Banned for endorsing
The common misconception
That 5-7-5
Is a proper form and not
A fraction of a renga.
edited 22nd Nov '10 9:51:06 AM by RobinZimm
Banned because, though haikus rock,
'Tis more fun to rhyme ad hoc.
^^Far be it from me to lecture anybody on haiku form, but from my layman's perspective, the idea is to have three seperate thoughts that are five, seven, and five syllables long. What you have done is taken one nineteen-syllable thought and just chopped it up to fit like cookie dough.
edited 22nd Nov '10 1:00:59 PM by Artemis92
Ponders too much; thinks too little. Currently goes by Knowlessman.Banned because I hate this.
Makes posts long to write. It makes me hiss.
oh, that's why I need this binary mind // ⌘Banned in the name of the purple cow:
A verse whose poet hates it.
I know that rhyming's over now,
But I slept through that part of the game.
Banned for not playing the game
That everyone else was playing.
With all but one, it isn't the same
And that is what I am...
^^Funky chainsaws. Who the hell is he?
edited 22nd Nov '10 3:24:27 PM by Artemis92
Ponders too much; thinks too little. Currently goes by Knowlessman.

Banned because this thread is now about rhymes;
Codes have been done over nine thousand times.
Two memes, one stone.
EDIT: Whoops, sorry BlackWolfe.
edited 22nd Nov '10 8:19:35 AM by Artemis92
Ponders too much; thinks too little. Currently goes by Knowlessman.