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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#173901: Jul 22nd 2019 at 6:37:17 PM

[tup] Cain. Once thought about covering the film almost a year ago, but your funny EP was way better than what I could have done.

This should be Vinnie Jones’ second CM.

"No running in the halls!"
ElfenLiedFan90 Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression) from Jakarta,Indonesia Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression)
#173902: Jul 22nd 2019 at 6:43:34 PM

I'm baaaack. Anything I missed?

No to Reika and sure to Kain.

As for rewrites, yea... I'll be honest that I feel gullible on doing some of them for the sake of doing some of them without stating a reason and I know it's not a good idea and I understand it. Which is why I'm actually trying to state my own reason why I rewrite the entry and comparing it to the original like I did with my Sousei writeup. Thankfully, Sousei's one is an old entry of mine and I rewrite it because it feels rather clunky (People ignored my comments so yeah)

Speaking of rewrites... I reminded of something: I actually helped Mimic a bit on modify 666 Satan candidates writeup a bit. Given some of them are minor villains like Museshi, Sabaki or Balsa, I think shorter entry than Miko should be fine. Though I'm also discussing with Mimic via P Ms regarding my version of the writeups.

"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."
Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#173903: Jul 22nd 2019 at 6:47:17 PM

Edited by Beast on Jul 22nd 2019 at 8:48:07 AM

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
The wifi here sucks
#173904: Jul 22nd 2019 at 6:47:26 PM

[tup] Cain

Actually speaking of rewrites, I should add a small bit to General Scales' writeup since it currently leaves out an important crime of his and think that I can word one part a littlw bit better

  • Complete Monster: General Scales is the brutal leader of the SharpClaw tribe who wishes to rule Dinosaur Planet. With the aid of Andross, Scales steals the Spell Stones, slaughtering the EarthWalkers sent to stop him. This causes the planet to become dangerously unstable, threatening to effect the entire Lylat system if it explodes. Scales then imprisons the Gatekeepers as well as the EarthWalker Royal Family. Scales forces the SnowHorn Gatekeeper's daughter to open a Gate to DarkIce Mines by threatening to slaughter her tribe, and fulfills his promise not to kill them by enslaving them in said mine. He conquers the SkyRunner Fortress and has his men beat and imprison the SkyRunner Queen. He releases the vicious RedEye Tribe into the Walled City, driving the EarthWalkers out of most of the City. He transforms Dragon Rock into a wasteland and performs experiments on dinosaurs to turn them into dangerous bioweapons. Cruel even to his own tribe, Scales stands out as one of Star Fox Team's cruelest foes.

Edited by papyru30 on Jul 22nd 2019 at 11:42:32 AM

Hope your prepared for an unforgettable luncheon
ElfenLiedFan90 Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression) from Jakarta,Indonesia Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression)
#173907: Jul 22nd 2019 at 7:07:00 PM

Before posting the comparsion of O Parts Hunter rewrite....

Just gonna leave this here for Lighty and Jackie. Not sure if its a sequel or not

"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."
GeorgieEnkoom Emperor Georgie Artémis Enkoom Evulz II from Somewhere. Since: Feb, 2017 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
Emperor Georgie Artémis Enkoom Evulz II
LordYAM Since: Jan, 2015
#173910: Jul 22nd 2019 at 7:26:40 PM

[tup] To all the candidates but especially Takeru (note that it's a better example of a villain faking rehabilitation than Scavenger from Aquaman.)

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#173912: Jul 22nd 2019 at 7:56:51 PM

[tup] Granger, Takeru, Cain and Yomu

[tdown] Baldr duo

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
HamburgerTime Since: Apr, 2010
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#173915: Jul 22nd 2019 at 8:51:37 PM

[tup]Cain man

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Awesomekid42 Since: Jul, 2012
#173916: Jul 22nd 2019 at 9:37:00 PM

Sure to the addition to Scales' entry

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#173917: Jul 22nd 2019 at 9:50:29 PM

Back from Far from Home as of a little while ago. It was f-ing awesome! That said, that first stinger messed me up! The second one also flipped the script on me, but not so much. Unlike with American Hustle though, I was mad at the right character when the movie was over, i.e. Beck. Late [tup] to Mysterio. No trouble saying so.

Yeah, odd how the MCU movie ones have had surprising contention behind them otherwise. Yeah, I’m one of the ones who believes alternate Thanos counts, but I’ll leave it at that. No one wants to read that.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Jul 22nd 2019 at 9:52:40 AM

KingofNightmares Since: Sep, 2016 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#173918: Jul 22nd 2019 at 10:05:43 PM

[tup] Takeru and Cain

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ReddishGuy1 Since: Jul, 2014
#173919: Jul 22nd 2019 at 10:13:32 PM

Great Professor Bias's entry was a bit too long and could have used some rewriting, so here you go:

Here's the original for comparison:
  • Great Professor Bias has corrupted three geniuses before the show began, turning them into his students. He has them massacre the remaining geniuses at Academia. After kicking out Goh Omura and attempting to kill him, Bias recruits the aliens Guildos and Butchy. When Guildos tries to prove his superiority through Guild-zuno, it is revealed that both aliens are actually robots built by Bias to make the humans try harder, which he coldly tells Butchy to his face after Guildos' death. After Butchy is convinced to defect, Bias blows him up. Goh later realizes that Bias only wants his students for their brains, one of which will be used for the Giga Brain Wave, which will turn all humanity into Bias' slaves and make Bias immortal. After Yuusuke saves the world from the Giga Brain Wave, Bias is reverted to a child who shifts his goals from conquest to destruction and mocks Megumi's kindness when she offers it, before finally rejecting redemption.

Just imagine something here.
IukaSylvie from Kyoto, Japan Since: Oct, 2017 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
ElfenLiedFan90 Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression) from Jakarta,Indonesia Since: Aug, 2017 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Me in a nutshell (Coping with Depression)
#173921: Jul 22nd 2019 at 10:39:01 PM

Great job as always on the rewrite @Red

Think while short, that should cover his crimes and some of his overlooked ones. And yeah, only criticism is that it has waaaaaaaay too many potholes but I'll let ACW sort it out.

@papyru Cool with the addition for Scales though

Edited by ElfenLiedFan90 on Jul 23rd 2019 at 12:40:26 AM

"Making screw-ups and mistakes was I ever really good at. Because everything I touch went to hell."
CloisterTheStupid from Oop North Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
finalsurvivor1 Since: Jan, 2012
#173923: Jul 22nd 2019 at 11:12:22 PM

As the one who proposed Bias, that rewrite gets my [tup].

toonyloon Since: Jul, 2011
#173924: Jul 22nd 2019 at 11:20:21 PM

Since we're talking about MCU CMs, I find it particularly interesting that of the 5 films that have a CM, at least 3 of them (the Guardians films and Thor: Ragnarok) are, overall, more on the comical and light-hearted side (or 4 if also want to put Far from Home in that category).

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#173925: Jul 22nd 2019 at 11:23:53 PM

[up]Oh I'd definitely count Far from Home in there, as much of a Mind Screw and The Ending Changes Everything the ending is.


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