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Edited by Mrph1 on Nov 16th 2023 at 5:37:57 PM
Sorry for really late reply for me. I appreciate your assistance.
BTW, I add new example and fix my old example in this list:
- Game-Breaker: Several battle gears and passives are this.
- Dragon Clan
- The Kabuki Warrior's Flash Powder will annoy any enemy. What makes it annoying is that it blinds them and weakens their resistance within an area of effect. It can boost your yang points and obliterate your enemies quickly. It's not surprising that Kabuki Warriors are considered top priority targets. Their only real drawback is that you must command the Kabuki Warrior to approach the enemy to use its Battle Gear.
- The Samurai's passive ability, Seppuku, is pretty devastating. The catch? You will become wary of them quickly when they come en masse and devastate your army with their passive ability. The only way to prevent any damage from their passive ability is to use the Staff Adept's Dark Canopy.
- Otomo's passive ability is Battle Leader. As long as he is attacking enemies, allied units will be filled with stamina, allowing them to use Battle Gear. It can be synergized with Issyl's Battle Gear, Haste, to make him become a nigh-endless stamina filler! Also works with the three brother from Lotus Clan.
- Serpent Clan
- The Swordsman's Mugging is a pain in the ass. It permanently erases any enemy Battle Gear and also has an AOE effect. It is more painful against Wolf units with Shale Armor or Lotus units. It doesn't works on Zen Master, though. The drawback is you must command your swordsman, use its Battle Gear, and attack any enemy in order to activate it.
- The Crossbowman's Weakness Bolt. It weakens their resistance and with good micromanagement skill for your Crossbowmen, they're pretty much nigh-unstoppable killing machines.
- Dragon Clan
PS. This example is not finished yet, I will coming back soon to edit this again.
edited 18th Apr '16 8:23:51 AM by Aurevoir
Okay, I am rafting a chaartcer page in the sandbox namespace for FF XIV...but I think I've one all I can with that page. That leaves the launching and well, the last thing I want is to get in trouble because I launched a page with bad grammar, so I'm gonna post parts of it here to se if there are any problems.
Lightning
Discipline: Gladiator
A l'Cie that was warped to Eorzea for unknown reasons.
- But Now I Must Go: She was eventually carried away by an unseen force to face the events to come in hew own realm. With a rekindled sense of determination thanks to the Adventurers.
Shanotto
Discipline: Black Mage
A mysterious Black Mage that came from another realm, who built a puppet to have Eorzea overwhelmed.
- Golem: She built a giant golem replica of herself for the purpose of conquering Eorzea in her name. The Golem however went haywire and was eventually fell and shrunk.
- Rhymes on a Dime: As is to be expected, she speaks in rhyme.
Iroha
Discipline: N/a
- Amnesiac Hero: She was warped to Eorzea with no memory of anything besides her Master and her mission to master Amatsu Kyori.
- Trapped in Another World: Unlike Lightning and Shantotto who was able to return to her own worlds, Iroha seems unable to return to Vana'diel. Her original timeline being erased by her and her master's actions might had something to do with it
Lady Lisette de Valentione
Discipline: N/a
- Valentine's Day Episode: the quests she is involved in serve as this.
Princess Edvya Thorne
A Past Princess of Ul'Dah's Thorne Dynasty who disguised herself as a peasant to see the world beyond her palace and seek adventure.- Prince and Pauper: She disguises herself as a miller's daughter to see the world outside the palace. With the miller's daughter taking her place. They got found out however and =Edvya's father, Sultan Bardic Thorne, desprately sent his army to look for her and destroyed the miller's house in his search.
- Posthumous Character: As a Historical Character of a bygone era this is a given. Her spirit had possessed a mammot made in her likeness.
Nanapasi
Discipline: N/a
One of two key characters in 2015's Little Ladies' Day event. He is attempting to recreate decorations from the Thonre Dynasty for his daughter Ninimo.
Ninimo
Discipline: N/a
Nanapasi's daughter and the other central character of 2015's Little Ladies' Day event.
The Songbirds
A trio of preteen Idol Singers formed for the Little Ladies Day festival, consisting of Ulala, Masha Mhakaracca and Narumi. The group's road to stardom has been a little rocky. They are the characters that 2016's event centers around.All 3 girls exhibit the following tropes:
- Color-Coded Characters: The Songbirds have a Primary Color Motif. Masha is Blue, Ulala is Red and Narumi is Yellow.
- Idol Singer: all three of them formed an idol group for the year's festival.
- Limited Wardrobe: Averted, All three girls will get new costumes the more popular they are.
Ulala
Discipline: N/a
- Hidden Depths: A minor case, but Ulala enjoys reading in her free time.
- Shout-Out: does the name "Ulala" ring any bells?
- To Be a Master: Ulala's goal is to become the best songstress in all of the realm.
Masha Mhakaracca
Discipline: N/a
- One Degree of Separation: Masha's surname and dialogue implies her to be the sister of Hildibrand's assistant Nashu, who the player might be familiar with doing the Hildibrand quests.
Narumi
Discipline: N/a
- Big Eater: Narumi says she has quite a large appetite.
- Fantasy-Forbidding Father: her father didn't want her to become an entertainer and took a while before letting her join the songbirds.
- Shrinking Violet: Narumi is very shy outside the stage. Which is why she wanted to be in the Songbirds.
- The Kabuki Warrior's Flash Powder will annoy any enemy. What makes it annoying is it blinds them and weakens their resistance within an area of effect. It can boost your yang points and obliterate your enemies quickly. It's not surprising why Kabuki Warriors are considered top priority targets. They only real drawback is you must command Kabuki Warrior to approach the enemy to use its Battle Gear.
- What makes it annoying is it blinds them -> What makes it annoying is that it blinds them
- It's not surprising why -> It's not surprising that
- They only real drawback is you must command Kabuki Warrior -> Their only real drawback is that you must command the Kabuki Warrior
- It can be synergized with Issyl's Battle Gear, Haste, to making him -> make him
- The Swordsman's Mugging is pain in the ass -> is a pain in the ass.
- It permanently erase -> erases
- and also AOE effect. -> and also has an AOE effect.
- More painful against Wolf units -> It is more painful against Wolf units
- in order to activates it. -> activate
- they're pretty much nigh-unstoppable killing machine. -> machines
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Hello MorningStar.
The Golem, however went haywire and was eventually felled and shrunk.
A Woman that appears to hails hail form the Far East
Unlike Lightning and Shantotto who was were able to return to her their own worlds
erased by her and her master's actions might have had something to do with it.
to see the world outside the palace . , with the miller's daughter
They got found out, however, and
Idol Singer: All three of them
Limited Wardrobe: Averted , . All three girls will get new more costumes the more popular they are.
who the player might be familiar with from doing the Hildibrand quests.
Fantasy-Forbidding Father: Her father didn't want
Narumi is very shy outside off the stage.
Feel free to comment on anything.
edited 13th Apr '16 12:20:02 PM by war877
For GARO: SSBR of Makai's main page:
Adding new words for Adaptational Badass:
- Even Raven, Qrow's sister also becomes this. She's not only protects Yang from Neo like in the original canon story, but also heals Rachel's wound from her battle with Neo. It's highly implied that she's also a member of Shadowfolks, as a Darkness Huntress.
- Darker and Edgier: Than the original source. However, thanks to the crossover with GARO franchise, this fic also being Bloodier and Gorier. Explicit scenes of violence and gore happens here and there, such as Body Horror, decapitation, cannibalism amongst Horrors, and body dismemberment with a healthy dose of either High-Pressure Blood or Gory Discretion Shot. In addition, Team RWBY (especially Ruby) are forced to explore the darker aspect of human hearts and humanity sins. On the flipside however, all the original action scenes are cranked Up To Eleven, several characters become an Adaptational Badass as some of them being a member of Makai Order, one of the supporting characters get Spared by the Adaptation and many more. Not to mention, there's one Fanservice moment when one of the protagonists have a sexual moment with Yang during the field trip at Mountain Glenn, all while the rest of the Team RWBY still sleeping.
For the character Sliver Green:
- Noble Wolf: Both literally and metaphorically. He maybe act like an ass, but he isn't devoid any compassion towards his friends. He even smiles and supports both Sirius and Ruby as a good couple.
- Would Hit a Girl: Done twice. During "The Shining Beacon" arc, he whacks Yang's head and scolds her for treating a weapon just merely a tool. The second is when Team RWBY, SSBR, JNPR, CFVY and all Beacon Academy staff managed to repel the Grimms, he smacks Ruby's head and suggest her to begin her training as a newborn Makai Knight or not, as there's no try. Needless to say, Beret really disapproves his behavior and forcing him to apologize.
edited 14th Apr '16 3:35:29 AM by Strafe2409
- Even Raven, Qrow's sister also becomes this. She's not only protects Yang from Neo like in the original canon story, but also heals Rachel's wound from her battle with Neo. It's highly implied that she's also a member of Shadowfolks, as a Darkness Huntress.
- Even Raven, Qrow's sister also becomes this. -> Even Raven, Qrow's sister, becomes this.
- She's not only -> She not only
- Darker and Edgier: Than the original source. However, thanks to the crossover with GARO franchise, this fic also being Bloodier and Gorier. Explicit scenes of violence and gore happens here and there, such as Body Horror, decapitation, cannibalism amongst Horrors, and body dismemberment with a healthy dose of either High-Pressure Blood or Gory Discretion Shot. In addition, Team RWBY (especially Ruby) are forced to explore the darker aspect of human hearts and humanity sins. On the flipside however, all the original action scenes are cranked Up To Eleven, several characters become an Adaptational Badass as some of them being a member of Makai Order, one of the supporting characters get Spared by the Adaptation and many more. Not to mention, there's one Fanservice moment when one of the protagonists have a sexual moment with Yang during the field trip at Mountain Glenn, all while the rest of the Team RWBY still sleeping.
- this fic also being -> this fic is also
- Explicit scenes of violence and gore happens -> happen
- Team RWBY (especially Ruby) are forced -> is forced
- and humanity sins. -> Either "human sins" OR "humanity's sins".
This entire section that begins with "On the flipside" is not an example of the trope and should be deleted, so I haven't corrected its errors.
- Noble Wolf: Both literally and metaphorically. He maybe act like an ass, but he isn't devoid any compassion towards his friends. He even smiles and supports both Sirius and Ruby as a good couple.
- He maybe act like an ass -> He may act like an ass
- but he isn't devoid any compassion -> but he isn't devoid of compassion
- Would Hit a Girl: Done twice. During "The Shining Beacon" arc, he whacks Yang's head and scolds her for treating a weapon just merely a tool. The second is when Team RWBY, SSBR, JNPR, CFVY and all Beacon Academy staff managed to repel the Grimms, he smacks Ruby's head and suggest her to begin her training as a newborn Makai Knight or not, as there's no try. Needless to say, Beret really disapproves his behavior and forcing him to apologize.
- treating a weapon just merely a tool. -> Either "as just a tool" OR "as merely a tool".
- all Beacon Academy staff -> all of the Beacon Academy staff
- managed to repel -> manage to repel
- suggest her to begin -> suggests that she begin
- disapproves his behavior and forcing him -> disapproves of his behavior and forces him
edited 16th Apr '16 6:23:59 AM by Arivne
Okay, here the rest of my sandbox page (If any Final Fanatsy XIV players that know tropes for the holiday quests are here, please let me know)
Jihli Aliapoh
Discipline: N/a
A Recurring character who appears around Hatching-Tide. A recent festival that she claims was granted to her by the Twelve Archons of the Sixth Astral Era.
- Cloud Cuckoolander: She claims to have dreams where heroes of a bygone age give her visions of the future, visions always involving eggs in some form. the fact that the dreams themselves tend to come true is another matter entirely. It's also worth noting that she call her assistants "Dreamers".
- Dreaming of Things to Come: Her dreams involving the Archons of the previous Astral Era are the reason this holiday exists in Eorzea, and according to her they predict events of the future.
Nonotta
Discipline: N/a
Motte
Discipline: N/a
The Continental Circus
Discipline: N/a
- Adult Fear: They once transformed children into voidsent, without the parents knowledge, the parents in turn are worried sick about them and thought they had vanished without a trace.
- Halloween Episode: Any quest involving them are guaranteed to be this.
- Shapeshifting: They can change the form of others into those of monsters, world leaders and other entities.
The Pumpkin-Headed Apparition
Discipline: N/a
The Saint of Nymeia
A leader of a band of Ishgardian Knights that brought in orphans and gave them succor, including their jackets to keep them warm. Clad in crimson and with a snowy beard, his methods had led to the Starlight Celebration.- Christmas Episode: If you read something about his deeds, chances are you're doing a quest about the Starlight Celebration
- Paper-Thin Disguise: in 2015's festival, Godbert donned the Saint's costume as part of the celebration, he also got his wife and the Guildmasters from the craftsman guild to disguise himself as the Saint's Little Helpers.
- Posthumous Character: He is mentioned only in reference a tale about the founding of the holiday.
Baelfaled
Discipline: N/a
For 2015's Starlight Celebration, The Adventurer's Guild wanted to revive a tradition involving The Starlight Bell. Baelfaled is the one in charge of fixing the bell for this purpose, but for some reason the bell isn't providing the traditional melody.
Hervey
Discipline: Goldsmith
A Goldsmith that is helping Baelfaled with the bell.
- True Meaning of Christmas: With the help of Julyan (disguised as the Saint's Little Helper), He realizes this is the problem with the bell. The Adventurer's Guild was using the event to build prestige and thus lost sight of the meaning of the Starlight Celebration (bringing miles to children) and were going overboard with the preparations. He then told Baelfaled of this while the Adventurers ensured the melody was as faithful as possible.
edited 15th Apr '16 12:39:42 AM by MorningStar1337
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...involving eggs in some form. The fact that the dreams...
It's also worth noting that she calls her assistants "Dreamers".
...Night of Devilry and are capable of using illusions, glamours and shapeshifitng.
- Adult Fear: They once transformed children into voidsent
,without the parents' knowledge,. The parents in turn are worried sick about them andthoughtthink theyhadhave vanished without a trace.
A mysterious figure that offers to help the Adventurer's Guild in salving solving the mystery of the missing children.
These characters are related to Eorzea's equivalent of Christmas.
...Clad in crimson and with a snowy beard, his methods had have led to the Starlight Celebration.
- Christmas Episode: If you read something about his deeds, chances are you're doing a quest about the Starlight Celebration.
- Paper-Thin Disguise: In 2015's festival, Godbert donned the Saint's costume as part of the celebration, and he also got his wife and the Guildmasters from the craftsman guild to disguise
himselfthemselves as the Saint's Little Helpers. - Posthumous Character: He is mentioned only in reference to a tale about the founding of the holiday.
...the meaning of the Starlight Celebration (bringing miles to children) and were going overboard with the preparations.
This last one, I don't know what miles are. If you want to explain the meaning, try a method other than using a parenthesized expression.
Feel free to comment.
edited 16th Apr '16 11:59:42 PM by war877
For Characters/FairyTailCrimeSorciere
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Add a new example for Jellal Fernandes.
- Berserk Button: Don't, just don't harm Erza or you will regret it. His anger is dead serious enough to make Kagura stutter in fear.
edited 19th Apr '16 9:29:08 AM by Aurevoir
Adding some new words and tropes for GARO: SSBR of Makai
For the main page:
- Double Entendre: At one point before Sirius and the rest of Team SSBR explain the origins of Horrors, Yang really likes Sirius' hobby and gives a compliment to him with this vibe.
Yang: If he good with the brush, I wouldn't mind if he paint on me.
- Hotter and Sexier: The original story largely devoid any sexual Fanservice content, other than Male Gaze. In this fic, it dives straight into this. Especially from Yang, now become The Tease towards Ruby and Sirius (and to the extent, Beret), as she alongside with Rachel doesn't hesitate to crack a sexual innuendo for her amusement. Not to mention, during the field trip at Mt. Glenn, she also deliberately make out (read: engaging a sexual activity) with Beret, while the rest of Team RWBY and Team SSBR still sleeping.
- "I Can't Look!" Gesture: During the "Painting the Town" arc, Blake close her eyes after watching Flare brutally executes a human hostage right in front of her and the rest of White Fang members, as she thinks that even though she was once a White Fang member, she doesn't mercilessly executing someone to get the point across, or just for shit and giggles.
For Team SSBR's description:
Team SSBR (pronounced "Saber") is a team comprised of selected young elites from Makai Order: Sirius Saejima, Sliver Green, Beret Vali and Rachel Gray. Unlike Team RWBY and JNPR, SSBR is created prior to their enrollment at Beacon Academy, though they're officially formed during the initiation. Despite being students, they are in fact working undercover to find out those who was responsible for Darkus' unsealing, all while protecting the students and humanity from Grimm and Horrors.
Tropes that applied to Team SSBR:
- The Dreaded: Regarded as one of the strongest team in Beacon Academy AND the whole Remnant due to all of them are young professionals trained from a very young age. Also, considering they always get along with Team RWBY and to the extent Team JNPR, no one would dare to harm them.
For character Sirius Saejima:
- Would Hit a Girl: When he caught Emerald using her illusion power to screw the match between Penny and Pyrrha, he uses his "Rejection" Semblance and punch her, before he asks her Cinder's whereabout.
For Sliver Green:
- Badass Boast: Deliver twice to Adam during "The Battle of Beacon" arc.
- When Adam labeled him as a traitor and asks why a Faunus like him fight to protect humans, he responds with this.
Sliver: It's not my place to pass judgement, but simply protect.- Another one is when he and Beret facing Adam, after the bull Faunus turned into Horror after stabs himself with a Horror blade given from Cinder.
Sliver: For your crime against innocent people and you're cutting our friend's arm off, as well every family you hurt, we well cut down your Inga... FOR GOOD! - Berserk Button: He doesn't care if people call him a "flea bag" or anything else. But if you call him "Wolf Boy", he will beat you into a pulp.
- Also, never mess with his friends, especially from Team RWBY. Adam have learnt this in hard way after he kicks Blake down and slices Yang's right arm.
- Wife-Basher Basher: Despite what he done to Yang and Ruby, when he saw Adam attempts to kill Blake, he's more than happy to engage him mano a mano.
Sliver: When you start attacking people and kicking Blaked down, it become my business. And that makes you my business!
edited 20th Apr '16 1:31:20 AM by Strafe2409
Technically this isn't improper English, but when changed it sounds better.
gives a compliment to him -> gives him a compliment
- The original story largely devoid any -> The original story is largely devoid of any
- now become -> who becomes
- and to the extent, Beret -> and to an extent, Beret
- as she alongside with Rachel -> as she (along with Rachel)
- she also deliberately make out -> she also deliberately makes out
- engaging a sexual activity -> engaging in sexual activity
- still sleeping -> are still sleeping
- Blake close her eyes -> Blake closes her eyes
- watching Flare brutally executes -> watching Flare brutally execute
- she doesn't mercilessly executing -> she doesn't mercilessly execute
- from Makai Order -> from the Makai Order
- to find out those who was -> to find out who was
- one of the strongest team -> one of the strongest teams
- and to the extent -> and to an extent
- Would Hit a Girl: When he caught Emerald using her illusion power to screw the match between Penny and Pyrrha, he uses his "Rejection" Semblance and punch her, before he asks her Cinder's whereabout.
- to screw the match -> to screw up the match? to interfere in the match?
- he uses his "Rejection" Semblance and punch her -> he...punches her
- whereabout -> whereabouts
- When Adam labeled him as a traitor and asks why a Faunus like him fight to protect humans, he responds with this.
- When Adam labels him as a traitor and asks why a Faunus like him fights...
- Another one is when he and Beret facing Adam, after the bull Faunus turned into Horror after stabs himself with a Horror blade given by Cinder.
Sliver: For your crime against innocent people and you're cutting our friend's arm off, as well every family you hurt, we well cut down your Inga... FOR GOOD!
- Another one is when he and Beret facing Adam, after the bull Faunus turned into Horror after stabs himself with a Horror blade given by Cinder.
- he and Beret facing Adam -> he and Beret are facing Adam
- Faunus turned into Horror after stabs -> Faunus is turned into a Horror after stabbing
- you're cutting -> your cutting
- as well every family you hurt, we well -> as well as every family you hurt, we will
- Berserk Button: He doesn't care if people call him a "flea bag" or anything else. But if you call him "Wolf Boy", he will beat you into a pulp.
- Also, never mess with his friends, especially from Team RWBY. Adam have learnt this in hard way after he kicks Blake down and slices Yang's right arm.
Another non-error: "he will beat you into a pulp." would normally be written as "he will beat you to a pulp."
- Adam have learnt this in hard way -> Adam learns this the hard way
Example Indentation says that you can't have a single entry at the 2nd (or lower) level of indentation. To make it legal, change it as follows:
- Berserk Button
- He doesn't care if people call him a "flea bag" or anything else. But if you call him "Wolf Boy", he will beat you to a pulp.
- Also, never mess with his friends, especially from Team RWBY. Adam learns this the hard way after he kicks Blake down and slices Yang's right arm.
- Wife-Basher Basher: Despite what he done to Yang and Ruby, when he saw Adam attempts to kill Blake, he's more than happy to engage him mano a mano.
Sliver: When you start attacking people and kicking Blaked down, it become my business. And that makes you my business!
- what he done to -> what he did to
- when he saw Adam attempts -> when he sees Adam attempt
- Blaked -> Blake
- it become -> it becomes
edited 20th Apr '16 2:19:20 AM by Arivne
So I checked Tier Induced Scrappy/Pokemon. The original version wasn't great. (who cares about 6 Klefki when you can have 6 Arceus?) So I decided to edit the Mega Rayquaza one, but my grammar isn't the best.
My edit:
- Mega Rayquaza takes this Up To Eleven. Upon Mega Evolution from the already powerful Rayquaza, all its stats were boosted enough to be a Lightning Bruiser. In addition, Mega Rayquaza gains Delta Stream, an ability that not only cancels all weather effects, it also weakens the weaknesses of Flying-type. Therefore, Rock-type and Ice-type moves are no longer as effective as on Mega Rayquaza. But what makes broken than every other mega evolutons is that Rayquaza doesn't require a Mega Stone to Mega Evolve, instead requiring a powerful Flying-type move, Dragon Ascent to Mega Evolve. In other word, Mega Rayquaza can hold any item that other Mega Evolutions can't. Mega Rayquaza is provided to be so insanely powerful that it was the first Pokémon to be banned in Uber by Smogon, a tier called Anything Goes is created just for Mega Rayquaza with most of the clause removed.
edited 21st Apr '16 4:23:49 AM by flamemario12
- Mega Rayquaza takes this Up To Eleven. Upon Mega Evolution from the already powerful Rayquaza, all its stats were boosted enough to be a Lightning Bruiser. In addition, Mega Rayquaza gains Delta Stream, an ability that not only cancels all weather effects, it also weakens the weaknesses of Flying-type. Therefore, Rock-type and Ice-type moves are no longer as effective as on Mega Rayquaza. But what makes broken than every other mega evolutons is that Rayquaza doesn't require a Mega Stone to Mega Evolve, instead requiring a powerful Flying-type move, Dragon Ascent to Mega Evolve. In other word, Mega Rayquaza can hold any item that other Mega Evolutions can't. Mega Rayquaza is provided to be so insanely powerful that it was the first Pokémon to be banned in Uber by Smogon, a tier called Anything Goes is created just for Mega Rayquaza with most of the clause removed.
- all its stats were boosted -> all its stats are boosted (as per How to Write an Example - Write in Present Tense)
- weakens the weaknesses of Flying-type. -> reduces Flying-type weaknesses. (?)
- no longer as effective as on Mega Rayquaza -> no longer as effective on Mega Rayquaza
- But what makes broken than -> But what makes it more broken than
- than every other mega evolutons -> than every other Mega Evolution OR than other Mega Evolutions
- Dragon Ascent to Mega Evolve. -> Dragon Ascent. (You already said "to Mega Evolve" earlier in the sentence).
- In other word -> In other words
- Mega Rayquaza is provided to be so insanely powerful -> Mega Rayquaza is so insanely powerful
- Smogon, a tier called Anything Goes is created -> Smogon, and a tier called Anything Goes was created
edited 21st Apr '16 4:20:18 AM by Arivne
Adding new tropes for Kamen Rider Amazons' trivia page:
- Dueling Shows: Because of its violent and dark premise and the fact that it is for an adult audience, one of the writers is Yasuko Kobayashi, as well the genre is a horror-action drama, many toku fans thinks this is an attempt by Toei to compete with GARO franchise. Coincidentally, the sixth live-action and Spin-Off Makai Retsuden will begin airing around the same month as this series, although it aired a week later.
edited 22nd Apr '16 7:03:03 AM by Strafe2409
Hi. There is a large chance I misinterpreted this one as the grammar was rather ambiguous. If the first sentence contained a list embedded inside a list, it will need to be reedited.
Dueling Shows: Because of Given its violent and dark premise, and the fact that it is for an adult audience, one of the writers is being Yasuko Kobayashi, as well and the genre is being a horror-action drama, many toku fans thinks think this is an attempt by Toei to compete with the GARO franchise. Coincidentally, the sixth live-action and Spin-Off Makai Retsuden will begin airing around the same month as this series, although it aired about a one week later.
The last sentence has the problem of talking about a future event. This is against site policy, as all future events will eventually be past events. I do not know how to fix that.
edited 22nd Apr '16 7:52:51 AM by war877
I have tropes for Sentinels Of The Multiverse:
- Attack Deflector: The Maze of Mirrors in Madame Mittermeier’s Fantastical Festival of Conundrums & Curiosities redirects the first source of damage a target would deal during each turn to itself.
- Amusement Park of Doom: Madame Mittermeier’s Fantastical Festival of Conundrums & Curiosities. It's as much fun as you'd expect it to be.
- Back from the Dead: Mr. Fixer was killed by the Operative. Zhu Long then used magic at his temple to revive Mr. Fixer and turn into a brainwashed minion.
- In game, the Rites of Revival card in the Temple of Zhu Long environment deck lets the heroes recreate this situation. At the end of the environment card the heroes can discard cards from their hand, and if enough cards are discarded an incapacitated hero is revived and returned to the game. Any hero brought back this way cannot damage environment targets however, preventing them from fighting back against Zhu Long and his assassins.
- Deader than Dead: Gone Without A Trace, a card in Madame Mittermeier’s Fantastical Festival of Conundrums & Curiosities, causes the target with the lowest HP to deal itself five damage if the conditions are right. Any target that destroys itself this way removes itself and Gone Without A Trace from the game.
- Hall of Mirrors: Fittingly there is a Maze of Mirrors in Madame Mittermeier’s Fantastical Festival of Conundrums & Curiosities. The card has two effects: The first effect redirects the first damage dealt by a target to itself in each turn. The second treats every instance of the word 'villain' on hero cards as if it was the word 'hero' instead.
- Non-Lethal K.O.: Whenever a hero target runs out of HP, they are incapacitated and unable to actively participate in the fight. They can still help out as they still get to take their turn, but they only get to select one of three options listed on the incapacitated side of their card instead of their normal actions.
- Overly Long Name: Madame Mittermeier’s Fantastical Festival of Conundrums & Curiosities.
edited 26th Apr '16 12:46:09 PM by Kingofsouls
I am a figment of your imagination
Hello Kingofsouls, I will edit that shortly.
- Back from the Dead: Mr. Fixer was killed by the Operative. Zhu Long then used magic at his temple to revive Mr. Fixer and turn him into a brainwashed minion.
- In game, the Rites of Revival card in the Temple of Zhu Long environment deck lets the heroes recreate this situation. At the end of the turn the environment card was played during, the heroes can discard cards from their hand, and if enough cards are discarded, an incapacitated hero is revived and returned to the game. Any hero brought back this way cannot damage environment targets however, preventing them from fighting back against Zhu Long and his assassins.
The rest is good.
edited 28th Apr '16 12:16:49 AM by war877

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