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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
More tropes for the King Grimlock page
- And I Must Scream: Any victim possesed by Soltron is left aware of all the awful things he's using their bodies to commit. This knowledge drove his host the Golden One insane.
- Ax-Crazy: Soltron is a psychopathic deity whose gleeful about killing people.
- Batman Gambit: Grimlock tricks Soltron into leaving his friend Arko's body and instead take over Grimlocks. Soltron agrees as Grimlock's strength would give Soltron power to ravage the cosmos but Grimlock out plays him. Grimlock knew thks would now give him an opportunity to destroy him for good while he was trying to posses him.
- Breath Weapon: Grimlock has the ability to breath fire. He uses it to incinerate mooks sent by the Red Wizard.
- But Now I Must Go: Grimlock chooses to leave Menonia after saving it from the Red Wizard and Golden One and return to Cybertron rather than become the king of Meonia as he misses his homeworld.
- Hulk Speak: Grimlock speaks in simple words and refers to himself in third person.
- Metal Muncher: The Meccannibals are Cybertronians which feed off their fellow mechanical Cybertronians.
- Mooks: The Red Wizard uses mindless monsters he's conjured called wood-bots and zombies known as dirt soldiers as his enforcers.
- Sequel in Another Medium: This comic serves as a sequel to the The Transformers episode "Madmans Paradise" which features the Transformers sent to the magical world of Meonina to help the Golden one stop the Red Wizard. In this comic, the Golden One has been corrupted by the evil Deity Soltron and Grimlock is summoned by the people to stop him and the Red Wizard.
- Trapped in Another World: Grimlock finds himself summoned and trapped in the magical world of Menonia by its people to help them stop the evil Red Wizard and Golden One.
- Underestimating Badassery: Soltron initially ignores Grimlock when he arrives as he doesn't think that he'll be a threat. It all backfires for him when Grimlock takes him and his army down.
- Youhave Failed Me: The Golden One has a mook incinerated for failing him by giving him bad news that Grimlock is still a threat.
@ miraculous
- And I Must Scream: Any victim possessed by Soltron is left aware of all the awful things he's using their bodies to commit. This knowledge drove his host the Golden One insane.
- Ax-Crazy: Soltron is a psychopathic deity who's gleeful about killing people.
- Batman Gambit: Grimlock tricks Soltron into leaving his friend Arko's body and instead take over Grimlock's. Soltron agrees as Grimlock's strength would give him the power to ravage the cosmos, (comma) but Grimlock out-plays him. Grimlock knows this will now give him an opportunity to destroy Soltran for good while he is trying to possess him.
- Breath Weapon: Grimlock has the ability to breathe fire. He uses it to incinerate mooks sent by the Red Wizard.
- But Now I Must Go: Grimlock chooses to leave Menonia after saving it from the Red Wizard and the Golden One and return to Cybertron rather than become the king of Meonia as he misses his homeworld.
- Sequel in Another Medium: This comic serves as a sequel to (repeated word - cut) The Transformers episode "Madmans Paradise" which features the Transformers sent to the magical world of Meonina to help the Golden One stop the Red Wizard. In this comic, the Golden One has been corrupted by the evil Deity Soltron and Grimlock is summoned by the people to stop him and the Red Wizard.
- Trapped in Another World: Grimlock finds himself summoned to and trapped in the magical world of Menonia by its people to help them stop the evil Red Wizard and the Golden One.
- You Have Failed Me: The Golden One has a mook incinerated for failing him by giving him the bad news that Grimlock is still a threat.
Anything not listed here does not require correction.
Edited by Clare on Oct 13th 2024 at 1:54:44 AM
I got some more trope entries to bring here for spelling and grammar errors
- Dark and Troubled Past: Tess finally reveals her past to Damien in “Maze of Mayhem” in how she became an orphan, resulting in her Broken Bird persona she displayed most of her life before she met Hunter and Ally: Her mother was diagnosed with a disease that caused her to cough blood at one night. Tess told her father about this, resulting in him driving her mom and Tess to the hospital in the middle of the heavy storm resulting in her father crashing his car; Tess was the only survivor of that car crash.
- Enemy Mine: While Aiden and Gabby have beef with each other due to the former force feeding Gabby live animals and joining Tom in voting off Gabby’s girlfriend, Ellie, and the latter joining the Villains’ Alliance in voting off Aiden’s friend, Tom, they agree to vote together in voting off either Damien or Tess the next time they loose a challenge before the merge occurs due too their close connections with the Magenta Team. They eventually decide to vote Tess out and with Bowie’s help they succeed in getting her eliminated.
- Even Evil Has Standards: Chef Hatchet might be almost as sadistic as the hosts he works for but even he shows sympathy upon hearing about Tess’ Dark and Troubled Past on how she lost her parents to the point that he forgoes blasting her with his water gun in favor of simply tapping her with it.
- Graceful Loser: Just like in canon, Tess takes her elimination very well, showing no grudges to the people who eliminated her and wishes her team good luck progressing in the game.
- Irony: Fiore is considered The Load for her team always failing at challenges yet, mostly due to the help of her villainous allies Alec and Julia, she was able to avoid getting eliminated. However the one time that she is able proves her usefulness by scoring the only point for her team during the “Know Your Losers” challenge, she ends up getting eliminated when she and Julia fail to sway Ally to their side.
- It's All My Fault: Tess breaks down throughout “Maze of Mayhem” where she blames herself for how dysfunctional her team has become, citing that if she hadn’t vote off her friend, Ellie, Gabby wouldn’t be so distrustful to her team and wouldn’t join with the Villains’ Alliance in voting off Tom meaning he would still be around to talk to Jake, and the Villains’ Alliance wouldn’t be as much of a threat as it is now.
- Pet the Dog:
- Julia has her rare moments of doing nice things, which includes having a Big Sister Instinct for Fiore, an eight-year old child, where she tries finding ways to protect her from eliminations, accompanying Fiore to the bus stop when Fiore finally gets eliminated and saving Ally from getting blasted from Chef Hatchet’s water gun during the “Maze of Mayhem” challenge.
- Chef Hatchet doesn’t blast Tess and Damien with his water gun like he did with the other contestants that he caught after he hears about Tess’ Dark and Troubled Past, instead simply taps Tess and Damien with the tip of his gun. He also skips Tess during his usual announcements on why contestants might be on the chopping block during elimination ceremonies.
- Pet the Dog: While Julia is still under her Granola Girl persona at the time, she does give Damien advice on how to calm down while they are trapped in their flooding pods.
- Victorious Loser: While Jake does loose to Riya in All-Stars, he felt like a won because he got everyone to support him, made many close friends who all cheer him up and he and Tom finally become an Official Couple. Meanwhile, Riya feels absolutely defeated despite winning the season and the prize money because she ends up becoming Hated by All where they all the contestants, including Connor permanently cut ties with her, leaving Riya to endure misery and sadness all by herself, while they go on to live happier lives.
- Broken Bird: Tess is portrayed as one in her debut season maintaining an aloof, cold, and stoic personality to cope with having depression as a result of the tragedies she suffered in her life. She learns to grow out of this trope, especially once All-Stars airs.
- Sour Outside, Sad Inside: Beneath Tess’s cold and aloof exterior lies a very lonely girl whose struggle with depressing. Thankfully she gets better after befriending Ally and Hunter and by the time All-Stars airs, Tess has averted this trope completely becoming an All-Loving Hero who’s willing to help anyone in need.
Edited by G-Editor on Oct 14th 2024 at 10:12:49 AM
My sandbox of EPs and other stuffTropes in Apple Bloom character page for An Apple Sleep Experiment fanfic.
• Tragic Villain: She has been through a lot, paralyzed in her back legs after being bucked into a tree by a potion- Suffering Applejack 7 years ago, her grandmother passed away from grief, her big brother and two friends abandoned her and having to look after a comatosed Applejack after helping her escape prison, only to hit her head really hard trying to save Apple Bloom from a prison guard.
• Walking Spoiler: The reveal that only is she still alive, but is the one who caused the ponies who abandoned Applejack to kill ponies under the influence of the same potion that caused Applejack to kill ponies 7 years ago.
Hey Arivne, here's a trope for both Jimmy Neutron episode: Win, Lose and Kaboom.
- Green-Eyed Monster: Cindy is not happy when she sees April kissing Jimmy and immediately starts fighting her.
Nightmare in Retroville
- Green-Eyed Monster: Vampire Carl compliments Judy and then tries to turn her into a vampire as well, but zombie Hugh quickly stops him, saying Judy is with him.
- In Love with Love: Sam sees zombie Hugh bridal carrying Judy and laments to himself he wishes to be married as well.
Also for Lazy Town episode, Little Pink Riding Hood.
- Bad Liar: Robbie tries to drive away Stephanie from Sportacus's airship by imitating Sportacus's voice and saying he's sleeping but Stephanie quickly points he's talking to her, to which Robbie replies he's sleep talking. Stephanie does not buy it.
- It Runs in the Family: Robbie accidentally talks with the Mayor's voice in front of a blindfolded Sportacus and quickly uses Stephanie's voice and says "she" and the Mayor have similar voices as a family thing to avoid suspicion.
- Out-of-Character Alert:
- Sportacus is surprised when hearing "Stephanie" (actually Robbie imitating her voice) yelling at him to immediately eat the (unknown to Sportacus) sugar apple but he quickly dismisses it.
- Sportacus's airship computer obeys Robbie's command (who pretends to be Sportacus with his Voice Changer 6000) of setting up his bed early, but it also points to "Sportacus" that it wasn't 8:08 p.m. yet.
- Stephanie when arriving to Sportacus's airship, notices that "Sportacus" (actually Robbie in disguise) is on bed early and immediately realizes he's not the real Sportacus when Robbie angrily tries to take her basket with Sportacus's surprise inside.
Edited by FGonzalez on Oct 13th 2024 at 11:15:32 AM
The Batman (2022): Gotham City Criminals
Rex Calabrese
Portrayed by: NA
Appears In: The Penguin(Mentioned)
An old-school gangster who lived in Oz's neighborhood during Oz's childhood.
- Decomposite Character: His role as Selina Kyle's father goes to Carmine Falcone in this continuity.
- Neighbourhood-Friendly Gangsters: In Oz's neighborhood, he helped everyone. He gave rent money when people needed it, or find a doctor if someone had a sick family member. Oz says how Rex would always ask how people were doing, and seemed like he was genuinely concerned when he did.
- Posthumous Character: He died in Oz's teenage years, but he has some influence on the story in the present. He is heavily implied to have been Oz's biggest inspiration for becoming a mobster.
- Unrelated in the Adaptation: He has no relation to Selina Kyle in this continuity, unlike the comics, where he is her father.
- Villain with Good Publicity: As a result of his help and kindness to the community, he was loved by Oz's neighborhood. When he died, they threw a parade in his honor.
Edited by Snoketrope on Oct 14th 2024 at 3:03:04 AM
Bow to the Prototype- Moe: The bots themselves are tiny Cute Machines with playful personalities and wear adorable costumes based on popular PlayStation characters. You really want to give these little guys a hug.
For Germans Love David Hasselhoff
- Astro Boy alongside Osamu Tezuka's other characters are very popular in French-speaking regions. Astro Boy is known as "Astro le petit robot" with the original manga and various anime incarnations being very beloved by French audiences. During the The New '10s, France worked on the animation for Little Astro Boy while Go Astro Boy Go! was a French-Japanese co-production. The upcoming CGI reboot series is not only a French animated series by Method Animation/Mediwan. But French television network TF1 even contributed to the show's development.
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- The Battle Duo sympathizes with the Grim Reaper and Magical Girl because of how much pain and loss they had endure, but Dan and Drago are glad that in the end they did not succumb to despair and were able to find happiness.
- Dan also became close friend with Ruby Rose. Many stars formed in her eyes when she saw Drago’a battle form, after which Ruby began asking Dan about where she could also get Bakugan. At this Dan slightly confused, decided to change the topic of conversation. These two like to hang out and from time to time they don’t mind going somewhere together, although because of this Dan has to convince Runo that he and Ruby are just friends.
- In addition to allies, Dan and Drago also became enemies of many evil deities, among which Ozai and Shao Kahn especially stand out. They loathes both tyrants because of their excessive cruel and incredibly selfish nature. In particular, they hate Ozai because how much he reminded them of Zenoheld, being the same power-hungry genocidal warlord. At the same time they sicken by depravity and sadism of Shao Kahn, they were disgusted by the fact that he regularly organizes tournaments where the fate of entire worlds is decided and where participants have to kill each other in the most gruesome ways, it does not help the matter that both he and Mag Mel be in the same organization. In turn, they ridicule Dan as naive and unambitious fool, although no matter how hard they tried, Shao Kahn and Ozai cannot understand why he refused to become the ruler of the universe when he had such an opportunity.
Edited by Killbus2-0 on Oct 14th 2024 at 9:58:13 AM
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...upon realizing that all the people she thought had died in the fall of the Mount are okay and it was just an illusion.
While most fans believe that Agent Smith...There is no way to know if he would...
...dying to conserve air for him as the highest ranking officer present...
...on his refusal to take cognitive tests to prove his ability to lead...
Some of the author's notes or comments...
...by noting <- no comma "Chelsted recommended...
When someone comments on the apparent Odd Friendship between...
While planning his bank robbery and inflating himself to the bank manager...
^ "inflating himself to the bank manager" is not correct English, but I can't tell what you meant to write.
The bank robbery scene where Joe robs the criminals' safety deposit boxes...
...and that their victims would be forced to keep Joe alive to find the money once they realized it was gone, <- comma even if...
...Dr. Pickell and...Miss Mush have large fandoms despite...
...by an Italian businessman, <- comma who then fell out with him...
...and/or had some interesting scenes with her in-laws...
She has been through a lot, including having her back legs paralyzed after being bucked into a tree by a potion-suffering Applejack 7 years ago, her grandmother passing away from grief, her big brother and two friends abandoning her and having to look after a comatose Applejack...
The reveal that not only is she still alive, but she is the one...
I am correcting the tropes for my Apple Bloom character page of Another Apple Sleep Experiment.
• Tragic Villain: She has been through a lot, including having her back legs paralyzed after being bucked into a tree by a potion-suffering Applejack 7 years ago, her grandmother passing away from grief, her brother and two friends abandoning her and having to look after a comatose Applejack after helping her escape prison, only to hit her head really hard trying to save Apple Bloom from a prison guard.
• Walking Spoiler: The reveal that not only is she still alive, but she is the one who caused the ponies who abandoned Applejack to kill ponies while under the influence of the same potion that caused Applejack to do the same thing 7 years ago.
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Tess finally reveals her past to Damien in “Maze of Mayhem”: <- colon in how she became an orphan, resulting in her Broken Bird persona she displayed most of her life before she met Hunter and Ally. <- period Her mother was diagnosed with a disease that caused her to cough blood at one night. Tess told her father about this, resulting in him driving her mom and Tess to the hospital in the middle of a heavy storm, <- comma resulting in her father crashing his car; Tess was the only survivor of that car crash.
While Aiden and Gabby have beef with each other due to the former force-feeding Gabby live animals and joining Tom in voting off Gabby’s girlfriend, Ellie, and the latter joining the Villains’ Alliance in voting off Aiden’s friend, Tom, they agree to vote together in voting off either Damien or Tess the next time they lose a challenge before the merge occurs due to their close connections with the Magenta Team. They eventually decide to vote Tess out and with Bowie’s help, <- comma they succeed in getting her eliminated.
Chef Hatchet might be almost as sadistic as the hosts he works for, <- comma but even he shows sympathy upon hearing about Tess’ Dark and Troubled Past and how she lost her parents, <- comma to the point that he forgoes blasting her with his water gun in favor of simply tapping her with it.
Just like in canon, Tess takes her elimination very well, showing no grudges toward the people who eliminated her and wishing her team good luck progressing in the game.
Fiore is considered The Load because of her team always failing at challenges yet, mostly due to the help of her villainous allies Alec and Julia, she is able to avoid getting eliminated. However the one time that she is able to prove her usefulness by scoring the only point for her team during the “Know Your Losers” challenge, she ends up getting eliminated when she and Julia fail to sway Ally to their side.
Tess breaks down throughout “Maze of Mayhem” where she blames herself for how dysfunctional her team has become, citing that if she hadn’t voted off her friend, Ellie, Gabby wouldn’t be so distrustful toward her team and wouldn’t have joined with the Villains’ Alliance in voting off Tom, <- comma meaning he would still be around to talk to Jake, and the Villains’ Alliance wouldn’t be as much of a threat as it is now.
...and saving Ally from getting blasted by Chef Hatchet’s water gun...
...instead simply tapping Tess and Damien with the tip of his gun.
While Jake does lose to Riya in All-Stars, he feels like he won because he got everyone to support him, made many close friends who all cheer him up and he and Tom finally become an Official Couple. Meanwhile, Riya feels absolutely defeated despite winning the season and the prize money because she ends up becoming Hated by All where they and all the other contestants, including Connor, <- comma permanently cut ties with her, leaving Riya to endure misery and sadness all by herself, while they go on to live happier lives.
Tess is portrayed as one in her debut season, <- comma maintaining an aloof, cold, and stoic personality to cope with having depression as a result of the tragedies she suffered in her life. She learns to grow out of this trope, especially once All-Stars airs.
Beneath Tess’s cold and aloof exterior lies a very lonely girl who struggles with depression. Thankfully she gets better after befriending Ally and Hunter, <- comma and by the time All-Stars airs, Tess has averted this trope completely, <- comma becoming an All-Loving Hero who’s willing to help anyone in need.
Sam sees zombie Hugh bridal-carrying Judy and laments to himself...
Robbie tries to drive Stephanie away from Sportacus's airship by imitating Sportacus's voice and saying he's sleeping, <- comma but...
...the (unknown to Sportacus) sugar apple, <- comma but...
Sportacus's airship computer obeys the command of Robbie (who ios pretending to be Sportacus with his Voice Changer 6000) to set up his bed early, but it also points out to "Sportacus" that it wasn't 8:08 p.m. yet.
When arriving at Sportacus's airship, Stephanie notices that "Sportacus" (actually Robbie in disguise) is in bed early...
@brb1006
Astro Boy and Osamu Tezuka's other characters are very popular in French-speaking regions. Astro Boy is known as "Astro le petit robot", <- comma with the original manga and various anime incarnations being very beloved by French audiences. During the The New '10s, France worked on the animation for Little Astro Boy while Go Astro Boy Go! was a French-Japanese co-production. The upcoming CGI reboot series is not only a French animated series by Method Animation/Mediwan, <- comma but the French television network TF 1 even contributed to the show's development.
Edited by Arivne on Oct 14th 2024 at 10:49:35 AM

Kamen Rider Gavv
Edited by Tycoonninja on Oct 14th 2024 at 12:40:15 PM