thirteen and decommission them was polite and nice at Maurice decommissioned. Justified because a flashback implied that Number 86 was friends or at least admired Maurice. Also Maurice unlike the other operatives she hunted down did not betray the Kids Next Door and accepted his fate.
  • Pet the Dog: In episode Operation: M.A.U.R.I.C.E. during Maurice decommission Number 86 a know boy hater who dedicated to her job at hunt down all KND operatives who have turned thirteen and decommission them was polite and nice at Maurice decommissioned. Even crying when he was decommissioned.

  • Other KND Operatives
Maurice / formerly Numbuh Nine
  • Face Death with Dignity: When Maurice turn 13 years, he accept his decommissioned and the lost of his memories, note that Maurice is the only KND agent show in the series who accept his decommissioned were others betray the Kids Next Door when they or before they turn 13 years old. Because Maurice accept his decommissioned he was rewarded with his reputation and legacy intact with all of his former teammates and fellow operatives sending him off with honor. Note even Numbuh 86 a boy hater and Head of Decommissioning treated him with respect and was sad to see him go. It implied because he loyally accept his fate he was aloud to keep his memories and become part of a secret sect of teenagers who are still loyal to the KND and doing undercover work to help them from behind the scenes.
  • Karmic Jackpot: Maurice because he accept his decommissioned and the lost of his memories, he was rewarded with his reputation and legacy intact with all of his former teammates and fellow operatives sending him off with honor. He also was aloud to keep his memories and become part of a secret sect of teenagers who are still loyal to the KND and doing undercover work to help them from behind the scenes. Meaning that he was also able to keep his promise to track the source of the chicken pox used by the teenagers and destroy it.

  • The Royal Protector
  • Ascended Fridge Horror: This story ask the question what would have happen if Star Butterfly parents send her to St. Olga's. Star undergone Mind Rape, and the abuse Star suffered at St. Olga's divided her mind into a Princess Classic and a Blood Knight, with Star parent having to live with the guilt they send her to St. Olga's.

  • Forfeit
  • Ascended Fridge Horror: This story show what would have happen if the The Kids feud with the Eds went on to there teen years. The Kids hatred towards The Eds growing more and more to the point where they're more vicious and sociopathic. The Eds are more distrustful of everyone around them, even themselves. The Kids problems are growing worse, Jonny really is disturbed; Sarah nurses a genuine ire toward her brother and angry issue grow worse, finally The Kankers fall into genuine Ax-Crazy territory at times.

  • Green Arrow
  • Laser-Guided Karma: Deconstruction. During the Cry for Justice & Rise and Fall storyline were Green Arrow I (Oliver Queen) murder Prometheus for destroying Star City and the death of his adopted granddaughter Lian Harper. During Oliver capture and trial, his family wash there hands of him, with his wife Black Canary (Dinah Lance) returns her wedding ring and declares their marriage over. And his adopted son Speedy I/Arsenal/Red Arrow I (Roy Harper) and biological son Green Arrow II (Connor Hawke) tell him they are thought with him. It implied that Oliver killing Prometheus was the last straw with Oliver constantly cheating on Dinah, his neglect of Roy, and his abandoned of Connor and lying that he did not know he was his son was the main cause of them leaving Oliver. However Oliver Queen before that storyline work hard to repair his relationship with them, and they had forgive him before. It also implied that they been traumatized by the events of the story, Star City being destroy for Dinah, the lost of his daughter for Roy, Connor being in a coma and losing and regaining his memories, and with the resentment they have for Oliver despite forgive him, they all lash out at Oliver.

  • Black Canary
  • Jerkass Ball: Deconstruction. During the Cry for Justice & Rise and Fall storyline Black Canary (Dinah Lance) abandoned her husband Green Arrow I (Oliver Queen) and her adopted son Speedy I/Arsenal/Red Arrow I (Roy Harper). When Oliver was in prison for the murder for Prometheus returns her wedding ring and declares their marriage over. When Roy went back to using heroin after the pain in his right arm became too unbearable because of the infection and the horrible prosthetic Cyborg made she officially considered him a lost cause. It implied that Dinah was traumatized because of the events of the story and were lashing out at them. In Birds of Prey it was revealed Dinah harbors a hug amount of guilt for her actions and regrets abandoning them when they need her the most.

Edited by AmazingCartoonHero on May 11th 2019 at 11:18:02 AM

Mekal Since: Dec, 2010
#5729: May 11th 2019 at 1:52:10 AM

Well, I've been suspended for bad english grammar. I don't really understand why. sad Okay, I'm french, so I don't talk the language perfectly, but I read and write very much, and I never had problems with it before. Still, if it can help, okay, I'll post here first.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#5730: May 11th 2019 at 2:43:11 AM

[up] x 5, 4, 3 @jahman

Back in the climax of Avengers: Infinity War, Thanos says to Tony "I hope they'll remember you" as he nearly kills Iron-Man. In this movie, after Tony sacrifices his life in Endgame to end Thanos's threat to the universe once and for all, his memory is greatly honored thorough murals, drawings and most of all, his loved ones.

A major plot point in the film, <- comma as, <- comma with Tony Stark/Iron-Man gone, people will be looking up to Spider-Man as the successor to the title, "Earth's Greatest Defender."

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#5731: May 11th 2019 at 4:13:19 AM

[up][up] @Amazing Cartoon Hero

Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.

Amazing Cartoon Hero: Please read How to Write an Example - Keep it Brief. You don't need to include every last detail of exactly what happens, especially if it's irrelevant to the trope. Doing so makes your examples Walls of Text that are hard to read and take a lot longer to proofread. Please include only the information that's actually needed to understand the example and condense it down to the essential elements.

Cassandra has a very antagonistic relationship with Rose Wilson/Ravager. Cassandra was also the one to think the worst of Rose Wilson, believe that she does not belong on the team and at times fight with her. Even when it looks like she is making peace with Rose, she reveals that she still dislikes her and considers her a one-eyed sociopath, <- comma stating that she is a murderer who is homicidal and warped beyond words <- no period and that she both cannot be helped and does not want to be helped.

Despite her dislike and distress of Rose Wilson, when Bombshell accuses Rose of being a traitor, working for Deathstroke, Cassandra defends her, <- comma believing after everything her father did to her, Rose would never work for him again.

Things were rather awkward between her and Trent, <- comma with her breaking up with him because of a mix of his jealousy of her friendship with Duncan and and learning he was throwing the game so she could win. Trent was heartbroken to learn that Gwen asked his team to vote him off and was too heartbroken from their breakup to defend her when the other contestants give her a hard time over their break up. However, when Geoff wants to throw Gwen in a dunk tank full of piranhas, he puts his foot down and tells Geoff that that is enough, he was the one who threw the game, not Gwen, and it was not her fault. Gwen thanks Trent and apologizes to him, with him telling her that they're cool. After that they seem to move on from their break up and become good friends.

Originally, <- comma Gwen had a strong friendship with Duncan that formed into a relationship. However, <- comma by the time of All-Stars they're shown to lack chemistry and affection at the start of the season. Eventually, <- comma they break up because of a mix of Gwen's attempts to make up with Courtney combined with Duncan's attempts to get Courtney's attention. It's telling that Duncan's more confused than heartbroken regarding the break-up. While she does not bitterly hate Duncan the same way Courtney does, it is clear that the love, friendship, and respect Gwen had for Duncan is gone. Duncan leaves the competition on bad terms with Gwen, as she sarcastically mocks him while he is being escorted away by the police after blowing up Chris' cottage, <- comma showing no remorse for Duncan's imprisonment.

In All-Stars, <- comma when Gwen was put in the villains team, she protested, <- comma stating she was nice. <- period In confessional she bitterly states that she spent seasons being a nice girl, <- comma only to be in the villain team. While Gwen was never as bad as her new teammate, <- comma she was not exactly nice, being at best a cold and anti-social Jerk with a Heart of Gold. It was only in this season that she turns into a complete nice girl.

Eddy's entire plan for sparing himself and his friends the wrath of the other cul-de-sac kids hinged on locating his older brother's current residence so he could protect them from their pursuers. It's clear that he didn't account for the possibility that his brother would beat him up instead. Justified, <- comma because it implied that Eddy was lying so long about his brother being a cool older brother that he started to believe it and he was that desperate to go to his brother because he and his friends were running for their lives.

Hiccup was this to Astrid. Hiccup got her to be more open and empathetic and cause her to become a more cheerful and happier person. Lampshaded in How to Train Your Dragon: The Hidden World. <- period Astrid tells Hiccup that she credits him with making her the person she is today.

Bolin's work on the Earth Empire and with Kuvira is this. He joined Kuvira because he wanted to do what was right, and he let himself believe that they were making lives better. Bolin strains his relationships with his brother Mako and girlfriend Opal, <- comma who disapprove of Kuvira because he believes in and idolizes her. Bolin goes so far as to lash out at Mako for not thinking she is a good leader. In "Enemy at the Gates", <- comma when he is sent to Zaofu to negotiate, he finds that Opal is angry and wants nothing to do with him. When Bolin tries to tell all the good the Earth Empire has done to improve the lives of the towns, Opal tells him that all of the towns that were forced to join the Earth Empire have turned into labor camps so Kuvira can get their resources and calls him out on never checking on those towns. Bolin refuses to believe her and snaps at her that he was one hundred percent certain that they were making the Earth Empire a better place to live. The tension between the couple is defused, however, when Bolin is shocked upon hearing Kuvira issue a twenty-four hour ultimatum to surrender Zaofu, lest she would take it by force. Kuvira then confirms to Bolin that what he heard is true and threatens to send him to a reeducation camp, he loses faith in her and abandons her army. Painfully aware of how badly he misjudged her and how many people he's hurt and alienated in the process, Bolin goes to great lengths to help derail Kuvira's plans. Lampshaded in "Remembrances": <- colon

In season 4, <- comma during the first half of the season, <- comma questioning if Kuvira is a bad leader or saying his work on the Earth Empire was bad is a good way to make him mad, <- comma as his brother Mako and girlfriend Opal learn. Bolin learns the hard way that they were right and he regrets not listening to them.

Bolin never thought of the full consequences of siding with Kuvira, <- comma and especially of Opal's reaction. Early in season 4, <- comma she made it clear to Bolin that she does not trust Kuvira or approve of him working with her. When Kuvira takes power and Bolin stays with her, <- comma it appears he never considered how Opal would react and thinks they still would be good. To Bolin's credit, <- comma in the episode "Enemy at the Gates", <- comma when Kuvira inducts Bolin into her "inner circle" on the basis that he would do a better job of reaching common ground with Suyin, when they arrive at Zaofu with the rest of the Earth Empire army, he points out that it would send the wrong message. Arriving in the city, Bolin and Kuvira are led by Baatar Jr. to the room where the rest of the Beifong family is awaiting them. Upon noticing Opal, he enthusiastically greets her and moves to embrace her, though he is angrily told off, as he had "chosen [his] side". Surprised about the outburst, he tells everyone that there should not be sides. The negotiations fail and when he learns the truth about Kuvira, he deserts Kuvira's army. Even so, <- comma he loses the trust and respect of his girlfriend Opal that he worked hard to regain.

Downplayed. <- period It appears that Bolin is so focused on stopping Kuvira that he is not allowing himself to think about how he messed up by trusting her, but he is upset when he meets the innocent people Kuvira is interning in her camps, realizing that he has had a part (albeit unwittingly) in ruining their lives. Played Straight in episode "Remembrances", <- comma where he spends the episode depressed because he left his friends and family to join up with a psychotic dictator, and fears that his girlfriend Opal will never forgive him.

At the beginning of season 4, <- comma Mako is annoyed and irritated with Prince Wu <- no period and can not wait until the royal (the royal what?) would returns to Ba Sing Se. However, <- comma throughout the season he grows closer and more sympathetic to Prince Wu when he sees his positive traits, like how he can freely accept criticism, is genuinely grateful to Mako for his help, and sees him become a more thoughtful and mature person. The ending of the last episode shows that Mako is proud of Prince Wu and it is implied that Mako and Korra are warming up to him and becoming friends with him.

Kuvira's a real hardass, but when Bolin is very concerned about her Earth Empire plans, she takes him aside, talks to him personally, and tells him she's just engaging in tough rhetoric so she can be taken seriously and conflict can be avoided. Subverted in that she's completely lying, as shown when Suyin talks to her and the next episode makes it clear that Kuvira does not care for Bolin and is only using him.

During the episode "Operation: M.A.U.R.I.C.E.", <- comma Number 86, <- comma a known boy hater and] who is really dedicated to her job of hunting down all KND operatives who have turned thirteen and decommissioning them, <- comma is polite and nice at Maurice's decommissioning. Justified, <- comma because a flashback implies that Number 86 was friends with or at least admired Maurice. Also, <- comma Maurice, <- comma unlike the other operatives she hunted down, <- comma did not betray the Kids Next Door and accepted his fate.

In episode "Operation: M.A.U.R.I.C.E.", <- comma during Maurice's decommissioning, <- comma Number 86 a known boy hater who is dedicated to her job of hunting down all KND operatives who have turned thirteen and decommissioning them, <- comma is polite and nice at Maurice's decommissioning, <- comma even crying when he is decommissioned.

When Maurice turns 13 years, he accepts his decommissioning and the loss of his memories. <- period Note that Maurice is the only KND agent show in the series who accepts his decommissioning, <- comma where others betray the Kids Next Door when they turn or before they turn 13 years old. Because Maurice accepts his decommissioning, <- comma he is rewarded with his reputation and legacy being left intact, <- comma with all of his former teammates and fellow operatives sending him off with honor. Note that even Numbuh 86, <- comma a boy hater and Head of Decommissioning, <- comma treats him with respect and is sad to see him go. It is implied that because he loyally accepts his fate, <- comma he is allowed to keep his memories and become part of a secret sect of teenagers who are still loyal to the KND and do undercover work to help them from behind the scenes.

Maurice. <- period Because he accepts his decommissioning and the loss of his memories, he is rewarded with his reputation and legacy being left intact, <- comma with all of his former teammates and fellow operatives sending him off with honor. He also is allowed to keep his memories and become part of a secret sect of teenagers who are still loyal to the KND and doing undercover work to help them from behind the scenes. Meaning that he is also able to keep his promise to track down the source of the chicken pox used by the teenagers and destroy it.

This story asks the question "What would have happened if Star Butterfly's parents had sent her to St. Olga's, <- comma Star underwent Mind Rape, and the abuse Star suffered at St. Olga's divided her mind into a Princess Classic and a Blood Knight, with Star's parents having to live with the guilt for causing it.

This story shows what would have happened if the The Kids' feud with the Eds went on to their teen years, <- comma with The Kids' hatred towards The Eds growing more and more, <- comma to the point where they're more vicious and sociopathic. The Eds are more distrustful of everyone around them, even themselves. The Kids' problems are growing worse, Jonny really is disturbed; Sarah nurses a genuine ire toward her brother and angry issue grow worse, finally The Kankers fall into genuine Ax-Crazy territory at times.

During the Cry for Justice & Rise and Fall storyline where Green Arrow I (Oliver Queen) murders Prometheus for destroying Star City and causing the death of his adopted granddaughter Lian Harper. During Oliver's capture and trial, his family washes their hands of him, with his wife Black Canary (Dinah Lance) returning her wedding ring and declaring their marriage over. His adopted son Speedy I/Arsenal/Red Arrow I (Roy Harper) and biological son Green Arrow II (Connor Hawke) tell him they are through with him. It is implied that Oliver killing Prometheus is the last straw, <- comma with Oliver constantly cheating on Dinah, his neglect of Roy, and his abandonment of Connor and lying that he did not know he was his son was the main cause of them leaving Oliver. However, <- comma before that storyline Oliver Queen works hard to repair his relationships with them, and they had forgiven him before. It is also implied that they had been traumatized by the events of the story, Star City being destroyed for Dinah, the lost of his daughter for Roy, Connor being in a coma and losing and regaining his memories, and with the resentment they have for Oliver despite forgiving him, they all lash out at Oliver.

During the Cry for Justice & Rise and Fall storyline, <- comma Black Canary (Dinah Lance) abandons her husband Green Arrow I (Oliver Queen) and her adopted son Speedy I/Arsenal/Red Arrow I (Roy Harper). When Oliver is in prison for the murder of Prometheus, she returns her wedding ring and declares their marriage over. When Roy goes back to using heroin after the pain in his right arm becomes too unbearable because of the infection and the horrible prosthetic Cyborg made, <- comma she officially considers him a lost cause. It is implied that Dinah was traumatized because of the events of the story and was lashing out at them. In Birds of Prey, <- comma it is revealed Dinah harbors a hug amount of guilt for her actions and regrets abandoning them when they needed her the most.

FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5732: May 11th 2019 at 5:47:04 AM

Question: is using the Grammarly extension app is considered as cheating?

Contributor for Gunpla Wiki. Currently suspended due to extensive writing issues. PS: I only wrote down what I saw. (audience reactions etc)
AM_NK Since: Sep, 2009
#5733: May 11th 2019 at 1:49:08 PM

Requesting help as I'm not a native English speaker (and I have been told to come here).

I'm modifying this entry from Unreal Tournament 2004, as it contains a dead link (the Atari forums have died back in 2005) and doesn't explain anything:

Here's the replacement entry (I'm afraid it's too long, and some examples may belong to other tropes):

  • Easter Egg: Several:
    • Hellions team members Outlaw and Garrett have smilies on their player models.
    • Two Dummied Out taunts are present in the male voicepack: "You're as good as CliffyB" and "You're worse than Mark Rein".
    • Mandible, from the Blood Fist team, has an ejection seat sticker.
    • Back in Unreal Tournament 2003, clicking upon any of the characters that come with the game would prompt the announcer to say their names. This feature hasn't carried on to 2004, except for a character: Mr. Crow.
    • Some weapons have inscriptions, such as the Redeemer's "Swallow This!" and the Rocket Launcher's warning sticker.
    • There's a trapped Gorge fan at the bottom of the pit in the map Gael.
    • In vehicle maps, by inputting a cheat code, it's possible to summon a wheeled toilet.
    • The Hellbender vehicle's license plate will change to the first consonants of its driver.
    • If a player names themselves "CliffyB", the bots will change their names to fit either the nicknames or first names of the developers of the game.
    • There's a hidden picture of lead designer Cliff Bleszinski hidden in the Deathmatch map Asbestos.
    • The Junkyard maps have several eggs related to shock sites and Toilet Humor.
    • Several of the maps have hidden notes which can only be seen in the editor or with a package tool analyzer. Some of those notes are just "special thanks" notes, while other contain bits of trivia (such as the mapper and his hatred of crunch in ONS-Adara) and funny bits (ONS-Frostbite: "To Ben from the future: Shutup!").
    • The submarine from the December and January Capture the Flag maps appears in the Assault level Robot Factory.
    • Media players can be seen on character models (Gorge) and weapons (the Bio Rifle).

EDIT: Edited to reflect the latest changes.

Edited by AM_NK on May 12th 2019 at 12:37:40 PM

FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5734: May 12th 2019 at 12:24:03 AM

(Update Request)

DieForOurShip.Love Live

The Sunshine!! Section:

(Add this to the most below part)

  • After the YoshiMaru ship won the "Good Friends Poll" for the Love Live! School idol festival game, many of the YohaRiri fans' reactions to their victory are rather...unpleasant.

Contributor for Gunpla Wiki. Currently suspended due to extensive writing issues. PS: I only wrote down what I saw. (audience reactions etc)
Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#5735: May 12th 2019 at 2:33:18 AM

[up][up] @AM_NK

native English speaker

"You're as good as CliffyB" and "You're worse than Mark Rein". <- period

This feature wasn't carried on to 2004

Some weapons have inscriptions, <- comma such as

The Hellbender vehicle's license plate will change to the first consonants of its driver.

^ What does "the first consonants of its driver." mean? Do you mean "the first letters of the driver's name" (e.g. Frank Edward Johnson = license plate FEJ)?

The submarine from the December and January Capture the Flag maps appears in

Edited by Arivne on May 12th 2019 at 2:37:19 AM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#5736: May 12th 2019 at 2:35:07 AM

[up], [up][up][up] @Figure Gunpla Fan

Question: is using the Grammarly extension app is considered as cheating?

^ As far as I know, you can use any help you want to make your English better.

After the YoshiMaru ship wins the "Good Friends Poll"

Edited by Arivne on May 12th 2019 at 2:40:16 AM

FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5737: May 12th 2019 at 7:58:53 AM

(Add request)

YMMV.Infinite Stratos

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on May 13th 2019 at 6:44:56 PM

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AM_NK Since: Sep, 2009
#5738: May 12th 2019 at 8:36:53 AM

[up][up][up] Arivne, for example, if my player name is Neon_Knight, the license plate will read NNKNGHT.

Edited by AM_NK on May 12th 2019 at 3:14:28 PM

Mekal Since: Dec, 2010
#5739: May 12th 2019 at 9:43:10 AM

Add request Kill la Kill: IF :

neosspeer The one and only from Right behind you Since: Nov, 2015
The one and only
#5740: May 12th 2019 at 9:03:14 PM

Addition to the Roboutian Heresy's Character Page

    I - Dark Angels 

The legion as a whole

  • Complexity Addiction; Between the amount of layers in their hierarchy, the fact that some operatives have secret orders from the Grandmasters (Or Lion El’Jonson Himself), and the constant change of meaning in the titles of any given rank. Only the Alpha Legion can keep up with the constant changes.

  • Torture Technician: One of the tasks of the Interrogator-Chaplains is to have the imperial prisoners broken with torture, and then released back to the battlefield, either as infiltrators or with the purpose of damaging morale.

  • The Chessmaster: Due to their allegiance to Tzeentch, this is to be expected. Their tactics can be confusing at first sight, with the full consequences only being revealed centuries after the campaign’s end.

Lion El’Jonson. Primarch of the Dark Angels, Daemon Primarch of Tzeentch

  • Hoist by His Own Petard: While rupturing the Webway allowed him to hunt Cypher personally, it also let Lorgar escape from the Chaos Gods and take the Sword that was Promised.

  • Orcus on His Throne: Lion El’Jonson hasn’t left Cysgorog since the end of the Heresy

  • Wild Child: Just like his canon counterpart, Lion El’Jonson spent his first years of life alone in the forests of Caliban.

Grand Master Azrael. the Lord of Lies

  • Multiple-Choice Past: Azrael’s memories are constantly modified by Tzeentch’s will since the moment when he became a Grand Master.

  • Hero Killer: Murdered Khalida to allow for the Black Crusade to enter into the fortress of Ahat-iakby.

Grand Master Belial. the Lord of Whispers

  • Anti-Magic: Belial wields the Sword of Silence, this blade projects a field around him that nullifies psychic phenomena.

Cypher. Lord of the fallen. Zahariel El'Zurias

  • Barrier Maiden: As the last of the original Fallen, his life is the only thing stopping Lion El’Jonson from recovering his full power. With his death, this position goes to Luther’s daughter. Morgana.

  • Heroic Sacrifice: The Sword that was Promised is Anathema to all Daemons, by passing it to Lorgar, he purged the Ouroboros’s shard from his body, dying in the process

  • Resurrective Immortality: The Ouroboros heals Cypher’s wounds every time he dies.

  • That Manis Dead: As far as he cares, Zahariel died fighting against Luther.

  • The Atoner: His current mission of carrying Luther’s sword to Terra was undertaken after a previous failure. [[spoiler: He was supposed to be on Caliban and help Luther in the battle against Lion El’Jonson, however. He was baited by the Tuchulcha Engine into seaching for his cousin aboard the Dark Angel’s flagship.

Luther. The Arch-Betrayer. Master of Caliban

  • Charles Atlas Superpower: While Luther wasn’t even a full Astartes, by the time of Lion’s arrival to Caliban, he was strong enough to match the Daemon Primarch’s might, while suffering from previous wounds and without Cypher’s help.

  • Worf Had the Flu: The damage that Luther sustained during the battle with the Ouroboros resulted wounds that hadn’t fully healed by the time of Lion’s arrival to Caliban. Cypher speculates that, had Luther been at his full might during his battle,, he would have been able to kill Lion El’Jonson permanently.

And to Superior Spider-Man's main page

  • Mundane Utility: Otto uses his Spider-Bots to cook dinner for a date with a co-worker.
  • Never My Fault: After getting his new body, he has come to see his past actions as influenced by various factors:
    • He blames his behavior as Doctor Octopus on supposed brain damage that he suffered after the mechanical arms fused with his body.
    • On the other hand, he sees the adverse effects of his first time as Superior Spider-man as the result of attempting to live as Peter Parker, rather than embracing his full potential.

Edited by neosspeer on May 12th 2019 at 12:05:39 PM

FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5741: May 13th 2019 at 10:40:21 AM

(Grammar fix request)

YMMV.Love Live Sunshine

From:

  • The Over the Rainbow Movie had some:
    • Some thought that the movie should have given some of their own favorite rare pairs a chance to shine on-screen.
    • To many Yuri fans and the LGBT Fanbase, they felt that Mari should have confessed that she truly loved Kanan in front of her mother, eventually solidifying the confirmation of the KanaMari pairing and permanently ending the queerbaiting between the two.
    • After 2 seasons of teasing, none of the µ's members had actually made a single physical cameo in the film, especially to everyone who hopes for them to eventually return to see the 6-man Aqours' performance in the final act, or even performing together with Aqours for one last time.

to:

  • The Over the Rainbow Movie had some:
    • Several fans believed that the movie should have given their favorite rare pairs a chance to shine on-screen, although the closest thing they can find is both You and Yoshiko training their dances together.
    • The yuri fans felt that Mari should have confessed that she truly loved Kanan in front of her mother as well while solidifying the confirmation of the KanaMari pairing.
    • After 2 seasons of teasing, none of the µ's members actually made a single physical cameo in the film, especially to the fans who are hoping for them to eventually return to see Aqours' performance in the final act, or even performing together with them for one last time.

Contributor for Gunpla Wiki. Currently suspended due to extensive writing issues. PS: I only wrote down what I saw. (audience reactions etc)
FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5742: May 13th 2019 at 10:56:08 PM

Grammar fix/update request: Fanon.Love Live:

From:

To:

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FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5743: May 14th 2019 at 1:40:33 AM

Aaaannnnddd another add request: YMMV.Resident Evil 4

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Human Bean
#5744: May 15th 2019 at 5:28:13 AM

Just for clarification, I'm working right now in a sandbox on an article about a mod of Doom, when I'm done can I just put the link here? Or I'd better be putting here only those excerpt I'm unsure about?

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#5745: May 15th 2019 at 5:53:51 AM

[up] x 8, 4, 3, 1 @Figure Gunpla Fan

For non-LN readers, the only thing they remember about Ichika is, 4 his notoriously "dense" mind.

...You and Yoshiko doing dance training their dances together.

as well as solidifying

none of the µ's members actually made a single physical cameo in the film, especially for the fans who are hoping for them to eventually return to see Aqours' performance in the final act, or even perform together with them for one last time.

As seen in the image above, both Ruby and Dia have a tendency to be portrayed as Nico Yazawa & Maki Nishikino's "true" birth daughters due to the precious stones they're named after (and if this is not subtle enough, they also inherit their image colors, with Dia possessing the same mole from Maki's mother, albeit in a different position). Whether the sisters will have logical or illogical origins merely varies, due to their green-colored eyes and the existence of their real mother (who also possesses the same green eyes) in the anime.

And then there's Tsuki Watanabe in the Over The Rainbow movie, who is also speculated to be one of Nico and Maki's very first and oldest' daughter (which makes it three children) due to inheriting Nico's hair bangs and Maki's eye colors. Like the Kurosawa sisters, the love child's family surname (Watanabe) is also a different matter of debate.

^ Making part of the paragraph into a single example at the second level of indentation violates Example Indentation. This could cause you to be suspended from editing.

Edited by Arivne on May 15th 2019 at 6:02:17 AM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#5746: May 15th 2019 at 5:57:58 AM

[up] x 2 @gc10

In your post here, you should put what you want to have proofread or added, not a link.

FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5747: May 15th 2019 at 8:55:39 AM

[up][up] Noted.

(Andddddd my suspension is now extended.)

Edited by FigureGunplaFan on May 16th 2019 at 12:00:46 AM

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gc10 Human Bean from Pastastastan Since: Feb, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
Human Bean
#5748: May 15th 2019 at 9:45:19 AM

Ok, thanks for the answer.

I'm working on Grezzo 2. These are those phrases I'm unsure about:

  • Misaimed Fandom: The author stated that he made the game mostly out of bore, only for himself and some friends, and updated it online because he hoped to entertain some more people. He'd never expected the game to become so popular in Italy and abroad, especially considering the game is mostly based on inside-jokes about Italian trash and pop culture, that are totally incomprehensible by foreigners.
  • Idiosyncratic Difficulty Levels: By purposes and effects identical to Doom's original, only under different names: [followed by the difficulty levels' names]
  • Dummied Out:
    • Several discharged or still-under-construction maps are still found within the game. They can be accessed through the console or in the Multiplayer section.
    • If the cheat for obtaining every weapon is used, there will be a Slot 0 section containing discharged weapons or the same of other weapon slots, although with wrong names.

Edited by gc10 on May 15th 2019 at 6:46:28 PM

FigureGunplaFan Since: Oct, 2013
#5749: May 15th 2019 at 11:00:49 PM

Update request: YMMV.Bumblebee

  • Author's Saving Throw:
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    • This incarnation of Optimus Prime is now less of a Combat Pragmatist compared to his previous movie counterpart.

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neosspeer The one and only from Right behind you Since: Nov, 2015
The one and only
#5750: May 16th 2019 at 1:36:47 PM

I'm reposting this in case it wasn't readable for some reason Addition to the Roboutian Heresy's Character Page

    I - Dark Angels 

The legion as a whole

  • Complexity Addiction; Between the amount of layers in their hierarchy, the fact that some operatives have secret orders from the Grandmasters (Or Lion El’Jonson Himself), and the constant change of meaning in the titles of any given rank. Only the Alpha Legion can keep up with the constant changes.

  • Torture Technician: One of the tasks of the Interrogator-Chaplains is to have the imperial prisoners broken with torture, and then released back to the battlefield, either as infiltrators or with the purpose of damaging morale.

  • The Chessmaster: Due to their allegiance to Tzeentch, this is to be expected. Their tactics can be confusing at first sight, with the full consequences only being revealed centuries after the campaign’s end.

Lion El’Jonson. Primarch of the Dark Angels, Daemon Primarch of Tzeentch

  • Hoist by His Own Petard: While rupturing the Webway allowed him to hunt Cypher personally, it also let Lorgar escape from the Chaos Gods and take the Sword that was Promised.

  • Orcus on His Throne: Lion El’Jonson hasn’t left Cysgorog since the end of the Heresy

  • Wild Child: Just like his canon counterpart, Lion El’Jonson spent his first years of life alone in the forests of Caliban.

Grand Master Azrael. the Lord of Lies

  • Multiple-Choice Past: Azrael’s memories are constantly modified by Tzeentch’s will since the moment when he became a Grand Master.

  • Hero Killer: Murdered Khalida to allow for the Black Crusade to enter into the fortress of Ahat-iakby.

Grand Master Belial. the Lord of Whispers

  • Anti-Magic: Belial wields the Sword of Silence, this blade projects a field around him that nullifies psychic phenomena.

Cypher. Lord of the fallen. Zahariel El'Zurias

  • Barrier Maiden: As the last of the original Fallen, his life is the only thing stopping Lion El’Jonson from recovering his full power. With his death, this position goes to Luther’s daughter. Morgana.

  • Heroic Sacrifice: The Sword that was Promised is Anathema to all Daemons, by passing it to Lorgar, he purged the Ouroboros’s shard from his body, dying in the process

  • Resurrective Immortality: The Ouroboros heals Cypher’s wounds every time he dies.

  • That Manis Dead: As far as he cares, Zahariel died fighting against Luther.

  • The Atoner: His current mission of carrying Luther’s sword to Terra was undertaken after a previous failure. [[spoiler: He was supposed to be on Caliban and help Luther in the battle against Lion El’Jonson, however. He was baited by the Tuchulcha Engine into seaching for his cousin aboard the Dark Angel’s flagship.

Luther. The Arch-Betrayer. Master of Caliban

  • Charles Atlas Superpower: While Luther wasn’t even a full Astartes, by the time of Lion’s arrival to Caliban, he was strong enough to match the Daemon Primarch’s might, while suffering from previous wounds and without Cypher’s help.

  • Worf Had the Flu: The damage that Luther sustained during the battle with the Ouroboros resulted wounds that hadn’t fully healed by the time of Lion’s arrival to Caliban. Cypher speculates that, had Luther been at his full might during his battle,, he would have been able to kill Lion El’Jonson permanently.

And to Superior Spider-Man's main page

  • Mundane Utility: Otto uses his Spider-Bots to cook dinner for a date with a co-worker.
  • Never My Fault: After getting his new body, he has come to see his past actions as influenced by various factors:
    • He blames his behavior as Doctor Octopus on supposed brain damage that he suffered after the mechanical arms fused with his body.
    • On the other hand, he sees the adverse effects of his first time as Superior Spider-man as the result of attempting to live as Peter Parker, rather than embracing his full potential.


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