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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
x 5 @Amazing Cartoon Hero
Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.
At the end of Adventure Comic #5, after Superboy-Prime's battle with the Black Lanterns and admitting to himself that he hates what he has become and only wanting a happy ending. Laurie Lemmon enters the basement, sporting a broken arm. She comforts Prime, telling him that "they" heard him, and that they sent her to tell him that they are sorry for what they did to him, and are going to leave him alone—"they" being previously mentioned as being the writers at DC Comics. As they embrace, a Black Lantern ring is shown on Laurie's hand that detects the hope within Prime's heart, <- comma implying she is really a Black Lantern and is manipulating him into feeling hope before she kills him. However, <- comma a flashback in Prime's last appearance shows him reconnection with Laurie and them showing to be happy, implying she is the real Laurie Lemmon and that they are happy.
At the end of Adventure Comic #5, <- comma where Superboy-Prime admits that he hates what he has become and just wants a happy ending. Laurie Lemmon enters the basement <- no comma and comforts him, <- comma telling him that they are sorry for what they did to him <- no comma and are going to leave him alone—"they" being previously mentioned as being the writers at DC Comics. As they embrace, a Black Lantern ring is shown on Laurie's hand that detects the hope within Prime's heart, <- comma implying she is really a Black Lantern and is manipulating him into feeling hope before she kills him. However, <- comma when Superboy-Prime is accidentally transported back to New Earth, <- comma a flashback shows him reconnecting with Laurie Lemmon and his parents, implying she is the real Laurie Lemmon and they are happy together. Sadly for Prime, <- comma he is separated from his loved ones again. He blames the Teen Titans and battles them. <- period When he loses, <- comma and they imprison him within the Source Wall.
During Rose Wilson's time with the Teen Titans, her relationship with her team mates is strained. Rose has the most antagonistic relationship with Wonder Girl (Cassandra "Cassie" Sandsmark). Sadly, <- comma even when it appears that Rose is making peace with Wonder Girl (Cassandra "Cassie" Sandsmark), Cassandra revealed she still dislikes her and does not trust her. And Another example is when Rose befriends another team mate like Blue Beetle (Jaime Reyes), only for Jaime to revealed (thankfully not to her) that he is afraid of her. The only friend she has on the team is Kid Devil / Red Devil (Eddie Bloomberg). <- period It gets so bad she quits the team. When Rose she considers coming back on the team, they vote on whether to let her back in, while letting Bombshell (Amy Sue Allen), <- comma who betrayed and tried to kill them, back on the team. <- period Ironically, Bombshell framed Rose as the one who betrayed the Teen Titans. As Rose points out, it's telling that they let a former traitor back on the team, <- comma something even Bombshell acknowledges, <- comma pointing out that if they give her a chance, <- comma Rose deserves the same chance. After an altercation with Bombshell, staged to ensure her loyalty to the team, Rose leaves to find her own way in life.
Edited by Arivne on Feb 27th 2019 at 5:03:56 AM
x 5 @Rippingtons 60
Snakebite is a huge Jerkass who hates other people being in the bayou where he hunts and fishes. Even so, <- comma he still has enough decency in him to save Scooby and Shaggy from being eaten by alligators.
x 5 @Kazuya Prota
In this adapatation of the first game, the entity knows as Nyarlatothep isn't the Shadow of Humanity, but rather a part of Takahisa Kandori's mind born out of his own mysantropy, influencing him into desiring the extinction of humanity without his knowledge, leading to the tragedies throughout the series. When Kandori starts to doubt his own actions and has a breakdown after being called on his flaws by Kei Nanjo, Nyarlatothep uses his rage to take control of him, forcing Kandori to stab his beloved daughter before fully posessing him and turning him into a hideous creature that tries to kill the protagonists, enjoying their fear and trying to break Nanjo's will. Despite being a shadow and his short screentime, Nyarlatothep's sadism, lack of loved ones and omnicidal ambitions make him stand out from the other shadows seen throughout the series.
- F is for Family
- Pet the Dog: On his death bed and in his last moment with Francis "Frank" X. Murphy, Chet Stevenson told him he truly did think he was a hero, he tells Frank that he has it all and not to mess it up like he did.
- Killer Bass Bridgette, the Surfer Girl
- Hypocrite: Despite saying she hate needless violence and confrontations, preferring to build bridges and not walls. She can get violent with her boyfriend Geoff. Once she force fee Geoff a sandwich when he insult her weight for eating the sandwich. And she hit Geoff on the head with a Surfboard for looking at another girl.
- Superman Rogues Gallery M-Z Superboy-Prime
- 0% Approval Rating: Because Superboy-Prime killed so many of there fellow heroes and his whiny attitude about how much he suffer, he is pretty much despise by all of the DC Superhero.
- Redemption Rejection: In Final Crisis - Legion of 3 Worlds Superman try to redeem Superboy-Prime by reminding him of his love ones like his girlfriend and parents, by then he accepted they were gone and is trying to be a villain, so he reject Superman words.
- Reality Ensues: During the Final Crisis - Legion of 3 Worlds Superman suggested that they try to redeem Superboy-Prime, his Legion Of Super Heroes teammate thought he was crazy for even suggesting that. And there was a problem with that because one Superboy-Prime was psychotic, two he was trying to be a villain. All the other times Superboy-Prime was trying to get back home, by this story he accept his world was gone, and is trying to be a villain because he found out regarded as merely a footnote in Superman's history, and ultimately has no impact on history so resolved to be a villain with more of an impact than any other enemy of Superman. So Superman trying to redeem him goes as well as you expect it.
Edited by AmazingCartoonHero on Feb 27th 2019 at 10:13:55 AM
Edit: never mind. You need to construct your posts so that it's clear what is the example and what is the source.
Edited by Fighteer on Feb 27th 2019 at 12:43:14 PM
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"My account was suspended from editing due to poor grammar. I was hoping to wait until the suspension was over, but it has been a month and no word on the ending to this "cooldown period." So I decided to come here and test this out.
The following I would like to be added onto Botanical Abomination (with better grammar if this does not suit the wiki's needs, please):
- Snaptrappers from the How To Train Your Dragon franchise are a fear-class, four-headed breed of dragon that bare many resemblances to the Venus flytrap. They are able to release a sweet scent similar to chocolate to lure in their prey like a pheromone. While technically an animal, they exhibit various qualities that relate them closer to plants, including their affinity to the rain and mud and possessing three jaws instead of two, their heads looking similar to flowers when they open their mouths. In Dragonvine, it is revealed that the corpse of a long-dead Snaptrapper caused a harmless weed to mutate into a particularly vicious breed of Alien Kudzu.
- Kingdom Hearts:
- The Heartless are a race of Adorable Evil Minions that are born from hearts consumed by darkness. Being a polymorphic race that moves from world to world, their appearance differs between worlds, their anatomies ranging from humanoid to mechanical and different species of animal. This also applies to plants and fungi.
- White Mushrooms introduced in Kingdom Hearts I are a breed of Invincible Minor Minion that appear in each world. There is only one in each world and they are harmless, and if they are attacked with a very specific type of attack they drop items. In later games, White Mushrooms and variant breeds begin to appear as a form of mini-game, such as the Rare Truffles, Pink Agaricus and Mushroom XIII, each breed with their own rules and items dropped should their needs be met.
- The Leechgrave from Kingdom Hearts: 358/2 Days is a cannibalistic Heartless that takes the form of a chained-up coffin held up by a monstrous flower bud, held up by thorn vines. It acts as the source of the tentacles infestation in Halloween Town, with Organization XIII looking into its activity (and ultimately hunting it down) when it is responsible for a drop in the Heartless population at Halloween Town.
- Kingdom Hearts χ includes a variety of Heartless that fit this description, including various variations of the Creeper Plants and Mushrooms, Candy Apples, Flower Riders and Titans.
- Chief Puffs from Kingdom Hearts III are a breed of Heartless found in the Kingdom of Corona that take the form of a small black bud with an afro similar to that of a fully-bloomed dandelion. When it sheds its seeds, it spawns a group of lesser Puffballs.
- After the recreation of Mother Gothel's canon death, Marluxia turns what was left of her into the particularly menacing Grim Guardianess Heartless. It is a massive tree-like monster with four arms and a massive tail-like appendage that it slithers on. It possesses a wide variety of abilities, including the ability to fly, release Pepper Sneeze pollen, drop explosive acorns, summon walls of roots to appear from the ground, release black birds form its mouth and summon giant flowers that can ensure the gang.
- Reapers are a breed of Nobodies subservient to Marluxia. They resemble a cross between a flower and The Grim Reaper, inheriting a scythe, its plant-like appearance's weakness to fire and a typical Nobody's general weirdness.
- The Heartless are a race of Adorable Evil Minions that are born from hearts consumed by darkness. Being a polymorphic race that moves from world to world, their appearance differs between worlds, their anatomies ranging from humanoid to mechanical and different species of animal. This also applies to plants and fungi.
Making changes for this example of Repeating Ad.
- WALA-TV (a Fox affiliate) in Mobile, Alabama plays the 2000s ad of a local bankruptcy attorney (which is currently in business as of now) once during almost every commercial breaks outside of Fox's regular programming schedule.note
Edited by kokoroanime on Feb 27th 2019 at 8:47:17 AM
Lizlet's section.
Super-Strength: She once tossed Yuto several stories into the air during his "training" like he was nothing. With one hand.
x 5 @Amazing Cartoon Hero
Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.
On his death bed and in his last moment with Francis "Frank" X. Murphy, Chet Stevenson tells him he truly does think he was a hero, he tells Frank that that he has it all and not to mess it up like he did.
^ I deleted "he tells Frank that" because it is redundant: you already said that earlier in the sentence.
Despite saying that she hates needless violence and confrontations, preferring to build bridges and not walls, <- comma she can get violent with her boyfriend Geoff. Once she force feeds Geoff a sandwich when he insults her for eating the sandwich, because she's overweight. And She also hits Geoff on the head with a surfboard for looking at another girl.
^ The first two sentences are actually one sentence improperly split into two parts. Of the two sentences, the 1st one is a sentence fragment
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Because Superboy-Prime killed so many of his fellow heroes and his whiny attitude about how much he suffers, he is pretty much despised by all of the DC superheroes.
In Final Crisis - Legion of 3 Worlds, <- comma Superman tries to redeem Superboy-Prime by reminding him of his loved ones, <- comma like his girlfriend and parents. <- period By then he has accepted they are gone and is trying to be a villain, so he rejects Superman's words.
^ This is the reverse of the problem two examples above: it's two sentences combined into a run-on sentence
, connected together by a comma splice
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Could you read the Wikipedia pages I've Blue Linked and work on avoiding that?
During the Final Crisis - Legion of 3 Worlds, <- comma when Superman suggests that they try to redeem Superboy-Prime, his Legion of Super-Heroes teammates think he is crazy for even suggesting it. And there was a problem with his idea, <- comma because one, <- comma Superboy-Prime was psychotic, and two, <- comma he was trying to be a villain. All the other times Superboy-Prime was trying to get back home. <- period By this story he accepts his world is gone, and is trying to be a villain because he found out he is regarded as merely a footnote in Superman's history <- no comma and ultimately has no impact on history, <- comma so resolved to be a villain with more of an impact than any other enemy of Superman. So Superman trying to redeem him goes as well as you might expect it to.
Edited by Arivne on Feb 28th 2019 at 4:28:37 AM
x 4 @Lavon Papillon 1
The Leechgrave from Kingdom Hearts: 358/2 Days is a cannibalistic Heartless that takes the form of a chained-up coffin held up by a monstrous flower bud, which in turn is held up by thorn vines. It acts as the source of the tentacles infestation in Halloween Town, with Organization XIII looking into its activity (and ultimately hunting it down) when it is responsible for a drop in the Heartless population in Halloween Town.
Kingdom Hearts χ includes a variety of Heartless that fit this description, including various variations of the Creeper Plants and Mushrooms, Candy Apples, Flower Riders and Titans.
^ Zero-Context Example - How specifically do they fit the description of Botanical Abomination?
Chief Puffs from Kingdom Hearts III are a breed of Heartless found in the Kingdom of Corona that take the form of a small black bud with an afro similar to that of a fully-bloomed dandelion. When it sheds its seeds, it spawns a group of lesser Puffballs.
^ Zero-Context Example - How do they fit the description of Botanical Abomination?
It possesses a wide variety of abilities, including the ability to fly, release Pepper Sneeze pollen, drop explosive acorns, summon walls of roots to appear from the ground, release black birds from its mouth and summon giant flowers that can ensure the gang.
^ Can ensure the gang what?
I don't see a lot of problems with your English, but you should know that creating Zero Context Examples is also a suspension-worthy offense.
Edited by Arivne on Feb 28th 2019 at 4:44:06 AM
x 4 @kokoroanime
WALA-TV (a Fox affiliate) in Mobile, Alabama, <- comma plays the 2000s ad of a local bankruptcy attorney (which is currently in business as of now) once during almost every commercial break outside of Fox's regular programming schedule.note Before that, Comcast (now Xfinity) used to overwrite ads on multiple channels like Cartoon Network and Nickelodeon with the same ad WALA-TV broadcasts.
"Currently" means the same thing as "as of now", so it's redundant.
Edited by Arivne on Feb 28th 2019 at 4:54:06 AM
x 4 @Rippingtons 60
She once tossed Yuto several stories into the air during his "training" like his weight was nothing. With one hand.
- Kaiserreich: Legacy of the Weltkrieg: Willian Dudley Pelley
is the leader of the far-right National Populist faction of the America First Union Party. A christian fundamentalist and notorious racist even for his era, Pelley allies with Huey Long and George Van Horn Moseley to create a Anti-Syndicalist power block. If he, as part of the American Union State, manages to win the Second American Civil War and purge his rivals, Pelley will turn America into a White Supremacist Fundamentalist nation, doing actions such as sending Sydicalists and other dissidents branded as such to prison camps and allowing other White Supremacist groups in politics. Being also a rabid anti-vaxxer that believes that vaccines are a syndicalist conspiracy, Pelley's ban would result into the biggest Polio outbreak in America.
- Bleeding Steel directed for Leo Zhang: The Woman in black is Andre's main executor. Introduced brutally killing guards on a hotel, she kills a famous writer that knew about the experiments of human enchancement and tries to kill another person investigating them. Finding the girl used for the experiments, she threatens to shoot fire in a stadium and had her men kill the cops in the place. Kidnapping the girl, she don't care for the lives of her men during the following persecution. Once she is captured, the Woman accidentally kills one of her men and then kills another one out of desesperation at being captured. A stoic assasin, the Woman in Black managed to be worse than her own boss.
Edited by KazuyaProta on Feb 28th 2019 at 6:41:18 AM
Watch me destroying my countryTrope: Black Knight
- Agarest Senki: You first meet him right at the beginning of the game when he easily beats the protagonist. The Dark Knight continues to be a huge threat to the heroes throughout the first chapter and they only manage to beat him at the end of the chapter. Later on, however, it is revealed that there are more of these black armored knights, actually being called Gurgs. They are the highest ranking officers in the armies of darkness, and some of the most dangerous foes the heroes have to face.
Changed verbs from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.
A Christian fundamentalist and notorious racist even for his era, Pelley allies with Huey Long and George Van Horn Moseley to create a Anti-Syndicalist power block. If he, as part of the American Union State, manages to win the Second American Civil War and purge his rivals, he will turn America into a white supremacist fundamentalist nation, performing actions such as sending Syndicalists and other dissidents branded as such to prison camps and allowing other white supremacist groups in politics. Since he's also a rabid anti-vaxxer that believes that vaccines are a syndicalist conspiracy, Pelley's ban would result in the biggest polio outbreak in American history.
The Woman in black is Andre's main executioner. Introduced by her brutally killing guards on a hotel, she kills a famous writer that knows about the experiments on human enchancement and tries to kill another person investigating them. Finding the girl used for the experiments, she threatens to shoot fire in a stadium and have her men kill the cops in the place. Kidnapping the girl, she don't care about the lives of her men during the following persecution. Once she is captured, the Woman accidentally kills one of her men and then kills another one out of desperation at being captured. A stoic assasin, the Woman in Black manages to be worse than her own boss.
Edited by Arivne on Mar 1st 2019 at 12:15:42 PM
You first meet him right at the beginning of the game when he easily beats the protagonist. The Dark Knight continues to be a huge threat to the heroes throughout the first chapter, <- comma and they only manage to beat him at the end of the chapter. Later on, however, it is revealed that there are more of these black armored knights, who are actually being called Gurgs. They are the highest ranking officers in the armies of darkness, and some of the most dangerous foes the heroes have to face.
Trope: Creature-Hunter Organization
- Styx: Shards of Darkness: The organization of C.A.R.N.A.G.E, which was specifically created to hunt goblins.
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I don't see anything wrong with the English in that post.
Please read through the Creature-Hunter Organization page and make sure your example fits the trope.
That page has information about the natures of the organizations and the creatures they hunt. You don't say anything about the organization C.A.R.N.A.G.E or the goblins that explains how they have any of these qualities, which makes this a Zero-Context Example.
For example, consider a group of people dedicated to hunting deer. They clearly would not count as an example of Creature-Hunter Organization.
Edited by Arivne on Mar 3rd 2019 at 4:15:02 AM
Is this better?
Trope: Creature-Hunter Organization
- Styx: Shards of Darkness: The organization of C.A.R.N.A.G.E, which was specifically created to hunt goblins. Goblins are not particularly dangerous in themselves, but their numbers, coupled with the fact that they carry many diseases, are. So humans created these specialized squads to combat this threat.
More tropes to proofread ahoy!
- Berserk Button: Played for laughs as Shin is seemingly dislike his shoulder getting patted by someone else.
- Dandere: Sicily von Claude is a rather shy and timid girl but she is rather soft-spoken and polite towards other people. She also goes on an outburst when it comes to embarrassing situations.
- Downer Beginning: Much like some Isekai protagonists, Shin was hit by a truck during his home from work back in his original homeworld and when got reincarnated, his new family got massacred by the monsters. Fortunately, an old wanderer named Merlin adopted him and raised him as a son.
- Grumpy Old Man: A woman version of it but Melinda Bowen often nags if Shin does something careless.
- Happily Adopted: Shin is truly happy when he got adopted as a grandson of Merlin Walford despite his grandfather told him the truth that he is adopted and his parents were killed. This is due to both of his grandfather and grandmother taking a good care of him.
- Hair-Trigger Temper: See Grumpy Old Man above. Melinda mostly nags a lot because of either Shin or Merlin's carelessness
- Living Legend: Both Merlin Walford and his wife, Melinda Bowen, were hailed as the legendary heroes of Earlshide Kingdom after they defeated a legendary demon in the past and is still living until this day as Shin's adoptive grandparents.
- Look Both Ways: Before reincarnating to fantasy world and being adopted by Merlin, Shin died after he got hit by a truck in his original world.
- Politically Incorrect Villain: When Sicily rejects Kurt engagement proposal, Kurt ends up snapped and calls her a whore while saying that all of women's jobs are to obey and please their men.
- Reasonable Authority Figure: Diseum von Earlshide is the current king of Earlshide Kingdom who has a pretty relaxed personality towards Shin and sees him as his own nephew. And he's also the person who enrolls Shin into the Magic Academy so that he could assess how different Shin is compared to other magically gifted people. It was also revealed that in the past when Earlshide Kingdom were attacked, Diseum tries at his best to participate in the battle to reduce the casualties.
- Stalker with a Crush: How both Melissa and Sicily views Kurt von Ritzbug as one due to his crush on Sicily and tries to stalk him so that she could engage with him.
- You Gotta Have Blue Hair: Sicily von Claude is the only characters who had a unique hair of the main cast by having a blue hair.
Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Mar 4th 2019 at 12:46:35 AM
"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."Trope: Rose-Haired Sweetie
- Sakura Haruno from Naruto. When she isn't busy being a Grumpy Bear towards others (Naruto being the most frequent and unfortunate candidate) she is also kind, loving and has cherry pink hair.
Edited by jahman on Mar 3rd 2019 at 7:20:31 AM
- Digimon Xros Wars:
- Bagramon is the leader of the Bagra Army. Brother of the "dark" digimon SkullKnightmon, Bagramon used to be a angel digimon working for the digital deity Homeostasis. Rebelling against Homeostasis for her design of having digimon branded as heroic or villainous, in a system that would result in his brother's death, Bagramon was defeated and exiled. Finding the remains of the digital deity Ygdrassil, Bagramon used them to empower himself and begin his conquest, creating the Xros Loader and the powerful artificial Digimon Tactimon before rebelling again with the loyalty of dark digimons, defeating the Royal Knights and breaking the digital world. Manipulating his brother using two minions and some humans, Bragramon intends to judge humans and digimons based on who wins between them. When his brother "wins" while losing his sanity, Bagramon cries for him before using him to recreate ZeedMilleniunmon, intending to use it to euthanize both the digital and human worlds to save them from decay. When he is proven wrong for the heroes, Bagramon cheers for them and dies saving his brother, encouraging him to be better. Inspiring absolute loyalty on his followers, Bagramon truly wished for a better future.
- More honorable than his anime counterpart, The Dreaded Tactimon is one Bagramon's Top Generals and his best creation. Leading his armies in the fractured Digital World, Bagramon was the digimon that broke it during his fight against the powerful Royal Knight Omegamon. A ruthless yet effective general willing to fire against his own soldiers in harsh fights, Bagramon also prefer to not waste their lives in pointless battles. Manipulating MachLeomon to his death to test the power of his rivals, Tactimon follows the heroes to test their power. During the final battle of the Bagra Army, Tactimon ask permission to use his full power and challenges the heroes into a harsh fight, showing his impressive unmatched skill and being only defeated for their determination and teamwork. Letally wounded, Tactimon congratulates them, happy at having find a Worthy Opponent before dying.
- Blaster Knuckle: Alex MacGregor is The Rival of Victor "Bloody Rain" Freeman. Raised in the beast-slaying organization Silven Kreuz, Alex befriended Victor during his time in the organization. Becoming a feared and cunning Booty Hunter while remaining part of Silven Kreuz, Alex enjoys hunting both beast and human criminals. Joining to a policial hunt of Victor while knowing that he isn't a murderer, Alex befriends a young booty hunter and tries to convince him to return to his old life, giving him money before having a duel against Victor that ends in a harsh tie with both injured. Later, Alex manages to survive unscratched from the traps of the beasts in the town of White Rock Valley and kill his attackers. Enraged at the death of his friend, Alex joins forces with Victor to kill as many beasts as they can. Killing the beast leader personally by using his own power against him, Alex reminds the good times and allows Victor to go away, warning him about other members of Silven Kreuz, showing why he's both Victor's enemy and friend.
Edited by KazuyaProta on Mar 3rd 2019 at 7:40:06 AM
Watch me destroying my countryCharacters / Metro
Idiot
- Both Sides Have a Point: Artyom's diary entry points out Idiot always start with a long explanation and always follows it with "on the other hand". As such he agrees both with Artyom and Miller's point of view about the situation as neither right or wrong and simply says that the only way to not be wrong is to say nothing.
- Ironic Nickname: He calls himself that either out of humility or because he really liked Dostoevsky's book "The idiot". Either way he is the most educated of the crew.
Duke
- Hero-Worshipper: He sees Artyom as a role model. This is something Miller tries to exploit when he pairs the two together by telling Artyom to be stealthy and cautious so Duke gives up his more risk taking attitude to emulate Artyom.
Video Game / Metro Exodus
- Armor Piercing Answer: Miller gives one to a group of cannibals asking him what were they supposed to do isolated for twenty years with no food source.
Miller: Die like human beings!
- Karma Meter: Like past games killing indiscriminately will lock you out of the good ending, however the game is more explicit on who you are allowed to use lethal force on and show where you can rescue innocents than previous installment.
- Reality Ensues:
- The Caspian region being turned into a desert is one of the biggest obstacle for the crew. Since the region is scarce on water and wood the Aurora can't go full throttle and most of the rangers are suffering from dehydration and sunburn. Stepan ends up bed ridden as he secretely skipped his water ration while still doing his duty as usual.
- Idiot explains to Sam they can't simply tell the people from the Metro life on the Surface without careful planning. The short summary is that even if all the factions agreed on spreading the word it will take a massive amount of logistic to move out and even zones with breathable air are still infested with mutants that will devour non combattant.

A season 5 sketch where Jamie Foxx parodies the Sir Mix-a-Lot song <- no comma "Baby Got Back" as "Baby Got Snacks". <- period It's about a group of overweight women. Nearly 27 years later, Pizza Hut included a reference to the parody song in a TV commercial introducing their Ultimate Cheesy Crust Pizza.
^ Put song titles in quotes as per How to Write an Example - Emphasis For Work Names.
^ The first sentence was actually two sentences combined into one.
The direct-to-video film was released 24 years after the first film.
Edited by Arivne on Feb 27th 2019 at 4:28:37 AM