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Plan to add following to Multiform Balance.
- Ultraman Tiga:
- Tiga use four forms in the series:
- Multi Type: The balance Jack of All Stats.
- Power Type: Strong but slow
- Sky Type Weak but fast and good at fighting in the air.
- Glitter Tiga: His most powerful form that's only used in the last episode.
- In The Final Odyssey movie, Daigo is forced to transform with Dark Spark Lens and become Tiga Dark which is supposed to be the most powerful warrior among the Dark Giants. But since Daigo resists The Dark Side, it end up as the weakest form instead. He later get through Next Tier Power-Up process as Tiga Tornado and Tiga Blast by purging away the power of darkness form himself, and finally assume the Glitter Tiga form again.
- Tiga use four forms in the series:
- Ultraman Dyna: Follows footstep of Tiga but more emphasize on each of the alternate forms.
- Flash Type: The balance Jack of All Stats. Unlike Tiga, Dyna can only use one alternate form in each fight, and so Flash Type is the only form he always has access to.
- Strong Type: Slow but strong, and mostly focus on physical attack with the only energy attack being the Finishing Move.
- Miracle Type: A mixed of Fragile Speedster and Squishy Wizard. This form has low stamina and physical strength but has super natural ability such as telekinesis and Super-Speed.
- Ultraman Cosmos:
- Cosmos has three forms in the series.
- Luna Mode: A Stone Wall, focus on healing and purification but no offensive power.
- Corona Mode: His default battle form.
- Eclipse Mode: His Super Mode and Mid-Season Upgrade. This form is more powerful than the Corona Mode but can used only for 1 minute.
- He also get three more forms in The Movie.
- Space Corona Mode: The stronger version of Corona Mode, used when fighting in space.
- Future Mode: Taking the power of Eclipse Mode Up To Eleven.
- Ultraman Legend: The most powerful form that's result of his Fusion Dance with Ultraman Justice.
- Cosmos has three forms in the series.
Late correction
for the priests in general
- Teeth-Clenched Teamwork: They despise each other, to the point no one is saddened or angered by Satori's defeat, and work together only because they're all Enel's subordinates.
some tropes and description for Shura
One of god Enel's priests. He runs the Ordeal of String,which has a survival rate of 3%. In his ordeal, the criminals are tied by almost invisible cloud strings placed by the priest and then finished off. He is cruel to every transgressor and believes that for every crime, someone has to pay, regardless if said person committed the crime or not. He's also very confident of his abilities.
He fights using a javelin with a heat dial which allows it to set its targets on fire. He rides a giant sanjonzo named Fuza which has a flame dial in his mouth, giving the illusion it can spit fire.
- Adventurer Outfit: Of the airman kind. His outfit is based on an early 1900s aviator.
- Affably Evil: After Chopper asks him for mercy and for him not to destroy the ship, he stops and talks with him about his punishment philosophy, only to ultimately declare that Chopper has to pay for his friends' crime.
- Badass Mustache: Has a pointed, Dastardly-like mustache. Really fitting for a villain.
- Fatal Flaw: His overconfidence is what causes him to get caught off guard by Wiper, who defeats him with a Reject Dial.
- Giant Flyer: Fuza, the sanjonzo he rides, is a bird large enough to carry him.
- Goggles Do Nothing: To complete his aviator outfit he has a pair of googles, which are more often than not on his forehead, especially during a fight.
- Kill It with Fire: Both his main attacks rely on using fire, either with Fuza's (fake) fire-breath or with the heat dial in his lance.
- Knight Templar: He blindly follows the Upper Yard's rules and executes them punishing everyone who commits a crime, and, if he doesn't immediately meet the transgressors, even those who don't.
- Misplaced Retribution: To him, if someone commits a crime, someone has to pay. Then even those who committed the crime have to be punished to make them realize their mistakes.
- The Worf Effect: After capturing the Shandia warriors besides Wiper, the latter quickly defeats the priest, making Shura the first to be taken out of the survival game, to show how much Wiper is strong.
maybe this way The Worf Effect entry is more clear
for Nico Robin
- Gulliver Tie-Down: In the Dressrosa Arc, when she goes to Green Bit, she's captured by the dwarves and tied to the floor with Leo's Devil Fruit in an obvious Shout-Out to Gulliver's Travels.
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@Kuruni
- Plan to add following to -> Plan to add the following to
- Tiga use four forms -> Tiga uses four forms
- become Tiga Dark which is -> become Tiga Dark, <- comma which is
- it end up -> it ends up
- He later get through -> He later gets through the
- form himself, and finally assume -> from himself, and finally assumes
- A mixed of...has super natural ability -> A mix of...has supernatural abilities
- A Stone Wall, focus -> A Stone Wall <- no comma with a focus
- He also get -> He also gets
A trope for the priests in general:
- The Exile: After Enel's defeat, save for Gedatsu who has fallen down, they are all exiled in a desert cloud along with Yama.
A trope for Satori
- Identical Twin ID Tag: The only diffirence between him and Hotori and Kotori is that he has long red hair and lacks horns (although the latter could have been hidden by said hair).
- Same-Sex Triplets: He has two younger twin-brothers [Or triplet brothers?], Hotori and Kotori, which are almost identical to him save for the lack of hair.
Some tropes for Gedatsu
One of Enel's priests. He runs the Ordeal of Swamp, which has a survival rate of 50%, the highest out of all the four ordeals. In his ordeal, there are many sinking clouds and he throws purple clouds on his victim's heads causing them to drown.
He has many odd habits that makes him one of the quirkiest characters of the series, like not knowing how to cross his arms properly, thinking instead of talking, forgetting how to blink or even to eat with his mouth! He's not aware of this and has a subordinate that constantly remembers him. Despite this, he's a serious and ruthless fighter and doesn't care for his subordinates, even when he accidentally attacks them.
He uses a pair of Milky Dials under his shoes to fly above the sinking clouds, he has a pair of dials in his sleeves which generates purple clouds to toss against his enemies, and Jet Dials on his left elbow to give strong punches (destroying his suit in the process).
He gets his own Mini-Adventure where, after being defeated by Chopper, he falls in Alabasta and helps Goro, Kohza's unlce, building an hot spring resort.
- Anime Hair: His hair is tied in multiple dreadlocks pointed upward.
- Badass Arm-Fold: Averted. He cannot properly crosses his arms, resulting in a quite funny pose. He plays this straight only once, after he becomes the boss of Blue Sea.
- Blank White Eyes: Parodied. When he gets angry, like all characters in One Piece, his eyes become completely white, however, he forgets to roll his eyes back, therefore he cannot see and thinks the others have become invisible.
- Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Despite all his strange habits, he's still a very strong and competent fighter.
- Clothing Damage: Downplayed. When he uses the Jet Dial on his left elbow, it destroys part of his left sleeve.
- Defeat Equals Friendship: He accidentally defeats the Dirt Boss, which helps him digging a tunnel from Alabasta to the hot springs.
- Establishing Character Moment: When Chopper asks if he's the pries, he presents himself... in his thoughts. Then a subordinate makes him notice the mistake and he comments that he's been careless.
- Heel–Face Turn: In his introduction he's one of Enel's four priests and a Bad Boss toward his subordinates but, during his mini-adventure, he helps a guy he just met into building an hot spring.
- Hoist by His Own Petard: Chopper defeat him removing him one shoe and he ultimately sinks in the clouds of his own ordeal. As if that isn't enough, when he tries to free himself with the remaining cloud dial, since he's upside down, he sinks himself further until he falls from the clouds.
- I Just Shot Marvin in the Face: When he uses a Swamp Cloud Burger on Chopper, he accidentally hits his subordinate.
- Laughably Evil: It's hard to take seriously an evil priest who tries to speak with the lower lib stuck in the mouth.
- Made of Iron: He survives falling from the sky!
- Oh, Crap!: When he realizes that Chopper has removed one of his shoes.
- Rocket Boots: Has a pair of Milky Dials under his shoes to propel himself and help him avoiding sinking in the clouds.
- Thinking Out Loud: Inverted. Sometimes he thinks what he wants to tell.
- Too Dumb to Live: It's a miracle that he's still alive when he tries to eat with his ear or forgets how to breathe.
- Wall Crawl: Somehow, he digs the ground while standing on the wall.
some for Yama
- Ain't Too Proud to Beg: Once he's immobilized, he says that he's sorry for having broken Shandora's ruins and asks to be freed. Nico Robin replies that what he's done is unforgivable, so he tries to kill her only to be ultimately defeated.
- The Exile: After Enel is defeated and no more the god of Skypiea, he's exiled on a desert cloud with Satori, Shura and Ohm.
- Jerkass: He's even nastier than the four priests, and when Nico Robin tells him about the Shandora ruins, he destroys them with no remorse.
- Hate Sink: There's nothing nice to say about him, making his crushing defeat at the hands of Nico Robin all the more cathartic.
- Verbal Tic: He often says "Meh".
for Nico Robin
- This Is Unforgivable!: After Yama destroys the ruins of Shandora with no respect or remorse and then begs for mercy, she says it's too late for apologies and proceeds to break his spine.
Edited by fishysaur on Aug 14th 2018 at 3:39:01 AM
There isn't an impossible dream, there are only people who give up
How is Gedatsu having fallen down relevant?
- diffirence -> difference
- on his victim's heads causing them -> on his victims' heads, <- comma causing them
- building an hot spring resort. -> building a hot springs resort.
- He cannot properly crosses his arms -> He cannot properly cross his arms
- which helps him digging -> which helps him to dig
- pries -> priest
- Chopper defeat him removing him one shoe -> Chopper defeats him by removing one of his shoes
- he sinks himself further -> he sinks
himselffurther - with the lower lib stuck in the mouth. -> with his lower lip stuck in his mouth.
- digs the ground -> ???
- Shows no respect for Shandora ruins -> Shows no respect for the Shandora ruins
- When the latter break his spine -> When the latter breaks his spine
- and no more the god of Skypiea -> and is no longer the god of Skypiea
Edited by Arivne on Aug 14th 2018 at 3:58:54 AM
Correction
A trope for the priests in general:
- The Exile: Save for Gedatsu, after Enel's defeat they are all exiled in a desert cloud along with Yama.
A trope for Satori
- Identical Twin ID Tag: The only difference between him and Hotori and Kotori is that he has long red hair and lacks horns (although the latter could have been hidden by said hair).
- Same-Sex Triplets: He has two younger twin-brothers [Or triplet brothers?], Hotori and Kotori, which are almost identical to him save for the lack of hair.
Some tropes for Gedatsu
One of Enel's priests. He runs the Ordeal of Swamp, which has a survival rate of 50%, the highest out of all the four ordeals. In his ordeal, there are many sinking clouds and he throws purple clouds on his victims' heads, causing them to drown.
He has many odd habits that make him one of the quirkiest characters of the series (which says alot), like not knowing how to cross his arms properly, thinking instead of talking, forgetting how to blink or even how to eat with his mouth! He's not aware of this and has a subordinate that constantly remembers for him. Despite this, he's a serious and ruthless fighter and doesn't care for his subordinates, even when he accidentally attacks them.
He uses a pair of Milky Dials under his shoes to fly above the sinking clouds, a pair of dials in his sleeves which generate purple clouds to toss against his enemies, and Jet Dials on his left elbow to give strong punches (destroying his suit in the process).
He gets his own Mini-Adventure where, after being defeated by Chopper, he falls in Alabasta and helps Goro, Kohza's unlce, building a hot springs resort.
- Anime Hair: His hair is tied in multiple dreadlocks pointed upward.
- Badass Arm-Fold: Averted. He cannot properly cross his arms, resulting in a quite funny pose. He plays this straight only once, after he becomes the boss of Blue Sea.
- Blank White Eyes: Parodied. Like all characters in One Piece, when he gets angry, his eyes become completely white. However, he forgets to roll his eyes back, so he cannot see and thinks the others have become invisible.
- Bunny-Ears Lawyer: Despite all his strange habits, he's still a very strong and competent fighter.
- Clothing Damage: Downplayed. When he uses the Jet Dial on his left elbow, it destroys part of his left sleeve.
- Defeat Equals Friendship: He accidentally defeats the Dirt Boss, which helps him to dig a tunnel from Alabasta to the hot springs.
- Establishing Character Moment: When Chopper asks if he's the priest, he presents himself... in his thoughts. Then a subordinate makes him notice the mistake and he comments that he's been careless.
- Heel–Face Turn: In his introduction he's one of Enel's four priests and a Bad Boss toward his subordinates but, during his mini-adventure, he helps a guy he just met to build a hot springs resort.
- Hoist by His Own Petard: Chopper defeats him by removing one of his shoes and he ultimately sinks in the clouds of his own ordeal. As if that isn't enough, when he tries to free himself with the remaining cloud dial, since he's upside down, he sinks further until he falls from the clouds.
- I Just Shot Marvin in the Face: When he uses a Swamp Cloud Burger on Chopper, he accidentally hits his subordinate.
- Laughably Evil: It's hard to take seriously an evil priest who tries to speak with his lower lip stuck in his mouth.
- Made of Iron: He survives falling from the sky!
- Oh, Crap!: When he realizes that Chopper has removed one of his shoes.
- Rocket Boots: Has a pair of Milky Dials under his shoes to propel himself and help him avoiding sinking in the clouds.
- Thinking Out Loud: Inverted. Sometimes he thinks what he wants to tell.
- Too Dumb to Live: It's a miracle that he's still alive when he tries to eat with his ear or forgets how to breathe.
- Wall Crawl: Somehow, he digs while standing on the wall.
some for Yama
- Ain't Too Proud to Beg: Once he's immobilized, he says that he's sorry for having broken Shandora's ruins and asks to be freed. Nico Robin replies that what he's done is unforgivable, so he tries to kill her only to be ultimately defeated.
- The Exile: After Enel is defeated and is no longer the god of Skypiea, he's exiled on a desert cloud with Satori, Shura and Ohm.
- Jerkass: He's even nastier than the four priests, and when Nico Robin tells him about the Shandora ruins, he destroys them with no remorse.
- Hate Sink: There's nothing nice to say about him, making his crushing defeat at the hands of Nico Robin all the more cathartic.
- Verbal Tic: He often says "Meh".
for Nico Robin
- This Is Unforgivable!: After Yama destroys the ruins of Shandora with no respect or remorse and then begs for mercy, she says it's too late for apologies and proceeds to break his spine.
tropes for Ohm
One of Enel's priests and the one in charge of the Ordeal of Iron, which has a survival rate of 0%. In the ordeal, the victims are trapped into a cage of thorned iron cloud strands and on the ground there are multiple pressure plates that, when step on it, cause the dials to eject barbed wires of clouds which shreds the victims. If the traps doesn't do the job, Ohm himself deals with the victims.
He's a calm and serious fighter. He considers life and greed nothing but burdens that cause sorrows, therefore he honestly wants to save people by killing them.
He's also a strong fighter, as proven by his trial which has a survival rate of zero percent. His weapon, Eisen Whip, is a katana with a cloud blade that can change shape, becoming a fork, a sword, a whip or even a wall. He also owns a giant dog, Holy, which he trained and taught martial arts and fights alongside him.
- BFS His sword's is almost as long as he is tall, and he can still swing it like it weight nothing. Possibly Justified, since it's made of Iron Cloud and not actual iron.
- Bilingual Bonus: "Eisen" is German for "Iron", fitting for a sword.
- Blade On A Stick: Among Eisen Whip's many forms, there's that of a spear.
- Combat Commentator: While fighting during the last part of Enel's survival game, whenever someone is defeated, shouts the number of remaining combatants, counting even the animals.
- Implausible Fencing Powers: Even counting the ability of change form, one wouldn't expect the katana to cut stone.
- Katanas Are Just Better: Of course, his shapeshifting weapon's main form is that of a katana.
- Pre-Mortem One-Liner: Says to Zoro "Make your last prayer to god, swordman of the Blue Sea" before giving the finishing blow. However, Zoro's 108 pounds cannon proved to be stronger.
- Prongs of Poseidon: His sword can become a trident too.
- Sleeves Are for Wimps: Of course, the toughest priest wears only a tanktop on his muscular body.
- Smug Super: He's really confident of his ability and looks down on the other fighters, still, if his ordeal has a survival rate of zero it means he has managed to kill any victim.
- Soul-Saving Crusader: What he sees himself as. He believes that, by living, men suffer and are sad, therefore it's better if he kills them.
- The Stoic: Save for a few tears shed when he explains the burdens of life, he remains calm and collected all the time.
- Sword Beam: With his katana, he can send slash waves that can slash through multiple stone walls.
- Tender Tears: As a proof that he genuine believe in what he does, he cries when talking about the sad things of life.
- This Cannot Be!: He never expects from Zoro to slash through his attack and gets caught completely off-guard before being defeated.
- Whip It Good: Eisen Whip can become a whip too (as you could have guessed by the name) though he uses the whip form to shoot projectile-like attacks more than an actual whip.
and for Holy, his dog:
Ohm's dog. He's a giant white-yellow dog that the priest trained and even taught him to walk on two legs and martial arts. He's so trained that he obeys to anyone, even his enemies.
He's quite strong, as he defeats multiple Shandia warriors by himself, and fights along with his master, Ohm, proving to be a dangerous couple.
- Bare-Fisted Monk: He's really quite skilled with martial arts, being able to even deliver Shoryuken-like punches.
- Blind Obedience: Exaggerated. While it's not strange for a dog to obey his master, he even obeys Zoro's accidental order to "stay put", then the swordman exploit this ordering him to knock himself out.
- Action Pet: Not surprising from a dog the size of a camion. He's a strong fighter and is one of the last combatants defeated.
- Canine Companion: He constantly follows Ohm and fights with him.
- Canis Major: He's so big he can keep Shandian in his mouth, and transport Ohm on his head.
- Dogs Are Dumb: Sure, he must be smart to be able to learn martial arts, but the he obeys to Zoro's order to knock himself out...
and one for doctor Hogback
- Gonk: He's got a round body with slim limbs and has a vampire-like face with a long nose.
Edited by fishysaur on Aug 15th 2018 at 5:14:07 AM
There isn't an impossible dream, there are only people who give up
- martial arts and fights -> martial arts to, <- (comma) that fights
- many forms, there's that -> many forms is that
- shouts the number of -> he shouts the number of
You can Pot Hole "108 pound" to 108.
- other fighters, still, if -> other fighters. Still, if
- slash waves that can slash through -> slash waves that can cut through
- As a proof that he genuine believe -> As proof that he genuine believes
- expects from Zoro to slash -> expects
fromZoro to slash - as you could have guessed -> as you might have guessed
What is a camion?
- and fights with him. -> and fights alongside him.
Saying "fights with him" could be misinterpreted as "fights against him".
- keep Shandian in his mouth, and -> keep Shandian in his mouth <- no comma and
- but the he obeys to Zoro's order -> but then he obeys
toZoro's order - slim limbs and has a vampire-like -> slim limbs and
hasa vampire-like
Here's another both example and description that needs proofreading. Lmk what are your thoughts on this as it's from the page Big Nothing:
Big Nothing is a 2006 British Black Comedy, directed by Jean-Baptiste Andrea and starring David Schwimmer and Simon Pegg.
The story tells us about the former-teacher named Charlie Wood who got fired from the first day from his new job as a Call-Center Employee. Eventually one of his colleagues on the call-center, Gus Dickinson, suggested an idea to Charlie that they will try to blackmail a priest who happens to be listed in the company database of visitors to illegal porn websites so that they could get some extra money. Along with the help of Gus' companion, Josie, they began to execute the plan. However, when Gus tries to retrieve the money from the Reverend's house, things went downhill from there as the Reverend wielding a gun towards Gus and accidentally kills him. As a result, Gus, Charlie and Josie tried to cover up the tracks of their actions.
- Anyone Can Die: Some of the major characters died in this movie such as Gus and Charlie near the end of the film. And so does the minor or supporting role characters such as the reverend, the reverend's wife, the Reverend's wife second lover, the Deputy and the Special Agent.
- Blackmail: The initial plan. As Gus, Charlie and Josie tried to blackmail a reverend could in order to gain a huge sum of money.
- Briefcase Full of Money: It was revealed that the reverend left a suitcase full of money that is estimated around 2 million dollars in his oven thanks to his snuff-filming business.
- Cement Shoes: When the fake reverend was knocked unconscious by Gus after he shoot him in the leg, Charlie tries to dispose his body by tying a lawn gnome on him and throw his body at a nearby septic tank.
- Crime After Crime: Gus convinces Charlie that nothing will go wrong with their plan to blackmail a local reverend. However, something quite unexpected happen and as a result, Gus and Charlie commits other crimes such as murder in order to cover up their tracks.
- Downer Ending: Although Charlie's daughter is seen to be happy at the end after he got all the money, Charlie dies after drinking the poisonous whiskey that the Wyoming Widow mixed with thallium on her second flask. And even if the Wyoming Widow is seemingly defeated because Charlie tricks her by replacing the real money with his daughter's stuffed animals, at the end of the film she gets away with everything with the Oregon undertaker who resumes their serial-killing business again.
- From Bad to Worse: Initially, Gus and Charlie were supposed to blackmailing a priest so that they could extort a lot of money. However, it takes turn for the worse as when Gus tried to retrieve the money, the Reverend tries to shoot him. As a result, they're nearly got caught by a nearby deputy who tried to inspect the Reverend's home and a lot of people were dying right and left thanks to their actions.
- Gambit Pile Up: Gus came with a very complicated plan when it comes to blackmailing a reverend. In order to retrieve a quick buck: First, he and Charlie blackmail the reverend and after he got blackmailed, Gus will go into his house and retrieve the money while he asks his friend Charlie to wait in the cafe. After Gus got the money, he then went into the gas station that is owned by a blind man and then put the money in a locker. And lastly, he calls Charlie to retrieve the money in the gas station. Needless to say, after their plan failed and they accidentally killed a deputy and the reverend's wife. One of Gus's companion, Josie, came with a complicated plan to dispose of their dead bodies. However, both of Charlie and Gus rejects her plans.
- Pedophile Priest: Needless to say, the real reverend that Charlie, Gus, and Josie wanted to blackmail is revealed to be a snuff filmer who targets young girls and tortures them for his own movie. One instance of his nasty act is that he tried to torture a girl by trying to slit her throat or carving her face. However, when said girl is just laughing at the Reverend, he shoots her and then mutilates her body with a chainsaw.
- Serial Killer: Several characters such as the Wyoming Widow and the Oregon Undertaker are these. The Wyoming Widow kills her victims by befriending them and kills them with a whiskey mixed with highly concentrated thallium while the Oregon Undertaker mutilates his victims after he murdered them.
- Shoot the Shaggy Dog: All of the hardships and the suffering that Charlie and Gus went through just for blackmailing a person went for naught as they died at the end of the film. The real criminal, who happens to be one of Charlie's companions, gets away with everything. Averted with Charlie's case as despite he dies on the Wyoming Widow's hands after drinking the poisonous whiskey mixed with thallium, he manages to trick her by swapping the briefcase that contains real money with his daughter's stuffed animals.
- Snuff Film: It was revealed that the real reverend is involved in snuff filming business by targeting young women and then proceeds to torture them by threatening them to slit their throat and when one of them defies him, he proceeds to kill them and mutilate their body with a chainsaw. His snuff films earn him a lot of money that is estimated around 2 million dollars.
Here are the new tropes which I haven't inserted on the page yet:
- Accidental Murder: Charlie accidentally kills the fake reverend by disposing his body to a nearby septic-tank.
- Black Comedy: The film has a moments filled with this. Such as Charlie got fired after pranking with the customers, Gus got his face punched after he have a sex with Josie, Charlie's reaction after he saw a snuff-film that made him vomit and so on.
- Brain Bleach: When Charlie saw a video about the real reverend mutilating someone with a chainsaw for his snuff-film, he screams "HOLY MOLY!" and proceeds to puke.
- Cerebus Syndrome: Despite it still retains it humor, the movie suddenly becomes darker after the reverend tries to shoot Gus when the latter tries to retrieve the money from him.
- Cold-Blooded Torture: The real reverend tortures his victims by threatening to stab them in a throat for his own snuff-film.
- Con Artist: Gus is revealed to be an aspiring con-artist. However, he failed because some of the characters such as Charlie saw his lies easily.
- Confess to a Lesser Crime: Charlie tries to repent for his crimes by turning himself to the police and confess the thing that he had done after he and his friends made a lot of huge mess in their plans. Much to the latter's disappointment.
- Conveniently Unverifiable Cover Story: Charlie tries to lie to a local deputy by saying that the reverend's home is his own home and also lying to him by saying that his name is Stephen. When the deputy notices some blood on the floor. Charlie then knife and cuts himself and then told the policeman that he cut himself on a vase. The police could notice the holes of Charlie's cover-up story. However, since the police is rather oblivious, he easily dismissed it anyway.
- Death by Falling Over: How the deputy died. As when he tries to escape from the toilet through a window, he accidentally slips and breaks his skull on the toilet when he was drunk.
- Destroy the Evidence: More like throwing the evidence away. After Charlie's wife, Penolope, accidentally discovers the badge from the police that was murdered by Charlie and his friends. She decides to throw the evidence on a nearby bridge.
- Dirty Cop: Combined with Fat Bastard. It was revealed that Agent Hymnes tries to steal the money and kills Gus by shooting him twice because his lack of payment.
- Disposing of a Body: When Charlie kills the fake reverend, he throws the body on a nearby septic-tank. It was also revealed that they accidentally killed the deputy and the reverend's wife once they got found out. To this end, they dispose their bodies to a nearby disposal point for the first time and a tar pit for the second time when they almost got found out. When Charlie and Josie kills the special agent, they also dispose his body to a nearby tar-pit.
- Encyclopaedic Knowledge: Charlie has a habit to reeling off random facts from his head. It's because of the neurological disorder that he had and his mind will eventually become blank if he doesn't memorize things. The disorder is also the reason why he got fired from the teaching position.
- Epic Fail: Combined with Shoot the Shaggy Dog. Gus's plans to retrieve the money after blackmailing someone ended up with people, including him and his companion Charlie, died left and right accidentally thanks to their actions. Averted with Charlie as he's the only one who got the money by swapping it with his daughter's stuffed animals for the Wyoming Widow who was supposed to take the money.
- Family Man: Charlie truly cares towards his wife and daughter. The reason why he ended up following Gus's plans is because he wants to support his own daughter.
- Fat Bastard: Agent Hymnes is a fat person who kills Gus so that he could obtain the money for himself.
- Femme Fatale: Make no mistake, it was revealed that at the end of the day, Josie is the real Wyoming Widow. And she had a penchant of killing her victims by seducing her at first and kills them by making them drinking a whiskey that was mixed by highly-concentrated thallium.
- Foreshadowing: Josie tries to force the deputy to drink more alcohol when he got taken as a hostage by both Charlie, Gus and her. It indicates that she was the Wyoming Widow as the serial killer herself kills her victims by forcing them drinking a whiskey mixed with a lethal poison.
- Firing Day: Charlie got fired from the first day in his work as a call-center employee after getting several complaints from customers.
- Good People Have Good Sex: Averted with Gus's case. While he's not a good person to begin with. He met Josie after he have a good sex with her. However, he got punched by someone as a result.
- I Lied: It is revealed that Gus lied to Charlie that he does have a daughter that needed a retina operation.
- I Take Offense to That Last One: Agent Hymnes didn't take it lightly when someone, such as Gus, calls him fat.
- Karma Houdini: Needless to say, both the Wyoming Widow and the Oregon Undertaker are getting away with their crimes at the end of the day. And is implied that both of them will continue the murder all over again.
- Malevolent Mutilation:
- How the Oregon Undertaker kills his victims. As after he kills them, he mutilates them horribly.
- When the real reverend fails to make a snuff-film that he wanted and the actress is left laughing, he kills her with a shotgun and mutilates her body with a chainsaw.
- Master Poisoner: Wyoming Widow can make a deadly poison by mixing a whiskey with a high-concentrated thallium.
- My God, What Have I Done?: Charlie's reaction after he and Josie killing a special agent, Chester Hymnes, by feeding him with a lollipop. To the point that he remarks on what monsters they had become.
- Perfect Poison: This is Wyoming Widow's favorite MO. As she kills her victims by mixing a whiskey with highly concentrated thallium and let her victims drink said whiskey after she seduces them.
- Posthumous Narration: Despite Charlie was supposed to die at the end of the movie, he narrates the beginning of the story on how he met Gus and how he ended up in this mess at the first place.
- Tap on the Head: It was revealed that the fake reverend was knocked-off unconscious by Gus. However, Charlie accidentally murders the reverend by throwing his body into a nearby septic-tank. When both of the deputy and Charlie tries to open the septic-tank, Gus smashes a vase against the head of the deputy, who is promptly dragged inside while still unconscious.
- Tragic Mistake: As Charlie says in prologue, he made a big mistake after he joined in Gus's schemes in order to gain a quick buck.
- Undignified Death: Charlie and Josie forces Special Agent Hymnes to eat a large sugary-lollipop which is dangerous for his diabetes. Hymnes pleads for his life after his diabetes meter got overloaded and got killed by his own diabetes.
^^Here are the tropes that need to be proofread both new and old one as for now. Tyvm
Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Aug 16th 2018 at 12:21:47 AM
"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."Thanks a correction
For some reason, I've forgotten "Camion" in english is Truck and I thought the word was the same in english, anyway, corrected it
Also, "god" is not in capital because he probably refers to the title of "god", not the actual God (In Sky land, the ruler is called "god" instead of "king"). I can't exactly say if it's "god" or "God" because all the manga letters are capitals, but I put "god" to distinguish the title from "God" (although Enel, Skypiea's god, also believes he's an actual divinity)
tropes for Ohm
One of Enel's priests and the one in charge of the Ordeal of Iron, which has a survival rate of 0%. In the ordeal, the victims are trapped in a cage of thorned iron cloud strands. On the ground there are multiple pressure plates that, when stepped on, cause the dials to eject barbed wires of clouds which shred the victims. If the traps don't do the job, Ohm himself deals with the victims.
He's a calm and serious fighter. He considers life and greed nothing but burdens that cause sorrows, therefore he honestly wants to save people by killing them.
He's also a strong fighter, as proven by his trial which has a survival rate of zero percent. His weapon, Eisen Whip, is a katana with a cloud blade that can change shape, becoming a fork, a sword, a whip or even a wall. He also owns a giant dog, Holy, which he trained and taught martial arts to, that fights alongside him.
- BFS His sword is almost as long as he is tall, and he can still swing it like it weighs nothing. Possibly Justified, since it's made of Iron Cloud and not actual iron.
- Bilingual Bonus: "Eisen" is German for "Iron", fitting for a sword.
- Blade On A Stick: One of Eisen Whip's many forms is that of a spear.
- Combat Commentator: While fighting during the last part of Enel's survival game, whenever someone is defeated, he shouts the number of remaining combatants, counting even the animals.
- Implausible Fencing Powers: Even counting the ability of change form, one wouldn't expect the katana to cut stone.
- Katanas Are Just Better: Of course, his shapeshifting weapon's main form is that of a katana.
- Pre-Mortem One-Liner: Says to Zoro "Make your last prayer to god, swordman of the Blue Sea" before striking the finishing blow. However, Zoro's 108 pound cannon proves to be stronger.
- Prongs of Poseidon: His sword can become a trident too.
- Sleeves Are for Wimps: Of course, the toughest priest wears only a tanktop on his muscular body.
- Smug Super: He's really confident of his ability and looks down on the other fighters. Still, if his ordeal has a survival rate of zero it means he has managed to kill any victim so far.
- Soul-Saving Crusader: What he sees himself as. He believes that, by living, men suffer and are sad, therefore it's better if he kills them.
- The Stoic: Save for a few tears shed when he explains the burdens of life, he remains calm and collected all the time.
- Sword Beam: With his katana, he can send slash waves that can destroy multiple stone walls.
- Tender Tears: As proof that he genuine believes in what he does, he cries when talking about his philosophy.
- This Cannot Be!: He never expects Zoro to slash through his attack and gets caught completely off-guard before being defeated.
- Whip It Good: Eisen Whip can become a whip too (as you might have guessed by the name) though he uses the whip form to shoot projectile-like attacks more than an actual whip.
and for Holy, his dog:
Ohm's dog. He's a giant white-yellow dog that the priest trained and even taught him how to walk on two legs and use martial arts. He's so well trained that he obeys anyone, even his enemies.
He's quite strong, as he defeats multiple Shandia warriors by himself. He fights along his master, Ohm, and they prove to be a dangerous couple.
- Bare-Fisted Monk: He's really quite skilled with martial arts, being able to even deliver Shoryuken-like punches.
- Blind Obedience: Exaggerated. While it's not strange for a dog to obey his master, he even obeys Zoro's accidental order to "stay put". The swordman exploits this ordering him to knock himself out.
- Action Pet: Not too surprising from a dog the size of a truck. He's a strong fighter and is one of the last combatants defeated.
- Canine Companion: He constantly follows Ohm and fights alongside him.
- Canis Major: He's so big he can keep Shandian in his mouth and transport Ohm on his head.
- Dogs Are Dumb: Sure, he must be smart to be able to learn martial arts, but then he obeys Zoro's order to knock himself out...
and one for doctor Hogback
- Gonk: He's got a round body with slim limbs and a vampire-like face with a long nose.
Another trope for Gedatsu
- A Day in the Limelight: Gets his own mini-adventure: Gedatus's Accidental Blue-Sea Life.
And for Holy
- Perpetual Frowner: Save for a few moments when he fights, he constantly has a frown on his face.
Edited by fishysaur on Aug 15th 2018 at 12:07:56 PM
There isn't an impossible dream, there are only people who give upAnother examples that I made for Tenrou Sirius the Jaeger page:
- Advertised Extra: Agatha is one of the characters that appears in the trailer. However, she got killed easily by Yuliy in Episode 2.
- The '30s: The setting of Tenrou Sirius the Jaeger takes place in 1930s Tokyo. Specifically before the World War II started.
- Behind the Black: In Episode 2, after Yuliy defeated one of the vampires, he is then attacked by a mysterious assailant. Which is revealed to be his brother, Mikhail, who was supposed to be dead long ago.
- Chase Scene:
- In the first episode, The Jaegers tried to chase the runaway vampires by car in the streets of Tokyo.
- In Episode 5, Willard, Fallon and Phillip tries to chase a train that got hijacked by the Hyakko Party in order to save the remaining people in there.
- Chekhov's Skill: Ryoko is still practicing on how to do Kendo. It becomes a pay-off in Episode 5 with her being able to kill one of the vampires with her apprentice swordsman skill.
- Creepy Twins: The vampire twins that resides in Yevgraf's castle are basically this. As they are pale vampires with gothic-style outfit attributed to them.
- Curb-Stomp Battle: In Epsiode 2, Yuliy is able to defeat Agatha with ease by stabbing her.
- Don't Call Me "Sir": One of the Major in the Japanese Army, Major Hideomi Iba doesn't like to be called as a major when he is on his casual clothes as he's pretty sensitive to his surroundings.
- The Infiltration: Major Hideomi Iba, disguise himself as a reporter named Tada so that he could investigate so that he could investigate the shady things that the two companies (V-Shipping and Alma Company) has done.
- It's Not You, It's Me: In Episode 3, when Ryoko tries to approach Yuliy when he almost transform into a werewolf, he asks her to stay away and don't come near him. However, he also felt sorry that he almost attacks her.
- Lost Lenore: Dr. Hanada is motivated to do his own research regarding the Artificial Heart because of his wife's death.
- MacGuffin:Both Vampires and the Jaegers tries to retrieve a legendary box/treasure known as the Sirius Ark that could change the world.
- My God, What Have I Done?:
- Combined with I Let Gwen Stacy Die. This is Yuliy's reaction after he kills Dr. Hanada when he got turned into a vampire.
- Ryoko's reaction after killing one of the vampires in Episode 5 as this is the first time she kills somebody before and she felt rather scared to do so.
- Parental Neglect: Dr. Hanada seems to ignore his daughter, Saki, all the time because of his own research. However, as he completed his research, he then made a promise towards his daughter that he will spend much more time with her. Unfortunately, the promise will never happen as Dr. Hanada got turned into a vampire at the end of the episode and got killed by Yuliy.
- Pre-Mortem One-Liner: Before the maid who betrays Dr. Hanada got killed offscreen by Agatha when she tries to retrieve the money. Agatha said this line before murdering the maid:
"I hate cowards like you. No pride and no loyalty. Such a foolish and inferior human."
- Rewarded as a Traitor Deserves: The maid that works for Dr. Hanada betrays him by telling the location of him and his research to Agatha, one of the vampires, so that she could get more money. However, she got back-stabbed by Agatha and got killed offscreen.
- When You Coming Home, Dad?: Saki is neglected by his father due to the latter was working on his own research to the point that she felt rather lonely. However, as her father completed the research, he tries to spent time with her which sadly never happened.
Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Aug 15th 2018 at 11:30:33 PM
"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."- In Indonesia religious-theme TV drama, every remorseless and unsympathetic antagonist will ended at their karmic death by receive a punishment from god (which is called Azab) as the result of what already they do when still alive. Sometimes the punishment shown on television is way too exaggerate and illogical, in order to make the show looks bombastic
- Marie and Allelujah are destined to be soulmates and connected thanks to their quantum brainwaves since their childhood. However, when he and the other kids try to escape from institute,Allelujah heavily decide to leave her in institute due she still need medical requirement. When the researcher implant Soma Peries persona to made Marie into perfect super soldier, Soma has no memory about Marie persona and unable to known who she is, making her unable to remember Allelujah too. After he know her identity and the truth about her, Allelujah decide to save her from the A-Laws and Federation, so she will never be used by military as "living weapon". After Marie persona is return, Marie remains on Allelujah sides and very supportive to him. No matter that Soma and Hallelujah persona are dislike each other, Marie and Allelujah are will be together and will never separated.
Girly Girl with a Tomboy Streak:
- Marie is a nice super girly-girl unlike Soma who is a tough-tomboyish girl. Since Marie also super soldier, she still competent to be a pilot and have good piloting skills thanks to Soma's experiences
- Soma is a tough-tomboyish girl unlike Marie who is a nice super girly-girl. Even as a super soldier and pilot, Soma has feminine long hair and was never seen to tied or cut it into more boyish hairstyle, she piloted a pink version of the Tieren, and in a flashback where she started a normal life with Sergei, she wears a pink cardigan and a long skirt.
Edited by tikatikatika on Aug 15th 2018 at 9:59:05 AM
While real life sheep can be adorable when young, they tend to grow out of it when they get older and have some freaky or not-so-cute characteristics, such as their eyes and dirty wool. In much of fiction, sheep tend to be used as a shorthand for a symbol of innocence, which may come from the fact that Jesus was referred to as the Lamb of God. As such, if sheep appear in fiction, expect them to be very sweet and kind, or at least cute. Sheep are also useful for when trying to sleep.
Please note this trope is used when there is an actual cute sheep. It does not refer to the Black Sheep and White Sheep of families or Bitch in Sheep's Clothing and Sheep in Sheep's Clothing in characters.
Examples:
- Chirin, the star of the Ringing Bell is this, living a happy and carefree life in the fields, at least until his mother's death and no longer by the end.
- Piano from Onegai My Melody is a cute, pink, fluffy sheep. While she can't speak like the others on the show, she is good at writing poetry and stories.
- Jewelpet has Flora who is gentle and meek, but that being said you shouldn't try and make her angry. Her droopy eyes in the anime make her look constantly relaxed.
- The film and anime series based on Arashi no Yoru ni has Mei, which makes his friendship with a wolf all the stranger. He tends to keep his cheery and positive attitude even with the hardships of having a wolf as a friend.
- Yu-Gi-Oh!
- The series most famously has Scapegoat, four colorful Sheep Tokens that all look like they're sleeping (they also aren't used for attacking directly, but rather to protect life points or sacrifice for other monsters). They're used by plenty of duelist who use them, but they are most famously used by Joey/Jonouchi.
- ''Yu-Gi-Oh! ARC-V adds another cute sheep in Fluffal Sheep. Used by Sora, whose deck is full of cute monsters.
- Most of the sheep in Kirby: Right Back at Ya! are sweet and innocent victims to various monsters that invade Dreamland. Amon, however, is an aversion. Having been traumatized by King Dedede attempting to eat him and getting turned into a monster by a bolt of lightning, Amon ends up brainwashing the sheep of Cappy Town to act like wolves in an effort to free all the sheep from suffering.
- Yu-Gi-Oh! most famously has Scapegoat, four colorful Sheep Tokens that all look like they're asleep. Later they would add another cute sheep in Fluffal Sheep.
- Zootopia Assistant Mayor Bellwether seems like an Adorkable, helpfully friend to protagonist Judy. Keyword being seems.
- Danny from Disney's early life action So Dear to My Heart, is a cute black sheep. He deserves special mention when he turns animated and becomes one of the cutest animated animals in film.
- In the Jolly Holiday musical number in Mary Poppins, a trio of sheep can be seen dancing and singing with Bert and Mary.
- Arashi no Yoru ni has Mei, which makes his friendship with a wolf all the more stranger. He tends to keep his cheery and positive attitude even with the hardships of having a wolf as friend.
- The 2017 children's book Go To Sleep by Marion Adams stars a cute female sheep named "Tansy" who has forgotten how to sleep and has to learn how to do it again.
- Subverted on Drake & Josh. When Megan tricks the boys into taking care of a sheep she bought online with the promise of not pranking them for a long time, they first are in love with the sheep for being so cute and gentle. Then it proceeds to wreck their room, get lost in the house, and give birth on Josh's bed, making it much less endearing to them.
- Little Bo-Peep's sheep seem to wander off when she's around, but they seem loyal enough to return home in the end.
- Mary's Lamb from Mary Had a Little Lamb fame follows her everywhere, even to school. The last verse of the full version is on how much the lamb loves Mary and Mary loves the lamb back.
- The eponymous black sheep from Baa, Baa, Black Sheep gives their wool to their master, a woman, and a young boy. At least in the version most a familiar with.
- Pokémon Gold and Silver added Mareep and Flaaffy, and while Ampharos is still cute, it's not as cute as its pre-evolutions and looks less like a sheep as it lacks their fluffy wool. Mareep are also said to also mild and avoid battles.
- In The Simpsons episode "Lisa the Vegetarian", there are actually three, and each cuter than the last. The last one is so cute in fact that it kick starts Lisa's decision to become a vegetarian.
- Most of the sheep in Shaun the Sheep are cute in a cartoony way. Shaun's cousin Timmy is just plain cute, with him essentially being a sheep pom-pom that carries around a teddy bear and sucks on a pacifier.
- Lambie from Doc McStuffins is as soft as the wool covering her.
- The 1994 direct to video film "Simon The Lamb" by Precious Moments has most of the main animal cast being adorable sheep and lambs. The titular protagonist is a baby blue colored lamb with blue wool.
- The 2003 direct to video animated sequel to Charlotte's Web features Cardigan the lamb as a new animal to the farm. Due to his black wool and enjoying pig stuff ,all the other lambs make fun of him and calls him a "loser". Leaving Wilbur and Charlotte's three daughters as the only friends Cardigan makes.
- The sheep who sings asdfmovie: "Beep, Beep! I'm a Sheep! I said Beep Beep, I'm a Sheep!", while more funny than cute, is still amusing in it's own way.
- Counting Sheep is often used to try sleep, often with imaging sheep jumping over a fence. While it doesn't usually work, sheep have become synonyms with sleep.
It's done, just needs a proofread and photo.
Edited by rinrinboss on Aug 15th 2018 at 11:20:34 AM
A trope for Gedatsu
- Wild Take: While not that extreme, he always make a surprised face when someone makes him realize about his strange quirks.
some tropes for yama and description
The commander of the divine soldiers. He's fanatically devoted to Enel, even moreso than the four priests, yet, at the same time he has no respect for the world around him, as seen when he fights without caring about the ancient ruins he's destroying.
Despite his fat build, he's actually really strong, being able to smash even stone ruins with ease, and agile, and he mostly resort to phisical attacks like punches, kicks and belly drops. He also has a belt with ten Axe Dials sewn on it, often used in combination with his belly attacks.
- Curb-Stomp Battle: Easily defeats Genbou with his pure phisical strenght, then he's on the receiving end against Nico Robin, who manages to deal easily with his attacks.
- The Fundamentalist: He's completely devoted to Enel, to the point of calling out the priests for fighting in his temple.
- Neck Snap: For destroying part of Shandora's ruins, Nico Robin breaks his spine.
x 7 @Elfen Lied Fan 90
The purpose of this thread is to help people learn better English by proofreading their new work. I just don't have time to go through all the already existing pages on TV Tropes that people would like to have corrected.
Verb tenses changed from past to present tense as per How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense.
- by disposing his body -> by disposing of his body
- When Charlie saw -> When Charlie sees
- Despite it still retains it humor -> Although it retains its humor
- stab them in a throat -> stab them in the throat
- and also lying to him by saying -> and
also lying to himby saying
- It was also revealed -> It is also revealed
- Charlie truly cares towards -> Charlie truly cares about
- so that he could obtain -> so that he can obtain
- Charlie got fired from the first day in his work -> Charlie gets fired
from thehis first day of work
- Agent Hymnes didn't take it lightly -> Agent Hymnes doesn't take it lightly
- As after he -> After he
- As Charlie says in prologue -> As Charlie says in the prologue
Edited by Arivne on Aug 16th 2018 at 8:45:47 AM
Sorry. That's because I'm trying to follow the rules before I add the examples to the pages. I would like some proofread first. And some of them didn't get added from the page yet so don't worry.
Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Aug 16th 2018 at 10:08:01 PM
"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."
x 7 @Elfen Lied Fan 90
- Another examples that I made -> More examples that I made
- The Jaegers tried to chase -> The Jaegers try to chase
- when he almost transform -> after he almost transforms
- However, he also felt sorry -> However, he also feels sorry
x 7 @tikatikatika
x 7 @rinrinboss
- They're used by plenty of duelist who use them, -> They're used by plenty of duelists
who use them - Keyword being seems. -> Keyword being "seems".
- Danny from -> Danny, <- comma from
- all the more stranger. -> all the
morestranger. - having a wolf as friend. -> having a wolf as a friend.
- sheep...gives...most a familiar with. -> sheep...give...most are familiar with.
- Mareep are also said to also mild -> Mareep are also said to be mild
- amusing in it's own way. -> amusing in its own way.
- to try sleep -> to try to get to sleep
Edited by Arivne on Aug 16th 2018 at 9:51:58 AM
x 7 @fishysaur
Makes him realize what about his strange quirks?
- yet, at the same time he -> yet, at the same time, <- comma he
- phisical strenght -> physical strength
A trope for Gedatsu
- Wild Take: While not that extreme, he always makes a surprised face when someone makes him realize his strange quirks.
some tropes for yama and description
The commander of the divine soldiers. He's fanatically devoted to Enel, even moreso than the four priests, yet, at the same time he has no respect for the world around him, as seen when he fights without caring about the ancient ruins he's destroying.
Despite his fat build, he's actually really strong, being able to smash even stone ruins with ease, and agile. In fights, he mostly resorts to physical attacks like punches, kicks and belly drops. He also has a belt with ten Axe Dials sewn on it, often used in combination with his belly attacks.
- Curb-Stomp Battle: Easily defeats Genbou with his pure physical strength, then he's on the receiving end against Nico Robin, who manages to deal easily with his attacks.
- Fingore: He really pushed Nico Robin's Berserk Button, as the latter, among other things, breaks his fingers.
- The Fundamentalist: He's completely devoted to Enel, to the point of calling out the priests for fighting in his temple.
- Neck Snap: For destroying part of Shandora's ruins, Nico Robin breaks his spine.

Sorry, but I still need another correction, someone else made one, but I still need another one.
But I don't know, they asked for a correction, but I think it's all fine.
Edited by VictorDamazio on Aug 11th 2018 at 6:29:44 AM