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AsrulGuza A QUINCY Since: Jul, 2022 Relationship Status: All is for my lord
A QUINCY
#31476: Sep 19th 2024 at 4:43:18 AM

Thank you Faith 😙

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#31478: Sep 19th 2024 at 10:51:13 AM

Thanks arivne

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Tylerbear12 What you see is what you get, just a guy. from The Green Hills. Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
What you see is what you get, just a guy.
#31479: Sep 19th 2024 at 3:03:20 PM

Thanks, Faith.

AgentJet (Apprentice)
#31480: Sep 19th 2024 at 3:49:22 PM

Thanks Faith, for this post. Now, check the grammar from this description: The description gives the information about the "Wiki Magic" summary from my post before, but I'm not sure if that grammar was correct.


1. The descriptions about the information that subpage needs help to define the type are:

[Subject of Fridge's Media]: Needs help on Fridge subpage that were unclear to definiting type of Fridge Brilliance/Horror/Sadness.

2. The descriptions about the information that subpage needs to "Soft Split" between the media that are written:

[Subject of Fridge's Media]: Needs a Subheader for "Soft Split" between 'Film,' 'Literature' & 'Theatre'note 


Thank you

Edited by AgentJet on Sep 19th 2024 at 6:55:40 AM

I want to sort a 'Fridge Brilliance' page (from what I know that work, of course).
FGonzalez Since: Oct, 2021
#31481: Sep 19th 2024 at 4:17:22 PM

Hi Arivne, here's a trope for Heartwarming moments on Big Hero 6: the series, in season 2 episode, Muira-Horror.

  • Krei is revealed to actually like nature and during most of the episode, he uses his survival skills to help Hiro and Go Go escape a mutated Ned Ludd, gives the latter a makeshift leg brace to help her walk when she gets an injured ankle, and at the end, Krei decides to not build his new tech campus in Muirahara woods and gives Hiro an Affectionate Gesture to the Head.

Also for S.P.D. episode, Resurrection.


  • Mistaken for Thief: Jack when he meets Ally. He initially believes her to be stealing clothes much like he and Z were at the first episode and almost arrests her. It turns that Ally is actually an employee from her father's department store who likes donating clothes for least fortunate people.
  • O.O.C. Is Serious Business: Mora. Due to The Magnificence's brainwashing, she throws away her once beloved doll Cindy Sunshine to the void when Gruumm hands it to her and is more interested in conquering Earth.

And for S.P.D. episode Endings part 1.


  • All Your Base Are Belong to Us: Broodwing. He takes advantage of Cruger's capture and the B-Squad being busy fighting the A-Squad to successfully take over S.P.D. base and the Delta Command Megazord.
  • Big "NO!": The Rangers (minus Cruger) are horrified when seeing Broodwing in control of the Delta Command Megazord.
  • Bittersweet Ending: The A-Squad and Broodwing are defeated and arrested and the S.P.D. base is saved, but the B-Squad is captured by Gruumm (thanks to Piggy betraying the Rangers) and are imprisoned alongside Cruger, while Omni is arriving to take over the Earth.
  • Conveniently Timed Distraction: Gruumm capturing Cruger and sending the A-Squad to defeat the B-Squad allows Broodwing and his army of generals and Krybots to invade the S.P.D. base and take over the Delta Command Megazord.
  • Underestimating Badassery: The A-Squad (especially Charlie) is arrogantly dismissive of the B-Squad, despite Gruumm warning the former squad against understimating the latter. He is proven right after the B-Squad succeeds in defeating and imprisoning their corrupt predecessors.
  • We Meet Again: Broodwing when he captures Kat, says they meet again.

Edited by FGonzalez on Sep 19th 2024 at 11:09:43 AM

Killbus2-0 Since: Jul, 2024
#31482: Sep 19th 2024 at 9:38:52 PM

Check this pls

  • Ma’alefa’ak wanted to convince Nimona to enter into a alliance with him, citing the fact that they both was despised by their people because they were not like everyone. But Nimona told him go to hell, while also saying that unlike him she was betrayed by the person she trusted, while Ma’alefa’ak brought his own suffering upon himself. He also wanted to form an alliance with Jin Kisaragi, saying that both of them hame same goal, namely the murder of their older brothers. But Jin didn’t even let him finish his sentence as he began to use his ice control powers to attack him. Although Jin admits that sometimes he was really jerk and that he tried to kill Ragna more than once, Jin stated that he would never work with such scumbag like Ma’alefa’ak.

  • He was able to form alliance with Xerath, although their partnership somewhat strained. The main reasons are that Ma’alefa’ak considers Xerath too soft because he still care about his brother Azir and that he at times regrets about his actions, while Xerath finds some of Ma’alefa’ak’s actions too barbaric.

  • Samus Aran is another deity who feels nothing but disgust towards Ma’alefa’ak, largely due to the fact that he is essentially a more deranged version of her biological father. It doesn’t help that he also has turned his attention to Metroids and with their help he plans to increase the scale of mass murder and tortures. This only made the situation worse for her and also gave additional motivation to stop him.
    • Although Raven Beak is intrigued by genetics of the Martian, he nevertheless have a low point about Ma’alefa’ak, as he considers him too immature and childish, while Ma’alefa’ak is irritated by his condescension and arrogance. For sake the of common goals, they ready join forces to eliminate their enemies, but also ready to betray each other at any moment for their own goals.

Edited by Killbus2-0 on Sep 20th 2024 at 8:17:19 AM

Tylerbear12 What you see is what you get, just a guy. from The Green Hills. Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
What you see is what you get, just a guy.
#31483: Sep 19th 2024 at 11:13:06 PM

Trivia.The Legend Of Zelda Echoes Of Wisdom

Edited by Tylerbear12 on Sep 20th 2024 at 12:35:06 PM

doised Since: Sep, 2024
#31484: Sep 20th 2024 at 2:39:48 AM

Ah Fu's Virtuous Journey

Ah Fu's Virtuous Journey (阿福寻规记) is an 60-episode Chinese animation series created by NetDragon Websoft Inc., which was created to taught viewers the morals of Di Zi Gui.

In the year 2130, humanity has lost virtue that they once had, never loved each other, but they're more selfish and cold-blooded, letting their desire to rule themselves. The development of human civilization has gone too far, the society has lost its order, and the world was ruined into Bad Future. The most intelligent scienst who has the world's most advance technology, Dr. Tianji, created an little magic elve, Ah Fu, who Tianji belives that he can awaken the human's virtue, so that the human society will return back to good. So he sent Ah Fu back to 2013 China and search for the good actions that follows the Di Zi Gui, so that these can release the virtue energy that can save the world, and Ah Fu can bring these energies back to save the bad future.

While on an journey to search for the virtue energy, Ah Fu meets kindergarterner Rongzi and discovered that he has virtue energy, so he decided to help Lin Zhirong (aka. Rongzi) and his friends (mainly Xu Jiawen, Zhang Zhuang, and Huang Haoming) while also collect virtue energies from them.

  • Bad Future: The year 2130 was in ruins, due to humanity has lost their virtue, and the development of human civilazition has gone too far.
  • Future Me Scares Me: In episode 9, to solve Rongzi's hunchbacked habit, Ah Fu shows him the Future Mirror which shows his 20 years later future self, which is him as an eyeglass-wearing hunchbacked adult with an wooden cane. This scared Rongzi that he never pulls his hunchback habit ever again.
  • Living Toys: In episode 6, Ah Fu gives Rongzi a sticker which can makes toys alive. He uses it on his toy tank and Haoming's toy robot, but they attack each other until Ah Fu take down the stickers from them. Then it is revealed that Rongzi brings Haoming's toy robot back home without his notice nor permission so that the robot attack him first, so Rongzi decided to give Haoming back his toy robot.
  • Overnight Age-Up: In episode 10, when Ah Fu scolds Rongzhi and Zhuang for not letting eldery peoples to sit their chairs at kindergarten library, he ages them up into eldery to taught them a lesson and let them feel what's like to be an old man.
  • Picky Eater: As revealed in episode 7, Rongzi hates eating carrots, and Jiawen didn't like eats peppers.
  • Time Skip: The first ten episodes take place in when Rongzi and his friends were still on kindergarten, episodes 11 to 40 take place in when they read primary/elementary school, and the rest of the episodes take place in when they read middle school.

  • No Export for You: Given that the series is based on Di Zhi Gui, it is unlikely that the series will release outside China.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31485: Sep 20th 2024 at 8:36:08 AM

[up] @Agent Jet

     Corrections 

Needs help on the Fridge subpage that was unclear about defining the type of Fridge Brilliance/Horror/Sadness.

Needs a Subheader for "Soft Split" between 'Film,' 'Literature' & 'Theatre'note Since <- no comma I didn't know that media. But <- no comma I've been known that Fridge subpage doesn't differentiate between 'Film,' 'Literature' & 'Theatre'. <- period

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31486: Sep 20th 2024 at 8:56:57 AM

[up] @F Gonzalez

     Corrections 

...Go Go escape a mutated Ned Ludd, gives Go Go a makeshift leg brace...in the Muirahara woods...

^ The way you used it, "the latter" referred to Ned Ludd.

Jack, <- comma when he meets Ally. He initially believes her to be stealing clothes, <- comma much like he and Z did in the first episode, <- comma and almost arrests her. It turns that Ally is actually an employee from her father's department store who likes donating clothes for less-fortunate people.

...she throws away her once-beloved doll Cindy Sunshine into the void...

...to successfully take over the S.P.D. base and the Delta Command Megazord.

The Rangers (minus Cruger) are horrified upon seeing Broodwing...

He is proven right after the B-Squad succeeds in defeating...

When Broodwing when he captures Kat, he says they will meet again.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31487: Sep 20th 2024 at 9:10:17 AM

[up] @Killbus 2-0

     Corrections 

...they both were despised by...like everyone else. But Nimona ...saying that, <- comma unlike him, <- comma she was...brought his own suffering...both of them have the same goal...to attack Ma’alefa’ak. ...was really a jerk and...work with such a scumbag as Ma’alefa’ak.

^ You could also write "with such a scumbag like Ma’alefa’ak."

He was able to form an alliance with Xerath, although their partnership was somewhat strained...too soft is because he still cares about...

...and with their help, <- comma he plans...This only makes the situation...also gives her additional motivation to stop him.

Although Raven Beak is intrigued by the genetics of the Martian, he nevertheless has a low opinion of Ma’alefa’ak...irritated by Raven Beak's condescension and arrogance. For the sake the of their common goals, they readily join forces to eliminate their enemies, but are also...

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31488: Sep 20th 2024 at 9:12:44 AM

[up] @Tylerbear 12

The game was developed by Grezzo...instead of Nintendo. This was notably the studio's first original Zelda game.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31489: Sep 20th 2024 at 9:39:47 AM

[up] @doised

     Corrections 

Ah Fu's Virtuous Journey (阿福寻规记) is an 60-episode Chinese animation series which was created by Net Dragon Websoft Inc. <- no comma to teach viewers the morals of Di Zi Gui.

^ The way you wrote this, you said that Net Dragon Websoft Inc. was created to teach viewers, not the series.

In the year 2130, humanity has lost the virtue that they once had, never loved each other, are more selfish and cold-blooded, letting their desire to rule themselves <missing text> . The development of human civilization has gone too far, the society has lost its order, and the world has been ruined into a Bad Future. The most intelligent scientist who has the world's most advanced technology, Dr. Tianji, creates a little magic elf, Ah Fu, who Tianji believes that he can awaken the human's virtue, so that the human society will become good again. So he sends Ah Fu back to 2013 China to search for the good actions that follow the Di Zi Gui, so that these can release the virtue energy that can save the world, and Ah Fu can bring these energies back to save the bad future.

^ Letting their desire to rule themselves what? Did you mean to write "losing their desire to rule themselves"?

While on an journey to search for the virtue energy, Ah Fu meets kindergartener Rongzi and discovers that he has virtue energy, so he decides to help Lin Zhirong (aka. Rongzi) and his friends (mainly Xu Jiawen, Zhang Zhuang, and Huang Haoming) while also collecting virtue energies from them.

The year 2130 is in ruins, due to humanity losing their virtue <- no comma and the development of human civilization going too far.

In episode 9, to solve Rongzi's hunchback habit, Ah Fu shows him the Future Mirror which displays his 20 years later future self, which is him as an eyeglass-wearing hunchbacked adult with an wooden cane. This scared Rongzi that he never pulls his hunchback habit ever again.

^ I don't know what a "hunchback habit" means. Pretending to have a hunchback? Please add its meaning to the example.

In episode 6, Ah Fu gives Rongzi a sticker which can make toys come alive. He uses it on his toy tank and Haoming's toy robot, but they attack each other until Ah Fu takes the stickers from them. Then it is revealed that Rongzi brought Haoming's toy robot back home without his notice or permission so that the robot would attack him first, so Rongzi '''decides to give Haoming back his toy robot.

In episode 10, when Ah Fu scolds Rongzhi and Zhuang for not letting elderly people sit in their chairs in the kindergarten library, he ages them up into elderly people to teach them a lesson and let them feel what's like to be an old man.

...and Jiawen doesn't like eating peppers.

The first ten episodes take place while Rongzi and his friends are still in kindergarten, episodes 11 to 40 take place in when they reach primary/elementary school, and the rest of the episodes take place in when they read middle school.

Given that the series is based on Di Zhi Gui, it is unlikely that the series will be released outside China.

Tylerbear12 What you see is what you get, just a guy. from The Green Hills. Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
What you see is what you get, just a guy.
#31490: Sep 20th 2024 at 10:54:26 AM

Thanks, Arivne.

Bury Your Art:

  • Sony Interactive Entertainment has done this to almost all of SIE Japan Studio's IPs after the studio's closure in 2021, with the PlayStation Studios branding and website not acknowledging almost any of their IPs. This largely stems from the low profitability of most of JapanStudio's IPs and Sony shifting their focus away from the Japanese market in favor of the Western market. The only major exceptions to this are Gran Turismo and Astro Bot, whose development teams have been spun off into separate studios within SIE in the form of Polyphony Digital and Team Asobi, respectively.

Edited by Tylerbear12 on Sep 21st 2024 at 3:21:09 AM

miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#31491: Sep 20th 2024 at 1:42:33 PM

More for the coming King Grimlock page

  • The Corruption: The evil diety Soltron's blood is Energon which corrupts and drives insane anyone who comes into contact with it and makes them suspectible to being possesed by Soltron.
  • Demonic Possession:Soltron is able to take over the minds and bodies off people who come into and are corrupted into his blood. He does this to the Golden One to use his dragon form to spread death and destruction across the land. Later he possesses Grimlock's friend Arko to use her as a Human Shield.
  • Omnicidal Maniac: Soltron is an evil diety who craves death and destruction. He's been systematically wiping out the entire population of the planet Menonia. When he's offered Grimlock's body to take control off, Soltron reveals he intends to ravage the entire universe.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmperorGeode from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
#31492: Sep 21st 2024 at 2:48:43 AM

For Complete Monster.

  • Disk Mania: The Evil Entity is member of normaly benevolent Anunnaki sealed in sarcophagus by his brethren. In order to free himself so he could destroy Earth and beyond, the Entity manipulates and corrupts countless humans, imprisoning good halves of his pawns in pocket Dimension called Sitting Room. He organises formation of the Hunters of Secrets , group consisting of four humans and talking animal descended from Anunnaki, in order to free himself. After conquistadors led by Fernando El Aguirre kill Hunters and take sarcophagus, the Entity corrupts them for his own amusement, making Fernando possibly the worst of all conquistadors. After his sarcophagus sealed behind four doors to limit his influence, the Entity continues to manipulate creation of mystery solving groups, corrupting them as we as people around them into villains for them to catch, ruining and ending many lives in the proces. The Entity’s influnce leads to tragedies and evil, from destruction of missionary settlement to helping start the World War I. The Evil Entity eventually organises escape of the vile Proffesor Pericles from prison in order to faciliate his escape during the Nibiru aligment, when he power will be strongest.

AgentJet (Apprentice)
#31493: Sep 21st 2024 at 6:20:35 AM

Thank you @Arivne for this post. Now check this one :)


The descriptions about the information that subpage needs help to define 'Specific' section the type are:

[Subject of Fridge's Media]: Needs help on First 'fridge section' that were unclear to definiting type of Fridge Brilliance/Horror/Sadness.

I want to sort a 'Fridge Brilliance' page (from what I know that work, of course).
Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31494: Sep 21st 2024 at 9:28:07 AM

[up] @Tylerbear 12

...Japan Studio's I Ps <- no comma and Sony...major exceptions to this are Gran Turismo and Astro Bot...spun off into separate studios\...

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31495: Sep 21st 2024 at 9:32:20 AM

[up] @miraculous

     Corrections 

The evil deity Soltron's blood is Energon, <- comma which corrupts and drives insane anyone who comes into contact with it and makes them susceptible to being possessed by Soltron.

^ Words to work on: deity, possess.

Soltron is able to take over the minds and bodies of people who come into contact with and are corrupted by his blood. He...Later, <- comma he possesses...

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31496: Sep 21st 2024 at 9:42:06 AM

[up] @Emperor Geode

     Corrections 

The Evil Entity is a member of a normally benevolent Anunnaki sealed in a sarcophagus by his brethren. In order to free himself so he can destroy the Earth and beyond, the Entity manipulates and corrupts countless humans, imprisoning good halves of his pawns in pocket Dimensions called Sitting Rooms. He organises the formation of the Hunters of Secrets, <- no space a group consisting of four humans and talking animals descended from Anunnaki, in order to free himself. After conquistadors led by Fernando El Aguirre kill Hunters and take the sarcophagus, the Entity corrupts them for his own amusement, making Fernando possibly the worst of all conquistadors. After his sarcophagus is sealed behind four doors to limit his influence, the Entity continues to manipulate the creation of mystery solving groups, corrupting them as we as people around them into villains for them to catch, ruining and ending many lives in the process. The Entity’s influence leads to tragedies and evil, from the destruction of a missionary settlement to helping start the World War I. The Evil Entity eventually organises the escape of the vile Professor Pericles from prison in order to facilitate his escape during the Nibiru alignment, when his power will be strongest.

Arivne Since: Jan, 2001
#31497: Sep 21st 2024 at 9:47:55 AM

[up] @Agent Jet

The last time I corrected this, the way I re-wrote it was the correct way.

Edited by Arivne on Sep 21st 2024 at 9:48:10 AM

EmperorGeode from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
G-Editor The 47th President Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
The 47th President
#31499: Sep 21st 2024 at 1:07:02 PM

I got some more trope entries to check for spelling and grammar errors

Total Disventure All Stars

  • Laser-Guided Karma: Bowie decides to mess with Jake’s love life by arranging an Imaginary Love Triangle between Jake, Tom, and Aiden to exploit Jake’s jealousy issues for his own goals. Not only does this puts a strain on Bowie’s relationship with Raj but Julia exploits Bowie’s actions for her own ends by convincing Jake to join her and Fiore in eliminating Raj as payback at Bowie.
  • Revenge by Proxy: Julia tells Jake about Bowie’s messing in Jake’s love life to better his own game, where she convinces Jake to join her and Fiore to vote off Bowie’s boyfriend Raj as payback. Julia getting Raj eliminated may also be revenge for herself also since Bowie is her Arch-Enemy and caused her first elimination in Total Drama.

Clone High

  • Not-So-Well-Intentioned Extremist: Apparently, Scudworth was able to convince the Secret Board of Shadowy Figures to fund his cloning project on the pretense that clones based on historical figures solve the world’s problems and change it for the better. Of course, it’s clear that Scudworth only interest in creating the clones for his clone-themed amusement park.
  • More Deadly Than the Male: Within the Big Bad Ensemble between Scudworth and Candide, it’s clear that Candide is the worst between the two not only lacking Scudworth’s humorous and Pet the Dog moments, but is much more cruel and ruthless with goals that are far more reaching than Scudworth.
  • Not-So-Well-Intentioned Extremist: Unlike, Scudworth’s ambitions to use the clones for his amusement park, Candide actually wants to use the clones to shape the world. However, Candide isn’t interesting in using the clones to better the world but rather them to shape the world In Their Own Image, even having the entire Shadow Board killed off just so she can gain complete control of Operation: Spread Eagle and use whoever clone she selects to be her Puppet King to Take Over the World.

Kite Man: Hell Yeah!

  • Big Bad Ensemble: Lex Luthor, Darkseid, and Helen Villigan are the main antagonists for the 1st season of Kite Man as the are all interested in acquiring the Anti-Life equation. However, Helen decides to work with Kite-Man in destroying said equation, once she discovers it’ll do more harm than good to her business leaving Luthor and Darkseid left in the running.
  • Enemy Mine: Villigan ends up teaming up with Kite-Man to permanently destroy the Anti-Life Equation once it’s made clear that she can’t profit off it and Kite-Man is the only one who can use it without destroying all life forms in the universe.
  • A Lighter Shade of Black: Villigan ends up being the lesser evil compared to Luthor and Darkseid by the end of season 1. As bad as she is, Villigan has the common sense not use the Anti-Life Equation to wipe out all life since that will mean no more customers and profits for her, and works with Kite-Man to permanently destroy, while Luthor and Darkseid shows no concern for the massive loss of life if they use the Anti-Life Equation as long as they achieve their goals.
  • Earn Your Happy Ending: Kite-Man goes through a lot of hardships and slapstick in both Harley Quinn and his own show, which includes but is not limited to being considered a joke by everyone (including his wn parents), having his engagement ruined when Ivy cheats on him with Harley Quinn, and is basically the biggest Butt-Monkey in his universe. With all that said Kite-Man finally achieves his Happy Ending when he manages to prevent Lex Luthor and Darkseid from acquiring the Anti-Life Equation where he finally gets the respect from both heroes and villains, Noonan’s becoming a massive hit, and is able to get into a stable and loving relationship with Golden Glider which grows even stronger after they resolve their issues.

Edited by G-Editor on Sep 22nd 2024 at 12:08:28 PM

My sandbox of EPs and other stuff
Tylerbear12 What you see is what you get, just a guy. from The Green Hills. Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
What you see is what you get, just a guy.
#31500: Sep 21st 2024 at 1:34:14 PM

Thanks, Arivne.

YMMV.Batman:


YMMV.Sonic Labyrinth:

  • Condemned by History: The game received mixed-to-positive reviews at the time of its original release, with critics finding it to be a flawed, but fun and innovative game in the vein of Marble Madness. However, in the years since its release, opinions on the game would sour considerably, with aspects like the clunky controls, poor level design, and the main premise of Sonic having to walk through levels (going against the series' main selling point) becoming panned in retrospect, with many critics nowadays considering the game to be one of Sonic's worst titles.

YMMV.The Lion King 1994:

  • Common Knowledge: Many tend to think Scar exiled Simba from the Pride Lands for "murdering" Mufasa, however, that's not quite what happened. Simba willingly chose to run away and exile himself from the Pride Lands after the death of Mufasa. Scar did convince and manipulate Simba to run away, but as the latter half of the film makes clear, it was ultimately Simba's choice to run away, not Scar's.

Edited by Tylerbear12 on Sep 21st 2024 at 9:36:38 AM


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