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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
Post the correct versions here as they should exactly be, link the article via a Wiki Word, and I'll add them for you, Myrth.
How about this ?
Stone Wall: While Nene is a Ninja, this is basically how her playstyle revolves around. Activate her illusion special, use a weapon with Super Armor Enchancements, and throw her safe, but low damage C1-2. Thats it. No moving around, no flashy combos just Tank your opponents attacks, while draining back lost health in the process. As far as playstyle goes, she is even more of a tank than the shield wielding Cao Ren, which is the posterboy of Stone Wall as far as Warriors game goes.
For which Warriors game is that example? I know that she doesn't play that way in Warriors Orochi.
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.That is actualy one of the running joke during Warriors Orochi 1 and 2 Tiering where despite being a Ninja, she is the safest and most defensive character in the roster, at least beetwen the Higher tiered characters.
This is the summary :
"Nene: Yes, i brought this up before, but she is presented as an agile and maybe stealthy sliperry ninja girl. Yet in this game she is the ultimate tank. No, not some kind of dodging tank. She stands in one spot completely planted and with evasion(essentialy Defense up), Stability(Super Armor), Fortitude, Vitalty(the former is defense up, the latter is Life Up), and Drain(because Air and Multi have no effect(both are the most used elements for speedsters) and Agiliy is counter productive so it doesn't make her lose damage(In other words, Agility make her weaker than she actualy is)) she stands firmly neatly untouchable spamming c1-2 and occasionally buffing with stability class uninteruptability (better than hyper armor (power type) uninteruptability) while continually spewing radial knockdowns to stop enemies from actually doing anything. She is safe stable tough disruptive and consistent beyond belief."
Simmilar jokes are Kunoichi and Goemon is a fake Japanese
Okay, I don't play her that way... but anyway, to your example. Changes are in bold.
- Stone Wall: While Nene is a Ninja,
this is basically how her playstyle revolves aroundshe is very effective as a wall. Activate her illusion special, use a weapon with Super Armor Enchancements, and throw her safe,but low-damage C1-2. That's it. No moving around, no flashy combos.jJust Tank your opponents' attacks,while draining back lost healthin the process. As far as playstyle goes, she is even more of a tank than the shield-wielding Cao Ren, which is the posterboy of Stone Wall as far as Warriors games goes.
edited 21st Sep '12 8:19:16 AM by desdendelle
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.^I was just in the process of doing something similar... oh well.
As a bit of an explanation, "playstyle" as a gamer word/lingo (AKA: not in normal English writing) usually refers to players using the same characters in different ways. It is not a word that should refer to the characters themselves. (At least to my understanding that is what it means)
I would also expand on "her safe,but low-damage C1-2" (that is how I would write that particular bit). As someone who has not played the games, "C1-2" means nothing to me.
edited 21st Sep '12 8:28:38 AM by Belian
Yu hav nat sein bod speeling unntil know. (cacke four undersandig tis)the cake is a lie!You can probably write something like 'first and second charge attacks'. Any more than that would require explaining the game's mechanics in detail, and I doubt a particular example is the place to do so.
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.Or describe the attacks themselves instead of how they are activated. The "illusion special" and "a weapon with Super Armor Enchancements" are semi-self-explanatory, but I just can't tell what the attack itself is. I can assume that they are Drain Health attacks from the rest of the description, but it should be explicitly stated.
(also, is "Enchancements" the actual in-game word? Spell check is saying it has an extra "c" for "Enhancements" or the "ce" needs to be a "t" for "Enchantments")
Yu hav nat sein bod speeling unntil know. (cacke four undersandig tis)the cake is a lie!No, that's a misspelling I didn't catch. I'll check about the c1-2 in the game.
Also, the Drain attacks come from a weapon special.
EDIT: Okay, I think I'd better add a blurb to WO's page to explain about the attacks.
EDIT 2: Okay, problematic. What I have in mind goes into way too much detail.
edited 21st Sep '12 8:50:22 AM by desdendelle
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.Which is also meaningless to someone who haven't played the game (I did, so I know what you're talking about). Also, you've some errors in that post:
- 'I'm', not 'Im' (contractions require an apostrophe).
- I is always capitalised when used as a pronoun.
- Sentences end in full stops (or exclamation or question marks).
- First letter of the first word in a sentence is always capitalised.
But, anyway, C1-2 is basically "Triangle or first Charge attack".
I find it a bit messy way to do, but as Hydronix really want this to be posted again, ok...
- Saintly Church: The cult of Melitele. The whole church and its priests are an Expy of the Red Cross. The only outright good religion in whole setting.
- Secret Circle of Secrets: Being a Religion of Evil, the cult of Coram Agh Ter had to turn into a conspiracy.
- Bamboo Technology: Appears in every single game. Almost all of the Durable Deathtraps are based on this.
- Clipped-Wing Angel: Dr Willard from the third game and Boaz from Angel of Darkness.
edited 21st Sep '12 12:49:35 PM by Myrth
Editing complete, Myrth.
In Tomb Raider, I left the earlier spoilered person and added Dr Willard alongside the other one. This okay and correct?
Quest 64 thread"Yes nobody can force the president to sign anything, and a kid born in England can't be president. But would an Adult hating kid know that off hand? Also it was a KND Lotus-Eater Machine.
Its for Headscratchers:Codename Kids Next Door
edited 23rd Sep '12 4:26:42 PM by HeroShepherd
Taking
YMMV Brave Merida has also been paired up with Jack Frost from the upcoming Dream Works film "Rise of the Guardians", Ralph from Wreck-It Ralph, Hawkeye, Flynn Rider, Jim Hawkins and The Once-Ler. On the Les Yay side she's been paired with Rapunzel and Katniss. This probably isn't even all of them.
and making it
Merida has also been paired up with Jack Frost from the upcoming Dream Works film "Rise of the Guardians", Ralph from Wreck-It Ralph, Hawkeye, Flynn Rider, Jim Hawkins and The Once-Ler. On the Les Yay side she's been paired with Rapunzel Mulan, and Katniss. This probably isn't even all of them.
is that right? Commas are bitches!
edited 23rd Sep '12 9:03:54 PM by HeroShepherd
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Yes, nobody can force the president to sign anything, and a kid born in England can't be president. But would an adult-hating kid know that offhand? Also, it was a KND Lotus-Eater Machine.
On the Les Yay side, she's been paired with Rapunzel, Mulan, and Katniss. [I realize the first comma isn't your mistake, but it should still be fixed.]
Headscracheses The Lorax: This is more about the fans than the actual movie. Did I miss some sort of grand fandom decree that stated "and lo and behold the Once-ler shall henceforth be shipped with every fictional character that ever walked the earth." Why him?
Related
The Lorax YMMY: "Crossover Ship": The Once-ler seems to have become the patron St. of this trope. Go to any movie's YMMY page and you will see crossovers ship and it will always list the Once-ler x whoever's in the movie.
edited 24th Sep '12 7:34:17 AM by HeroShepherd

Great, now can anyone post the correct versions in proper articles? I'm banned from editing and someone have to do it for me.
edited 18th Sep '12 11:42:38 PM by Myrth