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kay4today Princess Ymir's knightess from Austria Since: Jan, 2011
Princess Ymir's knightess
#126: May 3rd 2012 at 9:51:40 PM

I'm glad that Itachi killed Kurenai before she would have become a true Mary Sue. I still think the way she got out of Tsukuyomi didn't make any sense whatsoever.

alethiophile Shadowed Philosopher from Ëa Since: Nov, 2009
Shadowed Philosopher
#127: May 3rd 2012 at 9:53:43 PM

Well, depends on how you imagine Tsukuyomi to work. I'm not sure whether or not it was good on that level, but it was certainly very narratively satisfying.

Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)
Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#128: May 3rd 2012 at 9:54:55 PM

I think that was terrible. Tsukiyomi shouldn't be beaten by having some sick fantasy about your student being raped. Seriously, Kurenai. What the fuck.

dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar
#129: May 3rd 2012 at 9:59:20 PM

[up] Wait, what?

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Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#130: May 3rd 2012 at 10:04:09 PM

Well she fantasizes about Hinata being tortured beaten and raped (all at the same time) to make it more "realistic" but in actuality showing that she is completely fucking twisted and so fucked up in the head Tsukiyomi doesn't work on her, and Itachi was like WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU? and killed her for being the most disturbing Mary Sue Author Avatar he'd seen in a long time.

Immi Since: May, 2009 Relationship Status: I know
#131: May 3rd 2012 at 10:05:00 PM

[up] ...What?

Oh forget it. Regardless of my own thoughts on the story, the above made me laugh. I am a horrible person.

edited 3rd May '12 10:05:56 PM by Immi

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kay4today Princess Ymir's knightess from Austria Since: Jan, 2011
Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#133: May 3rd 2012 at 10:06:14 PM

The part about her fantasizing about Hinata being raped/tortured etc actually happened, the rest is my interpretation because the explanation given in-story makes no fucking sense.

alethiophile Shadowed Philosopher from Ëa Since: Nov, 2009
Shadowed Philosopher
#134: May 3rd 2012 at 10:12:05 PM

...Um, no. What happened was that Itachi pulled a scenario out of her subconscious to torture her with, that included Hinata getting beaten/raped/etc. She then forced the world of Tsukuyomi to follow its own rules and let Naruto react realistically; he, predictably enough, unbound Kyuubi and surprised Itachi enough to throw him, and hence her, out of the illusion. Whether it works mechanically depends on how you're defining Tsukuyomi to work, but it's not in any sense a testament to Kurenai's state of mind.

Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)
Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#135: May 3rd 2012 at 10:14:34 PM

No, she made up the stuff about Hinata being raped and such. She demonized the entire leaf village (as she does) and it was apparently more "realistic". I double checked by rereading that part, she went into way too much detail about Shino and Hinata being tortured and such. Absolutely sickening and really weak writing in an attempt to be edgy.

I'm reading it right now: Itachi's version is incredibly tame in comparison to the sick shit she comes up with. All she does is make things more and more morbid and graphic and harder to keep down my lunch.

edited 3rd May '12 10:17:17 PM by Saiga

kay4today Princess Ymir's knightess from Austria Since: Jan, 2011
Princess Ymir's knightess
#136: May 3rd 2012 at 10:14:51 PM

[up][up] ... Which doesn't make any sense whatsoever to me. It's Itachi who controls this world, Kurenai can't do anything. Or rather, she shouldn't be able to do anything IMO.

edited 3rd May '12 10:15:43 PM by kay4today

Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#137: May 3rd 2012 at 10:17:53 PM

She isn't according to canon, but in this she's allowed to have all the sick fantasies she wants.

kay4today Princess Ymir's knightess from Austria Since: Jan, 2011
Princess Ymir's knightess
#138: May 3rd 2012 at 10:21:41 PM

So, Itachi's a case of Even Evil Has Standards in this story? tongue

edited 3rd May '12 10:22:00 PM by kay4today

Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#139: May 3rd 2012 at 10:22:28 PM

That or he's a fucking hero.

alethiophile Shadowed Philosopher from Ëa Since: Nov, 2009
Shadowed Philosopher
#140: May 3rd 2012 at 10:24:03 PM

...I'm not going to explain further, since you seem to feel the need to try to read everything as confirming your dislike of the story. As noted earlier, if you don't like it you're absolutely free to avoid it.

Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)
Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#141: May 3rd 2012 at 10:25:00 PM

What dislike? Maybe you shouldn't assume things. Sure, I dislike that, but only because it's terrible writing that contradicts canon and makes the author look like a sick fuckbag.

kay4today Princess Ymir's knightess from Austria Since: Jan, 2011
Princess Ymir's knightess
#142: May 3rd 2012 at 10:25:33 PM

[up][up] And you seem to feel the need to try to read everything as confirming your like of the story. wink

[up] Thankfully, Itachi was there to save the world from this sick person called Kurenai. A true hero. cool

edited 3rd May '12 10:28:36 PM by kay4today

dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar
#143: May 3rd 2012 at 10:32:43 PM

My opinion on this fanfic is considerably influenced.

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Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#144: May 3rd 2012 at 10:35:22 PM

[up][up] Even if he's twisted into a villain, I'm not sure anything could damage the good karma he earned by killing Kurenai.

kay4today Princess Ymir's knightess from Austria Since: Jan, 2011
Princess Ymir's knightess
#145: May 3rd 2012 at 10:37:48 PM

One of the most important things about it:

Kurenai = Villain Protagonist

Itachi = Hero Antagonist

cool

[up] Indeed!

edited 3rd May '12 10:38:03 PM by kay4today

NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#146: May 4th 2012 at 4:59:52 AM

I used to kinda like this story until I read on all the criticism on it.

Not that I mind, actually. I kinda think it opened my eyes.

Nitramy Evil-Smiting Umbrella from Antipolo City, PH Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
Evil-Smiting Umbrella
#147: May 4th 2012 at 7:09:49 AM

[up] My take on it is simply haters gonna hate.

And if you want to waste your time shooting a story like this full of holes, wouldn't it be better for you to pull a Bender and just start your own fanfic? With blackjack and hookers all of the things you hate about this gone and all the things you'd like put in?

edited 4th May '12 7:11:44 AM by Nitramy

Neither goony beard-men nor rainbow-haired she-twinks will stand in the way of my dreams!
Saiga Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
#148: May 4th 2012 at 7:14:58 AM

White Knights gonna White Knight.evil grin

That's a terrible reason to write a fanfic.

edited 4th May '12 7:15:21 AM by Saiga

NexusCell Don't Touch My Car from Where the Wind Blows Since: Feb, 2011
Don't Touch My Car
#149: May 4th 2012 at 8:31:31 PM

[up] Nonsense! Those Lacking Spines started as a troll/hatefic, and look at where it went off to!

edited 4th May '12 8:32:08 PM by NexusCell

Don't Stop Me Now...
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#150: May 4th 2012 at 8:35:04 PM

B-But I already have fanfics of my own...

Anyway, Let's See YOU Do Better! is a terrible excuse for a defense.


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