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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
- Meaningful Name: The Group that serves as antagonists are called "The Illuminati", which comes from a organization in Bavaria that became one of the most popular subjects of Conspiracy Theories, painting them as a shadowy cabal that seeks to Take Over the World, as well as hiding information they don't want to reach the public. Likewise the Goblin Illuminati both has plans of a similar bent and a desire not to let anything in the Enigma Codex, not even a cheese recipe, escape their clutches. Outside the conspiracy angle, the term also means "Enlightened", which can refer to them being on par with Sharlayan with their knowledge and the hoarding of, or their plans to create a Utopia for themselves using Alexander
- Group -> group (not a proper noun, so not capitalized)
- Conspiracy Theories -> UsefulNotes/ConspiracyTheories
- Likewise the Goblin Illuminati -> Likewise, the Goblin Illuminati
- both has plans of a similar bent and a desire not to let anything -> has both...
- the hoarding of -> the hoarding thereof
- using Alexander -> using Alexander.
edited 11th May '16 5:40:36 AM by Arivne
My suggestion in Remember the New Guy?
- In Majokko Meg-chan, Meg is a young witch who has been sent to Earth where is adopted by former witch Mami Kanzaki. In the first episode, Mami bewitches her husband and their two children, Rabi and Apo, into believing that Megu has always been the eldest child of the family.
edited 11th May '16 9:45:29 AM by rafi
You took my advice! Well done. :)
- In Majokko Meg-chan, Meg is a young witch who has been sent to Earth where is adopted by former witch Mami Kanzaki. In the first episode, Mami bewitches her husband and their two children, Rabi and Apo, into believing that Megu has always been the eldest child of the family.
- sent to Earth where -> sent to Earth, where
- where is adopted -> where she is adopted
edited 12th May '16 5:02:39 AM by Arivne
My edit for Seikoku No Dragonar
- Clothing Damage: If a zombie dragon uses its tentacle to attack or wrap its opponent, their clothing will dissolve.
- Tentacle Rope: The monster dragon in episode 3 ties up Eco. to -> Zombie dragons trend to wrap its opponent with its tentacles, which dissolves clothing.
And no, I don't get it why Zombie Dragons have tentacles that can dissolve clothing either.
edited 14th May '16 1:00:25 AM by flamemario12
Either:
Or:
edited 14th May '16 4:48:38 AM by Arivne
Adding new fanfic recommendation for RWBY Crossovers.
RWBY: Ghost of Remnant Vol. 1
by striberx
- Recommended by Strafe 2409
- Crossover with Kamen Rider Ghost
- Status: Complete. A follow up titled ''RWBY: Ghost of Remnant Vol. 2
is created.
- Synopsis: Remnant. The world where Huntsmen and Huntresses lives. For years they have fought Grimm without fear. But a new threat emerges from the afterlife. With these new monsters only one hero can save this world... And he only has 99 days before his power and life vanishes forever...
- Comments: Another great crossover between RWBY and tokusatsu, particularly with Kamen Rider series. While maintaining the original core stories between two series, it also incorporated some original arcs to make the story fresh. Some of the original chapters are involving not only the 15 Luminary Eyecons, but also the Legend Rider Eyecons. It also introduces Ghost's predecessors like Wizard, OOO, Drive and even Decade as their mentors. In addition, several chapters also including original subplot, such as the romantic relationship between Weiss and one of the OC named Axel, whom the latter is Kamen Rider Specter in this fic. A great crossover with a great storytelling and character development.
edited 18th May '16 9:58:43 PM by Strafe2409
- Synopsis: Remnant. The world where Huntsmen and Huntresses lives. For years they have fought Grimm without fear. But a new threat emerges from the afterlife. With these new monsters only one hero can save this world... And he only has 99 days before his power and life vanishes forever...
- The world where Huntsmen and Huntresses lives. -> live
- before his power and life vanishes forever -> vanish
- tokusatsu -> If this is a name it should be capitalized.
- particularly with Kamen Rider series. -> particularly the Kamen Rider series. (?)
- between two series -> between the two series
- it also incorporated -> it also incorporates (How to Write an Example - Write in Present Tense)
- are involving -> involve
- also including -> also include
- whom the latter is -> the latter of whom is
- with a great storytelling -> with great storytelling
edited 19th May '16 5:59:17 AM by Arivne
Adding a new trope page titled RWBY: Ghost of Remnant.
RWBY: Ghost of Remnant is a crossover fanfiction between RWBY and Kamen Rider, specifically Kamen Rider Ghost written by striberx
.
This is Remnant. The world where Huntsmen and Huntresses live. They are elite warriors dedicated to protect the world by slaying Grimm. However, unknown to them, there is a new threat emerging from the afterlife. An evil race of extra-dimensional creatures who invisible to the normal human eye and Faunus and likes to influence and even possessing them to commit evil acts. Those creatures called Ganma.
Enter Cody Aldrich, the main character of the story and a Hunstman in trainee from Isle of the Dragon's Breath. After he defeats Roman Torchwick and his goons, he's invited by Headmaster Ozpin to accept his offer to join Beacon Academy. However, prior to his enrollment, Cody retells his backstory to Ozpin that he's killed by an Ancient Grimm and he's revived by a mysterious sage. The problem is, his resurrection is imperfect, as he is granted a limited half-life about 99 days. In order to complete his ressurection, he must assemble all 15 Luminary Eyecons based of 15 different historical figures, otherwise he's dead for good. Ozpin understand and decides to enroll him to Beacon Academy.
Will Cody manage to assemble all Luminary Eyecons and come back to life? Thus his adventure in Beacon Academy and Vale starts here.
The fanfic that covers Volume 1 can be read here
, with the follow up based on Volume 2 can be read here
.
RWBY: Ghost of Remnant provide examples of:
- Adaptational Badass: The original Kamen Rider Specternote is more powerful than the original Kamen Rider Ghostnote , as the former is a seasoned fighter who easily curbstomped the latter. Specter here, on the other hand, not only retain his badassery like in the TV series, but he is also capable to unleash his family's Semblance, the "Sword of Light", which regarded as the most powerful Semblance in Remnant's history. Not to mention, he's also the one who manage to scare Adam with both of his powers, as well as being the one and only who survive from his single stroke attack!
- Adaptational Heroism: Compared to the original OOO story, the First OOO in this fic is depicted as a legedary hero who fought creatures of Grimm and treated both humans and Faunus as equal.
- Apologetic Attacker: In the first chapter of Volume 2, during the Food Fight between Team RWBY and Cody against Team JNPR, when Cody faces Pyrrha, he teleports behind her, grabs her collar and apologized to her before he throws the female champion to Ruby.
- Badass Creed: The maxim of Saber family, as quoted by Axel.
"A strong soul leads to a great future... A strong one will crafts a sharp blade to cut through the darkness."
- Back from the Dead: In the Chapter 2 of Volume 2, Kaito Kumon is now reborn in Remnant, seeking challenge to Cody and Axel in order to gain his respect, using his power as Kamen Rider Baron and Lord Baron. At the end of the chapter, he discussing with Tsukasa about something bad happen soon in Vale, presumably Cinder's group and White Fang movement, as well Ganma activities in Remnant.
- Badass Family: Alongside with Ruby and Yang, this fic also introduces Saber family, as Axel and Luna is the last surviving member of Saber family which regarded as the owner of the most powerful Semblance in Remnant's history, as well as being the current inheritor of Saber mansion. Cody also considered as a part of his family since his parents adopt him and Luna.
- Badass Teacher: While all of the Beacon Academy staff are skilled Huntsmen and Huntresses, the most shining example of this fic is Avian Cureoir, the avian Faunus and the inheritor of the first Multi-King's power as Kamen Rider OOO, despite he's a substitute teacher.
- Big "WHAT?!": Happens in several chapters, mostly done by either Team RWBY or Team JNPR or even both.
- In Volume 1.
- Chapter 6: Team RWBY surprised at Specter who shares the same Ghost Driver like Cody.
- Chapter 8: Cody and the rest of Team RWBY surprised that Specter is Weiss' crush.
- Chapter 11: Cody and Yang shocked at Newton Eyecon talks to them after the latter gives the former a pep talk about the former's fear of death.
- Chapter 13: Both Team RWBY and Team JNPR shocked at Jacob and Mr. Belt, before the latter transforms into Kamen Rider Drive and his fight with Specter ensues.
- Chapter 14: Team RWBY and Team JNPR takes the revelations very well after both teams learned that all VVIP tickets Cody bought for them, as well Saber siblings is from her sister Aurora.
- Chapter 15: Once again, Team RWBY and Team JNPR exclaimed in surprise after learning that all Hikari Studio crews are Dimensional Travelers.
- Chapter 16: Team RWBY shocked after Ruby introduces Billy the Kid in front of the rest of her team.
- Chapter 18: Again, Team RWBY and Team JNPR shouted in unison after Sun reveals that his grandfather is one of Bruce Lee's apprentice.
- In Volume 2.
- Chapter 3: Team RWBY and Team JNPR are thunderstrucked with Axel's Finishing Move which decimates not only the Monster of the Week, but also the half of Saber mansion and the entire forest at the mountain side.
- In Volume 1.
- Cool Big Sis: Aurora. She's not only beautiful and charming, but also being supportive and caring towards his younger brother Cody and to the extent, Axel and Luna, even if they are not related by blood. Even Ruby and Yang are amused and impressed with their bonds.
- Disposable Vagrant: The Council, through Ironwood and his Atlesian soldiers, are intended to capture Cody and his Eyecons to be examined. Axel's reaction is obviously less than amused.
- The Dreaded: Specter in this story is regarded as the most notorious Serial Killer for underground criminals and White Fang, to the point they referred him as "The Blue Devil of Remnant". Especially White Fang, whenever they tried to commit a violent act, he really knew where they were and when it will happen. As a result, some of the members who faced him are traumatized to the point they are decided to quit from the organization! Needless to say, Sun really scared with his prescence, even though he's now sided with Cody and his friends.
- Expy: Several characters (both canon and OC) taking many cues from Kamen Rider Ghost cast. Most notably:
- Cody is essentially similar to Takeru Tenkuji, as both are a teen who aspires to be a Huntsman and Ghost Hunter respectively.
- Axel is similar to Makoto Fukami. Both are The Rival of their respective media who also seeks to obtain all luminary Ghost Eyecons and a childhood friend of Cody and Takeru respectively.
- Yang, while retaining her character aspects from canon, she taking many cues from Akari Tsukimura, as both are supporting heroines who doesn't stop to help The Hero to face their problems.
- Foreshadowing: At the end of Chapter 15 of Volume 1, the Hikari Studio crew saw a unique backdrop unlike any other. The backdrop itself depicts a red sky with several Ganma Eyecons floating above it, a dark forest with a dozens of Grimm with a silhouetted female figure. At the center of backdrop was Beacon, with Team JNPR and Team RWBY on the left and right respectively, with Cody and Axel in the middle, alongside with Ore and Specter Parka Ghost floating above them. Finally, there's Alain as Necrom appears behind both Cody and Axel. This foreshadows that something bad will come to Vale, thus all Riders in Vale must be prepared when the aforementioned problem comes.
- Heroic Lineage: All of Saber family members are regarded as the greatest Hunstmen and Huntresses in Remnant, and one of them is King Arthur, Axel's ancestor. Yes, that King Arthur.
- Massive Multiplayer Crossover: Although not as much as Weiss Reacts, the fic itself pretty much uniting all Kamen Rider series in RWBY universe. So far, the fic features:
- Kamen Rider Wizard: The Ringed Wizard appears in front of Ghost, Specter and Team RWBY when both Ghost Riders are overwhelmed by two Phantoms.
- Kamen Rider OOO: A Faunus OC named Avian Cureoir is depicted as a successor of the First OOO. Acting as a substitute teacher, he's reminding Axel/Specter to gain a greater power, as long as his desire not overwhelm him.
- Kamen Rider Drive: Krim Steinbelt AKA Mr. Belt and another original character named Jacob Crimson of Remnant's World Police appears to help Team RWBY, Team JNPR and Axel to solve a cargo theft that caused by a Roidmude, all while proving Cody's innocence.
- Kamen Rider Decade: Tsukasa, Yusuke and Natsumi appears at Remnant. Both Tsukasa and Yusuke explains the number of Riders, as well the feud between Showa Riders and Heisei Riders.
- Kamen Rider Gaim: Kaito is now reborn in Remnant and seemingly seeking challange towards Cody and Axel. Kouta, on the other hand, briefly appears in front of Ruby by prevent her from picking Helheim fruits when she lost in Helheim Forest. Kouta also gives his Orange Lockseed to Ruby as Memento MacGuffin for Cody before she returns to the real world.
- Phrase Catcher: Cody shouts Musashi Damashii's transformation announcement when he attacks Nora with loafs as a makeshift twin swords.
- Shout-Out: In Chapter 3 of Volume 2, Axel as Specter Excalibur Damashii unleashes Excaliblast to finish off Alexander the Great Ganma.
- Sole Survivor: Both Axel and Luna are the last member of Saber family after their parent killed by a mysterious person.
- Their First Time: During the second visit to Isle of the Dragon's Breath, Axel and Weiss shares a "good time" inside Axel's room with Weiss teaching Axel how to be a "good man".
edited 19th May '16 11:44:20 PM by Strafe2409
Is anyone a fan of Himitsuri no Lagoon in English Lagoon Lounge since I made Visual Novel page with tropes. Since I was a fool to make a Video Game page of it I put something that sound like a conversation as I was new at the time and only did a few edits less than a week. There wasn't anything to put and left it there till I got a warning along with another that I didn't gave much details on the tropes. Beside that I need help with how to put the description of Author Appeal rather being confusing putting Muscles a lot of Muscle which sound weird, since English isn't my first language so I get loose and go off topic. With more tropes left blank without any details or clarification on some details of the tropes on the Character section. Also I really should get rid that fastball special because it only implies if a character is in the Butt Monkey trope. I like this site a lot since it showed me some words I couldn't imagine to be real.
edited 20th May '16 3:16:55 PM by LatterPoros
Since this site is fussy with grammar problems along with anything that starts a conversation which this site is really mostly an article and so I should read more of the threads of what can be blacklisted. Also avoid going to the area where you can get suspension for it which I should done more of my research here on this site along with I have to do. I should been asking often if my edits gone correctly and met the requirement that could not have me couldn't able to edit anymore.
edited 20th May '16 3:15:51 PM by LatterPoros
@Strafe2409: That will take some time to review completely. I will have the description and the first few examples reviewed later today.
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Welcome LatterPoros! This is how we work here. Post some examples you want to add and we will review the spelling and grammar. You may also ask questions about spelling and grammar if you want.
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For advice on writing trope examples, read How to Write an Example and also Zero-Context Example, I think you should also review Tips on Grammar.
You have run-on sentences in your above posts. Break them up into more sentences.
@Vylosipe27: You will have to link that topic, or duplicate your post here.
edited 20th May '16 2:04:08 PM by war877
These posts are too long imho. Sorry for that. Here is my first one. "Just my random thoughts. Imagine a short story about a man who lives a happy life and all that. Readers understand that a world around the hero far away from utopia and has its own issues, the hero doesn't. All right for him and his crowd and other people' opinion is not shown in the story. We realize that something wrong with the world (and the hero) based on our experience and author's description and possibly some hints. So this story hasn't got a conflict between the hero and the world, the hero and his family or friends and even between the hero and himself. Yes, creation of that kind of story would be a very difficult because author's ways to write it are extremely limited. But I don't think it is impossible. What do you think?" And here is the second. "Yes, that's what I meant too. At first I was talking about...er, more real stories. For a horror story it's debatable though. It should be a horror story for the reader. The hero must not know it until the end and even after. And this story, obviously, shouldn't have unhappy ending (like death, madness, etc.) but...what's the point then? Say Ray Bradbury's "The Third Expedition" doesn't make sense as a horror story without martians vs human conflict and its ending. But if we take his "Dark They Were, And Golden-Eyed", delete an atomic war/Harry's protest we get a story about people's changening/developing in case of need to adoptate to new conditions and it doesn't have a conflict, does it? Honestly I think as was said earlier there are conflicts by definition, in other terms "No conflict, no life". At this point of view a good story without conflict cannot exist. Even if the author haven't put in into the story readers will find that by oneself. It is a question of conflict's definitions after all. My answer to the question above is "Yes, if you mean by conflict the conflict you put in intentionally". Add to all I said before I must say a real problem will be unreliability of the writer's characters reactions to the hell which are going around them. So my example (change a little "Dark They Were, and Golden-Eyed" and you have a story you asked for) is not good enough. However I believe it has some potencial".
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@Strafe2409 post #2734, FIRST HALF.
RWBY: Ghost of Remnant is a crossover fanfiction between RWBY and Kamen Rider, specifically Kamen Rider Ghost written by striberx.
This is Remnant. The world where Huntsmen and Huntresses live. They are elite warriors dedicated to protecting the world by slaying Grimm. However, unknown to them, there is a new threat emerging from the afterlife. An evil race of extra-dimensional creatures who invisible to the normal human eye, and also Faunus,*1 and who like s to influence and even possessing them in order to commit evil acts. Those creatures are called Ganma.
Enter Cody Aldrich, the main character of the story and a Hunstman in trainee training from The Isle of the Dragon's Breath. After he defeats Roman Torchwick and his goons, he's invited by Headmaster Ozpin to accept*2 his offer to join Beacon Academy. However, prior to his enrollment, Cody retells his backstory to Ozpin, that he's was killed by an Ancient Grimm and he's was revived by a mysterious sage. The problem is, his resurrection is imperfect, as he is granted a limited half-life of about 99 days. In order to complete his ressurection resurrection, he must assemble all 15 Luminary Eyecons based off 15 different historical figures, otherwise he's dead for good. Ozpin understands and decides to enroll him into Beacon Academy.
Will Cody manage to assemble all Luminary Eyecons and come back to life? Thus does his adventure in Beacon Academy and Vale start s here.
The fanfic that covers Volume 1 can be read here, with the follow up based on Volume 2 can be read here.
RWBY: Ghost of Remnant provides examples of:
- Adaptational Badass: The original Kamen Rider Specternote◡ is more powerful than the original Kamen Rider Ghostnote◡, as the former is a seasoned fighter who easily curbstomped the latter. Specter here, on the other hand, not only retain his badassery like in the TV series, but he is also capable
to unleashof unleashing his family's Semblance, the "Sword of Light", which is regarded as the most powerful Semblance in Remnant's history. Not to mention, he's also the one who manages to scare Adam with bothofhis powers, as well as being the one and onlywhoperson to survivefromhis single stroke attack! - Badass Creed: The maxim of Saber family, as quoted by Axel.
quote: "A strong soul leads to a great future... A strong one will craft s a sharp blade to cut through the darkness."
- Back from the Dead: In the Chapter 2 of Volume 2, Kaito Kumon is now reborn in Remnant, seeking to challenge
toCody and Axel in order to gain his respect, by using his power as Kamen Rider Baron and Lord Baron. At the end of the chapter, hediscussingdiscusses with Tsukasa about something bad that will happen soon in Vale, presumably concerning Cinder's group and the White Fang movement, as well Ganma activities in Remnant. - Badass Family: Alongside
withRuby and Yang, this fic also introduces the Saber family, as Axel and Luna.isThey are the last surviving members of Saber family which is regarded as the owners of the most powerful Semblance in Remnant's history, as well as being thecurrent inheritorrightful owners of Saber mansion. Cody is also considered as a part of this family since his parents adopted him and Luna. - Badass Teacher: While all of the Beacon Academy staff are skilled Huntsmen and Huntresses, the most shining example of this
ficis Avian Cureoir, the avian Faunus and the inheritor of the first Multi-King's power as Kamen Rider OOO, despite that he's a substitute teacher.
Note: The examples I removed, I only removed because they had no grammar errors. Adaptational Heroism and Apologetic Attacker are both good.
Questions and feedback are welcome.
edited 20th May '16 4:55:55 PM by war877
Question 1: "Is this one new race or two?" Answer: It's another race live in Remnant.
Question 2: "This is off. Either he accepts the offer or he is invited, but not both in the same sentence." Answer: I just change it to "...he's invited by Headmaster Ozpin to join Beacon Academy."
Anyway, are you working for another part?
edited 21st May '16 4:46:51 AM by Strafe2409
@post #2734 @Strafe2409 This is the Second Half
- Big "WHAT?!": Happens in several chapters, mostly done by either Team RWBY or Team JNPR or even both.
- In Volume 1.
- Chapter 6: Team RWBY, surprised at Specter who shares the same Ghost Driver
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talks to them after the latter gives the former apep talk aboutthe former'stheir fear of death. - Chapter 13: Both Team RWBY and Team JNPR, shocked at Jacob and Mr. Belt
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- Chapter 18: Again, Team RWBY and Team JNPR shout
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- Chapter 6: Team RWBY, surprised at Specter who shares the same Ghost Driver
- In Volume 2.
- Chapter 3: Team RWBY and Team JNPR are thunderstruck
edwith Axel's Finishing Move which decimates not only the Monster of the Week, but alsothehalf of Saber mansion and the entire forest at the mountain side.
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adozens of Grimmwithand a silhouetted female figure. At the center of the backdrop was Beacon, with Team JNPR and Team RWBY on the left and right respectively,withCody and Axel in the middle,alongside withand Ore and Specter Parka Ghost floating above them. Finally,there'sAlain as Necrom appears behind both Cody and Axel. This foreshadows that something bad will come to Vale, thus all Riders in Vale must be prepared for whenthethisaforementionedproblemcomesarrives. - Heroic Lineage: All of the Saber family members are regarded as the greatest Hunstmen and Huntresses in Remnant, and one of them is King Arthur, Axel's ancestor. Yes, that King Arthur.
- Massive Multiplayer Crossover: Although not as much as Weiss Reacts, the fic itself pretty much
unitingunites all of the Kamen Rider series in the RWBY universe. So far, the fic features:- Kamen Rider Wizard: The Ringed Wizard appears in front of Ghost, Specter and Team RWBY when both Ghost Riders are overwhelmed by two Phantoms.
- Kamen Rider OOO: A Faunus OC named Avian Cureoir is depicted as a successor of the First OOO. Acting as a substitute teacher, he's reminding Axel/Specter to gain a greater power,
asso long as his desires do not overwhelm him. - Kamen Rider Drive: Krim Steinbelt AKA Mr. Belt and another original character named Jacob Crimson of Remnant's World Police appears to help Team RWBY, Team JNPR and Axel to solve a cargo theft that is caused by a Roidmude, all while proving Cody's innocence.
- Kamen Rider Decade: Tsukasa, Yusuke and Natsumi appear
sat Remnant. Both Tsukasa and Yusuke explainsthe number of Riders*3, as well as the feud between Showa Riders and Heisei Riders. - Kamen Rider Gaim: Kaito is now reborn in Remnant and seemingly
seekingseeks tochallangechallengetowardsCody and Axel. Kouta, on the other hand, briefly appears in front of Rubyby preventand prevents her from picking Helheim fruits when she's lost in Helheim Forest. Kouta also gives his Orange Lockseed to Ruby as a Memento MacGuffin for Cody before she returns to the real world.
- Phrase Catcher: Cody shouts Musashi Damashii's transformation announcement when he attacks Nora with
loafsbaguettes*4 asamakeshift twin swords.
- Shout-Out: In Chapter 3 of Volume 2, Axel as Specter Excalibur Damashii unleashes Excaliblast to finish off Alexander the Great Ganma.
- Sole Survivor: Both Axel and Luna are the last members of Saber family after their parents were killed by a mysterious person.
- Their First Time: During the second visit to The Isle of the Dragon's Breath, Axel and Weiss share
sa "good time" inside Axel's room with Weiss teaching Axel how to be a "good man".
Any feedback is welcome.
edited 21st May '16 6:19:12 PM by war877
@War 877:
- 1 I think I should change the words with this: "Both Team RWBY and Team JNPR, shocked at Jacob and Mr. Belt as the detective transforms as Kamen Rider Drive and his fight with Specter ensues."
- 2 Yes, it is. I decided to change the sentence with this: "Yang, while retaining her character aspects from canon, she takes many cues from Akari Tsukimura, as both are heroines who being supportive to The Hero in their respective media."
- 3 In Chapter 15 of Volume 1, Yang asks Tsukasa how many Riders appears in Remnant. Tsukasa answer to Yang there are 17 primary Riders with 16 secondary Riders from different era.
Also, I would like to add these tropes for RWBY: Ghost of Remnant page.
- Knight of Cerebus: While Cinder and her associates pretty much responsible for the tone shift in the story, Alain as Kamen Rider Necrom pretty much blows them all out of the water in terms of prescence and first debut. How do you ask? By curbstomping Cody with his powers, then proceed to incapacitate him by using a deadly Semblance which capable to bypass the Aura of humans and possibly Faunus. If not for Luna's Healing Hands, his career as a Huntsman in training will be done for good for the rest of his life, even if he's able to get his wish to live again.
- Love Confession: At the end of Chapter 5 of Volume 2, Yang finally confessing her love to Cody after she apologize to him for getting mad at him after she saw Cody gets along with Emerald.
- Megaton Punch: Done by Yang after she caught off Cody kissing Emerald.
- Rage Breaking Point: Cinder, who spent most of her time being calm, cunning and calculative, become pissed off after she learns there are two surviving members of Saber family.
Cinder: I... missed two?
[growls, with flames erupting in her hands as she accidentally slowly melts her Scroll]
Cinder: How? I thought that the Blue Devil was the only one, but TWO?!
[the room starting to steam with her anger]
Cinder: SABERS ONLY HAVE ONE CHILD! ONE! SO HOW CAN THERE BE TWO?!
edited 21st May '16 8:06:24 PM by Strafe2409
Oh, I forgot the errata:
Errata to part one:
- not only retain his badassery like in the TV series —> add s.
Errata to part two:
- Axel's reaction is obviously less than amused. —> Axel is obviously less than amused.
- Both Team RWBY and Team JNPR, shocked at Jacob and Mr. Belt as the detective transforms
asinto Kamen Rider Drive and his fight with Specter ensues. (I still don't see it.) - Yang, while retaining her character aspects from canon,
shetakes many cues from Akari Tsukimura, as both are heroineswho beingsupportive to The Heroes in their respective media. - In Chapter 15 of Volume 1, Yang asks Tsukasa how many Riders appear
sin Remnant. Tsukasa answers to Yang there are 17 primary Riders with 16 secondary Riders from different eras. (Oh I see. She literally explains.)
edited 21st May '16 8:24:03 PM by war877
@post #2739 ~Vylosipe 27: Sorry for the delay, as this thread can move slow, especially on the weekends. And welcome.
Just my random thoughts. Imagine a short story about a man who lives a happy life and all that. Readers will understand that a
the world around the hero is far away from utopia and has its own issues, but the hero doesn't. All is right with the world for him and his crowd, and other people's opinions is are not shown in the story. We realize that there is something wrong with the world, ( and the hero, ) based on our experience and the author's description and possibly some hints. So this story hasn't got a conflict between the hero and the world, the hero and his family or friends and or even between the hero and himself. Yes, the creation of that kind of story would be a very difficult exercise because an author's ways to write it are extremely limited. But I don't think it is impossible. What do you think?
Yes, that's what I meant too. At first I was talking about...—er, more real stories. For a horror story it's debatable though. It should be a horror story for the reader. The hero must not know it realise the truth until the end and or even after. And this story, obviously, shouldn't have an unhappy ending (like death, madness, etc.) but...—what's the point then? Say For example, Ray Bradbury's "The Third Expedition" doesn't make sense as a horror story without a martians vs human conflict and its ending. But if we take his "Dark They Were, And Golden-Eyed", delete an atomic war/Harry's protest we get a story about people's changeningchanging/developing in case of response to a need to adoptate adapt to new conditions and it doesn't have a conflict, does it? Honestly I think as was said earlier, there these are conflicts by definition, in other terms words "No conflict, no life". At With this point of view a good story without conflict cannot exist. Even if the author haven't hasn't put in one into the story, readers will find that by oneself one themselves. It is a question of conflict's definition s after all. My answer to the question above is "Yes, if you mean by conflict the conflict you put in intentionally". Add In addition to all that I have said before, I must say that a real problem will be the unreliability of the writer's characters' reactions to the hell which are is going on around them. So my example (change a little "Dark They Were, and Golden-Eyed" and you have a story you asked for) is not good enough. However I believe it has some potencial potiential.
Questions? Feedback? Don't hesitate to ask.
edited 22nd May '16 8:32:52 PM by war877
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@Strafe2409 Okay, here are the edited trope examples.
- Knight of Cerebus: While Cinder and her associates are pretty much responsible for the tone shift in the story, Alain as Kamen Rider Necrom pretty much blows them all out of the water in terms of
prescencepresence and how they first débuted. How,doyou may ask? By curbstomping Cody with his powers, then proceeding to incapacitate him by using a deadly Semblance which is capabletoof bypassing the Aura of humans and possibly Faunus. If not for Luna's Healing Hands, his career as a Huntsman in trainingwill bewould have been done forgood for the rest of his life, even if he'swas able to get his wish to live again. - Love Confession: At the end of Chapter 5 of Volume 2, Yang finally
confessingconfesses her love to Cody after she apologizes to him for getting mad at him after she saw Cody getsalong with Emerald. - Megaton Punch: Done by Yang after she caught
offCody kissing Emerald.
- Rage Breaking Point: Cinder, who spent most of her time being calm, cunning and calculative, becomes pissed off after she learns there are two surviving members of Saber family.
I have tropes for the Characters.Sentinels Of The Multiverse page.
Citizen's Hammer and Anvil
Debut: Villains of the Multiverse- :Title (Hammer): Arsonist of the Dawn:Title (Anvil): Guardian of the Dawn
When Citizen Dawn learned of Project Cocoon from Citizens Truth and Dare, she saw an opportunity to increase the ranks of the Citizens of the Sun with more super-powered individuals. She sent two of her best, Citizen Hammer and Citizen Anvil to find them, with their main target being The Visionary.
Citizen Hammer and Anvil have two character cards and share one deck, similar to The Chairman and The Operative's first incarnation. In battle, they use Position cards to grant them effects that let them double team their opponents.
- Auto-Revive: If Hammer is Incapacitated but Anvil is not, Anvil will revive Hammer to full health at the end of their turn. Bastion will destroy itself and restore Anvil's HP to 5 if he is Incapacitated while Bastion is in play.
- Arch-Enemy: The Visionary.
- Counter-Attack: Cover Fire lets Citizen Hammer deal fire damage to anyone who damages Citizen Anvil.
- Dual Boss: Similar to The Chairman and his Operative, Citizen Hammer and Citizen Anvil are two characters that use one deck. Both must be defeated for them to count as Incapacitated.
- Luckily, My Shield Will Protect Me: The Hammer & Shield reduces damage that Anvil takes by 1.
- Playing with Fire: Hammer provides most of the fire damage the duo deal.
- Rule of Three: The duo have three Positions: Bastion, Cover Fire, and Wildfire.
- Squishy Wizard: Citizen Hammer has the least HP of the team villains, with only 17, but can deal a lot of fire damage to the heroes quickly.
- Weapon Of Choice: Citizen Anvil's hammer and shield.

Someone expanded one of the FF 14 Character pages. And I want to add to the page in question a Meaningful Name entry for the Goblins:
edited 9th May '16 5:31:51 PM by MorningStar1337