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Kylotrope The demon that comes when you call it's name from Hawaii Relationship Status: Abstaining
The demon that comes when you call it's name
May 15th 2019 at 3:56:39 PM

Eh, I won't cause some big Drama but I Persoanlly still lean to keeping Bear. It sounds like there is a Plot but has alot of Shock Value. Wich I find Differant from Pointless schlock.(The main Reason Nemesis is Still up)

Don't mind him getting cut though.

Edited by Kylotrope on May 15th 2019 at 4:10:33 AM

I look at humans. I look at monsters. And all is see are parasites that must be destroyed. Human world ? Monster world ? All cesspools
G-Editor Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
May 15th 2019 at 4:06:51 PM

[tup] Balor, Jeffery, Jenkin and Alberico

Cut Mr. Bear

Here he comes!
SumDumNerd Shadow of Eternity from your worst nightmares Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
Shadow of Eternity
May 15th 2019 at 4:09:27 PM

[tup] to the ones mentioned, but leaning on keep for Mr. Bear.

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Libraryseraph Take my revolution! from Canada Relationship Status: Longing for Dulcinea
Take my revolution!
May 15th 2019 at 4:11:49 PM

I donít know if it makes a difference, but Iím not sure 1999 is available in any form, any more

Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination
FriedWarthog Nebula had a hard life... Relationship Status: Crazy Cat Lady
Nebula had a hard life...
May 15th 2019 at 4:15:41 PM

I personally don't like the thought of cutting Mr. Bear myself. I mean, his story is dark and horrible things happen to children, but I still feel that it's written well-enough to avoid being like the terrible, pointless grimderp stuff that got cut during the nosleep reassessment. I can understand more if it's because you just can't read it anywhere, anymore... but given how popular of a story it is, I'd rather hold off on it since it's bound to be reposted by somebody elsewhere on the internet. Similarly, I've given the Kirby stories a glimpse and don't like the idea of cutting them.

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AustinDR Praise his marinaraness. from Fresh and ready for life.
Praise his marinaraness.
May 15th 2019 at 4:24:05 PM

It got removed due to plagiarism accusations. To me, all the story amounts to is "Look at me bludgeon this kiddie, ooo,spoopy!"

My issue is again the lack of characterization with Mr, Bear and that it is nothing more than shock value. Even if it was well written, I don't consider that an argument. And then the whole plagiarism scandal where the story was not getting updated by the original author but someone else without his consent...all of that is one enormous mess.

Edited by AustinDR on May 15th 2019 at 4:28:55 AM

Why you little-!
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.)
May 15th 2019 at 4:26:31 PM

Now if THAT'S the case, and it can't be found ANYWHERE, that's a different issue.

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TommyFresh Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
May 15th 2019 at 4:32:01 PM

I'm pretty sure there are still plenty of videos of people doing dramatic readings of 1999 on You Tube so the story still exists. But I still think its plot is thin. From what I recall the plot is just a guy looking into this disturbing show and watching videos of Mr. Bear brutally murdering children.

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Relationship Status: In my bunk
May 15th 2019 at 4:33:42 PM

I say keep Bear. It's no more schlocky than any number of low-end horror movies many of us have proposed.

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Kylotrope The demon that comes when you call it's name from Hawaii Relationship Status: Abstaining
The demon that comes when you call it's name
May 15th 2019 at 4:46:52 PM

The Motivation thing still dosent quite bug me. If he's a misanthrope who Views Humans as Garbage, Then that's all the motivation Needed to Explain why he likes hurting people, as he sees them as Garbage.

I look at humans. I look at monsters. And all is see are parasites that must be destroyed. Human world ? Monster world ? All cesspools
UltimateDemonBeast65 Emissary of Inanis, God of Nothingness from Zone of Void Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
Emissary of Inanis, God of Nothingness
May 15th 2019 at 4:51:49 PM

Yeah I agree. Mr. Bear's motivations are still firm. Creeps Mc Pasta has a reading of the story on Youtube and when I listened to it, I sure as hell felt how much of a monster this guy was. I say keep Mr. Bear.

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Michealthehero21 Relationship Status: Abstaining
May 15th 2019 at 5:11:42 PM

In my honest opinion, keep Mr. Bear, he sounds like a terrible person in the write up. But of course, thatís just my thoughts.

AustinDR Praise his marinaraness. from Fresh and ready for life.
Praise his marinaraness.
May 15th 2019 at 5:22:01 PM

The story is literally just a man watching a series of snuff films. That's it. Ultimately, I don't care as much on whether or not Mr. Bear stays, but I don't really agree with the general consensus of those who are saying to keep him.

Why you little-!
PolarPhantom Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
May 15th 2019 at 5:29:14 PM

[tup] Balor on his Conservative Party Island.

I never want to disappoint Lighty when it comes to British Political Humour.

Darkness rises and Light to meet it.
Michealthehero21 Relationship Status: Abstaining
May 15th 2019 at 5:29:53 PM

[up][up] Honestly, it doesnít matter if Mr. Bear stays or not to me as well. Iím just only giving my honest opinion. And I can honestly understand yours.

Edited by Michealthehero21 on May 15th 2019 at 5:30:05 AM

Libraryseraph Take my revolution! from Canada Relationship Status: Longing for Dulcinea
Take my revolution!
May 15th 2019 at 5:32:23 PM

I'm fine with Mr Bear staying up content wise, but the potential plagarism concerns might be an issue

Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination
May 15th 2019 at 5:33:47 PM

First twenty pages Of A Brightness Long Ago and I got an easy keeper.

Kylotrope The demon that comes when you call it's name from Hawaii Relationship Status: Abstaining
The demon that comes when you call it's name
May 15th 2019 at 5:35:05 PM

Until there's outright Confirmation of it being Plagurized I think we should just leave that be.

I look at humans. I look at monsters. And all is see are parasites that must be destroyed. Human world ? Monster world ? All cesspools
AustinDR Praise his marinaraness. from Fresh and ready for life.
Praise his marinaraness.
May 15th 2019 at 5:38:31 PM

So another potential cut was Ellen Berent from Leave Her to Heaven. I had initially suggested her on the grounds that while she had a low body count (Richard's brother and she also aborted her own child), she otherwise ended up killing herself to blame her half-sister for the murder. It is a Film Noir and she is the only antagonist in the film, I was debating on whether or not she breached the general baseline. I mostly decided to discuss her namely because her intentionally provoking a miscarriage in herself, but aside from that, is she overall heinous enough?

Edited by AustinDR on May 15th 2019 at 5:38:48 AM

Why you little-!
Michealthehero21 Relationship Status: Abstaining
May 15th 2019 at 5:38:37 PM

Potential Plagiarism? Ok, THAT might actually be concerning.

PolarPhantom Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
May 15th 2019 at 5:38:48 PM

[up][up][up][up] Gotta love it when that happens.

Edited by PolarPhantom on May 15th 2019 at 1:39:11 PM

Darkness rises and Light to meet it.
falcontalons Relationship Status: Married to the job
May 15th 2019 at 5:41:44 PM

[up][up][up]Honestly, I was wondering about her too. Although, purposefully aborting her own child may be heinous enough. I'll lean weak keep for now.

[down][down][down]Well, I thought it might count because it seemed like her husband wanted the child, and she was jealous of all the attention it would get.

Edited by falcontalons on May 15th 2019 at 6:04:22 AM

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Libraryseraph Take my revolution! from Canada Relationship Status: Longing for Dulcinea
G-Editor Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
May 15th 2019 at 5:53:03 PM

Switching to keeping Mr. Bear

Here he comes!
May 15th 2019 at 6:00:57 PM

I know abortion is controversial but how does that count toward CM? Abortion isn't even a crime tbh.

Edited by username2527 on May 15th 2019 at 6:01:13 AM

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