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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#240001: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:02:00 PM

Yes to Gruda, Brown, and Jax.

On the RWBY keepers, we actually had to work a bit to get Arthur Watts up. I remember Lighty saying no one from that season counted, which surprised me since I thought Watts was an obvious keeper. I pushed for an effort post anyways and the consensus was that he counted.

Hell, we even later cut him from Magnificent Bastard for being too vile. Go figure.

Think you're tough because you made it through Lord of the Rings? Real men survive The Silmarillion.
TiMBer1566 kittykat from Virginia Since: Nov, 2018 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
kittykat
#240002: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:07:51 PM

I was against Watts counting at first, mainly due to the fact that as bad as he is, I didn't think he was on the level of either Cinder or Adam, as well as the fact that his partner is a psychopathic lunatic with a love for killing who makes Watts look tame in comparison.

Edited by TiMBer1566 on Dec 12th 2020 at 9:09:09 AM

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#240003: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:10:56 PM

For me, it was the fact that Watts did in one season that Cinder took 3 three. He brought a city to its knees, condemning everyone there to freeze to slowly freeze to death and make for a massive Grimm invasion.

Think you're tough because you made it through Lord of the Rings? Real men survive The Silmarillion.
SumDumNerd LOCKDOWN PROCEDURES ENGAGED from [REDACTED] Since: May, 2017 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
LOCKDOWN PROCEDURES ENGAGED
#240004: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:41:42 PM

[tup] Gruda and Brown

As for Jax, I think him jumping on top of her to protect her from bullets is just one of the things he does to show that he really does care for her, but lets his ambitions grow too large. Yes, I admit that I missed the part about him not wanting to rely on her power to survive anymore, but even if I somehow misunderstood something, its not a "blatant misrepresentation of canon". I'm not just making shit up to mislead people and downplay the character. So while I guess I did miss a line or two in my discussion, I still say [tdown] to Jax. I think there's enough evidence that he legitimately cares for his sister and homeland, and only goes as far as he does because he thinks it's what she wants as well.

Speaking of RWBY, good freakin' luck to whoever has it reserved; the latest episode's developments will result in either a big cut or a controversial keep.

Edited by SumDumNerd on Dec 12th 2020 at 8:42:33 AM

Read Slender Man vs Siren Head 2: The Foundation here
TiMBer1566 kittykat from Virginia Since: Nov, 2018 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
kittykat
#240005: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:46:02 PM

[up] I don't think what we've learned in today's episode is enough to establish a cut, as we have many keepers with abusive pasts, but who knows what will happen later on down the line.

Edited by TiMBer1566 on Dec 12th 2020 at 9:46:57 AM

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#240006: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:47:44 PM

After reading that episode recap, yeah, it's going to be a very interesting conversation.

Edited by LoreDeluxe on Dec 12th 2020 at 8:52:44 AM

Think you're tough because you made it through Lord of the Rings? Real men survive The Silmarillion.
erazor0707 (4 Score & 7 Years Ago) Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
#240007: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:48:24 PM

... Sounds like a good time to catch up in time for discussion if this is what I think it is.

Keep it on the down low though until it's time.

Edited by erazor0707 on Dec 12th 2020 at 11:48:49 AM

SumDumNerd LOCKDOWN PROCEDURES ENGAGED from [REDACTED] Since: May, 2017 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
LOCKDOWN PROCEDURES ENGAGED
#240008: Dec 12th 2020 at 8:52:05 PM

[up][up] Yeah, good luck, Lighty. You'll have a lot of work to do when the volume ends. [lol]

Read Slender Man vs Siren Head 2: The Foundation here
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#240009: Dec 12th 2020 at 9:04:54 PM

This is the last thing I will say about Jax now that it's been decided:

In any other circumstance, Jax jumping in front of his sister to protect her would showcase that he genuinely cares for her, except this situation is unique - he literally cannot survive without her. If she dies, then he's screwed. Besides the few times that her life is in immediate danger, he shows that if he could live without her, then he absolutely would - in fact, just like Beast described, he has tried to drain her aura completely in the past (which, I feel the need to repeat, would have literally killed her), and when she tried to disagree with him and make him retreat so that he could continue to live, he drained her aura (on an open battlefield no less) and forced her to stay. I don't think it's much of a stretch to say that the few times that he tries to "protect" her, he's really just protecting himself.

I did not mean to imply that you were making shit up, that was a poor choice of words on my part that I apologize for. I just don't see where you get the impression that he cares for her.

And yeah, I can already tell these next few episodes are gonna become very critical when it comes to this thread.

Edited by STARCRUSHER99 on Dec 12th 2020 at 9:05:35 AM

Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#240010: Dec 12th 2020 at 9:09:26 PM

As Shocking as the episode was(Most of you have no idea how Cruel this joke is) at this point I think it would be best to keep talk on it down for now.

[tup] to Jax, and Now the franchise has given a CM based on Jack from Jack and Jill. So that's something.

Also, I've come to view Watts as easily bad enough TBH do to how his Crimes seem to add up when you consider all of them...he has both Trying to freeze a whole city to death, starting a Grimm invasion, and also Orchestrated the massacre of Robyns supporters, and it was thanks to his Virus cinder was able to so alot of what she did at Beacon.

Edited by Snoketrope on Dec 12th 2020 at 10:39:40 AM

Bow to the Prototype
DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
nwotyzal Since: Sep, 2019
#240012: Dec 12th 2020 at 9:15:53 PM

Does anyone mind PM'ing me about what happened?

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#240013: Dec 12th 2020 at 9:22:58 PM

Yeah, seriously guys stop talking about it here.

SumDumNerd LOCKDOWN PROCEDURES ENGAGED from [REDACTED] Since: May, 2017 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
UltimateDemonBeast65 Since: Feb, 2018
#240016: Dec 13th 2020 at 1:54:41 AM

Anyone wanna discuss in PM about the RWBY episode that came out today?

ACW from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#240017: Dec 13th 2020 at 2:45:07 AM

Sure to Jax (I'll trust everyone that he's heinous enough, though heading a Human Trafficking operation seems to fit the bill), Gruda (the work in case anyone forgot), and Brown.

Also: Scripts

Edited by ACW on Dec 13th 2020 at 6:00:36 AM

falcontalons from Earth-2 Since: Apr, 2019
NTG Since: Aug, 2014
CloisterTheStupid from Oop North Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
#240020: Dec 13th 2020 at 4:18:39 AM

[tup] to Gruda and Brown; switch to [tup] to Jax. Cut Bobby and Lyndon.

ACW from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#240021: Dec 13th 2020 at 6:55:56 AM

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Edited by ACW on Dec 13th 2020 at 9:57:23 AM

STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#240022: Dec 13th 2020 at 7:06:29 AM

Looks good to me. Out of curiosity, how many Star Wars CMs does that make?

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#240023: Dec 13th 2020 at 7:08:49 AM

Gonna repost my Deverall rewrite since only one person commented and I don't wanna assume that makes it unanimous:

  • Griffin Ranger: Deverall is a monstrous scientist commissioned to create and release a genocidal plague to wipe out the griffins and hanz. Putting his subjects through torturous experiments, Deverall even forces the captive griffins to rape one-another to produce eggs to incubate the virus and swiftly kills those he finds useless by repeatedly infecting them with strains of the virus. Ordered to terminate the griffins by his superior, Deverall instead kills only half, attempting to keep the rest as a private "zoo" for himself to enjoy tormenting.

ACW from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#240024: Dec 13th 2020 at 7:09:34 AM

Oh, right. Works for me.

As to how many Star Wars monsters...a LOT.

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#240025: Dec 13th 2020 at 7:24:09 AM

What ACW said, it's got the page if you'd like to go count yourself.


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