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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33026: Jan 4th 2025 at 10:37:10 AM

Page 1321 @jlvs200s

Jabs are made at the frequency of scams in the crypto market...The real kicker comes in at the end of the article, where it's revealed...

Edited by Arivne on Jan 4th 2025 at 10:37:26 AM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33027: Jan 4th 2025 at 10:53:27 AM

Page 1321 @Xiao Bang Dian

     Corrections 

After Maxius angers Igot, lets him watch...and gives him the idea to rewind time with his omni powers, gets sent...(and Aiyaya from the Chinese animated series "Hahami" (哈哈咪))...demon and defy a red demonic...Maxius' demon and Tom get the latter's family and have them suffer in somewhere else...screen turns black <- no comma and beating and screaming sounds play in the background...and Aiyaya lie on the floor crying in pain <- no comma and the aforementioned US "Game Over"...

However, he still appears in Lucy's nightmare sequences in the future TOFC videos. When asked in a comment if Tom can be revived, TOFC responds that he doesn't think Tom...

...and not only tells his mom to change him, but he also demands she get him...

...Maxius for the last time that he has no right to manipulate his whole life after another pranknote (He says the same thing to Maxius in "The Oatmeal and Cereal Incident"), Maxius says that he doesn't remember.

After Igot rewinds the time over a prank in "The Yellow Beans Incident", Maxius, Terios (and Aiyaya from the Chinese animated series "Hahami" (哈哈咪)) ends...

Edited by Arivne on Jan 4th 2025 at 10:54:32 AM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33028: Jan 4th 2025 at 10:59:28 AM

Page 1321 @K Boult

     Corrections 

[[spoiler:Apple Bloom decides to get revenge on Twilight for giving Applejack a potion that caused her to kill ponies 7 years before by exposing the Alicorn and her friends to the same potion, causing them to do the same thing.]]

Apple Bloom decides to get revenge on Twilight for giving Applejack a potion that caused her to kill ponies 7 years before by exposing the Alicorn and her friends to the same potion, causing them to do the same thing.

"spoiler" must be lower case to work.

A variation of this trope is when after Granny Smith dies, Big Mac leaves Apple Bloom to live with Twilight while he moves to Starlight's...

...but both she and Twilight decide to head to the Sweet Apple...

Edited by Arivne on Jan 4th 2025 at 11:00:25 AM

Alpinist Since: Jul, 2023
#33029: Jan 4th 2025 at 11:11:28 AM

Thanks

@ Ciaphas Cain

@ The Shadow

  • Hoist by His Own Petard: Stark is ultimately blown into oblivion by a thermite bomb he procured for a death trap meant for the Shadow.

The Devil Master/Professor Su Yeng

Appears in: The Devil Master
A Chinese Evil Reactionary out to stir dissent in the puppet states Japan has established in conquered territories during World War II. He hopes to drive out the Japanese and install an absolute monarchy with himself at the head. This plot brings him into conflict with Roy Tam, and consequently the Shadow.
  • Evil Old Folks: He is a dangerous villain who looks about a century old and, whether that is true or not, is old enough to have a great great-granddaughter about the same age as Margo Lane as his Noble Top Enforcer.
  • Evil vs. Evil: He is competing with a Japanese warlord also interested in an independent kingdom and spends as much time fighting that man as the Shadow but is the more ruthless and dangerous of the pair.

@‘The Light Fantastic

@ Rick Brant

  • Long Shadow and Worthington Ko from The Caves of Fear can be polite while undercover, never indulge in Evil Gloating, and are fairly dignified and non-begrudging over their defeat even though they face a strong chance of being murdered by their many enemies without the means to fund a getaway rather than simply being arrested like most villains.

@ Amusement Park of Doom

  • Jeremiah: 15 years after The Virus, one of the better-off societies is a group of people camping on the grounds of a run-down amusement park, but a rumored vampire sneaking into the park and kidnapping their children makes the park's atmosphere a spooky one.

Edited by Alpinist on Jan 5th 2025 at 5:38:21 AM

XiaoBangDian Since: Oct, 2024
#33030: Jan 4th 2025 at 6:05:02 PM

Platform / GoAnimate

  • Fate Worse than Death:
    • In "Lucy’s Inner Demons", Lucy has a nightmare in which she goes to hell and meets her demonic self and her psychopathic Manchild son Tom, the latter in which she killed. Tom punishes Lucy for ending his time on Earth prematurely by pooping his pants and not only forces her to change him but also get him Barney diapers, a binky, the Barney's Great Adventure DVD, Barney's Hide & Seek Game, a bottle, and lastly, the Barney Goes to The Circus game with all of her credit cards maxed out. When Lucy tries to defies Tom, her demonic self (and presumably Tom) torches her for that. Lucy says that she have to change Tom's smelly diapers in hell everyday. You can consider this as a fate worse than death for her.
    • In "The Yellow Beans Incident", this is the fate of Maxius, Terios (and Aiyaya from the Chinese animated series "Hahami" (哈哈咪)). After Maxius angers Igot, lets him watch the "Childish Dad Ruins New Year 2025 Party" video and gives him the idea to rewind time with his omni powers, Maxius, Terios and Aiyaya gets sent to a black void and meets Maxius' (inner) demon there. The demon says that they'll have something to do and also suffer the consequences of their actions, and will be enter to the worst realm (of the void). An red demonic Tom then appears in the place of Maxius' demon and then you can probably guess what happens next. But alas, Tom's family is suffering somewhere else at the hands of Maxius' demon and demon Tom.

Edited by XiaoBangDian on Jan 4th 2025 at 6:18:46 AM

Ayumi-chan 3rd happiest man in Connecticut from Iacon City (Experienced Trainee) Relationship Status: I like big bots and I can not lie
3rd happiest man in Connecticut
#33031: Jan 4th 2025 at 6:23:19 PM

Thanks Arvine.


Funny.Rewritten Transformers

Age of Extinction

  • When Joyce returns from the basement, he immediately berates the intruders who trespassing in private property...only to realize that said intruders are the Autobots.

Edited by Ayumi-chan on Jan 4th 2025 at 10:25:18 PM

She/Her | Currently cleaning: N/A
jahman Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
#33032: Jan 4th 2025 at 8:19:03 PM

Jentry Chau vs. the Underworld

Ox-Head and Horse-Face

  • Nice Job Breaking It, Hero!: Before that, their relentless pursuit of Jentry—rather than engaging her and those around her in a calm discussion about the accidental Diyu portal issue—results in her entire new school uncovering her identity as the notorious "Demon Girl of Riverfork."

Jentry Chau Vs The Underworld S 1 E 2 Fifteen Minutes Of Flame

  • A Birthday, Not a Break: It’s technically Jentry’s birthday, but instead of celebrating, she finds herself being hunted and threatened by two guards from Diyu. They are after her for accidentally opening a backdoor portal to their realm, and unless she figures out how to close it, she’ll be in deep trouble. This incident also leads to her entire new school discovering her as the infamous "Demon Girl of Riverfork."

Jentry Chau Vs The Underworld S 1 E 9 Everyone Wins

Jentry grapples with the fallout from her fight with Flora. Doubts about moving back to Seoul weigh heavily on her, prompting her to push Ed away. Meanwhile, Michael and Kit want to take her to the dance, which creates tension. One thing is clear: Spirit Week brings out intense emotions and will unfold dramatically on the field.

  • Accidental Kiss: As Micheal was attempting to talk to Jentry about his visions, he unintentionally grabbed her hand as she tries to walk away and pulled her in for a quick kiss on the lips. Both were initially taken aback, but they soon found themselves pleasantly surprised, acknowledging their mutual romantic feelings for one another.

jlvs200s from The Netherlands (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: I miss my wife, Tails
#33033: Jan 5th 2025 at 12:35:30 AM

Thanks Arvine!

"The time has come for every last Shoppe... No! The time has come for the DREAM KINGDOM to bow down to me! Gotcha ! Hee-hee!" | He/Him
MM_Crusader Since: Dec, 2016
#33034: Jan 5th 2025 at 5:12:37 AM

iCarly

Carly

  • Audience Surrogate: Deconstructed in the revival series. Carly embodies the fans loyal to the original series and unwilling to accept the changes made in the new series. This made Carly to have never undergone any Character Development over the years and thus, has a stuck in the past mindset. This mindset makes it difficult for Carly to deal with things like Sam’s absence, rebooting the ICarly webshow, and refusing to sell her car due to its sentimental value even though it’s beyond repair.

Edited by MM_Crusader on Jan 5th 2025 at 5:14:30 AM

KBoult Since: Jun, 2024
#33035: Jan 5th 2025 at 5:19:21 AM

Here are some tropes for Another Apple Sleep Experiment.

• Added Alliterative Appeal: After Applejack escapes Starlight's bedroom after slitting Starlight's throat, Twilight, who scared Applejack out of the room by charging at her with a broken mirror shard, runs over towards Starlight, calling out her name.

Twilight: Starlight. Starlight. Starlight.

° In Chapter 2, Pinkie Pie explains to the Cake Twins about the sweet treats for the Commemoration Memorial party.

Pinkie: I still have 6 dozen cupcakes, 7 pecan pies, 12 caramel fritters, aaand another triple chocolate cookie cake with chocolate frosting and chocolate sprinkles!

° Even chapter two's title "A Pink Party Pony's Surprise" counts as this trope.

° When Applejack visits Rarity in chapter 4, they both use this trope when the former goes after Sweetie Belle and the latter after finding Sweetie dead.

Applejack: GUILTY! GUILTY! GUILTY!

Rarity: Guilty... Guilty... Guilty...

KBoult Since: Jun, 2024
#33036: Jan 5th 2025 at 9:59:51 AM

These are some more tropes for Another Apple Sleep Experiment.

• Alliterative Family: Applejack and Apple Bloom Apple.

• Et Tu, Brute?: The reason that Apple Bloom exposed Twilight and her friends to the Sleepless Potion is because they betrayed Applejack by lying about said potion, that caused Applejack to go on a killing spree 7 years before, existing.

° Apple Bloom betrays Twilight and her friends by exposing them to the Sleepless Potion, causing them to kill other ponies and, in Fluttershy's case, animals, just like Applejack did seven years before.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33037: Jan 5th 2025 at 10:49:28 AM

[up] @Alpinist

He hopes to drive out the Japanese and...This plot brings him...

He is competing with a Japanese warlord also interested in an...

Alpinist Since: Jul, 2023
#33038: Jan 5th 2025 at 10:58:27 AM

@ The Shadow

  • Aline Marsland vanishes without a word after just two stories despite being an interesting potential source of scenes showing her husband Cliff (and possibly other Shadow agents) off the job and not consumed by their crusade.

@ Shadow

  • Cultural Posturing: He loves to praise China and decorates his home like he is back there despite wearing Western garb to deal with local interests.
  • Hoist by His Own Petard: The impact of aullet wound to the shoulder sends him falling into his own spiked pit.
  • Third-Person Person: He uses his full name while ruminating out-loud about his cleverness.

Edited by Alpinist on Jan 5th 2025 at 5:29:43 AM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33039: Jan 5th 2025 at 11:28:35 AM

[up] @Xiao Bang Dian

     Corrections 

...the latter of whom she killed. ...When Lucy tries to defy Tom, her demonic self (and presumably Tom) torches her for that. Lucy says that she has to...everyday. You can consider this as a fate worse than death for her.

  1. "presumably" violates How to Write an Example - (Good Examples Are Not Arguable and Don't Use Uncertain Language) and Examples Are Not Arguable
  2. "You can consider this as a fate worse than death for her." is wrong because it's addressing the reader.

...this is the fate of Maxius, Terios...Maxius, Terios and Aiyaya get sent to a black void and meet Maxius' (inner)...and will be enter to the worst realm (of the void). A red demonic...and then you can probably guess what happens next.

^ "this is the fate of" and "you can probably guess what happens next" violate Zero-Context Example.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33040: Jan 5th 2025 at 11:34:50 AM

[up] Ayumi-chan

...he immediately berates the intruders who are trespassing...

As Michael is attempting to...unintentionally grabs her hand...and pulls her in...Both are initially...they soon 'find themselves...

Edited by Arivne on Jan 5th 2025 at 11:35:06 AM

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33041: Jan 5th 2025 at 11:36:34 AM

[up] @MM_Crusader

I don't see anything incorrect about your English.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33042: Jan 5th 2025 at 11:47:20 AM

[up] @K Boult

...by lying about said potion. <- period That caused Applejack to go on a killing spree 7 years before, existing.

^ Split up a run-on sentence connected by a comma splice.

^ "existing" isn't correct English, but I can't tell what you meant to write.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#33043: Jan 5th 2025 at 11:49:55 AM

[up] @Alpinist

The impact of <- no period a bullet wound to the shoulder...

jahman Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
Tycoonninja Since: May, 2023
#33045: Jan 5th 2025 at 2:05:12 PM

Kamen Rider Gavv

    Episode 17: Caramel Tentacles Taste Like Happiness 

  • Gavv using Kickingummy on Xmax to catapult Valen to the flying Granute Chooul.

GlitterCat Since: Mar, 2018 Relationship Status: The Skitty to my Wailord
#33046: Jan 5th 2025 at 3:35:28 PM

@K Boult Repeating a character's name a few times isn't added alliterative appeal. If I call to my cat "Jaina, Jaina, Jaina" that's not the trope but if I tell her "Just jump, Jaina" that is.

Edited by GlitterCat on Jan 5th 2025 at 3:36:48 AM

see my completed Tangled (Varian) fanfic collection! https://archiveofourown.org/works/24467056/chapters/59049532
Alpinist Since: Jul, 2023
#33047: Jan 5th 2025 at 5:55:43 PM

Thanks @ * Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Hero of the Confederacy:

  • Awful Truth: Mirax and the other shipyard slaves may not exactly feel Happiness in Slavery, but appreciate being treated as skilled craftsmen rather than being replaced by Job-Stealing Robot legions. The last straw that makes them help the Jedi is learning that Juhm respects their work far less than they thought and only keeps them around as Human Shields to keep the Republic from bombing the shipyards like they would if only droids and enemy soldiers worked there.
  • Guy in Back: Clone trooper Tracer is a Blood Knight tail gunner who is annoyed at how he never gets to see how a target looks like from the front of a ship before the bombing.
  • Life Saving Misfortune: After the heroes freeze themselves in carbonite to sneak past a blockade, clone trooper Toomer is disappointed to be woken up late due to a tech error, even though doing so probably kept him from dying like the other troopers besides Rex.
  • You Have Failed Me: John goes from being about to get a reward for capturing the Jedi to being struck down by Ventress when the Jedi escape and destroy the shipyard. His bosses actually wanted the shipyard destroyed to drag out the war, but they have to keep up appearances and see him as a weak link.

  • Code Name: Podracing Separatist spy Maxus is referred to as Agent Sixteen whenever he and Dooku com each other.
  • Hero-Worshipper: Kidd Kareen greatly admires the podracing career of a certain Anakin Skywalker (but has no clue Anakin is the older Jedi he is interacting with until the end of the book).
  • Horrible Judge of Character:
    • The trusted aide of the senator who is coerced into helping the Separatists took a bribe from the Separatists to help them.
    • Podracer Kidd Kareen is shocked to learn his whole pit crew is part of a Separatist spy ring.

  • Being Evil Sucks: Tofen is a war criminal with a self-righteous I've Come Too Far attitude once he is told he has been on the Wrong Side All Along, but the constant tired and prematurely aged expression on his face shows that the situation does bother him a lot Beneath the Mask.
  • Murder the Hypotenuse: While killing the Viscount of Valahari is a strategic False Flag Operation to draw his family into the war, Dooku also has long coveted the countess and wastes little time Romancing the Widow.
  • Pursued Protagonist: The arc begins with one of the Jedis' best pilots fleeing from the new droid starfighters and realizing that he has no escape, making him send a message about his fate before being blown up.
  • Someone to Remember Him By: Tofen dies in battle and is survived by his mother and his pregnant wife.
  • Spare a Messenger: Tofen gives the order to Sink the Lifeboats except for one escape pod after his first victory so that the Republic knows his planet has entered the Clone Wars.
  • Villain Over for Dinner: Obi-Wan and Anajin have to have a formal dinner with Dooku and their hosts when both pay diplomatic visits to a neutral planet.

  • Bitch in Sheep's Clothing: Kuvuta Pindi is seemingly the blind caretaker for several war orphans and develops chemistry with Bruiser with a Soft Center Gizz before she is exposed as a Separatist mercenary who is faking being blind, is willing to try to kill Gizz, and is using the orphans as pawns to travel incognito before planning to sell them as slaves.
  • Living Legend: His earlier adventures have made Nuru a celebrated figure who Palpatine argues has proven his worth over more senior Jedi.
@ Star Wars Expanded Universe

  • Recurring Ewok slicer Peepka is highly popular for her dynamics with Han and Chewbacca and being a rare Ewok to leave Endor and learn about higher technology.

@ Star Wars Legends

  • Black Sun Vigos Clezo, Perit, and Kreet'ah only have cameos in Shadows of the Empire and the sequel comic and are among the less fleshed-out Vigos, but their skills, background, and personality in the sourcebook short stories and character profiles have won them more praise and interest than many of their peers.

  • Separatist fighter ace Tofen Vane is only in one arc of Star Wars: The Clone Wars (Hero of the Confederacy) and has his share of Kick the Dog moments, but his We Used to Be Friends dynamics with Anakin, skills in the cockpit, and being modeled after the original Red Baron give him a big fanbase.
  • Band of Brothels representative Mayli Weng is only in Shadows of the Empire and one tie-in sourcebook short story, but her tireless advocacy for the more disadvantaged women in her union and Lonely at the Top feelings win her a fair bit of interest and sympathy.

@ Spare a Messenger

  • In the Action Prologue of Sidewinders: Deadwood Gulch, the Deadwood Devils gang kill three gold shipment guards, but the wounded wagon driver escapes. After a brief debate, the gang decides not to chase him since it won't affect their plans if people learn about the robbery an hour or two sooner than they would have and the story he tells will make more people afraid of them.

@ Forbidden Valley

  • Best Served Cold: A year before the events of the book, Clanton henchmen Shonts and Tuttle robbed a pair of Texas cowboys coming through town with a cattle drive. When those cowboys come back with a new herd of cattle, Shonts and Tuttle try to steer clear of them, but the cowboys track them down for a Roaring Rampage of Revenge that doesn't turn out as well as they hoped, with Shonts being the only one of the four men to survive the shootout.
  • Disc-One Final Boss: The menacing Jody and his gang, a group of outlaws associated with Clanton and robbed by Bruno, are the main threat of the early chapters before Jody is killed and his three men all wounded (two are arrested due to a warrant against them while the third, Frank Gomer, gets away with claiming to be an Innocent Bystander and spends the rest of the book doing jobs for Clanton) in a shootout with Doug and Harry.

Stratemeyer Syndicate

Bret King Mysteries: Young New Mexico cowboys embark on New Old West adventures while trying to catch criminals.

@ QB VII: or should I have all five letters capitalized and in {‘s for the title? QB VII is a 1970 courtroom drama (adapted into a 1974 miniseries) written by Leon Uris. The book is the semi-autobiographical tale of a lawsuit filed against Uris by a former inmate who worked as a concentration camp doctor and was briefly mentioned in an earlier Uris book as having performed human experimentation and surgical mutilation for the Nazis, although the names are changed and much of the character background and courtroom events dramatized.

Tropes:

  • Bittersweet Ending: Abe comes out of the trial with his reputation, finances, and relationships with his children intact, while Kelno is unable to maintain the lies about his past and loses the respect of society and his Like a Son to Me apprentice, but Abe is shaken by the darkness of the stories told at trial and does briefly wonder if Kelno was truly an evil man or just one who went mad from life in the camps and, shortly after the trial, his son dies while on a mission with the Israeli Air Force.
  • Broken Pedestal: Many people around Dr. Kelno believe his claims of being a humanitarian doctor who is being unfairly persecuted due to malicious old lies, with his main counsel (who continues to determinedly argue the case, but is forced to admit the truth of the allegations and merely argue that Kelno was in impossible circumstances that would have broken anyone and has since atoned) and medical partner who has known him since boyhood (who rejects Kelno for good after a drunken fight) being devastated by the Surprise Witness and Smoking Gun that show the full scope of his acts.
  • Chekhov's Gunman: A doctor who operates on Abe after his plane is shot down during the war is later an expert witness about proper anesthesia procedures.
  • Deadly Doctor: The sad and scary thing about Dr. Kelno is that he was a competent and humane doctor most of the time, demanding proper care for patients and helping fake the deaths of sick men selected to be sent to the gas chambers so they could continue trying to eke out a living until liberation. Unfortunately, his feelings toward Jewish prisoners were quite different and he happily performed medically unnecessary castrations on them (and certain others he was ordered to) with taunting comments and without sterilizing his hands or using proper anesthetic before the operation or doing a delicate job of stitching the wounds afterward, resulting in most dying and others being physically and mentally affected for life. He is also unable to argue that his actions were in defense of his own life, as other doctors testify how they defied orders to kill patients or assist in experimentation and went unpunished by the Nazis due to their need for doctors. His Nazi overseer Voss was even worse, exposing inmates to painful amounts of radiation he knew wasn’t enough to actually sterilize them and then ordering them castrated anyway while claiming it was to remove dead sexual organs just to look like he was doing new research that would appeal to the sadistic Nazi leaders and would keep him off the front lines.
  • Decoy Protagonist: The first several chapters emphasize the lives Kelno saved in the concentration camp infirmary, his Resistance activities, his happy family life, his sense of persecution and buried trauma over what happened in the camps, and his medical work before later chapters introduce and sympathetically develop his nemesis Cady and gradually make it clear that Kelno is still a rabid anti-Semite, was indeed a Deadly Doctor once and has suppressed most of his earlier guilt and is unfairly denying his past.
  • Defector from Commie Land: One witness against Kelno is living under a false identity behind the Iron Curtain, and since testifying will expose his long deception, he defects first.
  • Expy Co Existence: Even the name of the concentration camp is changed, from Auschwitz to Jadwiga, but Auschwitz still exists in this universe and one witness had her husband die there.
  • Heroic Sacrifice: Daniel, one of the last witnesses for the defense, recalls that when he and another inmate who had each lost one testicle to Kelno already were being summoned back to have the other testicle removed, there was a fake death certificate available for one of them to use to escape. The other prisoner was still a teenager, and Daniel had already had a family (and lost them to the camps) and was in The Mourning After phase, so he gave his friend (who goes on to father several children) the death certificate without telling him it meant his own return to the operating room.
  • The Place: The title refers to the courtroom where the trial takes place.
  • Pyrrhic Victory: The jury agrees that Abe Cady did technically libel Dr. Kelno, but the proven crimes of Kelno make the effect of this libel minor enough that they only award him damages of the smallest coin in the country, which the newspapers witness, while his reputation and relationships take a heavy blow.
  • Surprise Witness: An inmate forced to help Kelno has gone into hiding and while he is listed as a potential witness, no one expects to find him in time to testify. They do, and he remembers how cruel Kelno could be and still has a Smoking Gun of medical records showing Kelno performed more operations than he previously admitted and sometimes did so on healthy patients sentenced to be emasculated for smuggling food or because of their membership in a class targeted for sterilization.

Edited by Alpinist on Jan 6th 2025 at 7:43:30 AM

jahman Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
#33048: Jan 5th 2025 at 6:07:42 PM

I think you forgot me ARVINE!

Edit: Actually I think you put mine with Ayumi-chan, so thank you.

Edited by jahman on Jan 5th 2025 at 9:54:02 AM

Geekoala Since: Nov, 2023
#33050: Jan 6th 2025 at 1:54:07 AM

can someone here please check the corrections for the page 'A Geeky Love' I made on page 1314 comment 32848 and then add them to that page, I'm currently suspended and its kind of the main reason I'm here is to fix my spelling and Grammar so I can get unbanned, thank you to whoever does so


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