Well, depends on how you imagine Tsukuyomi to work. I'm not sure whether or not it was good on that level, but it was certainly very narratively satisfying.
Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)Well she fantasizes about Hinata being tortured beaten and raped (all at the same time) to make it more "realistic" but in actuality showing that she is completely fucking twisted and so fucked up in the head Tsukiyomi doesn't work on her, and Itachi was like WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU? and killed her for being the most disturbing Mary Sue Author Avatar he'd seen in a long time.
...Um, no. What happened was that Itachi pulled a scenario out of her subconscious to torture her with, that included Hinata getting beaten/raped/etc. She then forced the world of Tsukuyomi to follow its own rules and let Naruto react realistically; he, predictably enough, unbound Kyuubi and surprised Itachi enough to throw him, and hence her, out of the illusion. Whether it works mechanically depends on how you're defining Tsukuyomi to work, but it's not in any sense a testament to Kurenai's state of mind.
Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)No, she made up the stuff about Hinata being raped and such. She demonized the entire leaf village (as she does) and it was apparently more "realistic". I double checked by rereading that part, she went into way too much detail about Shino and Hinata being tortured and such. Absolutely sickening and really weak writing in an attempt to be edgy.
I'm reading it right now: Itachi's version is incredibly tame in comparison to the sick shit she comes up with. All she does is make things more and more morbid and graphic and harder to keep down my lunch.
edited 3rd May '12 10:17:17 PM by Saiga
So, Itachi's a case of Even Evil Has Standards in this story?
edited 3rd May '12 10:22:00 PM by kay4today
...I'm not going to explain further, since you seem to feel the need to try to read everything as confirming your dislike of the story. As noted earlier, if you don't like it you're absolutely free to avoid it.
Shinigan (Naruto fanfic)One of the most important things about it:
Kurenai = Villain Protagonist
Itachi = Hero Antagonist
Indeed!
edited 3rd May '12 10:38:03 PM by kay4today
My take on it is simply haters gonna hate.
And if you want to waste your time shooting a story like this full of holes, wouldn't it be better for you to pull a Bender and just start your own fanfic? With blackjack and hookers all of the things you hate about this gone and all the things you'd like put in?
edited 4th May '12 7:11:44 AM by Nitramy
Neither goony beard-men nor rainbow-haired she-twinks will stand in the way of my dreams!B-But I already have fanfics of my own...
Anyway, Let's See YOU Do Better! is a terrible excuse for a defense.

I'm glad that Itachi killed Kurenai before she would have become a true Mary Sue. I still think the way she got out of Tsukuyomi didn't make any sense whatsoever.