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I can't edit due to being blocked. However, I wanted to point out something about the Devil May Cry series, most notably its 4th title. The series' article makes mention of it but DMC 5's director has already confirmed that Nero is the son of Vergil. The source is this http://gearnuke.com/devil-may-cry-5-interview-neros-lineage-design/

Also, the Devil May Cry 4 novel has been hinting it a lot something which is discussed in the series' article. In a Famitsu interview, director Hideaki Itsuno confirmed that certain plot elements like Nero's new business was carried from the light novel so I guess it's canon.

@fishysaur

• he has some degrees in swordmanship. -> he has some degree in swordmanship.
• He participates at the Summit War -> He participates in the Summit War
• Don't underestimate him only because -> Don't underestimate him just because

• His feminine appearance combined with his crossdressing habits
  • His feminine appearance, <- comma combined with his crossdressing habits, <- comma
  • His feminine appearance and crossdressing habits
• figths with guns -> fights with two guns
• Izo breaks the sword and defeat -> Izo breaks the sword and defeats

correction

for Fossa

The fifteenth division commander. He wields a katana that can become a flaming weapon.

He's seen at the Summit War along with the other division commanders.

• All There in the Manual: His name, like those of many other division commanders, is revealed in the SBS of Volume 58.
• Badass Mustache: Sports a cool brush mustache.
• Cigar Chomper: He smokes a cigar that he also uses to set his sword on fire.
• Katanas Are Better: His main weapon is a katana, and he can set it on fire.
• Mr. Exposition: A brief moment, but he's the one who reveals that both Whitebeard and Shanks have conqueror's Haki.
• Sleeves Are for Wimps: When you're a badass with a flaming katana, you can afford a sleeveless jacket.
• Tattooed Crook: The Jolly Roger of his crew is tattooed on his right deltoid.
• Walking Shirtless Scene: His jacket leaves his muscular body exposed.

for Izo

The sixteenth division commander. He fights using two flintock pistols but, at the end of Marineford's arc, he's seen with a sword, implying he has some degree in swordmanship.

He participates in the Summit War with the other fifteen division commanders.

• Agent Peacock: Don't underestimate him just because he's dressed like a geisha. There's a reason he's a division commander.
• All There in the Manual: We learn his name only thanks to the SBS of volume 58.
• Bishōnen: His appeareance is much more feminine than the average One Piece character.
• Combat Pragmatist: When he sees that the Marines are pulling back, he says that is the right time to move.
• Dude Looks Like a Lady: His feminine appearance, combined with his crossdressing habits, make it easy to mistake him for a woman.
• Guns Akimbo: He fights with two guns at the same time.
• The Gunslinger: He uses a pair of flintock pistols and he's deadly with them, even in close combat.
• Never Bring a Knife to a Gun Fight: Someone tries to attack him with a sword. The results: Izo breaks the sword and defeats the attacker with a single shot.
• Spell My Name With An S: Some translations spelled his name "Izou".

a trope for Whitebeard

• Not Afraid to Die: In an SBS, is revealed that, before Marineford's war he rips off all the medical tools that have been keeping his health stable and left his medical team in a safe place, to not allow it to fight, because, by this point, he's ready to die.

another for fossa

• Bald Of Awesome: Although he still has hair on the sides of his head, the majority of the head is bald.
• Rugged Scar: Has a scar on his bald head.

this

folder:The medical team]]

The nurses of the crew and the only female members. They take care of Whitebeard's declining health, even if the latter keeps drinking ignoring their protests.

Due to Whitebeard's own set of morals, despite their protests, they are left in a safe place and not allowed to take place in the Summit War.

• All There in the Manual: We only see them taking care of Whitebeard in a chapter. What happened to them before the events of Marineford is revealed in an SBS.
• Hospital Hottie: They're all quite beautiful nurses.
• The Medic: An entire squad of nurses.
• Non-action girls: They don't have any combat ability, as they're just the crew's medical team.
• Pink Is Feminine: Of course all members of an all-female medical team wear pink nurse uniforms.
• Please, Don't Leave Me: They tried to stop their captain from what seemed certain death for him.
• Stay in the Kitchen: While they probably aren't able to fight, the reason why they're not allowed to participate in the Summit War is because Whitebeard has never allowed a woman in his crew as a "fighter".

[[/folder]]

And a description for Kaku

He's first seen as one of Galley-la Company's best shipwrights, and is the one who tells the Straw Hats that the Going Merry is beyond repair, until he's revealed to be a spy in undercover for the World Government.

Then he goes to Enies Lobby along with the other undercover agents, there he eats the Cow-Cow Fruit (Giraffe Model) and later fights Zoro. After a long and intence fight, the three-swords swordman wins and Kaku gracefully gives him his key, revealing it's the one that opens Nico Robin's handcuffs.

After the events of Enies Lobby, he's kicked out of CP9 and with the his ex-colleagues, he collects money to heal Lucci and swears revenge on Spandam.

After the time-skip is revealed that he has become a member of CP0.

Edited by fishysaur on Jul 13th 2018 at 7:59:06 AM

I wanna add Doomed Protagonist to Allen Walker's section from

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/DGrayManExorcists

In volume 22 of the manga, Allen reads fortune and it says he will have a horrible future. The following chapters kind of confirm it but I don't know if we can add it as Played for Laughs too.

@fishysaur

• the majority of the head -> the majority of his head

• Of course all members -> Of course, <- comma all members

• revealed to be a spy in undercover -> revealed to be an undercover spy
• there he eats the Cow-Cow Fruit -> where he eats the Cow-Cow Fruit
• intence -> intense
• and with the his ex-colleagues, -> and, <- comma with the his ex-colleagues,
• After the time-skip is revealed that -> After the time-skip, <- comma it is revealed that

correction

a trope for Whitebeard

• Not Afraid to Die: In an SBS, it is revealed that, before Marineford's war, he ripped off all the medical devices that had been keeping his health stable and left his medical team in a safe place, to not allowing it to fight, because, by this point, he's ready to die.

another for fossa

• Bald Of Awesome: Although he still has hair on the sides of his head, the majority of his head is bald.
• Rugged Scar: Has a scar on his bald head.

this

folder:The medical team]]

The nurses of the crew and the only female members. They take care of Whitebeard's declining health, even if the latter keeps drinking, ignoring their protests.

Due to Whitebeard's own set of morals, despite their protests, they are left in a safe place and not allowed to take place in the Summit War.

• All There in the Manual: We only see them taking care of Whitebeard in a chapter. What happened to them before the events of Marineford is revealed in an SBS.
• Hospital Hottie: They're all quite beautiful nurses.
• The Medic: An entire squad of nurses.
• Non-action girls: They don't have any combat ability, as they're just the crew's medical team.
• Pink Is Feminine: Of course, all members of an all-female medical team wear pink nurse uniforms.
• Please, Don't Leave Me: They tried to stop their captain from going to what seemed certain death for him. And indeed it was.
• Stay in the Kitchen: While they probably aren't able to fight, the reason why they're not allowed to participate in the Summit War is because Whitebeard has never allowed a woman in his crew as a "fighter".

[[/folder]]

And a description for Kaku

He's first seen as one of Galley-la Company's best shipwrights, and is the one who tells the Straw Hats that the Going Merry is beyond repair, until he's revealed to be an undercover spy for the World Government.

Then he goes to Enies Lobby along with the other undercover agents, where he eats the Cow-Cow Fruit (Giraffe Model) and later fights Zoro. After a long and intense fight, the three-swords swordman wins and Kaku gracefully gives him his key, revealing it's the one that opens Nico Robin's handcuffs.

After the events of Enies Lobby, he's kicked out of CP9 and, with the his ex-colleagues, he collects money to heal Lucci and swears revenge on Spandam.

After the time-skip it is revealed that he has become a member of CP0.

Another day another EP to proofread and here it is:

What's the Work

So the work in question is a 2018 anime called Dances With The Dragons (or Saredo Tsumibito wa Ryuu to Odoru). In the world of Saredo Tsumibito, humanity had discovered a way to channel a magic that was controlled by dragons a long time ago so that they could terrorize humanity. These magics and special formulas is now known as Jushiki which is essentially a chemical reactions augmented through special weapons that cause a magic-spell like effect and as a result, these powers could possibly alter the world laws. The ones who could handle those powers came to be known as Jushikiists. And because due to the conflict between the dragons and humans are almost long lasting, a peace treaty was enforced a years later even if some people disagree with said treaty. However, the story is focused on two Jushikiists called Gayus Sorel and Gigina Ashley-Bufh who seemingly can't get along together. However, they took plenty of requests from some clients who need help even if both Gayus and Gigina sometimes bickering with each other.

In Episode 2, Gayus and Gigina received a request from a high ranking Jushiikist named Helodel who is also Gayus's childhood friend to become a bodyguard and a tour-guide for a noble figure, Cardinal Moldeen Ogus Gyunei.

Who is He/What Has He Done

So Moldeen is a cardinal of a church who is actually a cousin of the Queen of Dragon Empire, Queen Zenobia of Ilum and the proxy to the Oujes Emperor... In his first appearance, he participated in the conference discussion regarding the Alshok territory merging with the Seven-City Alliance. Needless to say, Moldeen seems rather bored with the discussion that seemed to be never-ending. And after he got some message from his subordinates, he then changed the meeting location to somewhere in Eridana City.

In Episode 2, Moldeen gave a reason why Gayus and Gigina needed to become his bodyguard...It's because that he doesn't want his fun to be ruined while visiting the Eridana Festival. And it was revealed that Genon, one of his generals disguised as himself as the announcer of the festival and Moldeen said that there are seven version of him that protected the real one and he thanked them for that. And when Moldeen found out that Gayus is a Pessimistic-Optimistic person, Moldeen confessed that he deceived,betrayed and spilled blood of some people. However, Moldeen himself claimed that he still have a positive views of the world so long as the children is happy.

In the night, when Moldeen and his bodyguards went to the hotel, it was revealed that their road was blocked by the demonstrates who refused the ratification of Tienlun Accord and needless to say, Moldeen was disappointed by this because it was supposed to end the conflict between the humans and the dragons. As a result of the demonstrants blocking their way, they ended up walking to the hotel by their feet by Moldeens orders. And it was also implied that he intended to ally with the Seven Stars to end the conflict.

In Episode 3, Moldeen asked Gayus and Gigina to become a bodyguard for an upcoming tea party that he will held along with a guest from afar. And in the church where the tea party will be held, Moldeen asked a philosophical question to Gayus about god in which he gave a rather nihilistic answer to Gayus himself by saying the world is full of deception. However, after the tea party is starting. It was revealed that the other assassin attacked it. After this, Gayus then asked Moldeen and his special guest escape from the church.

In Episode 4, it was revealed that Gayus and Gigina had escorted the decoy Moldeen in the previous episodes, Genon, and the real Moldeen then visited Gayus in the hospital after he got injured from preventing the assassination attempt. It was then revealed that Moldeen actually planned the assassination attempt and then he arranges the murder of one of the traitors from his side, Helodel, by giving him an explosive that was disguised as a parcel when Helodel tried to move the car. And his motivation is that he wants to prevent the Holy War from happening. It was also revealed that he hired two assassins to fight Gayus and Gigina so that he could watch it for fun and also have another ulterior motive on why he hires them...

In Episode 5, Despite admitting his own so-called "defeat". Gayus then calls him out that he and Gigina had been dancing in Moldeen's palm all along and recounted on what happened with Moldeen. The reason why he planned the assassination attempt is that he wanted to kick some hardliners who are opposed to Holy land of Alsok's ceding. It was also revealed that he mastermind the failure of the first Tienlun Accord to create the favorable conditions for Alsok ceding and promised to mediate said failed accord. It was also revealed that Gayus and Gigina were used as a bait to lure a serial killer of the Jushikiists, Nidvolk, because of the fact that she was one of the Vaisen defectors. And after Gayus recounted the story and Gigina tries to kill Moldeen after he find out what happened, Moldeen then gives both Gayus and Gigina his own valuable ring because they were dancing brilliantly in his so-called "stage". And not only that, he wanted to offer both of them to join his side as a Winged Generals in which both Gayus and Gigina declined his offer.

Even though that Gayus and Gigina's business with Moldeen seems over. In later episodes, it was revealed that Moldeen signed another treaty to support an oppressive regime of a certain country called Urmun because the dictator of Urmun, Dorcetta, contributes to the prosperous state of the Dragon Empire and so does their economies. At the end of the series, Moldeen gets away with everything with his goals being completed.

Is He Charming,Charismatic,Thinks on her Feet?

Absolutely! He's a great planner and a great thinker overall. And thanks to his gambits, many people including Gayus and Gigina were dancing in the palm of his hands to the point he called his gambits as a stage that people can't escaped and both Gayus and Gigina the actors of said stage. As far as the charismatic tendencies goes, Moldeen is affable,polite and never loses his charm towards his companions and enemies alike and claims that he loves to have fun. So I think there's no issue here.

Is He a Bastard? Too Much?

Moldeen, despite being a Cardinal of the Church, is not a saintly man that he looks on the outside. He even claims that he had deceived,betrayed and causing some bloodshed against other people so that he could reach his goals. And his gambits causes Gayus and Gigina much more harm rather than benefiting them. Not only that, he also support an evil regime because of the economic and political reasons.

However, even if Moldeen is rather a bastard. His goal is actually well-intentioned as he tries to end the Holy War between the humans and the dragons even if he uses some dirty tactics to do so and he also tried to keep the prosperous state of the Dragon Empire and The City of Eridana even by it means to support an oppressive regime of another country. And he still remains affable to Gayus and Gigina even if his secret was uncovered to them to the point he offered them some great positions.

Final Verdict

Keep him! While the anime is rather mediocre, I think Moldeen hits the mark of this trope in my opinion. And I should note something: Even if Moldeen orders one of his general to disguise as him in the first 3 episodes, the general's ability is capable to mimic someone in both appearance and the traits of the person that he disguised as (Like for example, A ninja mimics the Shogun on not only how he looks like but also how the Shogun acts in real life) and even taking those out of context, Moldeen still qualifies as the reveal of his gambits and him being a great master planner comes into Episode 4 and 5 so I think there's no issue here.

@Arivne Try and proofread my EP...While there are some word crufts here and there, I think I'm fine with it being kept but we'll see.

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Jul 15th 2018 at 12:01:34 AM

Retry

Trollhunters/Heartwarming

Homecoming

• After over an entire season's worth of Ship Tease, a few Almost Kisses and a harrowing escape from the Darklands, Jim and Clarie's Big Damn Kiss at the end has been a long time coming.

Edited by jahman on Jul 14th 2018 at 11:44:48 AM

Aggretsuko

• Mature Animal Story: This is Sanrio's first venture into an animal character setting where all animals act more realistic, cyncial, and has a mature setting. The series mostly avoids the company's well-known sugary sweetness seen in other animes starring a Sanrio character. It does pop up in episode 9 of the Netflix series during Retsuko's date with Resasuke complete with a love song.

Edited by brb1006 on Jul 15th 2018 at 4:18:21 AM

@Elfen Lied Fan 90

• Gayus and Gigina received -> Gayus and Gigina receive
• who is also Gayus's childhood friend -> (who is also Gayus's childhood friend)

O.K., not in any particular order: Would you please

• Read How to Write an Example - Write in Historical Present Tense and use it to figure out why I changed so many examples of past tense to present tense.
• Not start sentences with the word "And", because it's always wrong.
• Not start sentences with "It is revealed" so often.

There's something you need to know. Approximately 50% of what you wrote in Who is He/What Has He Done is irrelevant to the question of whether Moldeen is a Magnificent Bastard and should not have been included. You don't need to list every plot point in the episodes, just what the reader needs to know to make an informed decision. By including so much extra material, you are likely to confuse them and cause them to reject your position just because they can't find your points in the vast sea of information you provide.

tl:dr: In future, you should only include the essential information and either condense or delete the rest.

Some specific examples:

• In the first paragraph, this whole section is unnecessary:

• This whole paragraph is not important:

And so on.

Edited by Arivne on Jul 15th 2018 at 3:19:32 AM

@brb1006

• Retsuko's date with Resasuke complete -> Retsuko's date with Resasuke, comma complete

@Arivne Sorry about that... I'll try at my best to improve in the future... I was rather confused on which should I contain so I put the Episodes list but next time... I'll try to be concise and write on how Moldeen's an MB

Hey I need some grammar help in order to edit agin. Can anyone help me with this?

About https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/CaptainTsubasaJapanesePlayers I remembered somethings from the 80s and 90s manga that show more stuff about Tsubasa Oozora.

• Beware the Nice Ones: In the last chapters of the first series, he kicks a guy.
• Friendless Background: He never had a legit friend until the series' beginning until meets Ryo Ishizaki and Roberto Hongo.
• Pacifist: He makes a speech of world peace in World Youth during the finale. (kind of like Rocky in the movie where he fights the Russian Draco)
• Does Not Like Violence: He does not enjoy violent tactics like Hyuga's in the first series and during the second story arcs, he regrets making a Drive Shot directly to Jito's face. (which injures his rival)
• Vitriolic Best Buds: His combination "Golden Combi" technique is one of the most famous ones ever to the point they befriend in a short time during the Nankatsu vs Shutetsu match. (to the point of being imitated in Gintama)

Also: YMMV / Captain Tsubasa

Badass Decay: The manga Road to 2002 hits Hyuga, Wakabayashi and even Tsubasa really hard when they become professional players.

Edited by boatman8 on Jul 15th 2018 at 2:03:26 AM

Digimon Adventure

Mimi Tachikawa

• Heroic BSoD: Mimi loses the will to fight or even act after seeing too many Digimon die to protect her and the other Digidestined from the Dark Masters. It takes learning that defeating the Dark Masters is the only way that those Digimon can be reborn to snap out of her funk and get back in the fight.

Edited by jahman on Jul 15th 2018 at 8:27:12 AM

@izzyravin

Sure. Just post questions about English or material that you've written that you would like to have proofread.

Edited by Arivne on Jul 16th 2018 at 3:04:25 AM

@boatman8

• In the last chapters of the first series -> In the last chapter of the first series
• until the series' beginning until meets -> until the beginning of the series, when he meets
• speech of world peace -> speech about world peace
• finale. (kind...Russian Draco) -> finale (kind...Russian Ivan Drago).

Does Not Like Violence. We don't have this trope, at least under that name.

General rule: if you enclose the last part of a sentence in parentheses, as you did three times above, put the period after the close parentheses.

Edited by Arivne on Jul 16th 2018 at 3:01:31 AM

@jahman

• to snap out of her funk -> to snap her out of her funk

Edited by Arivne on Jul 16th 2018 at 3:04:52 AM

I see. So Pacifist is where it belongs.

Also, this is ironic coming from me but how about:

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/YMMV/MegaManX6

They Just Didnt Care / So So Bad, It's Good: The game's English version is filled with grammatical mistakes in most scenes. Already in the beginning X has a a dream where Zero says "There is no one else is left to fight."

Edited by boatman8 on Jul 16th 2018 at 11:40:44 AM

The Flash (2014)

Season Two

• Darker and Edgier: To Season 1, thanks to Zoom and the danger he poses. See The Dreaded and Knight of Cerebus below for more details.

Edited by jahman on Jul 16th 2018 at 3:49:48 AM

• Darker and Edgier: To Season 1 -> Darker and Edgier: Than Season 1
• See The Dreaded and Knight of Cerebus below for more details.

This violates How to Write an Example - Remember That This Is A Wiki. An example should not refer to another part of the page, because things can change at any time because of tropers editing it.

Yet I see a lot of those around.

Disney Theme Parks:

Darker and Edgier: The Hong Kong Disneyland exclusive 'The Nightmare Experiment'' which is a haunted house maze that features twisted and creepy depiction of Disney and Pixar films. Especially the 2017 incarnation, where you see a miserable Pinocchio becoming a performing slave and tries to ask guests for help only to get interrupted by a clown who is working for Stromboli.

• Monster Clown: The 2017 incarnation of The Nightmare Experiment at Hong Kong Disneyland has a clown who works for Stromboli. He guides guest to a stage show where you see Pinocchio forced to dance while locked in chains and begs guests to help him only for the clown to interrupt him.

Nightmare Fuel:

• The Nightmare Experiment is a Hong Kong Disneyland exclusive Haunted House which is Disney's answer to Universal's Halloween Haunted House only watered down. The maze features twisted and creepy depictions of various Disney and Pixar films. The 2017 version gets special mention since there is one scene where you see a miserable Pinocchio forced to dance while locked in chain and is seen begging guests to help him to only get interrupted by a clown who is working for Stromboli.

Aggretsuko (Heartwarming)

• A meta example, while Katelyn Gault (English voice of Fenneko) was working on the dub of the Netflix series. She volunteered at Animal Tracks Inc where she took care of a fennec fox. A few days after news of the show's success in the west. She shared a short 10 minute video of her petting and whispering to a tired fennec fox

Edited by brb1006 on Jul 17th 2018 at 3:40:40 PM