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TheAlmightyKingPrawn The Dotted Line from Surrounding the mind of A Self Called Nowhere Relationship Status: Dancing with Captain Jack Harkness
The Dotted Line
Sep 11th 2019 at 7:43:57 AM

[tup] Harcourt

Life is like a hurricane.
Sep 11th 2019 at 8:06:12 AM

[tup] to Lord Harcourt Fitzwilliam. Talk about subtle meaningful names.

Edited by MGD107 on Sep 11th 2019 at 8:09:19 AM

KazuyaProta Porky from A Industrial Farm Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Porky
Sep 11th 2019 at 8:12:23 AM

[tup] SCP-106

[tup] Harcourt Fitzwilliams

To Elfen: Hattori's entry is good, I added pot holes and a very slight correction.

Good luck Bullman

Edited by KazuyaProta on Sep 11th 2019 at 10:13:58 AM

Watch me destroying my country
miraculous I am a link in a chain from South Africa
I am a link in a chain
Sep 11th 2019 at 8:21:19 AM

  • Asura/Another Gaim is a member of Team Baron who, after being kicked out by Kaito Kumon, was transformed into an Another Rider by Swartz and used his power to always be on the top. Asura sends any who question him or get in his way like Kaito and Geiz Myoukouin—which he did to stop him saving civilians attacked by Ora and Swartz— to an artificial version of Helheim Forest, isolating them for five years until they were finally released. In this eldritch and visceral forest, Asura has monsters that will hunt his victims down, caring for no one but himself and his dreams.

  • The Fade: Jaime "Jim" Pratt is Shannon's seemingly loving boyfriend but is in truth a depraved Serial Killer. Having a life long lust for his sister Kaitlyn, Jim attempted to force himself on her for him to rightfully reject him out of disgust. Jim then murdered her my having her bound and gagged and then walling her alive and set about turning his obsessions to her three best friends, killing them too when they wouldn't live up to his expectations being proud of how much effort it took to perform. Gaining an obsession with Shannon due to possessing the looks of his sister and the other girls, he ingrates himself into her life as her boyfriend, all the while planning to off her should she not live up to his impossible expectations. After Shannon's father finds out about his murders, he brutalizes him while planning to kill both him and Shannon after she rejects him. While he makes excuses and tries to blame his victims, ultimately Jim is just a self-entitled pervert who will never accept what a monster he really is.
  • The Good Demon: Gasper, The One Wish Man presents himself as a kindly, eccentric old man but is in truth a depraved monster who desires power above all else. Charming people with promises of fulfilling there dreams, Gasper will take them for all there worth including there lives and souls. To keep his powers strong, Gasper has for centuries sent a demon to befriend children with the promise that he'll make them bond to there friend "forever". In reality, Gasper cuts them open, and has a legion of a thousand demons sent into them so that he can draw power from control of them. This process drives the child insane, causing them to self-mutilate themselves over months possibly years, ripping out pieces of there skin until they die from the agony in which case Gasper binds there souls to him and starts again. When heroine Clare's cousin Cléa attempted to save his latest victim, he had her murdered and added to his soul collection as Gasper says "Power is its own reward" and he would step on anyone to get more of it.
  • Labyrinth Lost: Xara the devourer is a Bruja who is known as mother of wretched beasts, Destroyer of los lagos and enemy to all the Gods. After being banished to Los Lagos for crimes against humanity, she ingrated herself and charmed the population, before making her move, fire bombing the land and killing thousands as a result. Having taken over the dimension of Los Lagos, Xara inflicts blood purges on the population and has the survivors hunted down by her shadow monsters and chained up, tortured and brainwashed into her willing servants. For centuries, Xara drains the lifeforce of the souls within the tree of life leaving them husks in order to keep herself young and beautiful which has started to kill Los Lagos. To rejuvenate herself, Xara preys on vulnerable individuals from other realms and charms them into braining her brujas and brujos whose hearts she eats to absorb there powers. Manipulating the troubled Nova, she tries to convince him to send Alex to her realm only for the spell to instead send Alex's extended family instead with Xara planning to drain them dry to feed herself and permanently scarring Alex's older sister during the struggle. Xara forces Alex to give up her powers by threatening to use a potion to melt the organs of Alex's Love Interest Rishi if she doesn't. Ultimately, Xara intends to use Alex's powers to free herself from this realm and spread her endless hunger and evil to Earth, caring for no one but her own selfish desires above all else.
  • Shadow Form: Emmanuel Jacques proves in a world of supernaturals that sometimes the worst of monsters can be all too human. Emmanuel tricks girls from improvised countries into believing he'll give them a better life abroad but instead he has them stripped and turned into sex slaves. After two of his employees escape out of fear, Emmanuel tracks them down intending to have them both killed for daring to defy him. Emmanuel is also a terrible boss who'll glady kill his own minions if they get in his way, writing of everything as expandable. Before his defeat, Emmanuel threatens to gun down the best friend/lover of Jack Materson should he not let him go, well still in reality still planning to kill her anyway.
  • Slasher girls and monster boys: Sain after a plague hits his land which kills most young girls and women, kidnaps woman along with his brothers in order to give the residents wives in order to keep the population alive. In truth, Sain cares nothing for his land and is simply using this as excuse to take out his sadistic fantasies by butchering the woman they capture in secret. Sain bullies his more kindly brother Mowich and forces him into this. After discovering the young shaman girl Nara, Sain plans to kill her for fun despite knowing her death will mean the plague will continue as she is the only one who can stop it. Sain is willing to doom his entire people to genocide including his little sister just to satisfy his love for hurting others.

Thoughts ?

Edited by miraculous on Sep 11th 2019 at 8:22:35 AM

"Demonstrate for us your great skill at standing there, and you'll be fine."
ElfenLiedFan90 Ultimate Best Girl!!! from Jakarta,Indonesia Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Ultimate Best Girl!!!
Sep 11th 2019 at 8:22:57 AM

@Kazuya Thanks ^_^

@Miraculous Will admit that while Xera's writeup is long, I think its understandable given she is one of your worst candidates you proposed (On Shem Shem, Eliphas or Evolt tier). Anyways, all of your writeups including Xera looks good

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Sep 11th 2019 at 10:23:34 PM

Fitting song for the best girl Current story that I made.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Sep 11th 2019 at 8:49:05 AM

Mir, the Drafts should be open.

Elfen, you did Drost right? I changed the last sentence to "Drost then shoots them and burns the farmhouse under Van Trach's orders while letting his men kill and rape all of the innocent villagers, while watching the burned farmhouse with an extreme apathy."

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miraculous I am a link in a chain from South Africa
I am a link in a chain
Sep 11th 2019 at 8:53:07 AM

Alright btw. Emmanuel is from the second book shadow form. Not the first book blood mage.

"Demonstrate for us your great skill at standing there, and you'll be fine."
ElfenLiedFan90 Ultimate Best Girl!!! from Jakarta,Indonesia Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Ultimate Best Girl!!!
Sep 11th 2019 at 8:56:53 AM

@ACW Yes I did and not bad for the last sentence change but I think I'm cool with this one:

"When the heroes escaped and retreated to a farmhouse, Drost then burns and shoots the farmhouse under Van Trach's orders while letting his men kill and rape all of the innocent villagers while watching the burned farmhouse with an extreme apathy."

The regular order should be burned to shoot. Because that's what happened in the movie and well, due to that incident, while Jamar and Suwo survived, their uncle died due to mortally wounded because of Drost and Van Trach's actions.

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Sep 11th 2019 at 10:59:14 PM

Fitting song for the best girl Current story that I made.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Sep 11th 2019 at 9:03:50 AM

"Shoots the farmhouse"? That...seems odd. Maybe burns the farmhouse and shoots those inside?

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ElfenLiedFan90 Ultimate Best Girl!!! from Jakarta,Indonesia Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Clown-Face Wild Child from Canada Relationship Status: In another castle
Wild Child
Sep 11th 2019 at 9:33:38 AM

[tup]Harcourt.

Why so serious?
VeryVileVillian Who did you expect? God? Devil? No, it's just me from Russia Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Who did you expect? God? Devil? No, it's just me
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Sep 11th 2019 at 9:44:04 AM

The third one's probably too graphic. Honestly, I kinda like Barracuda's image.

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Sep 11th 2019 at 9:45:24 AM

  • The Tough Ones: Vincenzo Moretto is a seemingly pitiable hunchback who is in truth a psychopathic murderer. Leading a gang and killing those who stand in his way, Moretto leads a successful campaign of bank robberies where he is happy to murder anyone, hostage or cop. When busted by the end, Moretto goes on a rampage, hijacking an ambulance and murdering everyone within, innocent woman and her husband included. Escaping, Moretto later tries to murder the police after him, gleeful in causing any pain he can.
  • Harlots: Harcourt Fitzwilliams, the Marquess of Blayne is the leader of the Spartans, a rape and murder sex cult. Through the Spartans, Harcourt has young women, especially virgins, provided so he may know the thrill of raping and murdering them. Terrorizing his lonely sister Isabella, Harcourt had raped her at a young age, glorying how he 'broke' her, while financially controlling her in the present day. Harcourt abuses and hurts all around him, forcing a failed Spartan to kill himself to keep himself safe, and after suffering a loss against the heroines, he demands the normally unscrupulous brothel keeper Lydia Quigley give him a new victim to rape and murder. Harcourt even has his own daughter with Isabella seduced by a servant to ruin her, just to hurt Isabella more. Finally, Harcourt attempts to rape and murder Lucy Wells, being a living near-embodiment of misogynist sadism.

miraculous I am a link in a chain from South Africa
I am a link in a chain
Sep 11th 2019 at 10:50:20 AM

Alright my examples are added.

Gasper and Xara are probably going to be two of my very worst I've put up too due to their sick M Os. That was low.

Anyway [tup]Harcort. Forgot to vote on him.

"Demonstrate for us your great skill at standing there, and you'll be fine."
PureGrainAlkaSeltzer The Lord Of Walruses from 1200 Pennsylvania Ave Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
The Lord Of Walruses
Sep 11th 2019 at 10:55:27 AM

[tup] to Zarkon, Kemp, Moretto, Fleming, And Harcourt

[tdown] to Cinder.

I have no idea what I am doing
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Sep 11th 2019 at 11:06:14 AM

The music batch.

Is this really all that's pending?

  • Beyond the Mask (2015): Charles Kemp (Age)
  • Zarkon (Sircray)
  • Belzebuth (2017-2019) (Stellarvore)
  • Ravok
  • Scraggle
    • The Breed (2001): Dr. Fleming

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miraculous I am a link in a chain from South Africa
I am a link in a chain
Sep 11th 2019 at 11:16:14 AM

Yep.

So how many entries for this week.

"Demonstrate for us your great skill at standing there, and you'll be fine."
CloisterTheStupid from Oop North Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Sep 11th 2019 at 11:20:46 AM

[up] I think I have some potholes I'd like to add:

  • "Dark Saga": Malebolgia, the self-proclaimed destroyer of light, is the demon who is responsible for creating Spawn. Making a deal with the deceased CIA soldier Al Simmons, Malebolgia rigged the deal, resulting in Al's soul becoming corrupted and tormented, becoming the present Spawn. It was soon revealed that Malebolgia tries to manipulate Spawn for his own bidding in order to destroy mankind and the heavens.
  • "Vengeance is Mine": Billy Kincaid is a seemingly friendly man who is revealed to be far worse. Defined as "malignance personified", Kincaid is revealed to be the Serial Killer and molester of innocent children who has countless victims under his belt before being brutally murdered by Spawn himself.

Complete Monster quotes cleanup
Sep 11th 2019 at 11:27:16 AM

Also, since Scraggle took IT...Jackie has The Stand called, and they've just cast Randall Flagg....

And it's Pennywise actor Bill Skarsgard's brother, Alexander. Awesome.

miraculous I am a link in a chain from South Africa
I am a link in a chain
Sep 11th 2019 at 11:30:36 AM

Oh man so cool. Like perfect choice there.

Does skarsgard have any cms already ?

Don't worry dude you'll have his amazon dark tower version whose unlikely to not keep as well unless they utterly betray his character.

"Demonstrate for us your great skill at standing there, and you'll be fine."
Sep 11th 2019 at 11:34:16 AM

I don't think either of the Skarsgard bros have any others, but I could be wrong. Still, that's hilariously awesome casting.

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
Sep 11th 2019 at 11:37:39 AM

XO: Got it.

So that would make another possible set of CM siblings. We have Anjelica (Grand High Witch) and Danny (Ludendorff) Huston (half-siblings), David (Rawley Wilkes) and Keith (Martin Newman) Carradine (ditto)...Interestingly, the fathers have also played a CM: Noah Cross and Heydrich, respectively.

I think the Hustons are the first 3-generation CM family (Jack played Wickham). If Walter has one, that make it 4 generations.

EDIT: Oh, and I think we're around 30 or so.

Edited by ACW on Sep 11th 2019 at 2:45:37 PM

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